MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 8 - Page 9

Maan: Geet Dekho ritzy aa gayi... Ab hum milne wale hai jaldi..

Maan:

Geet:

Meko update milega... Oh raamji...

Meri zindagi main chali aao.. chali aao...

Piyaaa... O re Piyaaa...

Phoolo ke rang se...

Bairiyaaa... O Bairiyaa...

Pyaar hua... Ikraar huaa... hai

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Thank you so much all of you for appreciating and giving such positive comments on last update. I am so glad that you liked it even though it had no direct Maaneet. These chapters were a big challenge to me and your appreciation made it all worth it. Also some of you commented on my song choice. Again sometimes an update inspires a song and sometimes the other way round. I am glad you are enjoying it.

A lot of you don't want Dev and NT to create havoc in Maan's life. Guys I need shades of different characters to move the story. Remember the golden days of GHSP were when Dev/NT were against Maaneet and Maaneet were together and not when Dev became a good person. So have faith and read rest of the story.

Some of you had a question to just to clarify - Raj died in accident along with Daadaji but Pammi is alive. Dev and NT are staying in KM but have gone out for a trip...

Ramykrish – Yes Krishna's character is also inspired by someone I know personally. She suffered a lot in her in-laws place but she only had love to give. Her husband was a drunkard and didn't do any work. She loved her husband's brother's son as her own while she herself stayed without a child. I don't want to divulge more than that but all I can say is that sometime sweetest and most lovable people are the ones who don't get any love themselves.

Rituja – Thank you so much sweetie...your comment really touched my heart and dunno worry, longer the better it is...I just loved it...

Read your note about you being out this weekend...sorry dear for delaying the update but I really needed to catch on my PMs...kissy from my side for all the pics and comments while you waited...

Sunflower 11 – Thank you dear for commenting

Priya111111 – Felt happy for your sister dear. Hope she stays healthy. Thanks for sharing something so personal. I am glad I could touch your heart.

Sexy_witch – I am glad I was able to touch a chord but I wonder what prompted you to write something so personal. I hope things get better for you and your family.

Gudmeet – was missing you darling...welcome back

Anu – Thank you so much for your lovely words and the poem is beautiful. Your poem and words reminded me of a song from movie kabhi kabhi

Main Har Ek Pal Ka Shaayar Hoon
Har Ek Pal Meri Kahani Hai
Har Ek Pal Meri Hasti Hai
Har Ek Pal Meri Jawaani Hai

Rishton Ka Roop Badalta Hai, Buniyaden Khatam Nahin Hoti
Khwabon Ki Aur Umango Ki, Miyaden Khatam Nahin Hoti
Ek Phool Mein Tera Roop Basa Ek Phool Mein Meri Jawaani Hai
Ek Chehra Teri Nishaani Hai, Ek Chehra Meri Nishaani Hai
Main Har Ek Pal Ka Shaayar Hoon...

Tujhko Mujhko Jeevan Amrit, Ab In Haathon Se Peena Hai
Inki Dhadkan Mein Basna Hai, Inki Saanson Mein Jeena Hai
Tu Apni Adaen Baksh Inhen Maein Apni Wafaen Deta Hoon
Jo Apne Liye Sochi Thi Kabhi, Woh Saari Duaen Deta Hoon
Main Har Ek Pal Ka Shaayar Hoon...

Yashwardhan's and Krishna's legacy continues……

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Chapter 51– Socha na tha

Phir un panno ne apni dastaan kholi ,

Kahani thi wahi,par kirdaar alag

Naam the alag par ehsaas the wahi ,

Zamana tha alag par rooh thi wahi

Usne zindagi ko hasna sikhaya

Tho isne use zindagi ka khoobsurat chehra dikhaya

Usne saanson ko lena sikhaya tho

isne un saanson ke pehchan dilaya

in dono ke bina zindagi adhoori hoti

shayd zindagi zindagi na hoti

ek adhoori dastan hoti

Aakash ke taro me khoya hai jaha sara,

Lagta he pyara ek ek tara,

Un taro me sabse pyara hai ek sitara,

Naam he alag par kirdaar ek

Apni roshni se bikherthe sab ki zindagi mein

By Anu (Hermoso)

Maan's room

It had been 15 hours since he had told Daadima about Geet and now his anxiety had reached to a level of absolute stress. Maan was restless and panicking

"Daadima didn't even come to meet me today. Is she that angry with me? And this Nakul also hasn't come back. I hope she is fine. I should probably go and check on her."

Maan got up but sank down back into bed as Daadima entered with a sombre expression.

"Maan humne aapki shaadi fix kar di hai"

"What?"

Maan almost screamed at the bombshell his Daadima had dropped on him as soon as she entered the room.

Daadima smiled inside her heart and put her finger in the ear giving it a shake at his loud booming voice - "Why are you shouting like this…hmmm? What you think only you can give us shocks."

"Daadima what are you saying? At least talk to me about what you think for Geet…please Daadima. You also know she is a good girl"

"Bas Maan….yesterday you only told me that I know best for you and my decision is taken. Beta andar aayiye"

Maan's expression changed from confusion to utter disbelief as he saw a shy Geet walking inside.

Daadima laughed heartily and sat down on bed clutching her heart. "Oh God…Maan just look at your face"

"Daadima!!!"

"Are you are still complaining. Kyon pasand nahi aayi aapko humari pasand….change kardein"

Maan hugged Daadima slightly (he is still injured) and kissed her on the shoulder "Thank you thank you so much Daadima"

Daadima just patted his face lovingly and then stretched her hand and pulled Geet closer.

"Ab sambhaliye inhein. Aapko nahi pata kitna bad patient hain yeh….na waqt pe khana na dawaii...aur kam toh pucho hi mat...ab inki saari zimmedaari aapki"

(Now take care of him. You don't know what a bad patient he is...no time for food or medicine and don't even talk about work...now you are responsible for him in all ways.)

Geet was suddenly feeling so shy that she could not even raise her eyes to see either Daadima or Maan. Red colour covered her face. Daadima smiled seeing her coyness and then turned to see even Maan not meeting her eyes.

"Wow, now even you are feeling shy. I never thought I will see the day when Mana singh Khurana will blush"

"Daadima stop teasing me."

"Acha baba ok….hum neeche jaa rahe hain lunch ki tayari karne ke liye. Nakul ke haathon snacks bhijwaate hain. Tab tak aap dono baatein kijiye."

"Daadima mein bhi aati hoon"

"Beta aapka hi ghar ahi...jo man karta hai kariye. Lekin just for now, I think you both need to talk...so talk."

Saying this Daadima pushed Geet even closer to Maan and walked out. As she closed the door she just teased them "Bas baatein hi karni ki izzazat di hai abhi humne"

"Daadima!!!!"

They could hear her chuckling as she left the two lovebirds alone.

Geet's breaths increased as if possible as he held her hand slightly and made her sit next to him. For few moments he just adored the angel sitting in front of him. It was still hard for him to believe that she was really there so close to him. Her jhumkas were kissing her rosy cheeks as her lips quivered with anticipation of the moment. Softly caressing her hand it felt as if there was music even in silence which stretched between them.

"Daadima ne mujhse kuch kaha Geet. Kya sach mein….it just so feels like a dream. Kaise hua yeh sab...tum mere paas…and sach mein unhone tumse pucha aur tumne haan kaha."

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Kabhi dil ke kareeb, tumhe mere naseeb
Yun laayenge socha na tha
Ek chahat ka pal, sab savalon ka hall
Yun paayenge socha na tha
Kabhi dil ke kareeb

Not trusting her voice she just shyly nodded her head

She felt his breaths falling on her shoulder as he leaned in and whispered almost kissing her ears "Thank you Mishty"

His simple words triggered an emotional avalanche inside her. Not able to take it any more she just hid her face in her palms. Maan smiled at her sweet gesture and held her fingers, removing her hands softly. He removed the lone lock of hair falling on her forehead as it's tips touched her close eyes.

"I also want to ask you Mishty myself. You know mere dil mein kya hai...tumse chah ke bhi nahi chupa paya. I love you….lots. You are my life. Before you came in it, it was colourless. But you just filled it with colours of your loves. Now when I sleep, I dream and I dream of us…our future. Thank you Geet. Thanks a lot for coming into my life and making it so beautiful.

I promise to cherish you for life long and even beyond. I wouldn't say this love will remain the same because every moment I spend with you, it just grows. This heart beats your name and today my love I want to know if you will accept this angry, khadus, dusht daanav in your life. Will you be mine Geet? Will you marry me Mishty?"

Not able to take intensity of his words, she just hugged him.

Intazar kar rahe hai besabri se aapke aane ka...

Aake humse wo teen labzz kehne ka...

Yuh to mohtaaz nahi humari mohabbat in labzo ki

Par ye kambhakt dil hai jo sunta hi nahi meri...

By Mishtiritu

Room was filled with silence once again when he heard the words he has been waiting for "I love you too Maan sir and yes…yes"

Maan hugged her back from his right hand nuzzling his face in her hair.

"Oh Geet…tum nahi janati tumne mujhe aaj kya de diya hai."

She came out of his embrace and slowly made an effort to see his face. Like always, his eyes shone with love for her but for the first time there was unrestrained love in her eyes for the man who has already been there with her in every up and down of her life since the day she met. He was already his life partner.

Maan was bowled over with the emotions shining in her eyes when she hooded them with her lowered lashes.

"I don't know how to express what I feel for you Maan Sir or what position you have in my life. I can just say that I…I…I really love you a lot…pata nahi kabse lekin bahut….Aapka saath, aapka vishwaas…apka..aapka pyaar meri zindagi hai Maan sir. Aaj mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai ki mein sach mein Babaji ki favourite hoon jo unhone aapko meri zindagi mein diya hai…iske badle mein unki di har takleef…har dard sar ankhon pe…aaj lagta hai jaise zindagi ka ek maqsad pura ho gaya."

(I don't know how to express what I feel for you Maan Sir or what position you have in my life. I can just say that I…I…I really love you a lot…don't know since when but a lot. Chance to be with you, to have your trust, your...your love, this is my life Maan sir. Today I believe that truly I am Babaji's favourite for him to give you in my life. In return I welcome every pain...every trouble he has ever given me...today I feel as if I met my life's goal.)

Maan touched her forehead with his and could only take her name in reverence "Oh Geet"

Breaths falling on each others lips, it took them a while to calm their surging emotions. Such an open confession had unrestrained all those bondages which lay between them. Now there was no wall, no restriction, and no guilt stopping them from expressing their feelings for each other.

Maan noticed her drooping eye lashes, buttery red cheeks and glossy lips. An intense desire to just hold her so close to his heart consumed him but still he stopped himself as last thing he wanted was to scare her. She felt his love filled gaze on her. His shallow breaths communicated his heart's story to her and his restrain made her fall in love with him just a little bit more getting amazed at his care and concern for her.

Their silent love story was broken by a knock from Nakul who left a tray with fruits and juice on the table. Geet picked up the plate and offered it to Maan but he waited for her to feed him like hospital. Finally getting the hint she picked an apple piece and took it close to his mouth. Her heart shuddered with new emotions as he bit into it so close to her hand that some juice spilled onto her finger. With a sweet smile she fed him again and he naughtily held her hand licking the juice of her finger with a big loud smooch. Oh dear. Geet could hear her heartbeat thudding loudly at his not so innocent gesture. She blushed beetroot as he next took her hand and directed it to her lips. Biting into his half eaten slice, blood rushed in her veins and she almost felt dizzy with emotions. Abhi toh pyaar shuru hi hua tha aur unko rom rom jaise us mein bheegne laga tha. Just like this new beginning, they took their time relishing every bite from each other's hand. It was as if they had finally got an expression to long suppressed feelings for each other.

Aankhein joh ab meri aankhon mein hain
Dhoond raha tha kayi salon se

Kitni milti hain aankhein yeh
Khwabon se mere khayalon se

Ke haqeqaat mein hum, sapno ka sanam
Yun paayenge socha na tha

Kabhi dil ke kareeb, tumhe mere naseeb

As they finished, Maan made some space for her and gestured her to sit comfortably next to him. Shyness was not letting her do as his eyes were requesting her so he finally held her hand and pulled her towards him. He did not know from where this boldness was coming but in his heart now there were no limits between them. He knew she loved him…she had even said it to him just few minutes back what her eyes and actions had spoke to him so much more deeply. Only thing which had brought distance between them was her hesitation to accept their relationship openly and her fear of Daadima's rejection. With both things out of the way now there was nothing which could stop him from showing his love, his feelings for her.

With deep breaths falling on his chest, she felt her traitor heart beating loudly as he pulled her. As he stilled, she understood he was waiting for her to calm herself but at the same was being stubborn by not letting her go. His healed hand was holding her close to his heart and she was overwhelmed with the way he was showing his right on her. Giving into his sweet demand, she finally settled comfortably with her hand lying close to his chest as she hesitatingly supported herself by holding his waist. Lying in the semi hug position, he gently fingered her hair feeling the soft silk in his hand. Geet almost purred with peace she felt and she unconsciously snuggled up further in his arms. His husky voice gave her goose bumps

"I have always wanted to do this…You hair have always enticed me. They are even more soft then they look...resham ki tarah. Truth is that you are so beautiful Geet..."

Badi shidhat se paaya hai tujhe
Khuda se mere liye maanga hai tujhe...

Gustakhiya jo ki tujhe paane ke liye
Rang laayi mohabbat tere ek haa kehne se...

Teri ek nazar mujhe ghayal kar deti hai
Kaise jeeu mein ab nazar ye hum pe jo basi hai...

Ibadat tu meri khuada se jyada karti hai
Mere liye tu hi us rab ki parchayii hai...

Zindagi to kab se aapki ho chuki hai
Ruh bhi ab aap main kaaynaat tak bas gayi hai...

Tujhe paa ke ab mein jeene laga hu
Teri mohabbat mein ab sawarne laga hu...

Jannat ab meri bahao mein hai
Meri jaan jo ab mere pass hai...

Dua'o mein to sab kisi ko maangte hai
Hum to teri dua'o me khud ko shamil karte hai...

By mishtiritu

He placed a deep kiss on her forehead. As his lips touched the place between her eyebrows, she clutched his shirt and hid herself deep in his arms. Maan chuckled feeling her response and just tightened his hold around her, feeling her every soft fibre against his own hard form.

He knew that he needed to distract himself or God only knows with the ways things were progressing what he was going to do with his overflowing emotions.

"Geet"

"Ji"

"Kya kaha Daadima ne tumhein…koi chubhne wali baat toh nahi…"

English translations from this point forward are at the end.

"Uhhh…nahi. Mein aaj aapko samjha nahi sakti unhone mujhse kya kaha. Kehne ko toh unhone mujhe daadaji aur apni baatein batayi. Bataya kaise unhone daadima ko ek jeevan saathi banaya balki na ki bas ek peeche chalni wali parchayi. Maa ke bare mein bataya. Unka aur daadaji ka…unka aur daadima ka….unka aur aapke rishte ke bare mein bataya. Aapke bhayion ke bare mein aur unke saath aapke rishte ke bare mein bhi bataya. Bataya ki kaise sabne aapko itna dard diya aur kaise miss karte hain woh aur aap maa ko.

She lifted her head from his chest. Still in her embrace, she dared to hold his face in her one palm.

"Par sach yeh hai ki aaj unhone mujhe sab kuch de diya Maan sir. Aapka saath de diya aur who bhi yeh keh kar ki unhein mujhmein Maa ki parchayi dikhti hai. Mein Maan sir. I never though I was worthy of anything and she said she saw Maa in me. I can't explain how I felt when she said that. Waada kiya hai meine unse ki kuch bhi kar ke Maa ki parchayi banungi. Ab mein is ghar ki ho gayi Maan sir. Unki jagah toh mein nahi le sakti par koshish karungi ki yeh ghar humesha muskurata rahe.

Kabhi tanha bethe bethe yunhi
Pal mein hi main ghum ho jaati thi

Main bhi kahaan main rehti thi
Aksaar main tum ho jaati thi

yeh ajaab si khata, aur isski saza
Yun paayenge socha na tha

Kabhi dil ke kareeb, tumhe mere naseeb
Yun laayegne socha na tha

Ek chahat ka pal, sab savalon ka haal
Yun paayenge socha na tha

Aur aap fikar mat kijiye. Vicky zaroor laut aayega. Jab Daadima ne bataya na uske baare mein toh mere dil ne mujhse yahi kaha ki woh zaroor aayega. Jawani ke josh mein...apne gusse mein woh chala toh gaya lekin zindagi se badi tecaher koi nahi. Ek din woh zaroor samjhega ki aap uske bade bhai hain...pita hain aur bachon ko ghar laut ke aana hi hota hai Maan Sir. He will come back. Yeh mera vishwaas hai. Aap itne ache ho…itna pyaar hai aapke man mein aur ek din who is pyaar ko zaroor samjhega…zaroor."

Maan's eyes got misty hearing her love filled words. She dared to shake her head asking him not to get sentimental. Maan smiled hiding her in his embrace once again.

"Aap ko mere bare mein sab kuch pata tha Maan sir…aaj mujhe bhi pata chala kitna kuch chupa rakha hai aapne apne is dil mein."

Her words stirred a sense of nervousness in him. How much she trusted him but was he really truthful to her. Had he really told her everything?

Precap – Hum Mar Jayenge

"No. As a matter of fact I can't explain to you what she told me today. If i talk about her words then she told me about Daadaji and herself. She told me how he made her his life partner ant not just a shadow who walks behind him. She told me about Maa too. Her relationship with Daadaji, Daadima and you. She also told me about your brothers and also how everyone hurt you so much. She told me how much she and you miss Maa."

She lifted her head from his chest. Still in her embrace, she dared to hold his face in her one palm.

"But in reality today she gave me everything Maan sir. She gave me right to be with you and that too by saying that she finds Maa in me. Me Maan sir. I never though I was worthy of anything and she said she saw Maa in me. I can't explain how I felt when she said that. I have promised her that I will try to be like Maa. From now on I am part of this house. I can never take her place but I will try my best that this house always keep on smiling.

And you don't worry. Vicky will come back one day. When Daadima told me about him then my heart said to me that he will definitely come back. In youth's passion, in his anger he may have gone but there is no bigger teacher than life. One day he will surely understand that you are his elder brother...his father and kids have to return to home one day Maan Sir. He will come back. This is my faith. You are so good ...you have so much love in your heart that one day he will surely understand this love...he will."

Maan's eyes got misty hearing her love filled words. She dared to shake her head asking him not to get sentimental. Maan smiled hiding her in his embrace once again.

"You knew everything about me Maan sir…today I also came to know how much you have been hiding in your heart too."

Her words stirred a sense of nervousness in him. How much she trusted him but was he really truthful to her. Had he really told her everything?