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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wrote this one shot after yesterdays episode...
How I wish Raj stop Divya from leaving



Its night 12:00 Am, he was franatically moving on his bike with a speed unknown on the road to AirPort . He already missed her once, now he can't miss her again. He was cursing him self for taunting her, for breaking her heart with his words, he was feeling guilty for even manhandling her.

He remembered how his heart stopped for a minute when Sarita called him to say that His Divu was leaving for ever.

He tried to call her, but she didn't pick her mobile, he then understood how much he love her.
In mean while he cursed him self for forgetting Divya a mean while getting trappe in his guilty. He thought to himself "Feling guilt for the wrong I did to Sarita ji, and In order to make her life better, I left my Div behind. Whats right in it ? I ran for her when she got hurt, but I didn't get to her that day... I was more concerned for my family, and that I thoguht as a paying back for her, for what she left him for her family. But I didn't thought how much will it pain her, How much would it make her feel guilty"

Raj ran his hand tthrough his hair and continued through his thinking process " That day I ran behind u as a franatic, searched for u through the whole station, but u hid ur self form me, I shouted for u a lot and u still kept slent after listening to them. I know u are leaving for ur siblings, but how can u leave me all alone. I asked u not to go because, my parents are choosing alliance for me, and I want to take u to my house and introduce u to them. But I wished to do it as a surprise, when u left me with out telling me any thing.I thought to call u, but my anger always prevented me from doing so. I waited for ur call each and every day, preserving each and every memory of u in my heart and living in those memories. "

"The day when I saw about ur wedding news in paper, that day I am happy that u came back to Bhopal, but was equally broken that u are again setting to leave me. Why Divya why do u do all this. Enter my life, raise hopes in me and trash them and go off... I know u love me Divya , U can't go like this leaving me . I love u Divya and u are the onlyy girl whom I will love for my whole life. "

Raj sensed him self reaching the Airport and he dropped his bike and ran into the airport, he looked every where for her, but can't find her. He was feeling restless,and tired when he felt some unknown sense in him, a sense which he gets when his love was with him. Then he felt some thing on his shoulder and turned back to find that it was the scarf of Divya. Divya looked at him with shock and turned back to leave, but Raj shouted "Divya"

Raj can see her stopping , he felt his hopes alive and then went to her " Again u are runnign away from me, Why? Why are u doing this. Do u think that with out u my life will be alive. Do u think that with out u I can be a normal person. why are u leaving me Divya and making me a stone again"

Divya closed her eyes , tightening her fists..

Raj:U are y life Divy, and this heart beats for u. I can't be a Raj wiht out u Divya. I can never be a Raj

Divya:But its all over Raj, u are now married to Sarita and she's ur responsibility. U should care for her Raj

Raj: I accept that she's my responsibility, but staying in a relation ship with her for life long won't give her any happiness Divya. I can't give her any happiness, when my happiness is u. Thats why I want to do her remarriage Divya.

Divya:Raj, but u always think of ur own, once in ur life do u try think in other POV. Can u understand how much it pains Sarita.

Raj: I know what u are saying, but she needs to accept the truth and she accepted it Divya. She understod that she has to move one, she only asked me to do her Punarvivaah.

Divya doesn't understand what Raj was saying... She was trying to believe it when Raj continued "Look at this, we are even divorced, see this, she herself got this paper signed. I know she loves me, and its painful for her to do this,. but I am sure she will move on in her life, and its her insistence to get remarried, she wish to move on in her life. "

Divya:But that love I saw in Sarita's eyes for u, I can never forget itRaj, I doesn't wish to pain Sarita by staying here.

Raj: Can u understand what are u doing, in ur hesitance, u are ruining three lives Divya, we are getting three lives ruined. where neither of us mocves on and neither of us get happiness. Please Divya atleats now stop doing this,

Divya looked at Raj and said " I need to go Raj"

Raj: Divya u can't go like this . I need ur help

Divya:Help?

Raj: Yeah, I rpomised that I will get a good match for sarita in one month, and u said me u help me, now help me Divu, Please help me.

Divya was still in hesitation when she wished that what ever she was listenign was true, but she doesn't want to hurt Sarita, and doesn't wanna disrespet the marriage system. thats when she saw gaurav standing there. Though Gaurav was not ehr love, he made good friend of her, she stared at Gaurav teary eyed when Gaurav came to her and said " Divya please stay back, when there's no love in a marriage, that marriage can never be happy. U only sai it to me once. then why are u opposing whats Raj doing now. Please stay back and help him Divya. Please get back ur love. "

Divya: But Sarita.

Raj: U won't approve na, see Sarita ji only sent me here to get u back, she truly approves and she truly wishes to move on and wants us together. please Divya, u can't do it to me again, U killed me once, and again gave life to me, now once again u cant take back the life u came to me. Please Divya

Divya rushed and hugged Raj tightly and started to cry out ... Raj too hugged her and let her take out all the sadness inside her, after a while she broke the hug and said "Finally u proved u still have that artist inside u . "

Raj rubbing her tears smiled and said "Ofcourse, Now that my Divu is back to me, my artist is also back"


Edited by harianjana - 12 years ago


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Afss_94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! Hari fantabulous OS just loved it. Aww Divu...❤️
Really in love with ur RaVya!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... Hari great work...
Liked it very much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SushantFan_Afss

OMG! Hari fantabulous OS just loved it. Aww Divu...❤️
Really in love with ur RaVya!!!

Thank u afsara...
IO just thoght that if CV's could take up this twist so that Divya can be back in show again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soniaman

Wow... Hari great work...
Liked it very much...

Thank u so much sonia... wihs other Rubi fans also love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it..hope it happens in the show soon..waitin for that day..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: avina_radev48

loved it..hope it happens in the show soon..waitin for that day..

dear I don't have any hopes regarding this happening in show, but just wrote down what I wish to see
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous update hari want it to happen i love ur ff's and os when i read them i wil completely go into other world
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ushasri

fabulous update hari want it to happen i love ur ff's and os when i read them i wil completely go into other world

Thank u so much usha ji
it feels incredible when we come to know that... there are people who like our work

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hari it will nt happen...
We know these cvs...

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