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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok so i wrote this poem/song lol for ks after when bani is alright and jai comes bak she will read this to him if theis poem/song is not good then plzz dont kick me out ok so here i go

I learned to smile after you left me a frown

I learned to live after u gave me death

i learned to stand after you made me cripple

i learned the hard way never to let anyone close to my heart , because wen u do all get in return is pain

i whis tht i never had met you i wish i never saw your face but when i think of that i get scared to let u go out my thought even thought the pain that u gave me is even more than the love

i learned to smile when u left me a frown

i learned to live after u gave me death

i learned to stand after you amd me cripple

i learned the hard way not to let ayone close cause all you get is pain

hope you like it :)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Like the inherent feel of it !!! Very nice..... 😊
Keep them coming! 😊
Edited by sareeta - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Really nice... 👏
Keep it up!

Yuvi 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great...nice ,expressive Beautiful... 👏

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