D3 SS FOR UR LOVE-THREAD-2 updated - Page 21

CHAPTER-33

"TAANI N VICKY TALK CONTINUES"

Vic-taani bol na tujhe kuch poochna tha

Here rey

Rey-ha baby come on bolo bolo baby bolo

Sw glared at him n caughs

Rey-I mean bolo taani bolo

Here taani

Taani-wo mai yeh pooch rahe thi k…k…k…k tera aur neha ka relationship kaisa chal raha hai

Here ridz…ridz-yeh kya bol rahe hai

Ar-meri chocopie dar rahe hai

All looked at him with a question mark

Ar-arre I mean taani dar rahe hai

All slap there head

Here with taani n vic…. vic-awesome…tujhe pata hai bacha phele na mai bohot tensed tha k tujhe deewani pasand aaegi ya nai par now I m soo happy

Taani-tere liye mera opinion itna imp hai

Vic-ofcourse tu meri behan hai toh tujhe bhi toh apni hone wali bhabhi pasand aane chahiyeh na

Taani-haa…..phir toh tujhe bhi tere hone wale jiju pasand aane chahiyeh na

Vicky smiles drop- jiju??? Kon jiju bacha sach sach bata tere life mai kya ho raha hai

Taani-wo…wo..wo…I mean koi hai nai par tu imagine kar na k agar meri life mai koi ladka(vic glared at her) I mean koi acha ladka aae joh mujhe pyaar karta ho shaadi karna chahata ho

Vic-really!!!!!!!! Like really now!!!! Bacha jaha tak mai is city k ladke ko janta ho na they can only hurt girls ok n mind it I won't let anyone hurt u get it…..aur tu 10 saal baad mujhe mile hai koi stupid sa ladka tujhe mujhse dor nai kar sakta mai bhi dekhta ho kon aata hai

Here rey

Rey-yeh mujhe maar kar he rahega

Ar n sw laughs n ridz n sh hit them n say to remain queit

Back with taani n vic

Taani-par Vicky agar koi sach mai pyaar karta ho toh

Vic again glared-bacha sach sach bata koi hai kya

Taani-nai hai nai….acha yeh sab chod tu bata tere nazar mai meri liye best ladka kaisa hona chahiyeh

Vic-hmmm dekh tere life mai joh bhi banda aaega na wo smoke na karta hai

Ar n sw looked at rey…rey-I don't smoke

Vic-aur na wo drink na karta ho

Ar n sw looked at rey n rey- I don't drink

Vic-aur ha won a koi betting(saattebazi) na karta ho

Before ar n sw can look rey…rey said-no guys mai koi betting nai karta

Vic-in short wo koi bure kaam ya galat kaam na karta ho

Rey-yes mai koi bore ya galat kaam nai karta

Sh-I m proud of u my bro hugs him

All were happy that what vic wanted rey was exactly same n even taani was happy but then

Vic-aur na… wo tujhe kabhi hurt na kare ya tujhe rolae(cry) na ya tere saath jagra nai kare

Ar n sw looks at rey but this tme rey was looking down

Sw-tune princess ko hurt kiya!!!! U made her cry!!!!

Rey-dude 6 months k relationship mai jagra toh hoga na n har ladki roti hai yr jab jagra hota hai

Sw-hmmm

Here taani was happy… taani(happily)-bas phir tu maan jaega!!!!

Vic-ek min tu itne kush kyu ho rahe hai…..dekh bacha mai phele he bata raha ho no one can propose my sister n I won't spare anyone who does that

Taani-calm down vic…tu itna gussa kyu ho raha hai hehehehe(nervous laugh) tu na haste hue acha lagta hai

All were happy that it just vicky's possessiveness but inside he could be melt as rey is a nice guy

Vicky-chal mai paani pe k aata ho….he goes to kitchen n found everyone there

Vic looked at all-vic-aap sab yaha aise kyu khade(stand) ho kuch lene aae the???

Ridz-ha desert

Ar-mai paani

Sw-mai juice

Sh-mai coffee

Rey was lost in his future plan how to patao vic n soon he looks at taani who was happy n she was literally jumping on sofa n rey was lost in her cuteness

Vic looked at rey

Vic-aur tu???

Rey(without realizing)-taani….all slap their head

Vic-kya????(rey comes out from his taaniland)

Rey-I mean mai taani ko dhund raha tha

Vic(raised his eyebrows)-kyu

Rey-kyu????hmmm nice question…kyu guys(asking others)…kyu right kyu

Vic-ha kyu

Rey-kyu???kyuki kyuki ha kyuki mujhe taani ko bye bolna tha isiliye

Vic-kyu be aaj k baad usse kabhi milega nai kya joh tujhe bye bolna tha

Rey-hahahahah vic tu n tera sense of humour hahhahaha funny hai na guys….he looked at all no one was laughing n vic was glaring at rey folding his hand

Rey shut his mouth n later said in one go-sh!!! Hehehee(nervous laughs)chale late ho raha hai…hame chalna chahiyeh

Sh-ha…bhabhi hum chalte hai

Ridz-ha theek hai ghar pooch k phone karna ok

Vic(hugs sh)-bye sh oops bye "bhabhi" sh blushed….kal collage mai milte hai

Sh-bye she looks at sw n both in eye contacts say bye to each other…n sharey left

NEXT DAY

Yp calls taani in his cabin

Taani-sir apne bulaya

Vp-ha taani…wo manager jisse tum log milne gae the wo aaj yaha aa raha hai so I want k rey n sw uska dhyaan rakhe n sham ko ek party hogi jiska theme traditional hogi

Taani eyes goes wide n she remember the past incident with that manager!!!

Taani-sir uss manager ko mai aur sh handle kar lenge

Vp-no taani rey collage ka GS usse he yeh karna hoga….now u can go

Taai comes out thinking ab kya kare….just then she saw that manger going to vp cabin she hides behind door n heard that manager is asking where is rey n sw n vp sir told him in canteen

Taani ran to canteen as fast as she can

Here in canteen while taani was in vp sir cabin

Nil n simmi were standing n all were sitting waiting them to speak

Vic-yr bolo toh kuch

Neha-ya something say u guys

Simmi-wo hame kuch khehna hai

Bharat-abbe 30 min se yahi kheh rahe hai

Aashi-ha aage types bhi toh boliyeh

Rey-exactly guys bolo toh

Swaron-ha jaldi bolo…both look at each other n llhh moment happen but soon rey turns sw face away from his sister n said-focus on nil n simmi

Nil-guys wo actually wo..wo..wo..

Sw-tu toh aise dar raha hai jaise yeh bolne wala ho k tere koi gf hai

Nil nodes in yes n said-nil-well yes

All-what!!!!...boys goes to nil n start asking who is the girl n girls goes to simmi n start consoling her as all think nil has a gf n its not simmi

Rey-kon hai wo "ria" toh nai

Simmi(shouts)-nil ria kon hai???

Vic-arre nai guys "ria" nai ho sakte ria ko toh bf hai

Bharat-phir suman hogi

Simmi(shouts)-nil suman kon hai!!!

Amar n rey-arre nai guys suman nai ho sakti

Sw-mai batata ho kon hai….

Nil-ha sw tu he mera sacha dost hai tu bata

Sw-wo ladki…(simmi started blushing) wo ladki..paayal hai

Simmi-what!!! Nil paayal kon hai

Nil(frustrated)-chup raho guys!!!!! Na he ria hai na suman aur na paayal wo ladki simmi hai hamari I mean meri gf n tum sab k dost simmi

All-what!!!!!

Sh-omg simmi I m so happy 4 u

All girls hugged simmi n boys glared at nil

Nil-what???

Boys-bhele nai bata sakta tha

Nil-tum logo ne batane kaha diya phele he chalo ho gaye saalo tum logo k wajah se simmi mujhse naraz hone wali thi

Just then taani came running like hell

Taani-bhabhi bhabhi

Sh n neha turn-kya hua taani

Taani-sh bhabhi wo aa gaya(she sits n drink juice as she was tired of running)

Sh-kon aa gaya

Taani-wahi bhabhi hamara dushman

Sh-kon taani

Taani-bhabhi wo manger(note reyam forget about manager they were shocked due to the fact that taani came running they thought something is serious)

Sh-manager!!!!(she also sit down n drank juice because she was scared)

Both goes n stands infront of reyam trying to hide them….all were confused n reyam was hell confused

Rey looked at the juice glass n said to sw-dude juice(pointing the glass)

Sw-nai yr hum hamesha taste karte hai juice mai kuch nai

Rey-ek baar aur kar k dekhte hai

Reyam taste it again hoping that this time something is wrong with juice but they were wrong

Rey-juice toh sahi hai

Sw-I told u but that means it comfirmed that meri gf aur tere gf…I mean meri gf n meri behan dono pagla gae hai

Just then manager enter n looked at reyam

Man-omg reyansh n swayam hi boys

Reyam looked at him n their eyes goes wide n now they understand y their lady love was behaving like this

Here reyam starts moving backwards n manger eyes went to other "boys" of the gang

Man-hi guys I m dolly(just a random name guys no offence) n u all???

Boys-hi I m nil…me Vicky...mai bharat…mai amal(amar)

Man-oh what a sexy name guys

Boys looked at each other confused n girls mouth was open like "o"

Bharat-abbe yeh kya item hai bhailog

Vic-guys kuch garbar

Taani slowly-kuch nai pura garbar hai guys he is gay

All-what!!!...boys moves backwards n girls goes n cover their partner n introduce themselves to mr.dolly

Neha-hi me neha is vicky's gf

Rinni-hi I m rinni n amar likes me

Am-aita tab tua(aisa kab hua)

Rinni(slowly)ha bolo warna is mr.dolly k saath chod dungi

Amar-ha I like rinni

Aashi-hi I m aashi..n bharat mujhe pasand types karte hai

Bharat-(dreaming)-abbe bhailog yeh toh sach bol gaye

All looked at him

Simmi-hi I m simmi nil's gf

Sh goes n holds sw hand n said-n u know me but let me update u I m sharan rai prakash…sw gf n his would be wife…..

All-what!!!!!!!!

Sh-what??? We r serious we will get married someday

Rey-oh thankgod she was talking about future….swaron glared at him

Mr.dolly was sad as all boys were taken but soon he looks at rey n smiles

Man-hey handsome tum toh single ho rite

Taarey-nooo

Vic-what!!!! Rey tu single nai hai

All-kon hai tere gf bata na

Taarey looked at each other n then at sw for help

Sw-guys that his personal matter yr

Vic-kya personal bhai hum sab ko pata hai na k hamare gang mai kon kisko pasnd karta hai…toh yeh bhi toh bata sakta hai

Sw-wo nai bata sakta

Vic-kyu nai bata sakta

Sw-bas nai bata sakta

Vic-par kyu

Rey(frustrated)-because I m single!!!!! I don't have a gf!!!! N I don't believe in love happy now!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All get scared due to his shout but swaron n taani was hell shocked

Rey looked at taani who was making an angry face n then at swaron who signals him –u r dead dude but someone was happy n that was…..mr. dolly

Man(coming close to rey)-so hotie u r single

Rey(moving backward)-hmmm ya

Man-so will u show me ur collage

Taani-I'll show u

Vic-tu kyu rey ko jane de na

Taani-because I m AGS

Just then ar comes n said guys wo actually…

Hearing a hot n manly voice mr.dolly turn n found ar n he was flattered on his body n looks

Man-omg yeh collage kitna superb hai kitna saare hot ladke hai…he started going to him n revolves aroung ar checking him out

Ar looks at him confused

Man-hi hotie

Ar(coughs)-execuse me

Man-u have a awesome body

Ar looked at his cousin n all signal him he is gay…

As soon as ar got that signal he moves away from manager

Man-what's ur name hotie

Ar-hmmm dr.armaan shikhawat n I m married

Manger faces falls down n goes from der as all were in realationship or married except rey

Ar-yeh kya item tha

Rey comes n puts his head on armaan's shoulder-I know pata nai kaisa manager hai yeh

SCENE CHANGE

An angry taani is walking on corridor when she is being pulled by someone in fire escape…ofcourse he has to be rey

Taani-rey aap kya kar rahe hai chodiyeh mujhe!!!!

Rey-tum mujhse naraz ho

Taani-arre nai nai bohot pyaar aa raha hai aap pe

Rey(coming close to her)-toh jatao na pyaar

Taani blushed-rey!!! Mujhe aapse baat nai karne hai

Rey-kyu maine kya kiya

Taani-kya kiya!!!!!!! I m single n I don't believe in love remember now!!! Mr.single

Rey-arre who toh maine aise he kheh diya tha I didn't mean it

Taani-mujhe aapse baat nai karni hai

Rey-arre..acha sorry sorry…sorry plz na maaf kar do na plz sorry…maine toh aisa isliyeh kaha kyuki waha tumhara wo possessive bhai(taani glared at him) I mean tumhara cute sa caring sa bhai Vicky waha tha isiliyeh

Taani-pakka na u love me na???

Rey-ha baba pakka I love u (hugged her)

Taani-rey mujhe lagta hai hume Vicky ko bata dena chahiyeh

Rey-ha ab toh mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai…par phele party k tayyari karne hai

Taani-what party

Rey-arre that traditional party for mr.dolly

Taani(eyes goes wide)-rey aap mere saath he rhahna party mai

Rey-yes my bodyguard

SCENE CHANGE

Sh was in rehearsal hall practicing her routin when she gets attack of asthma(in this ss only sw knows about her asthma not even simmi knows n no one else)

Sh starts panicking as she can't find her pump in bag

Soon someone offer her pump she took it n pumps twice n now looked at the person n it was sw who has tears in his eyes

Sh(cups his face)-hey kya hua

Sw-I can't see u like this(he hugged her)

Sh-I m sorry wo mai apna bump lana bhool gae thi

Sw-kaise bhool sakte ho tum!!!! Agar kuch ho jata toh

Sh-hey kuch nai hoga mujhe I promise

Sw-ek baat kaho

Sh-ha

Sw-tumhe rey ko bata dena chahiyeh

Sh-nai wo hyper ho jaega

Sw-par usse pata hona chahiyeh bhai hai wo tumhara

Sh-par agar wo naraz ho gaya toh

Sw-mai ho na kuch nai hoga they hugged

Soon all start preparing for traditional party n girls were dressed in saari n boys were dressed in sherwani

Vp-arre party hai kuch gaana waana toh ho jae….ar chalo tum bhi dance karo

Ridz(excited)-ha chalo dance karenge

Ar-tum nai karogi baitho yaha(pulled a chair n makes her sit n she sits pouting)

Ar starts singing

Ishq Hai,(ar starts)

Teri Aankhon Ke Matvaal
Kaajal Ko Mera Salaam(rey looks at taani)
Zulfon Ke Kale Kale
Baadal Ko Mera Salaam(sw sings for sh)
Ghayal Kar De Mujhe Yaar
Tere Paayal Ke Jhankar(nil sings for simmi getting down n touching her paayal)
Hey Soni Sone,Teri Soni,
Har Adaa Ko Salaam(vic pulls neha 4 dance n dance around her)

Salaam-E-Ishq.Ishq Ishq
Salaam-E-Ishq,Salaam-E-Ishq Ishq
Salaam-E-Ishq(bharat n amar sings)

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-(2)Ishq Hai...(all sings n dance to gether)

Ho Teri Mastaani Anjaani
Bataon Ko Mera Salaam(ar goes to ridz n sings)

Rangon Mein Doobi Doobi(bharat sings 4 aashi)
Raaton Ko Mera Slaaam(amar sings 4 rinni)

Khwaabon Mein Kho Gayi Main
Deewani Ho Gayi Main(taani sings 4 rey)
Soney Soney Aisse Soney
Har Adaa Ko Salaam(rey pulls taani n dance with her)

Salaam-E-Ishq.Ishq Ishq
Salaam-E-Ishq(boys dance)

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-(2)
Ishq Hai...(all dance)

Teri Meri Nazar Jo Milli Pehli Baar
Ho Gaya Ho Gaya Tujhse Pyaar...(rey dance with taani touching her face)
Dil Hai Kya Dil Hai Kya
Jaan Bhi Tujhoe Nisaar

Maine Tujhe Kiya Aitbaar(sw said to sh n sh blushes)

Ho Main Bhi Toh Tujhpe Mar Gayi
Deewanapan Kya Kar Gayi(sh dance for sw)
Meri Har Dhakan Betaab Hai
Palkon Vich Tera Khwaab Hai(taani dance wirh rey in a corner n hugs him)

Ho Jaan Se Bhi Pyaari Pyaari
Jaaniya Ko Salaam(vicky said to neha)

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-(2)Ishq Hai...(boys dance)


Main Tere Ishq Mein Do Jahan Vaar Doon
Mere Vaade Pe Kar Le Yakeen(bharat dance saying to aashi)
Keh Raha Aasman Keh Rahe Hai Zameen
Tere Jaissa Dooja Nahin(ni dance 4 simmi n hugs her)

Ho Aisse Jaadoon Na Daal Ve
Naa Aaon Tere Naal Ve
Jhooti Tereedein Chodh De(aashi dance 4 bharat as she don't trust him)
Ab Dil Mere Dil Se Jod De
Ho Jo Abhi Hai Dil Se
Nikli Uss Dua Ko Salaam(simmi dance 4 nil)


Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-Ishq,Ishq,Ishq...Salaam-E-Ishq
Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-(boys dance)
Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-(2)Ishq Hai...


Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E...(2)
Ishq Hai(all dance)

Rab Se Hai Iltija Maaf Kar De Mujhe
Main Toh Teri Ibaadat Karoon
Aye Meri Soniye Na Khabar Hai Tujhe
Tujhese Kitni Mohobbat Karoon(ar goes n sits infront of ridz admiring her)

Tere Bin Sab Kuch Benoor Hai
Meri Maang Mein Tere Sindoor Hai
Sanson Mein Yehi Paigaam Hai
Mera Sab Kuch Tere Naam Hai (ridz sings touching ar face with love)


Ho Dhadkanon Mein Rehne
Waali Soniye Ko Salaam(all boys sang for ridz as she was sad that she can't dance)

Salaam-E-Ishq

Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-(2)Ishq Hai...


Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E...(2)
Ishq Hai(all were dancing)

Music goes on n all were dancing…

Ridz looked at them n had tears in her eyes

Ar-hey kya hua

Ridz-ar…sw..vic aur taani ko dekho kitna bade ho gaye hai teeno

Ar looked at them

Ar-hmmm ab toh apne pyaar k saath hai

Ridz-bhagwaan kare sab aisa he rahe taani kitne kush hai(as taarey were hugging n taani was smiling)

Ar-aur hamesha rahege mere hote hue koi bhi mere bhai behan k zindigi mai kuch garbar nai kar sakta

Both smile n ar hugs his wife

Huh finally I m done with chapter 33 plz do hit like n comment

Precap-will ar really won't let anyone spoil his siblings life?????...is party ended on a happy note or something is still reserved for d3 gang???? Is Vicky really think in that way or he has another plan in his mind???? Stay tune guys

Res/unres
Yaay me first
Wow what a fab update 👏
Loved it ❤️
Coming to the scenes I loved
Vic and taani convo was cute
Loved how Vic jaw dropped 😆
Kitchen scene was fab
U nailed it girl
Liked how ar n sw kept looking at Rey to know if he does anything wrong n than he replies quickly staring no he doesn't 😆
Than loved how all replied on Vic question
Juice water coffee 🤣 and taani :O
Awe loved the way Rey was admiring taani jumping on sofa
Than his nervousness 😆
Gang part for nil simmi scene was awesome
I wish I could write gangs scene just like u 👏
Coming to taani Sharon n juice part 🤣
Reyam are fab together they make a nice friendship n jija/sala bond
Mr dolly 🤣
Poor Rey 😳
Fire exit scene was so sweet 😳
N then rh scene :( Sharon haven't told Rey yet :O
Party was awesome loved the sond my fav ❤️
Loved ar n ridz talk in the end
And Precap :O
U better update quickly SS :(
I can't wait to know how the party ends and how at saves them n how Vic finds out about taarey
So update soon
Love u lots the update was mindblowing
Loved it ❤️
N someone lost the bet 🤣 😛

res
unres..!!

such a cute update..!!
n mr dolly🤣🤣🤣🤣
bichare reyam..!!
n sharon n taani acting as der bodyguard.!!🤣🤣
i loved the juice scence.!!! i was rolfing..!!
i loved it..!! n update soon

Awesome update
totally loved it
Super interesting precap
update soon

Nice prt I like it taarey were cute
I luv song n dance ar n rids was swt n
Nice thanks for PM

res
unres

shit yaar aaj mera itna lambha comment nahi hoga
bcos just as main update karne wali thi...
i accidently pressed back instead
aur poora ka poora comment got deleted 😭
aur mujhe sab yaad nahi hai
so phir se sorry... but today u wont get big comment from me

ok firstly about the story
i loved swayam n vicky's bhai personalities again... like always 😉
especially vicky when taani was trying to tell him about rey

n then beechara rey got so scared of vicky 😛
i still cant picture rey getting this scared of someone... especially vicky 😛
aur vo kitchen wala scene where vicky asks everyone what they're doing there
n rey kehta hai ki vo "taani" ko leene aaya tha 😆

hehe manager is back... taani n sharon better look out for their bf's
bcos the manager is gonna chase after them for sure 😆

awww nimmi r finally gonna tell everyone about them being a couple
but vo stupid se boys koi bhi ladki ke naam le rahe hai
n poor nil is being interogated by simmi 😆
that scene reminded me of the time that vicky was in the toilet n the boys thought he was with another girl
that time they were all guessing the girls name as well 😆

awww
i love the way that taani comes running and says "bhabhi bhabhi"
and then BOTH neha and sharon answer her
kitna cute family hai 😳

hahaha 🤣 i knew it
tu ek chapter ke liye juice ko nahi chod sakti hai kya
i just knew the moment the manager was mentioned that u would bring in the juice

WHAAATTT
would be wife??? oh haha sharon future ke bare mein baat kar rahi hai 😳
haha armaan n dolly scene was super hilarious
n the last romance scenes of couples were cute too

i cant wait for next update
aur i realise that yeh comment kafi long ho gaya
even though i had to retype 😛
but phir bhi awesome update n i cant wait for more

Nice n enjoyable update.Update soon :)

Awsome update 👍🏼 really gud especially kitchen and canteen scene 😉 so update nxt part asap and pm me when u update...😊 👏

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