ChanMan OS- FIVE things i HATE about YOU..!

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@CandYlicious_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys, Sumi here..! 🤗

Okay so i had written this One Shot, LONG LONG time back for my first ever fav couple i.e my Samrat-Gunjan.. <3 😳 And now i am writing this ChanMan version because these two couples have a very similar essence which I ADORE.. Have edited some of the scenarios which fitted ChanMan.. Hope you like it :)

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''FIVE THINGS I HATE ABOUT YOU..''

IN MY OS, ChanMan live in their own flat <3 ;)

Ufff... these Husbands.. 😡 I tell you Simple.. Cant they just grow up..? Seriously i wonder how did Manav's Mom coped with him .. I mean... He cant even spend a single day without messing up the whole house..!! Urgggh!' :@@

'Just relax Chhanchhan.. All husbands are the same actually.. 😆 Your Husband isn't the ONLY one who loves to mess around and leaves everything to his dear wife to take care of.. 🤔Chill yaar.. I came here to have some gup shup with you and here you are.. Boiling with anger... Just Chill! '

Why Simple..? I am SO not cooling down yet. You see ..? Just look at the condition of our house.. It looks as if its a Garbage area or something.. See this towel.. This packet of chips. And this rotten pizza t... 'She said while picking those items from the floor and sofas with a disgusted expression..

Chhanchhan was out of city for four days because she had to attend an important fund raiser ceremony related to the orphanage that she was working for . So she had to leave her poor husband home alone for four days... She herself was missing him badly and so she decided to surprise him by arriving at the third say.. 😳 But she was not aware of this fact that her husband Mr.SO-Badly-messed up-Borasagar cant even spend two days properly and with mannerism without her... 🤔 Poor soul.. 🤔 '

And now that Chhanchhan planned to surprise him and entered her house with Simple , she got to see the most SHOCKING sight in front of her.. Each and every corner of their house was messed up very nicely by her sweet husband... Now only a miracle can save him from his ANNOYED wife.' 😈

'Chhanchhan come here.. Just listen to me once.. Hmm... You know what.. I have an excellent technique through which you can vent out all your anger in just 5 min.. All you have to do is tell me any 5 things which you HATE about Manav jiju, the most..' And trust me... You will feel like REALLY good after that..'

Chhanchhan took a deep breathe and closed her eyes.. 'It is'nt THAT difficult.. I can name out a 1000 HABITS that i don't like in Manav. Considering that he is the most messiest person landed on Earth plant. To name just five things, is like a piece of cake. ' She said to herself..

1)
First of all.. I just DON'T like the time he takes when he has to wake up early n the morning .. 🤔 I keep shouting at him that 'Manav wake up! You are getting late but he just keep demanding for the Morning kiss.. (She turned a deep shade of pink while narrating this and Simple chuckled) Well i admit that he looks absolutely adorable while he does that and i feel like pulling his cheeks.. ☺️ But.. 😲 OMG! What am i doing..? Okay lets leave this one.. '.. =|

2)He takes soo much time in combing his hair. 0_o Almost half of his time gets consumed in his hairstyles.. As if there is some chic waiting for him in his office.. 😡Huh.. I simply dont like that he dresses up sooo much for some other people.. He is simply mine.. And i love it only when he dresses himself for me and makes me feel that he is Only mine.. And only I have the right to admire him.. well .. *she sighed* May be i am just being too judgmental.. i dont think that its HIS fault that he has to dress up for his office.. After all he has a reputation to take care of and he cant put it on stake and ... ' 😲 'WHAT ON EARTH AM I DOING! ?!! Am i supposed to defend him or accuse him.. 🥱 Fine... Lets move to the third one..

3)
I dont like that he is calling me almost after every hour in his office.. I mean.. Just think of it yar.. He is one of the boss of Borasagar enterprises and he wastes half of his time in having convos with me .. (she blushes slightly) Err I mean. He should be Responsible and mature, right,..? 🤔 But its not HIS problem as well actually.. All his life, he had a platonic life in a robotic house which is FULL of rules and regulations and where people behave as just random people. And NOT as a family. And not to forget the endless limitations..And I am glad that the 'someone' is ME.. <3 NOW he has this opportunity to share his EVERY moment with someone special.. Aww.. he has every right to be happy Simple.. ❤️

'Chhanchhan you.. ! 😲 Simple said disbelievingly ..

'Oh Sorry.. I just got a bit distracted..' Chhanchhan corrected herself..

4)Okay so, I dont like when that he snores during night, keeping both his hands over my waist like i am his pillow or something.. :@ he himself sleeps soo peacefully throughout the whole night , and poor me... I am forced to stare at him all night waiting for him to stop snoring like a polar bear or something.. 🤔 But yeah.. He looks absolutely adorable when he sleeps like that.. ☺️ I keep staring at him all night and i dont even know when i get dozed off while doing so.. All because of him. :@ Why is he sooo utterly butterly cute,.? ☺️ ❓

*a thought crosses in her mind instantly*

OMG! Chhanchhan what are you doing...? 😲 😲 You are not supposed to praise ur husband. You have to point his 5 BAD and Annoying habits! 🤔 Now this is your last chance' 😈

5) Hmm so i am sure that ths time... I wont get distracted.. Because this is the BIGGEST annoying thing about Mr.Manav. The way he keeps the whole house dirty in my absence... 😡 Each and every thing is mis-placed and God knows what he does with the fridge.. 🤔 Stuffing each and every thing in that poor fridge.. Even if that food s rotting like anything.. 🤔 His clothes, his shoes.. Urgghh! He is too messy Simple. But then... in someway , I am soo glad to be a part of his lfe and manage his messy lifestyle.. 😳 Somwhow i like his stupid adorable kind of dependence on me.. All his life he had been kind of lonely.. Even though his house is full of people around him. But they lack that special emotional attachment like normal families have.. I sometimes wonder that how can he live without me..? He sooo wants my companionship, my support and my love to make his journey of life more happier and smooth.. 😳 I want to FILL his void as much as i can..! <3

Simple was just smiling at her friend who was having a BIG grin on her face as well was and wiping her tears..

So Simple was right! Chhanchhan DID feel good after this small blame game.. 😳 😆 Because NOW she realized that even though she tried her BEST to point any BAD Habits of her husband that annoys her.. She just can never ever HATE them.. Infact.. That makes her love even more because he has submitted himself ALL to his wife.. He was HERS.. He BELONGED to her.. 😳 And being his REASON of life.. it was her duty to take care of him just like he did.. 😳 And pamper him throughout her life.. <3 Because even she knew it somewhere, that he LOVES doing so.. <3

AT NIGHT:

And it was about time for Manav to arrive from his office.. He clicked the door open and closed it.. It was all dark inside.. And he remembered that obviously.. His beauutiful , charming wife ain't here to lighten the darkness of his life.. She was in Panchgani.. He sighed and moved forward only to discover two hands encircling his waist and hugging him soo tightly from behind and felt his back of shirt getting wet..

'I missed you Manav.! 😭 said Chhanchhan almost in a chocking voice..

'Meri Chhanchhan,...! 😲 Is that you..? OMG! You surprised me .. I am sooo happy you came early.. I missed you soo much !! ❤️ ❤️ But wait wait! Look at me! Why are you crying...?' And cupped her face which was all teary eyed.. And her nose obviously red.. She made a beautiful sight with the moonlight witnessing their reunion and shedding its light over them.. Making their faces glow in it..

'Manav.. I dunno... I simply cant live without you.. I thought that i can manage to live without you atleast for four days.. But its just too impossible for me. Thats why i arrived after three days instead of four.. I cant spend a single day without shouting at you.. Getting annoyed at you because of your carelessness.. Loving you like as if you are a gift from heaven landed JUST for me.. Your cute and adorable acts which makes me laugh as well as adore them like silly.. How can anybody HATE you...? *she smiled amidst of tears on her face and cupped his face as if he was the most precious thing she possessed.. <3 You are MADE to be loved ONLY! Bas..!

And with that she hugged him tight..! Making her body mould with his as if to tell him that he is a PART of her.

He just let her speak.. Most of the times it was just him who spoke more and was expressive.. But after such a long time.. Chhanchhan opened her heart infront of him... He felt that there was no need for her to tell him these things because he already knew her inside and out.. But yeah.. Listening from her own mouth was definitely like music to his ears.. Awww... MY ADORABLE AND CUTE WIFE! 🤗

He wiped her tears and said quietly.'I thought that when you will arrive then i will be ONLY getting cushions and brick brackets from you for the way i have spoiled our whole house.. 😆 But you always surprise me Mrs.Manav.. I am loving this sort of welcome.. ;) (he teased her) Only the icing on the cake would be my welcome kiss.. Aren you going to give me that too..? 'Because I cant want a solid proof that you ACTUALLY missed me and i can know it only THAT way when you submit yourself to me ;)

Chhanchhan hit him playfully on his chest while hugging him and he creased her hair.. Smiling..

'You are too much Manav! (she blushed and looked down) But I still LOVE you for being such a tease ❤️ ' <33

'Chhanchhan.. I know why you yell at me.. Its Because YOU care.. The one who actually cares for you has got that full right to express their anger and disappointment like you do.. And i have no complaints about it. Because my love for you INCREASES because of this..😳

'Aww.. Manav...' and she kissed him softly telling him that she is probably the happiest person on this planet to have a husband like HIM in her life... He is the one in a million... And the BIGGEST thing that she HATES about him is that she cant HATE HIM!He was made to love ONLY and he was all HERS..! <3

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Do tell me how was it? 😆 🤗 *bites her nails*

Edited by -PreciousPearl- - 12 years ago