ArHi FF: The Same Coin#1

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nhrb

@nhrb

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

so the damsel was in distress & her knight in shining armour saved her once again.
loved Arnav & khushi's interactions.one felt restless another one was wondering about lean,beautifully shaped fingers..kuch toh huya hey kuch hogaya hey.😆
& the diary entry 🤣
another superb update!

Edited by nhrb - 12 years ago

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Lovely update. Loved their conversation.

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

awesome update...Arnav saved the day!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

LOVED it LOVED it LOVED it, thank you for dedicating this whole chapter to Arnav and Khushi, we also got to witness progress in their relationship, their animosity is slowly dying down. I could so tell Arnav had all the admiration for Khushi as soon as he discovered why she did what she did. Even if he didn't say anything the fact that he calmed down and instantly enquired about the dog revealed his regret for being harsh with her. They are starting to maybe change their perceptions of eachother just a little bit! :) I think I just love both Arnav and Khushi in this FF, you are certainly doing wonders with their character portrayal.

Arnav is still restless for not apologizing for locking her up and scaring the living day lights out of her.I am glad that he has made his mind up about apologizing to her, Khushi on the other hand sees Arnav as someone who saved the day again so she is definitely not expecting an apology so that makes it even more wonderful! Loved all the dialogues exchanged in Arnav and Khushi's interaction! Bonus section once again cracked me up, Khushi is still a nutcase but in a good way I suppose !😆😆😆Couldn't stop laughing with the whole Batman come Vampire reference for Arnav and then settling with creepy for Arnav as well! Looking really forward to the next chapter!

PS. Apologies for always adding an H to your name 😆 to be on the safe side this time I didn't even take your name! ( You see your readers are just as crack as Khushi)

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

As I began reading the chapter for a while I thought as though you had peeked into my mind. This Khushi's thoughts on rains are the same as mine...right down to jeans and kurtis getting stuck to your legs!😃

I loved the way she stood up to the bunch of boys...I loved the way she rescued the helpless dog...I loved the way she stood her ground and screamed despite there being chances of her being manhandled by Gaikwad. But I wish she could have taken it further and slapped him as well (without the help of Raizada) while the reader in me is happy that Arnav came to the rescue, the feminist in me would have preferred Khushi to turn into Wonder woman.

As for the bonus...totally ROFL worthy! Batman did make an entry over here ya? And I loved the cheesy dialogue that remianed in Khushi' mind and wasn't mouthed!😆 Yes Khushi...go and dance.

P.S. Long, slender fingers deserve to caress her and not just the dog☺️

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Loved the update sooo much...

Wow...restlessness... Strange feelings...loved all ...

The best part thought the little entries at the end ... I really look forward to read them...

Waiting for more of Raizada n Gupta ...

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

awesome update...very cool one :)...i guess they talked nicely and sensible mostly with out any major fight...loved to see them with each other :)

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

This was simply the best! :D

Now i am not quite sure if it was Arhi or the Dog! he he he

yes the dog and its mewling did add to it for sure!

I loved the interactions and not to forget a slight hint at their equation changing ... for the good i hope! :)

I wished this would go on and on!! yes i simply cant get enough of them!

Oh! I have a bid here if i am allowed to make that is!! :) i really wanna have Arnav chancing upon her dance! that will add to the inexplicable feelings for each other and will surely raise the level of equation a notch higher! :)

Thanks for this Arhlicious update Semanti! :) i loved it!