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Posted: 12 years ago
tis is really great...totally luv it...superb...
tanveer is trying to find out about her grandmother tat is y she is eagerly collecting all the documents n so far she is very interested in nikhat khan documents n painting...i wonder is nikhat some how tanveer grandmother nt...wonder where imraan went n who is following tanveer n making her scared...tis was really scary...great...thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...lease continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...totally addicted to tis ff...please update soon...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is it safe to say im scared? Because im terrified. Damn girl how do you do it? That was spooky as anything

Where did imran go? He's an enigma

Tanveer makes so much sense here
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Posted: 12 years ago
this one was really scary
i rd at night got goose bumbs scariest prt
tanveer toh gayi hmmm but u writeso weell
high class standard keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol, yeah! 😆 Anyways, the next chapter's on Ayaan, right? Ok, cuz u didn't do a chapter on his POV yet. Also, u said Tanveer is one of the most important characters (as much as we all hate her on the show. 😡). So, is Asad the other most important character? I'm curious to find out what Tanveer's deal is, with her grandmother and all.
-Fari 😳 ❤️

Yes, the next chapter is on Ayaan. Well, in a way Tanveer is one of the most important character because the project effects her the most... They are all important as well... Tanveer's character i one step more...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

awesome !!
god ! that was scary !!
what happened to imran?
& what is this hydrotherapy?
please update soon !



You will find out about Imran's whereabout...

Hydrotherapy is a "part of medicine, in particular of occupational therapy and physiotherapy, that involves the use of water for pain relief and treatment. The term encompasses a broad range of approaches and therapeutic methods that take advantage of the physical properties of water, such as temperature and pressure, for therapeutic purposes, to stimulate blood circulation and treat the symptoms of certain diseases."

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hydrotherapy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

amazing update gave me creeps! is nikhat khan tanveer's grandmom?? i have a feeling she is! and pretty please with a cherry on the top include asya! i mich them


You will find out about nikhat... She is the most important person, the team is dealing with... She was a patient... but i can't tell you anymore... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
You are one freaking amazing writer!!!!
a guy who thought he was a chicken...it reminded me of RL STINE's book..I think it was chicken chicken ...
I am spooked out... seriously why don't you publish this...make it a novel, add more plot?
Not everybody has the caliber to create goosebumps...and right now I have those...
Sry for late rply..and cntn soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res 😊
Unres!!

You know what I usually read ffs and os at night...that is when I go to sleep, I lie down and read them from my iphone...with lights off...i start reading them from 10 pm after all are asleep in my home...and my room is pitch dark...Acha hua...i didnt read this last night...it was sooo scary!!!! Trust me, when i was reading this line,

"Even though I feel like I'm being followed.
I feel like there's someone standing somewhere behind me, watching my every move."

I turned back to see if anyone is standng behind me!!!!😲 Please continue!!! Its really amazing!!!👏 I usually have a craze for horror stories!! This is something which is of my kind!!!!!! Thanks for the pm!!!😃 And if my comments are late, please don't mind!! 😊
Edited by Aishwaryaa - 12 years ago
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Chapter 14: Ayaan

I LOVE MAKING Humaira jealous. She gets so mad. It's super hot on her.
Mostly because it makes her super hot for me.
Not initially. Initially she gets all pissy about it, but then she starts to come around'starts to realize that she can't always treat me like some second-rate actor. I'm an ace. And aces tend to have wandering eyes.
Before we came down here to the tunnel, I pretended to gawk at Zoya. I mean, not that I wasn't gawking'I was'but I totally hammed it up. That's what we actor types do. We ham. I know it wasn't the nicest thing to do, but sometimes playing things up totally helps keep the spice in our already sizzling relationship. And honestly, who couldn't use a little added spice?
It's already paid off. Even though she's sulking, she's got her head resting on my shoulder as I shoot a scene between Asad and Zoya.
INT. UNDERGROUND TUNNEL,
DANVERS STATE HOSPITAL ' NIGHT
ASAD and ZOYA, two attractive high school seniors, stand at the end of the tunnel, holding a candle between them. ANGLE ON the shadow of the candle flame as it lights up the walls, creating tall, cone like shapes.
It isn't just my supposed lust for Zoya that's got Humaira all hot and bothered. She's also sulking because she wants to be the star of everything (including this scene), and, let's face it, there's really no reason she shouldn't be. The girl's got some killer talent, not to mention the most dazzling golden-brown eyes, the fullest pale pink lips, and the sexiest little tush I've ever seen.
PULL BACK to reveal HUMAIRA, 17, pouting those pale pink lips right now.
ME
Are you okay, baby cakes?
Humaira lets out a growl, still pouting.
Sometimes'most of the time'Humaira hams it up, too. She has a hard time knowing where her character stops and reality begins. But I suppose all great talents have their flaws.
Plus, it's not like I didn't owe her a little suffering after how secretive she was about that phone call she got in the tunnel earlier. She still has yet to tell me who that was' though I can't say I was able to refuse her makeup nookie offering anyway.
I just hope she comes around soon'that she doesn't end up sulking for the rest of the night. The girl has a lot to be grateful for, after all. I mean, did I not score her a stellar monologue just as soon as we got down here? That's right; I talked Asad into filming her as she walked the length of the tunnel describing everything she saw. He didn't even object when she got totally into the role, acting like she was a patient trying to escape and chattering on about hearing voices and needing to feel the sun again.
CLOSER ON Asad and Zoya, only inches apart now, talking and smiling. Asad leans in like he's about to go in for some lip action.
I pull back slightly, making sure the volume is turned up all the way on the shotgun mic, wishing I could hear them better, but knowing that we'll get all the juice during playback time.
Asad and Zoya really do make a pretty good-looking couple'tall, lanky, and athletic. Except, what is it with Asad's hair? Doesn't he know that nobody does that messy gel thing with their ends anymore? I run my palm over my well-groomed mane, grateful that it has body and texture all its own, wondering if Asad would be offended if I yelled out CUT and offered him a pointer or two.



Next part coming up. 😃
Edited by Nandini0910 - 12 years ago

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