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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sana_malik

i am really waiting as to when Khushi will find out that arnav had lied to her about his identity.

Khushi won't find that at all! It will be explained in chapter 53!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

okay shall read in few mins time
welcome back again
hope much better though still bed ridden i see

Yup! Still bed ridden! But getting better day by day!

sorry it took longer that one had hoped
but then had to make sure dealt with this in the end
awww poor maan right when he realises its a dream then will be so sad naa
but it will be a relaity soon enough well by the end anyway right

You are so going to hate me by the end of chapter 55!

oh maan already dreaming of her being your wife
but then can we blame the man no naa
haila yeh toh bahut hi dangerous harkatein karr rahein hain

Yes! Maan is getting bindaas!

awww she found him funny didnt she
hey anyone would do naa with him smiling like that
dude what are ya doing get up man
naaa dont give us a chance for some romance between the two of you even in sleepy state
this type of romance aint seen much naa so lets enjoy it while we can

I am so happy that you were enjoying it!😉

man so she knows he is dreaming about their wedding haven taken place which is why he is holding her so tight
man this is so funny seriously
wonder what she can do to get out of his arms though i dont know why she would wanna do that
yup pahad jaise toh hain aap ke saiyyan
ab dole shole hone ka kuch toh faiyda hona chahiye naa

So true!

and this is gonna be there future when they are married finally naa
wow now thats some coincidence i tell ya the song being so apt right
well at least she is out of his arms
nahinnn why is she out man sheee yaar no fair
man that was so worth the morning romance
shame it had to end like that though
and yes family can be the worst enemy of romance for both the couples i tell ya

I so enjoyed reading your reactions to Maaneet Romance!

tabhi toh arnie aint telling his family about his afreen
ab aapki aisi kismat kahan maan babu
dont feel too guilty about this dear
as khushi said all of you are okay so no point scaring your families more though if it happens again and then you tell them of this one then bhagwan bachaye aap ko

So true! If Anjali told the incident to the family, Arnav will install 10 bodyguards around her! And he will be leading them!😉

but then arnie hidng something from you too and its bigger than this
though what can the por boy do but to hide what he is hiding
what call she on about our anj
hmm guess we shall know soon enough

The details of the call will be out soon!

oyye teri really he did that
climbing through her window like that in broad daylight
pagla gaye hain babua sach mein pyaar mein

Yes! Pyaar mein Arnav babua paagal hoi gava hai!😉

arrey mere bhai aisi bhi kya zaroorat thi inse milne ki arnie
but now that he is here some arhi romance too
thats creepy mate i know she is your soumate but still seems creepy seeing her like this

I felt it was romantic!

oyye hello how was she to know that you the great ASR would come to meet her like this
batate toh yeh aap ke liye jag bhi jaati bachu

You are so hilarious! I am laughing as I read and reply your review!

wonder what she mumbling about arnie there it must be him only
i know right inka IQ gaya tel lene it seems koi nahin sab ke saath hota hai
so she confessed in her sleepy state
hain maan toh sirf patni samjh karr romance karr rahe the inhone ne toh ILU bhi karr daala

Your reactions to each scene is making me laugh non stop.😆

that is evil of him what he said to her about her precious jalebis though effective way of rousing her right
hawww yeh toh hass rahe hain inn parr and then she does the same too when she finds out he got in like that
gosh this romance is so cute man

Happy that you liked it!

ufff khushi puttar chillax if he can come he can go away too
waise that was worth him coming werent it even if it was for a little while
arrey waah yeh gaane maan aur arnie pe kitna jachtein hain ji#
haiyye aiya mausam pyaar ka haiyye
wow that ws perfect and fantastic i tell ya dear
well how can it not be with you there
man she is crazy aint she this khushi
aww she wants three different wedding to attend one of them being her own
arrey waah cant wait for la to get her other half man

I am pairing her with NK! Hope you like that combo!

please tell me it aint from the same house rishta for la man
arrey la chill yaar jo hona hai woh ho ke rahega
maybe this guy is your true love and not that BF of yours
so let destiny take its course dear
so romance for both the main couples and more of that romance in the rain haiyye main marr jawan
girl you will kill us with their romance
okay i exaggerate there but you know what i mean hope you do
ahhh cant wait for the rain romance now
cheers for pm

Thanks for the review! And don't worry! I have an overdose of romance going on to compensate pain I will give you guys with the big twist!
Loved your review! And thanks once again for it!
Edited by Analeez11 - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 52. A RAINY MONDAY AND A SWEET TUESDAY!

Place - Outside Khurana Constructions

Arnav sighed as he glanced at his watch. Where are you, Afreen? I am waiting for you. His Afreen was still in the office where Arnav, as usual, had come to pick her up. Soon, Khushi came out of the office and waved at him. He waved back and opened the car door and sat in. Khushi also came over and sat beside him and they drove away. Khushi remained quiet as her yesterday's dream was still haunting her mind and staining her cheek with blush. Arnav remained quiet as he tended to be when he was driving. After a while, rain started pouring in. Khushi put her hand out of the window and felt the raindrops on her fingers. Arnav looked at her and smiled. "Pichli baarish yaad hai?", Arnav asked. Khushi turned to look at him and nodded. How could she forget it? She had danced in the rain as the radio played Rabba Mein Toh Mar Gaya. "Bin mausam barsaat thi woh!", mumbled Khushi and Arnav nodded. "Par is baar baarish bin mausam nahi hai. The rainy season is starting!", Arnav said and Khushi nodded. Soon the drizzle turned into downpour and Arnav stopped the car. Khushi looked at him mischievously and he raised an eyebrow, both remembering the last time. She mock pouted and mumbled, "Gaadi kyon ruka di?" Arnav burst out laughing as she repeated the same words she had spoken when it rained last time. Soon, Khushi's laughter mingled with Arnav. As their laughter stopped, Arnav spoke, "Kya baat hai Khushi, you don't want to dance in this rain?" Khushi replied, "Pehli baat hum Khushi nahi Afreen hai!" Arnav smiled; those were the same words she had said last time. "Aur doosri baat, haan! Humein baarish mein naachna hai!" The moment she stopped speaking, she opened the car door and jumped out. "Arre Khush…Afreen! Suno toh!", Arnav hollered after her but Khushi was in her element. She stood in front of the car enjoying the rain. He remembered her request of putting the radio last time. He smirked and put on the radio. Soon music wafted into the air and Khushi turned to look at him in surprise.

Thode…..

Bheege Bheege Se….

Thode Nam Hai Hum

Khushi smiled at him.


Kal Se…

Soye Voye Bhi Toh…..

Kam Hai Hum

She spread her arms side ways.

Thode

Bheege Bheege Se

Thode Nam Hai Hum

She twirled around.


Kal Se

Soye Voye Bhi Toh

Kam Hai Hum

Arnav was mesmerized as he stared at her.

Dil Ne Kaisi Harkat Ki Hai

Arnav leaned forward and folded his arms over the steering wheel.


Pehli Baar…..

Mohabbat Ki Hai

He imagined lifting Khushi in the air.


Aakhiri Baar

Mohabbat Ki Hai

He imagined spinning her around.


Pehli Baar

Mohabbat Ki Hai
Aakhiri Baar

Mohabbat Ki Hai

He smiled at his daydream and looked at Khushi again.


Aankhein

Doobi Doobi Si Surmayee Madham

Khushi glanced at him, her eyes ensnaring him.


Jheelein

Paani Paani Hai Bas Tum Aur Hum

The rain water flowed on her face, trapping him in his place.


Baat Badi Hairat Ki Hai

Khushi walked towards him and opened his door.


Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai
Aakhiri Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai

She caught his hand and dragged him out in the rain.

Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai
Aakhiri Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai

He smiled at her as she danced around. As the music flowed, his eyes took in her each movement.

Khawab Ke Bhoj Se,

He came close to her.

Kapkapati Hui

He caught her in his arms.


Halki Palkein Teri

He dipped her back.

Yaad Aata Hai Sab

He pulled her up. He held her hand and whirled her around again and again.


Tujhe Gudgudaana…

Sataana

Yuhi Sote Hue
Gaal Pe Teepna…

Meechna

Bewajah Besabab

She stopped spinning.

Yaad Hai

Peepal Ke Jiske Ghane Saaye The

She came close to him and he smiled for her.


Humne

Gilehri Ki Jhoothe Mattar Khaaye The

She shied and turned away.


Yeh Barqat Unn Hazrat Ki Hai

He caught her hand and jerked her back.

Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai

He lifted her in his arms in bridal style.

Aakhiri Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai

He spun around holding her tight enjoying the rain.

Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai
Aakhiri Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai

Place - Khurana Mansion

"Yeh baarish ko bhi aaj hi aana! Site pe urgently jaana tha aur ab yeh baarish ke wajah se that's not possible!", Maan growled as he drove into the mansion. As he drove, he noticed a white figure near the outhouse. As the figure was near the outhouse, the person was not visible from the main house but anyone in the driveway could see that person. Maan narrowed his eyes, "Is waqt baarish mein kaun bheeg raha hai?" Maan stopped the car and got out. He walked towards the person slowly. As he neared the figure, he realized that it was none other than his Geet. Maan shook his head. Is ghar mein aur kaun hai jo baarish mein bheegega? Meri Soni ke siva! As he neared her, he saw that she had taken a radio from the house, covered it in a raincoat and placed it in the nearby chair. As it played the songs, she danced and pranced around. Maan leaned on the light pole nearby; Maan Beta, Time to enjoy your personal entertainment system named Geet.

Main Vaari Jaawaa

Main Vaari Jaawaa

Geet twirled around.


Saathon Ki Ho Ya Ae Kasoor Re

She hugged herself tightly.


Main Vaari Jaawaa

Main Vaari Jaawaa

She sat on the floor.

Dil Toh Hoya Majboor

She lied down and smiled.


Main Vaari Jaawaa

Main Vaari Jaawaa


Choo Liya Tune

Labh Se Aankhon Ko

Maan raised a hand as if to call her.


Mannatein Poori Tumse Hi

Main Vaari Jaawaa

He pulled back his hand.


Tu Mile Jahaan

Mera Jahaan Hai Wahaan

He smiled tenderly at his Soni.


Raunake Saari Tumse Hi

Choo Liya Tune

Labh Se Aankhon Ko

Geet stood up and pulled her duppatta off.

Mannatein Poori Tumse Hi

She threw it away and it fell on Maan.

Tu Mile Jahaan

Mera Jahaan Hai Wahaan

She turned around and noticed Maan.


Raunake Saari Tumse Hi

She blushed as she noticed him.

Piya

O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

He walked towards her and stood in front of her.


Piya

O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

He placed the duppatta on her head and she hugged him. As the flute played from the radio, they swayed slowly.

Inn Dooriyon Ne

Nazdeekiyon Se

Sauda Koi Kar Liya

Geet looked at Maan and shyly turned around.


Ho…

Jhuk Ke Nighaahon Ne

Dil Se Ishq Ka

Vaada Koi Kar Liya

Maan hugged her from behind and kissed her cheek sweetly.

Main Vaari Jaawaa

Geet smiled at him.

Main Vaari Jaawaa

Geet turned around and looked at Maan with love in her eyes.


Saathon Ki Ho Ya Ae Kasoor Re

She stood on her tiptoes.


Sau Sau Taaron Se Bhar Ke Yeh Daaman

She placed a kiss on his forehead.


Le Chal Mujhe Kahin Door

Maan kissed her on the cheek again.

Piya

O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

Geet pulled away and spun around happily as Maan folded his arms and stared at her smiling.


Piya Re

Re Piya

Maan tugged at her duppatta.


Koi Kami Si

Thi Jeene Mein

Jaana Yeh Humne Kahaan

She looked at him, caught his hand and pulled him with her.


Aise Mile Ho

Jaise Humpe

Ho Meherbaan Yeh Khuda

They sat on the swing nearby.

Main Vaari Jaawaa

Main Vaari Jaawaa

She placed her head on his shoulder.


Saathon Ki Ho Ya Ae Kasoor Re

Maan nudged her away and placed his head on her lap as he lied down.


Rab Di Marzi Hai

Apna Yeh Milna

She carded her fingers through his hair.


Barsa Hai Hum Pe Uska Noor

He placed his hand behind her neck.


Piya

O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

He pulled her face close to his. Geet closed her eyes.

Piya

O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

His lips were about to touch hers when…

"Hem hem!", Geet and Maan heard someone clear their throat. Geet looked up and her eyes widened. She pushed Maan's head and he looked around. As soon as he saw someone standing in front of him, he stood up. Geet stood up beside him turning red. "Agar aap dono ko romance karna hi hai toh andar kisi kamre mein jaayiye, baahar baarish mein apni tabiyat kyun kharaab kar rahe hai.", spoke Dadima as NT stood behind her holding the umbrella above them. Geet eeped and slapped both her hands on her mouth. Maan fumbled, "A….woh….Dadima …..woh…..hum….woh". NT spoke up, "Haan! Haan! Hum samajhte hain Veerji! Aapke aankh mein kuch gaya hoga aur Geet aapki aankhon mein phoonk maar rahi thi. Haina Geet?" NT looked at Geet and Geet ran away into the house without looking up. Maan was about to stop her but noticing the audience kept quiet. "Haan Maan Bete! Toh aap yahaan kya kar rahe the?", Dadima raised an eyebrow and looked at Maan. "Dadima main abhi aata hoon. Ek important phone call hai!", Maan mumbled and walked away. The moment Maan was out of sight, NT and Dadima broke into giggles. "Lagta hai Dadima time aagaya hai sab kuch Official karne ka!", NT said and Dadima nodded and they walked off to the house.

Place - Outside Khurana Constructions

Khushi eagerly jumped into Arnav's car and he started driving. It was Tuesday and Arnav was there to pick her up. Arnav glanced at her; she seems to be smiling excitedly today. "Kya baat hai? Badi khush nazar aa rahi ho." Khushi looked at him eagerly. "Humaari khushi ki do wajah hai! Ek wajah yeh hai ki aapko yaad hai kuch din pehle aap ek attack hua tha aap pe? Ek college mein?" Arnav rolled his eyes, "Woh attack mujh par nahi tha. Woh Maan ki Soni par tha." "Bhabhi par tha par aap ki bhi toh jaan jaa sakti thi na?", Khushi replied. Arnav looked at her with a raised eyebrow, "Bhabhi?", he exclaimed with a teasing tone. Khushi narrowed her eyes, "Topic ko mat change kijiye. Yeh mat bhooliye ki aapko bhi chot lag sakti thi us din!" Arnav rolled his eyes, "Toh? Why are you talking about that day today?" Khushi huffed, "Hum us din itne dar gaye the ki humein toh kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha. Phir humein ek idea aaya. Aur humne yeh aapke liye khaas Lucknow se mangaaya hai.", she pointed a finger at a gift on the dashboard. What the? Arnav stopped the car sideways and picked up the gift. As he unwrapped it, his surprise turned into shock. "Ek murti?", he mumbled. In his hand was Devi Maiyya's small idol. Arnav looked at Khushi in confusion. Khushi looked back eagerly. "Haan Arnavji! Devi Maiyya ki murti! Woh aapki raksha karengi! Jab tak yeh aapke paas hai tab tak humein aapki koi chinta nahi hogi. Humaara mann darna bandh toh nahi karega par thoda darr toh kam ho hi jaayega!" Arnav shook his head. "Khushi, you know I don't believe in God. How many times do I have to tell you that?" Khushi frowned and thought, Humein pata hai aapko Devi Maiyya pe yakeen hai. Bas aap unse naaraaz ho kyunki unhonein aapki amma ki jaan nahi bachaayi; but she did not tell that openly. "Arnavji par yeh toh bhagwaan hai, inhein manaa nahi karte." Arnav placed the idol in her lap and hissed, "This is ridiculous!" He looked away and Khushi sighed. Ab inhein Devi Maiyya ko lene ke liye manaayein kaise! Suddenly, an idea popped in her head. "Arnavji kya aapki life mein humaari koi value nahi hai?", her voice was very sweet and innocence filled. Arnav jerked towards her, "What the! How can you say that?", he hissed angrily. Khushi remained unfazed and continued in her sweet voice, "Toh agar hum aapki life mein important hain toh aapko humaara khayaal rakhna chaahiye na?" Arnav raised an eyebrow. Where was this conversation leading to? Khushi continued, "Toh agar humein tension hoga toh humaari tabiyat bhi kharaab ho sakti haina?" Arnav nodded cautiously. Khushi continued, "Toh aapko humein tension se door rakhna chaahiye na?" Arnav snapped at her, "Get to the point, Dammit!" Khushi turned towards the front and took a deep breath, "Agar yeh Maiyya aapke saath nahi hogi toh humein aapki bahut fikar hogi. Aur phir tension mein hum bimaar pad jaayenge! Toh agar aap chaahte hain ki hum sahi salaamat rahe toh yeh murti…." Arnav snarled, "Fine! Dammit! Fine! I will keep your Damn murti!" He grabbed the murti from her hand and placed it on the dashboard. Khushi grinned smugly. Arnav took one look at her smug face and mumbled, "Damn these woman and their emotional blackmail", and started the car.

Place - Khurana Mansion

Dadima looked at everybody sternly from her place on the bed. She had asked the whole family to assemble in her room immediately to talk about something important. Geet stood near Dadima, her cheeks tinged with red as she was still embarrassed due to yesterday's evening. She felt that Dadima had called her to scold her and Maan. NT stood by Geet anticipation running through her whole body. She knew that Dadima had spoken to family Pandit few hours ago and she was eager to hear Dadima's announcement. Maan stood by the foot of the bed, his arms folded, his face stern as if he was ready to defend himself if Dadina said even a word about yesterdy's events. Dev stood by his Bro with a clueless expression. He was the only one who was neither excited nor scared and also the only one thinking about Parathas which, NT told him, had been prepared for the night's dinner. Dadima looked at each one of them and took a deep breath. "Kal jo hua uske baad hum poori raat soch mein doobe the…" Dev cut her off with, "Kal kya hua tha Daadima?" Maan glared at Dev, Geet squeezed her eyes shut and NT giggled. Maan turned back at Dadima and mumbled, "Par Daadima…" Daadima raised her hand and Maan stopped speaking. Dadima looked at him, "Kal jo humne dekha use madde nazar rakhte hue humne yeh faisla liya hai ki…." Geet looked at Daadima with a scared face; scared that Dadima will throw her out of the house. NT was almost shaking with anticipation while Dev looked confused. Maan looked angry, ready to revolt against any of Dadima's decision. Dadima continued, "ki ek mahine mein Geet aur Maan ki sagaai aur do mahine mein shaadi hogi!" Maan reacted in a second, "YEH NAHI HO SAK….Kya?", Dadima's words penetrated into his skull. Dadima smiled at him, "Humne Panditji se baat karli hai. Unhonein sagaai aur shaadi ki mahurat nikaal liya hai!" Maan looked at her in wonder while Geet smiled softly. NT and Dev congratulated them. Dadima looked at NT, "NT beta! Kal ki sagaai ke baad hum in dono ki sagaai ki planning shuru karenge!" "Ji Dadima!", NT said with excitement in her voice. Dadima looked at Maan and Geet sternly, "Ab saari romance bachaake rakho. Shaadi ke baad apne kamre mein jitna Romance karna hai karlena!" Geet looked at Maan who winked at her and Geet blushed and looked away. The family turned to walk out of the room when Dev piped up, "Par koi mujhe yeh toh bataaye ki kal hua kya tha?" Geet blushed and ran off. Maan rolled his eyes and stalked away. NT slapped her forehead and pushed Dev out of the room. She was about to walk away when she noticed the sadness and worry on Dadima's face. She walked back to Dadima and sat beside her, "Dadima, kya hua? Aap itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi hai?" Dadima looked at her, "Panditji se jab baat hui toh unhonein ko kuch aisa bataaya ki humein bahut ghabraahat ho rahi hai!" NT gripped Dadima's hand, "Par unhonein aisa kya kahaa?" Dadima sighed, "Woh bole ki agle kuch din Maan ki zindagi ke liye bahut ahem hain. In dino mein jo hoga woh uski kismet ka faisla karega. Agar sab theek hua toh Maan zindagi mein kabhi dukh nahi aayega. Par.." NT looked at Dadima with apprehension, "Par?" Dadima looked down, "Par agar in dino mein kuch bhi mushkil aayi toh Maan ke naseeb mein ek saal ke liye sirf dard hoga. NT mere Maan ko kuch hoga toh nahi na?" NT was shocked by what she heard but put on a happy face for Dadima. "Kuch nahi hoga Dadima. Aur kuch hua tha hum sab hain Maan Veerji ke saath. Aur unhein sambhaalne ke liye Geet unke saath hi hogi. Aap fikar mat kijiye. Sab theek hojaayega." As NT assured Dadima, in her heart she prayed to Babaji that everything will go well for her Veerji. After the difficulties Maan had faced in his life, she wished he would never have sadness touch him.

Later, when NT had gone out of the room, Dadima stood by the window. Sab kuch theek hojaayega agar Geet Maan ko sambhaalne ki liye ho toh. Lekin jis mushkil ki baat Panditji kar rahe us mushkil ne Geet aur Maan ko alag kiya toh Maan ka kya hoga? Dadima had no answers.

Place - Near LaxmiNagar

Khushi was about to get down as the car had reached their regular dropping point when Arnav spoke, "Khushi! Earlier you were saying that you had two reasons to be happy! Ek toh thi yeh murti aur doosra reason kya hai?" Khushi sat back in the car, "Arre Woh kal humaari Jiji ki sagaai hai! Infact, hum toh kal Office bhi nahi aa rahe hain." Arnav remembered his plan, "Kal? It's tomorrow?" He put on a worried face. "Haan! Aapne padha nahi, invitation mein saaf saaf likha tha!" Arnav put on a confused face, "Shaayad…Pata nahi…Oh! Now I remember! Maine use padha hi nahi! I just kept in on my home desk and forgot about it. I thought you would inform me when the day is near!" Khushi frowned, "Achcha! Theek hai! Toh hum ab bata rahe hain. Jiji ki sagaai kal hai! Aayiyega haan!" Arnav put on the most regretful face, "I am sorry, Afreen! I can't come. You see ….. my cousin's getting engaged tomorrow too. I am sorry!" Khushi was upset. She bit her lower lip worriedly but soon her face lit up as an idea entered her head, "Aap baad mein kuch pal ke liye aa sakte haina! Aapke yahaan sagaai hone ke baad aayiyega aur humaare gharwaalon se milke jaayiyega!". She smiled at him sweetly and he felt a pang of guilt for lying to her so blatantly. Arnav bas ek aur din jhoot bol le! Kal sab kuch theek ho jaayega! Arnav convinced himself. "Sorry, Khushi! Mere gharwaale mujhe ek minute bhi nahi chodenge. I can't vanish like that! Sorry Afreen!" Khushi looked totally upset, "Ek taraf Maan Veerji nahi aa rahe aur ek taraf aap. Ab hum kya karein?" She pouted but soon brightened up, "Dekhna Arnavji! Jiji ki shaadi ka card na hum chaar mahine pehle chapwaayenge! Taaki aap aur Maan Veerji ko na aane ka koi bahaana na mile!" She huffed and got out. Arnav smiled softly. Agar mere plan ke hisaab se sab chala toh kuch mahino baad tum humaari shaadi ka card baatogi!" He smirked and drove away.

Place - Living room of Khurana Mansion

"DADIMAAA!", A loud scream filled the room as Anvesha Arjun Rathod alias Annie entered the house running excitedly followed by her husband Arjun, who was carrying all the luggage and swaying hither and thither trying to make sure he did not fall down. Annie ran right towards her Daadi who had got up from their seat and they hugged each other. Maan and Dev helped relieve Arjun of his luggage and all three were caught up in a group hug. NT was the next to get a hug from Annie while Geet stood by her side happy to see the whole family smiling. She could sense that Annie was life of this family and hoped Annie approved of her. Soon, Annie left NT and came over to her while Arjun took Dadi's ashirwaad and hugged his little sister. "Toh aap hain Geet, jinhonien Maan Bro ka dil cheena hai!", Annie spoke as she put her hand on her hip and looked at Geet from toe to face. Geet gulped and looked down while her hand fiddled with her Duppatta. Maan came behind Annie and hugged her. He placed his chin on her shoulder and mumbled, "Toh bataao Annie! Kaise lagi meri pasand?" "Bro pasand toh bahut khoobsurat hai! Par yeh itni chui-mui si aur aap itne garam mizaaz! Nibha paayegi yeh aapke saath?", Annie asked and Maan straightened. "Please Annie iske shakal pe mat jaao! Bahut khatarnaak cheez hai yeh!" Geet's jaw dropped and her eyes popped open. "Haa! Kya kahaa aapne? Phirse kahiye! Phirse kahiye toh!", Geet angrily looked at him and Maan laughed. "Dekha! Yeh dikhne mein chui-mui hai par muh khole toh sherni jaisi dahaadti hai!" Geet huffed and looked away as the family laughed. "Par mujhe Annie ki Bhabhi pasand hai!", Arjun piped up. "Kabse Bro humpe dhos jamaate hain. Chalo koi toh aaya unpe dhos jamaane waala!", he spoke and the family laughed. And this way Geet met the final piece of the family called Khuranas!

SONG DETAILS

The first song is from the movie "Kaminey" (Year 2009) picturised on Priyanka Chopra and Shahid Kapoor sung by Mohit Chauhan.

The second song is from the movie "Tere Naal Love Ho Gaya" (Year 2012) picturised on Genelia D'souza and Ritesh Deshmukh sung by Shreya Ghoshal and Aatif Aslam.

AUTHOR NOTES

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PRECAP

The day of engagement has come!

There will be lot of fun and laughter along with good amount of teasing!

Please come and watch….err….read!

Till next week

With lots of smiles

Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update
i like reading maanet part
tooo good
barish mein dance and NT na dadi ne pakad liya
its truely awsome negagement hone wali hai
bt something is dere
update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
how r u kalpana???

finally engagement ka din aa hi gaya..

ab kya bura hone wala hai maneet ki life?????

nice update.. i love that song piya re piya re piya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...


now what going to happen in there life???
please dont part them...bechara maan...seh nahi payega
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Posted: 12 years ago
M waiting for realities to unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay will read in few mins
hope all is well with ya
why am i gonna hate you by end of chapter 55
chalo koi nahin shall try not to hate you too much then
hmmm seems you willie out to shock us for sure
is it still hurting you or much better
lets see what you have got for us
lets get down to it then
arrey waah beta sudher gaye yeh toh
he actually asked her if she wants to dance in the rain
hmmm beta pyaar mein aap kya se kya ho gaye
though he still is that LG too right
well some things can never change for sure and would never want them to change
haiyee bina kuch bole hi inhone radio on karr diya
oh personal driver of afreen thoda toh sabr karna seekhiye
pyaar mein bahut papad belne padhte hain
and this is just the start my man
jab future mein shaadi hogi tab jaa karr hi the wait shall be over
if your family doesnt decide to be kaba mein haddi sorry hadda more like
sirf imagine hi kariye aap arnie at least maan does sometimes do what he wants to do
koi nahin his imagination will no longer be that one day and thats the day one is looking forward to
and who would have thought that the imagination would turn to reality so soon man
now thats what i am talking about arnie my man
uff what a silly thing to ask ever since geet urf soni made entry inot your house who else would be dancing in the rain
what do you personal entertainment
thoda aap bhi iss mein bhag lijiye ji
not every day you get the chance to romance with soni mate
and the romance is there
wow one thinks and you have already provided for the same
now thats something for sure cool naa how you anticipate what we want and give it to us brilliance that is
satyanash ho yaar inn mooaun ka yaar
why haddi bann rahi hai aap NT and dadi
but then inki toh sach mein kismat kharab hai yaar
why does it happen to them so much man
this close they were for the lip lock but should have know it wouldnt happen
chalo at least the are gonna help make it official for maneet
but like you said wont be happening so soon oh well guess that too we will see
wow solid chedha jaa raha tha maan ko
as it is one dont get such opportunities with maan so they shall take advantage of the fact naa
beta aap toh bach gaye iss baar but maybe not next time right
so what esle should she call geet arnie puttar or yeh bhi toh kissi ki bhabhi hongi jab aap dono ki shaddi hogi
wonder why she is so chirpy but good she is that naa
solid national blackmail she will do us all proud wont she
hey she might as well learn this as she shall need it like his di to make him do things naa
after all it aint easy getting him to do something naa
sorry its the story of all men in their life and you are one of them
well thye have to do it naa these women to get you to listen to them
haiyye i am really proud of khushi there when she said and did what she did
hey babaji whats dev fixation with parathas man
oyye munde kabhi toh ghar mein kya ho raha hai uss baare mein bhi socha kariye NT thaari toh kismat hi ajeeb hai aisa pati mila tujhe well too late now
wow so it seems that she wants them to be with each other officially then cool
hello how dare you refuse for your engagement with geet
poori baat toh sunna liya kijiye but nahin uff what to do with them
chalo at least he didnt complete his sentence in time warna toh yeh gaye hotte
so something bad will happen
dont tell me he will loose her for a year or so
hmmm well shall wait for this to happen too even if it will be something bad
dadi you better leave it to babaji now for future of maneet
abbb jo hona hai woh ho karr hi rahega naa
beta arnie toh woh ghadhi bhi aa gayi hai jab aao ki band bajegi
oh boy it seems that the twists are coming our couples way huh
well hope they are ready for all this storm into their lives cause it wont stop right
pssst khushi its the same sagaai as you will know for yourself soon enough
i doubt it that either maan or you arnie baby will get your respective girls that easily for sure
warna majaa nahin aayege naa
after all whats in a love story that has no twist and the lovers meet so easily
wow kitna samaan le karr ayi hain annie and poor jun man
oyye hoyye so true what you said there jun
but thats true not only for maan but arnie tooo
after all these girls may look innocent si darri hiu si but mess with them and trust me they wont spare you
awww am glad annie and jun liked geet for maan thats nice
wow that was romance packed and also forewarning of disasters to come
am glad i made you laugh with my last comment
hope this doesnt offend you though
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey it's a wonderful update. Chapter 51 (B)
I loved it how maan was dreaming about his wedding and geet dressed as a bride! It was funny how he was like once you tell your family about your love they never leave you alone! Which was true! Arnav bites was right maan beta! Ahah they were so close to kissing and dadi na had to call her! But no worries be happy. That's the motto for maan bitwa now! He'll get his time.
But an awesome scene between them and a lovely song.

Khushi and arnav. Wow just amazing. She was dreaming about him and actually said I love you to him in the dream! Hahah arnav singh raizada coming through the window. Hmm now that's the scene I would never forget. But damn I loved how he's like pyaar mein IQ mera zero ho Gaya hai ( something like that).
Nice way of waking her up! Jalabiyaan jal gayi! I was laughing so much at that scene. Even arnav bitwa did after a long time. Which is really good. Only khushi could bring that happiness to arnav! Hmm day dreamin arnav singh raizada! I really like the song never heard of it thought but by reading the lyrics I'm like damn I should listen to that song! But their imagination of eachother was just to cute. Khushi in car and arnav in her house. Really loved it.

Awee lavanya I feel a bit bad about it but khushi is right you have to move on and if you don't like the person just say no! She's an independant girl and she can do that. When babuji said about their proposal for khushi I was literally like NoOo hahaha! I'm like no one can have her except khushi. Damn it's getting closer an closer to PayAl engagement.

Thank you so much for the pm and I'll just finish readin the next part and reply again (:

And also I would for sure love to see Shyam and Anjali scene again as you mentioned you would. Yep geet and akash are the closer to eachother I feel like when they meet akash is going to be very protective over her! Awe I can't wait to see that if that happens. And finally thank god your okie. If I would've known before I would've messaged you and asked you about it but atleast now your recovered and please take care of yourself from now on. Love you
-RAMADAN MUBARAK (:
Edited by Zindagirocks_21 - 12 years ago

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