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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

@ chap -10-



EK LAMBI KAALI RAAT BAS DHALNE KO HAI , CHAAND BAADLON MAIN CHIPNE KO HAI ,, AUR NAYI ROSHNI KE SAATH SURAJ UJAALA KARNE KO HAI ,
KUCH NAYEE UMEEDON KE SAATH , ANKHIYON MAIN JHILMILAATE SAPNE LIYE KISI KE ZINDAGI PYAAR SE MEHKANE KO HAI BETAAB , PAR KAUN JAANE KAB TAK RAHEGA YE KHAABOON KA KARWAAN , AUR KAB TAK RAHEGA YE SHAANT SAMA , KYA LIKHA HAI APNI HAATH KI LAKIRON MAIN , KYA SACH HONGE KABHI APNE KHWAAB YA BIKHRENGE BAN KE SIRF BEETI YAAD KYA APNE PYAAR SE , SACHI MOHABBAT SE HONGE HAMESHA KE LIYE EK -- BEPANAAH PYAAR KARNE WALE DO ALAG INSAAN YA REH JAAYENGE SIRF UNKE NISHAAN ,
KAUN JAANE , KAL HO NAA HO , KYA KAL RAHEGA YE KHUSHIYON KA JHOOMTA SAMA , YA HOGA PYAAR KA EK NAYA IMTEHAAN ????


well i love hindi version lot it's so so so awesome loved it so much

awesome and emotional update again dear loved it to the core

taarey feelings and love for each other is enough and more powerful itna ki unhe words ki jarurat hi nahi padti
i love the song too

aww taayam flashback scene was so cute

aww feel bad for swayam how much he love taani really loved it so much



thank u so so so much dear 🤗🤗
love u so much my cute dear friend 🤗
mera dil garden garden ho gaya tere itne pyaare wonderful lovely special comments read karke 😛 , sachi dil khush kar diya yaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

moni such a awesome and emotional story by you loved it so much , you are such a awesome writer , the way you describe feelings was so awesome iit always seems like that i am part of that story and everything happened in front of my eyes , i love the way you write , really love and thanks from bottom of my heart for writing such a beautiful story .. plz update soon and pm me...









no dear , THANK U SO SO SO SO SO MUCH , 4 SUPPORTING AND SHOWERING YOUR PRECIOUS LOVE ON ME , ENCOURAGING ME AND MOTIVATING ME WRITE MORE AND MORE , OTHERWISE I M NOT AT ALL GOOD AT WRITING
😆😆😆 NEVER EVER THOUGHT THAT ONE DAY I WILL WRITE SO MANY STORIES AND UNBELIEVABLE THING IS THAT U ALL SPECIAL PEOPLE LOVED IT A LOT , REALLY UNEXPECTED AND UNBELIEVABLE😆
BUT DIL SE BIG BIG BIG THANK U SO SO SO MUCH MY SWEET DEAR BUDDY AND CUTE WONDERFUL READER ,


U KNOW ALL YOUR HEARTY COMMENTS R SO SO SO SPECIAL AND PRECIOUS 2 ME , I REALLY FELT BLESSED WHILE READING YOUR HEART TOUCHING SPECIAL OVERWHELMING COMMENTS DEAR ,
LOVE U SO MUCH MY CUTU BUDDY ,
THANKS A LOT AGAIN DEAR , IT REALLY REALLY MEANS A LOT 2 ME .
🤗

Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HELLO MY SWEETU CUTU BUDDIES , 😛 LO MAIN AAGAYI AAP SABKO PARESHAN KARNE 😆😆 AUR APNI EMOTIONAL STORIES AUR UPDATES SE KUCH KHOOBSURAT EMOTIONS KE EHSAAS DILAANE 😉😉😉 OKK OKK ENOUGH OF MY BAK BAK , YE LO APNI UPDATE OK
BUT WAIT MY DEARS , AISE NAHI EK CONDITION HAI , KI NEXT UPDATE KE LIYE AAPSABKO DIL SE REMEMBER DIL SE COMMENTS KARNE HONGE OK , ONE WORD COMMENTS KARKE FORMALITY NAHI KARNA OKK BILKUL DIL SE MERE DIL KO CHU NE WALE COMMENTS KARNA PLZZ ITS MY HEARTY REQUEST 😛😛

~~~~~TUJHE BHULA DIYA ~~~~~~

chapter 11

its around 9 in d morning , doctor enters in d icu with nurse , swayam also comes with them , what they all saw was a little surprising taarey were lost in each other , rey was holding taani's hands till now and he was staring , adoring and capturing his love and her natural attractive beauty taani that too so lovingly with so much care visible in his eyes along with love , taani was also looking in his eyes feeling his love and care each and every moment but sometimes she lowers her eyes , smiling a little while blushing and blinks them slowly yet beautifully , when she starts feeling shy because of rey's intense gaze but again look at him as she don't want 2 let this moment go from her hands , she want 2 live with his love , she want 2 fight her problems , her pain with her love's strength , and care . she want 2 feel this loving moment feeling rey her love , her soul , her life , caring her , loving her giving her a reason 4 life and taani's existence .

doc and nurse smiles seeing d 2 pure lovebirds , although swayam feels a little awkward , yet he is happy deep inside , seeing his baby sis recovering and smiling , he was also relieved as her sister got a loving , caring and protective, best life partner rey who will always keep taani happy and will always take care of his baby sis taani . he will always be with her forever and ever no matter what ..
nurse ( coughs fakely ) ahem ahemm , still no effect on taarey
then a little loudly - ahemm ahemmm
still taarey r lost in their dreamland
then doc - excuse me both of u , agar aap dono ka romance ho gaya ho to kya main Miss taani ka check up kar sakta hun , i have 2 go and check other patients also
they smiles
( both come out from their trance , taani feels a little shy and so she looks here and there . rey looks at d doc and swayam who was also smiling , but giving awkward fake angry glares . )
rey - yaa sure ,
and he stands up but was still holding taani's hands , both were still not in any mood 2 leave each other
actually , deep inside their heart they were still scared of loosing their dear loved one . they still have fear of separation , fear of loosing love , fear of death and destiny ...

meanwhile d gang( boys) decides 2 apologize 2 taani , 4 their rude behaviour as now they have realized their mistake and r very guilty after knowing d truth and d reason ( those harsh bad comments on college website ) of taani's sudden change of behaviour , but they were scared of reyam , as they have strictly stopped them from coming 2 hospital , still they want 2 go and see whether their friend is ok or not so strangely ( kabhi kabhi unke bhi dimaag ki batti jal jati hai yaar ), and surprisingly they thought of buying gifts 4 taani , as they have done very wrong with such a pure soul ,and an innocent yet a brave amazing friend , so they bought some gifts after asking girls again and again ( but without letting them know about that truth ) and girls also decides 2 go and meet taani , as they were also guilty deep inside , and they have realized d value of a great wonderful friend like taani , and they also know that their friends need them now ,4 whom d whole gang was worried and tensed , so the girls also cook soup and some food also 4 taareyaam and they all go 2 d hospital

( in d hospital ICU )
as check up finish
doc ( 2 swayam )- well she recovering very well , and much better also , her condition is improving

swayam ( takes a breathe of relief , smiles a little ) - thank u krishna ji and thanks doctor , thank u so much , ( looking at taani ) meri baby sis meri pyari si taani ko thik karne ke liye , apko nahi pata ki meri behen mere liye meri life , mere soul , se bhi kitni zyada anmol ( precious ) hai ,
( while saying this , swayam eyes were filled with tears of happiness , and tears of relief shedding by his heart through his eyes and taani was looking at her sweet innocent lovely caring brother , she was also crying a little while feeling her brother's love in her heart , and smiling a little also through her tears while thanking her krishna ji from her heart 4 giving her such a loving , caring bro swayam )

doc- well humne kuch nahi kiya ,thank god 4 this magical miracle and 4 saving her life , and inki jaan aap dono ( pointing at reyam ) ke pyaar ne , care ne, (prayers) duuaonn ne bachayi hai ,
( 2 swayam ) aapke care, support , love , prayers ne he inhe fight karne ki himmat de hai ( and most imp your blood if u have not donated your blood at d right time then she couldn't be saved , aur inke( rey ke)pyaar ne inhe nayi zindagi de hai ,
(doc 2 taani)
be intehaan pyaar karne wala aashiq ( rey ) aur apni jaan se bhi zyada care aur pyaar karne wala bhai (swayam ) bahut kam lagon ko milte hain , u r very lucky
( taani nods smilingly through her tears )

swayam - doctor hum taani ko kab ghar le jaa sakte hain ?????
doc - u can take her home in some days , she is alright but still we have 2 keep her in observation as it was d head injury , but we r shifting her in ward today
swayam - okk doc , thank u

and doc goes from there leaving taareyam in icu while
both boys and girls reach d hospital ( sharon is ok now , her asthma is stable by now after taking medicines and rest so she also go there with them ) with some gifts and food . and come 2 d icu but were very confused whether 2 go inside or not , because of swayam's and rey's anger
vicky - girls tum jao pehle andar
neha - why babu go u inside .
nil - aaree taani girl hai aur tum sab girls ko pehle andar jana chahiye
simmi -no u go first -----
while they were arguing sharon gets really very irritated
sharon ( a bit loud ) - GUYYSS , ye hospital hai , and tum yahan taani se milne aaye ho ya ladai karne .. chalo sab saath main chalte hain andar varna tum log phir argue karne lag jaoge ...
and she opens d door very quitely but no one goes inside , stands there and listens them

swayam goes 2 taani and sit beside her , ( taani was sitting , holding rey's hand , and swayam was sitting on d other side )
swayam - kaise hai ab meri pyaari si behna hmm ??????
taani (smiling a little while eyes still filled with tears ) - main thik hun bhai don't worry ,
swayam ( while tears were flowing down his cheeks ) - what worry jaan nikal ke rakhde tune meri taani , mann to kar raha hai , ki tujhe khoob daantun ( scold karun ) , bas teri condition dekhkar chup hun main ,
aise koi karta hai kya hmmm ????? , kya soch ke tu unn kidnappers ke paas gayi hunnhh , tujhe kisne right diya meri choti si pyaari si behana ki sabse precious life danger main daalne ka hmmm ????? pagli kahin kiii , ek baar bhi tujhe apne bhai ki yaad nahi aayi , ek baar bhi tune ye nahi socha , ki tere bina , tera bhai kaise jeeyega , aur kaun rakhega uska khayal hmmm ???? i know mujhse mistake hui main beech main bahut rude behave karna laga , but iska matlab ye to nahi na , ki tu apne bhai , ko aise akela chodd ke chali jaayegi bina kuch bole aur bina kuch bataye hmmm ???? mujhe tera to pata nahi par main meri behan se bahut pyaar karta hun , bahut zyada , and dil se sorry taani i know maine tujhe bahut hurt kiya na , i m sorry , pleaseee ho sake to mujhe maaf kar diyo , par plzz apne bhai ko kabhi akela chodd ke mat jayiyo pleasee taani
taani ( while crying and nodding her head in denial ) - nahi bhai aisa nahi hai , apki ye choti se behan bhi aapse bahut pyaar karti hai , bahut zyada , and i m sorry bhai i know maine bhi bahut wrong , rude behave kiya hai aapke saath , m sorry and sach mano bhai , pehle maine bhi socha ki main vahan se bhaag jaun par jab uss chote se cute bache ko dekha to kadam vapis nahi mud paaye aur majboor hokar mujhe vahan jaana he pada , varna vo uss little kid ko apne saath le jaate aur naajane uske saath kya karte aur yakin mano bhai uss waqt jab uss kidnapper ne vo gun mere saamne rakhi na , to sabse pehle mujhe aapki aur rey ki he yaad aayi bhai ,yahi chaha ki bas aap dono ke embrace main jaa ke chup jaun , iss cruel duniya se bahut duur , par ... ( while sobbing ) in no time he shot me , and all our sweet and sour memories was just flashing in front of me , mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata tha ki main aage kabhi aap dono ko dekh bhi paungi yaa nahi , uss waqt sirf yahi wish kar rahi thi ki kaash , meri aakhiri saans uske paas le pati jinse main is duniya main sabse zyada pyar karti hun , apne nazaron se ek baar unhe dekh paati
( tareyam's eyes were filled with tears reflecting and feeling taani's pain ,taani's grip on rey's hand became tighter ... and outside d icu d gang was also crying listening all these , and seeing and feeling d innocence , purity , love of their cute sweet friend . deep inside d respect 4 taani has also increased in their hearts , boys eyes were filled with tears while tears were constantly flowing from girls eyes ... they were standing still at their positions and continued seeing and listening them )

in no time seeing taani crying badly swayam hugged her while caressing his baby sis )
taani felt so safe and protective in his dear brother's arms and being in protection of rey's love as well
while taani was hugging swayam and looking at her love through her tears , rey gently kiss her palm while crying
after sometime swayam broke d hug and cups his baby sister's face
taani( tears were still falling from her swollen yet pretty eyes ) - bhai aapne mujhe apna blood diya
swayam - main meri behan ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun , apni jaan bhi de sakta hun to phir ye blood kya cheez hai ,
taani - love u sooo much my world's best sweetest bhai , but aapko pata hai , ki pehle hum cousins the par ab hum cousins nahi hai
( swayam raised his eyes as he was shocked that she still didn't forgive him )
taani ( while smiling a little cutely said ) - arree bhai ab to hum real brother sister ban gaye hain , ab to humara khoon kaa rishta ho gaya hai ( blood relation ) , as meri body main bhi mera pyaare bhai ka pure blood jo flow kar raha hai ,
( reyam smiles seeing taani's cuteness but deep inside both were thanking god 4 saving taani)
swayam - real brother sister forever and ever ,( smiling through his tears )
taani -- reyy , bhaii bass karo na bahut ho gaya ye rona dhona , plzz chill dekho ab to main thik hun naa and vaise bhi aap dono ke hote hue mujhe ho bhi kya sakta haii ???
swayam - vo to hai , mere hote ho meri pyaari si baby sis ko kuch nahi ho sakta , main kuch hone he nahi dunga ,
rey ( smilingly and dreamingly ) - oyeee what MERI ,taani meri hai okk vo mera sacha pyaar , mere dil ki dadhkan , meri sanse , sab kuch hai okk , and main bhi meri jaan , meri life , meri zindagi , meri khushi ,mere pyaar ko kuch nahi hone dunga , kabhi bhi nahi ,i promise sweet heart ,
swayam ( with fake angry expressions ) - reyyy tumhare pyaar hone se pehle taani meri choti si pyaari behan hai okk , so mera uspe tujhse zyada right hai okk , ek to taani ka pyaar share karne de raha hun par ye janaab to meri puri behan ko he mujhse cheen ne pe laga hua hai , hadd hai yaar
( taani was smiling seeing his cute brother and her love rey fighting 4 her and her love )
rey - to kya huaa , taani mujhe tujhse zyada pyaar karti hai ok , plzz taani samjha do apne bhai ko ki tum mujhe usse zyada pyaar karti ho ,
swayam - haan taani bol do isko ki tum mujhe apne bhai ko isse zyada pyaar karti ho
( when they both look at her 4 her answer , they saw ,her laughing , and automatically a cute smile formed on their(reyam's ) faces as well seeing d cute angelic smile and laughter of taani after such a long time )
taani ( still smiling ) - my sweetest cutest bhai , and my shining twinkling love , stopp fighting plzz , as i heartily love u both so so so much EQUALLY okk ,
( again starts laughing )

but suddenly taani's eyes caught something , yaa she sees d gang standing and smiling at d door ..
her smile vanished , and she was constantly looking at them . reyam also look at d direction where taani was looking but reyam were quite angry seeing them
seeing d angry glares of reyam ,
nil - vicky tu andar jaa ,
vicky - main kyun , amar tu jaa ( and push him inside )
amar ( who came in a little as vicky pushed him ) - says hesitatingly while waving his hand -- helloo taani kaise ho tum , thik honaa , nahi to please jaldi se theek ho jaao .
taani - hi amar main thik hun
amar - ok main jata hun
( and turns 2 go back )
taani - ruko amar , mujhe aap sabse kuch kehna hai
guyss plzz andar to aao , mujhe aap sabse kuch baat karni hai ...
and all comes in , but taani gets surprised 2 see a lots of gifts ,
~~~~ end of this update ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
scroll down 2 next post 2 know a little of d upcoming twists 😉😉😉

its already very long so can't include more in this update so 2 know more u have 2 read d next update , but i will update ONLY AFTER READING YOUR HEARTY COMMENTS but friends plzz keep supporting me , don't disappoint me , i know many of u r not commenting and not even liking my update , and it really hurts, as it really took a lot of my precious time 2 give u a single update , and hard work .so plz friends DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART
lots of love ... moni
take care and keep smiling buddies 😊😊😊
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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jhalak aane wale twists ki ...😉😉

~ A LEAP !!!!!
~~~😲KRIYAANSH'S ENGAGEMENT ------
( and a lot more shocks and twists 😉😉)
I KNOW U A NO OF QUESTIONS R COMING IN YOUR MINDS . AND U ALL MUST BE THINKING KI ITNA PYAAR KARNE WALE TAAREY KA KYA HUA , AUR TAANI KAHAN HAI , KAISI HAI .. KRIA KAISE AAYI , AUR WHY IS REY BEING ENGAGED WITH KRIA , ... ETC ETC ETC RIGHT BUT 2 KNOW MORE U HAVE 2 WAIT TILL 3 CHAPTERS , AS AFTER 3 CHAPTERS D TWISTS AND SHOCKS WILL BE STARTED BUT TRUST ME FRIENDS , U ALL WILL LOVE IT , AS I LOVE WRITING THIS , ITS SO INTERESTING ... AND AFTER THAT D ACTUAL STORY OF TUJHE BHULA DIYA WILL START 😉😉


vo pyaar he kya jisme dard na ho ,
vo ishq he kya jismein junoon na ho ,
vo mohabbat he kya jisme deewangi na ho ,
just wait and watch my dear buddies aage hota hai kya , there will be a flow of each and every emotions , i know u don;t want more sadness , and pain but u see d story line is itself so emotional , so can't help it , but i m sure , some good things will be followed by these bad things , happiness will have 2 come after all these sadness and love will definitely win over this long hurting pain , it will add more beauty , strength , love , desires ... 2 their true love , so just wait my dear

AND PLZ DON'T GUESS AS D UPCOMING TWISTS R TOTALLY TOTALLY SHOCKING AND UNEXPECTED 😲
( so jaldi jaldi se comment karo so that main jaldi jal;di se update karun 😉😆😆)

AREEE ABHI AANE WALA CHAPTER KE LIYE TO PRECAP LETE JAO
POLICE COME ----(BUT WITH A WARNING )
GANG TRYING 2 CHEER UP TAANI
( A DANCE SEQUENCE ON CHAK DHOOM DHOOM FROM DIL TO PAGAL HAI )
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SOME GOONS 😲😲😲
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( very important 4 this story)
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional update...
bt yet so cute...
the way she explaine wt she felt when the goons shot her ws awesome...
bt wt the hell twist s ths...
i cant stand ths twist at al...
i cant imagine rey wt sm one else...
so u betr dnt drag it too much othrwse it wl surely make me upset...
tujhe pata haina main kitni emotionally attached hoon iss story se...
so plz mujhe shock mat dena...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya meri first place le li😭😭
ab unres toh kr😆😆
my place
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab ye wali place bhi koi le na le😭
so...
res😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice prt
Kkk twist
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally tu aagyi pareshan kerne :P
yeah it is very khoobsurat emotional story

I feel every emotions when i read story
it was very emotional but sath sath very cute part
awww rey hold taani's hand in whole update
really taani is too lucky she had swayam and rey.
taayam convo treat to read .
gang part I still angry on them ( because real d3 [(] ) .
precap too much interesting and leap kriyaansh engagement [(]
what happen between my taarey that rey engaged with kriya 😭
hope you don't drag kriyaansh part too much 😊


and yeah bhot jada khoobsurat update tha 😊
and now waiting for next part

Edited by Avc380 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update .. 👏

taareyam wer really vry cute ..😳
dez guyz .. luv ech odr alot .. ❤️

i hope dat gang taani ko mana le .. 😃

precap iz intrestng .. 👍🏼

n dat leap .. y kriyaansh yr .. 😡

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

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