REVANGEFUL LOVE #4 UPDATED PT 36 pg 113 19/7/2013 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_21

Superb update. Par maan aur geet ke bich ye duriya kb km hongi.

have somne patience dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita

superb part dear, thanks for starting again
but what is this, why you want to leave the forum, see if everyone starts leaving then what about your fans dear, please do not like this

cant help it some one realy hurts me and i dont wanna create mess here
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg...agr teaser aisa h to update kya hoga...
agr aise teasing teaser doge to update k liye wait karna mushkil ho jaega...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg too dangerous.mera maan ko kya hua?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome going richa ...

loved all parts ...

Like tab didn't work for me many times as my net is slow

maan guilty ... and decided to shut him off

geet accussations did all that ...

geet wanna confess now but maan is nowhere near her

waitign for next

thnx for all pms sweets ...

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



PART - 34


SOMYA send them in their room and both followed her instructions. Geet wants to talk with him but found her helpless. She doesnt knew how she start talking with him and on the other hands Maan searching moments to escape from her sight as soon as possible. He quickly ran to their room and step inside the washroom. Geet trying harder but his avoidence push her down,so she too kept her silence. Maan quickly take and bath and get ready for his office. Without glancing at her for once,he escape from their room in full pace. All are sitting in a hall,waiting for their breakfast. Maan avoid talking with any of them too. He passed like a mad wind. Somya understood the matter and waiting for the right moment. As all leave for their respective works Somya grab Geet and dragged along her.


Geet glance in her eyes. She knew that what is running her mind,so before Somya asked and said anything to her,she herself started the talk.'bhabhi i know aap kya baat karna chahte ho.dont worry next time aisa nai hoga.',she assured her of Maan's behaviour.


'its just not for today sweety. Do dinn pehle Maan ne clint ko almosr deadly injured kia,then last night i notice him,he hurting himself and in mrng i found him sleeping on a couch in hall area. Geet whats wrong going between two of u? I mean kuchh dinn pehle tak to sab normal tha. Even Maan start smiling only because of you. Then what's happened wrong at sudden?',she enquired worridly.


Geet turn silent for a moment then muttred meakly,'bhabhi ab main apko kaise samjhau wo aise behave kyu karta hai.',little wetness occured at the corner of her eyes. She knew how much guilt he is going through which is come out in the form of rage and anger on others.


Somya stared her and held her softly.'Geet ek baat karni thi tumse. First of all i wanna apolozise from you.'her word shocked Geet.


'bhabhi ye aap kyu keh rai hai. I mean y u feel sorry for us. Isme apki kya galti hai?',she was compltely clueless.


'Geet i wana confess something.',her voice turn heavy and eyes filled with pain,and wetness at corners.'Geet mujhe pata tha that he raped you.',her one sentence shaken he completely. Geet stared her with agony.

'bhabhi aap sab janti thi firr bhi...',she doubted but Somya cuts her to complete herself.


'Geet humesha se nai. Mujhe ye baat tum dono ki first night ko pata chali. I was just passing off ur room and listen everything accidently. Pehle to mera maan hua ki abi jake sabko sab kuch bta du par fir socha ki tumne agr sab kuchh jaane k baad bhi is shadi k liye ha ki hai to kuch soch k ki hogi. Geet i realy wanna punish him but respecting ur decision i shut my mouth. But trust me sweety i'll always try to protect u. Maine humesha koshish ki k Maan tujhe hurt na kar paye.',her voice turn hoarse and eyes wet. She too feeling guilty at the moment.


Geet eyes too poured many fresh tear drops,but she wiped off of her. 'bhabhi pls dont feel guilty. Ayesha bhabhi ki tarah apne b mera humesha khyal rakha ai i know and i have no complaints against you.',she calmed her.


'Geet i always be with u sweety in your all decisions. Even if you want imprisionment for him too. Lekin sach kahu to jitna maine notice kiya hai tum dono ki ranjish to kam hone lagi thi firr ye sab kya ho raha hai?',Somya said strongly.


'bhabhi u are right. Now i have no harsh feelings for him. Or humare past me jo b galat hua uske liye hum dono jimmedar hai. Or jaha tak maaf karne ka swaal hai to maine Maan ko kab ka maaf kar chuki hu. Lekin kabi keh nai pai.',she open her heart finaly in front of her.


Somya cupped her chin and tilted up to glance in her eyes,'Geet sirf maaf kia hai ya kuch or bhi chal raha hai tere mann me?',she asked suspeciously.

Geet felt hesitation and lowered her long dark lashes,'bhabhi u r right. Now i love him too. Aadat bann chuka hai wo meri. Use na dekhu to bechaini hone lagti hai. Lekin pata nai kyu main ye sab use nai bta pati.',Somya suceede in opening her feelings.


'Geet kuch b krne se pehle only ans my 1 que. Geet u both r married now. To tum dono k rishte ki kuch or b needs hai,i hope u understand what i am talking about.',she stared her face to read it.'isliye bahut soch samjhkar jwab dena. R u ready for that. Because when he trying to come closer to u,r u mentally prepared that ur past sinful night will not come between both of you?',she trying to grope her heart and mind.


Geet thinks for a while and confessed.'ha bhabhi i am completelty ready for this. I have no doubts for our relationship's needs.',she admit confidently.


'then dont waste time Geet. Coz if u r waiting for him to came and proposed u first then its not possible in ur case. His guilt never allowed him to do so. U must initiate first tabi wo apni guilt se bahar aa payega or apni feelings except kar payega.',she commands strongly.
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PART - 35

GEET confessed nd Somya adivised her not 2 delay ny more now. Maan is daily burning in remorse flames which almost making him dead every day. So now it become very necessary 4 Geet to initiate 1st 4 sake of their unsaid love for each other.

'dont worry bhabhi main aj hi baat karungi usse',she assured her.

Somya smiles in tears nd first kissed on her forehead and then embraced her lovingly.'i wish sab jaldi theek ho jaye.'she stroke her hairs lovingly nd movd away from her room.


Whole day passed in wait 4 him. Geet strongly decided 2 tell him about hr feeling 4 him. She has been waited 4 him since morng to came back. Every single sec is seemed so long to her.she trying to calming herself. Her cold hands nd uneven breath not taking a pause.

In eveng Piyush and Samarth came back 2 KM on their regular time but not Maan.Geet felt shattred not seeing him.She even asked for him bt Piyush is very less aware of him. Geet turned gloomed nd sat quitly.


All changed nd came for dinner bt Maan is still not coming back. All started but not Geet. She felt disperced and not willing 2 eat anything.She excused all leave her side without touching her meal.


'ye ladka kbi nai sudhrega. Ab uski ewajhse Geet b bhuki baithi rahegi.'Samarth fumed furiously.

'ap pls gussa mat hoiye.Kahi kisi kaam se ruk gaya hoga.',Arpita trying to cover up him.


'agree.Par ek phone krne me b problem hai use.See kitna pareshan ho rai hai wo.',Samarth scold more.


Now Arpita dont have to say anything coz Samarth ws right. Even Somya is getting so tensed as Maan is not picking any1's call.


Geet trying harder to make contact wid hm but he is not answering. Every time his phone ans of switch off.She get tensed. Many bad thoughts start taking shape in her mind.Moreover last night incident throbbed her heart more. Her knees turn weak and she felt as she fall anytime. Her whole body turn numb and cold. Her sences froze badly,dont know what to do now.She called evry1,where there is chance of getting him but no1 is aware of his plan. Geet's breath chocked and she felt suffocated as some one strangling her neck. She cant even anle to breath properly.

Somya came to check her. She knows what situation she is going through. Thundring sound of rainy clouds threaten her terribly. Somya trying to strengthen her but no use. Till she saw him alright in front of her,no other thing make her calm.



Somya herself was about to cry but she controls. She leave the room and start roaming in hall area. She too call at several places and get negative responce. Geet sobbing badly.


At 11:45pm Maan arrived at home fully drenched. Somya take a relief breath seeing him alright. But she scolds him badly.'kaha tha ab tak? Do u have any idea how much tensed we r for u? Y u r not taking our calls? Kuch idea hai ki Geet ki kya halat ho rai hogi? Ja jake dekh zara usko.ro roke bura haal ho gaya hai uska.',she showered her all anger on him to whih less he reacts but when she told about Geet he came to his sences. He tilted his head back to stare upwrds,where Geet is standing. She too came out of her room hearing the Somaya's sound. Somya left and he moved upwards. Geet entred with him in their room. She quickly bring towel 2 dried his messy hairs. Maan stopped her.

'pls Geet stop it. Main to tumhari daya k b layak nai hu.',He said remorsefully and moved away from her. She follwed him and trn 2 her side to met his gaze. His agony is reflecting. Geet caress her palm softly on his stubbled cheek.

'Maan pls stop torturing urself not for u bt for my sake. Coz everytime u hurt urself u hurt me.',she said having tears in hr eyes. Maan glance her shockingly. He just cant believe what she confessed right now.'ha Maan i love you soo much and i know u too love me.',she added nd turnd him astonished.

'Geet kaise kar skti hu mujh jaise ghatia insan se pyar? Jisne tumhare sath tna bura kia.',he asked meakly.

'pls Maan dont only blame urself. Jo b hua usme hum 2jimmedar hai.Its me who provoked u',Geet admit her fault to.

'jo b ho.aisa keh dene se mera gunah kam nai ho jata.Geet main tumhari mafi k b layak nai hu. Aaj b maine socha ki main apni is life ka end kar du par firr socha nai ye meri saza nai hai. Roz tumhari nafrt ko sehna hi meri saza hai.',his voice is flat and eyes blank.

Geet cupped her face nd made him look in her eyes.'Maan look into my eyes.tume kahi b koi b shikayat ya nafrat dikh rai hai? Maan mere dil ne to tume usi din maaf kr dia jab mujhe ye pta chala tha ki tumne Ayesha bhabhi ki zindagi bchai thi.bas mujhe samjhne me der lagi.or Maan jaise repent tumne kia hai or koi nai krta. Maan cant we move on in our life forgetting all bad moments?'I love u nd wna spend my whole life wid u',she confessed and raised herslf to offr her lips 2hm. 1st he hesitate bt thn tuk her petal and kissed them softly
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The teaser made me all the more curious.

Pls jaldi update kardo.
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YOU UPDATED,YIPPPEEE!!!!!!! I Think I read the teaser a lil late.Koi ni,der aaye durust aaye.

Interesting part.With Maan trying to escape Geet,its gonna be difficult for them to decrease their differences.
So somya knew everything,and now she's trying her best help Maaneet.Now when even Geet has accepted her feelings , its Maan's turn.


"Thodha sa pyar hua hai, thodha hai baaki,hum toh dil de hi chuke,bas teri haan hai baaki..."
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago

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