TAAREY DARE OS- PI JAAUN!

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hey guys! here is your cutie with a dare os! i was dared by my bestie moon i.e chand(chand91). i hope moony tujhe ye accha lage n guys this song is awesome! maine ise kareeb 1000 times suna hoga ye os likhne se pehle! so here you go! but before that " Have you ever been in love? Horrible isn't it? It makes you so vulnerable. It opens your chest and it opens up your heart and it means that someone can get inside you and mess you up. " its my feelings.

TAAREY OS: PI JAAUN


"There were many ways of breaking a heart. Stories were full of hearts being broken by love, but what really breaks a heart is taking away its dream-whatever that dream might be."

And her dream was he! She went there for him! That one year was like just dedicated to him and what did he do with her? He just broke her heart into pieces! N not just that, he just walked over those pieces not caring about her! Why did this happen to her!

She was there just sitting on the ground feeling the moist grass! Pain was reflecting from her eyes! Two years have passed but her heart still feels the same for him! Yeah two years! In these two years many things changed but her love for him never changed n will never change! Now she is a successful singer! She has everything! Name, fame, money! But is she happy? No not at all! Yeah these things make a person happy but the most important thing she doesn't have! That is love!

"The flame of love is now just a cold loneliness" she said. She was sitting all alone in the evening with the sun going to set because tomorrow she has to leave for India to make an album. The name of that country reminds her of him! No, there is not a single word which doesn't remind her of him! Two years are long enough! Isn't it?

"They say that time heals all wounds but all it's done so far is give me more time to think about how much i miss you rey" she said thinking about him. The more she tried to forget him, the more she missed him. All their moments, happy and bad were again reflecting.

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Here in mumbai-

A boy was in his room sitting on his window base holding a frame close to his heart and was looking at the bright moon. There were dried tears on his cheeks. How much he would cry? Even his tears left him like she did! But what about his heart which is crying every second without her so silently that he himself can't hear it but yeah can feel the pain!

"Rey! Rey!" one voice comes. Oh yeah it's his best friend sharon.

"Ya sharon!" rey speaks hiding the sadness in his voice.

Sharon said looking at his condition "tum abhi tak taani ko yaad kar rahe ho! Why don't you forget her!"

Rey again looks at the moon n says "nahi sharon! Ask me how many times my heart has been broken and i will tell you to look in the sky and count the stars!

Sharon again said trying to bring back her best friend "rey bahar jaakar dekho! Poori duniya hai aur na jaane kitni ladkiyaan mil jaayegi tumhe!"

"Sharon sometimes, when one person is missing, the whole world seems depopulated!" he said still looking at the sky.

"Tum usko bhool jaao rey!" sharon said feeling the pain he got but the fact is no one can feel his pain.

"Love is the hardest drug to quit, but it is even harder when it is taken away sharon!" he said looking at taani's photo and caressing it with his hand.

"Tum kitne badal gaye ho uske jaane ke baad! Dekho apne aapko rey!" sharon said as it was hurting her to look her best friend in this condition.

"Some people come into our lives and leave footprints on our hearts and we are never ever the same sharon!" rey said remembering their moments.

"It's enough rey! I will make you settle down in your life!" sharon said

Rey looking at her angrily "don't you dare sharon! I never can love another as long as life may stand, no maid the wide world over shall hold this heart or hand!"

Sharon said "rey tum paagal ho gaye ho!"

"Haan taani ke liye n uske bina mai paagal ho gaya hoon!" Rey replied to her.

Sharon getting more irritated "rey stop being so philosophical!"

Rey looks at her "tum mere room me kis kaam se aayi ho?"

"Arey haan! Mai to batana hi bhool gayi! Kal humaare d3 group ke naye album me jo song hai na uski female singer aa rahi hai!" sharon said hoping that this would distract him from thinking about her.

Rey just spoke a word "good!"

Sharon gave information "haan london se aa rahi hai but indian hai!"

"Oh ok! Naam kya hai uska?" he had no interest but he felt an sudden urge to ask her name.

Sharon answered him "pata nahi! Maine aur itna nahi poocha!"

"Oh ok!" rey replied again seemed disinterested.

Sharon said trying to gain his attention "kya ok? Rey tum ye bhool rahe ho ki uss song ke male singer tum ho!"

Rey replied in confusion "haan to?"

Sharon saying like he has gone mad "rey you are not excited to meet the female singer jo ab se humaare har album song me hogi?"

"Mujhe koi fark nahi padta hai sharon n rahi baat excitement ki to taani ke bina mere life me koi excitement nahi hai!" Rey again said with an expressionless face.

Sharon said disappointed "ok! But kal tumhe use pick karne jaana hai sharp at 10 am! Maine suna hai use 'late comers' pasand nahi!"

Sharon turned and was about to go when rey spoke.

Rey smiles "taani ko bhi late comers pasand nahi!"

Sharon doesn't turn back but moves her head a little side n says "tumne bhi bohot der kardi thi rey! Usko sach tak nahi bata paaye aur wo chali gayi!"

Sharon went from his room leaving him alone to be engrossed in her memories. He didn't even know when sleep came to his eyes n he slept at the window.

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The bright morning brought him out of his sleep. He yawned and looked around to find himself sitting on the window panel. He tuned hid head to look at the clock n it showed 9 am. His eyes widened at that.

"Oh shit! Mujhe to 10 baje uss female singer ko pick karna hai airport se n according to Sharon use 'late comers' pasand nahi!" he said and hurriedly get ready.

He drove his car like a maniac but not for much time because Mumbai is Mumbai! But somehow he managed to reach at airport at 10.15 am. Now the biggest problem! How would he recognise her? He was looking here and there when he heard a voice.

"Koi aaya kyun nahi? Maine un logo se pehle hi kaha tha that I hate 'late comers'. Itne saalon me Mumbai zara bhi nahi badli! Pehle ki tarah hi busy bee!" he turned to that female voice but her back was at him. She was wearing a simple knee length black dress and had waist long beautiful hair.

"ye aawaaz to taani ki... nahi nahi! Tujhe to har ladki taani hi lagti hai but i think yehi wo female singer hai!" rey said in his mind. "Excuse me" he said to that girl.

She turned and both of their hearts skipped a beat. They were seeing each other after two years but both of them were still the same but nothing is the same between them. His feelings over powered him n he went forward to hug her but she moved backwards b he realised what was he doing.

"uh sorry" he said moving backwards. "Hi rey! Kaise hain aap?" taani asked him with a polite smile. She was meeting him after so many days at least she has the right to know how he was.

"Hi, I am fine! Tum suddenly kahaan chali gayi college khatam hone ke baad?" he asked her. "Umm baad me bataungi! Mai ab Mumbai me hi rukne wali hoon." She smiled politely to him.

There was silence for some time. "What are you doing here?" both of them spoke together n smiled at each other. "Wo mai kisika intezaar kar rahi hoon! Koi aane wala tha mujhe lene but koi aaya nahi! I hate 'late comers'." She said to which he smiled.

"Mai yahaan kisiko lene aaya hoon n that too 15 min late! Mujhe laga ki tum hi wahi ho jise mai lene aaya hoon! Actually ho sakti ho! I mean tum ek singer ho n mai D3 team ke naye album ke female singer ko lene aaya hoon!" He looked at her for a positive answer.

"Actually mai yahaan ek album me gaane hi aayi hoon! Umm wait a minute is it PI JAAUN?" She asks him. "OMG it is it!" He said happily that she is gonna sing with him.

"Umm chale?"He asked her n she nodded in yes. They went to his car n drove off to the studio where the recording will be held. Actually taani gave a condition that the minute she will reach the studio they will record the song. The drive was going silent n both of them were stealing glances at each other. They had many questions in their minds.

"Tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya! Kahaan chali gayi tum college ke baad yun achanak?" He asked her. "Kuch bhi achanak nahi hota hai rey! Mera bachpan se sapna tha singer banne ka aur bas usi sapne ko hakikat me badalne mai London chali aayi college ke baad!" She answered his question.

"Tumhare gaane sune hain maine! They were fantastic!" Rey praised her with a smile. "Thanks n maine bhi team D3 ki success ke baare me padha hai n videos bhi dekhe hain! Aap log bohot accha kar rahe hain!" She too smiled.

"Swayam ko bataya tumne ki tum aa rahi ho?" He asked her as swayam didn't told him anything about this. "Nahi, bhai ko surprise dena chahti thi!" She answered. "Swayam bohot khush hoga tumhe dekhkar! Bohot miss karta hai tumhe!" He said to which she smiled politely.

In no time they reached at the studio. The gang was already present there n when they saw taani entering with rey they happy as well as shocked. Taani saw them and smiled. The gang moved towards her n pulled her in a group hug. Swaron were so happy to see her especially swayam. Swayam pulled her in a bone crashing hug n kissed on her cheeks n forehead.

"Taani tum kab aayi? Tumne bataya kyun nahi ki tum london se wapas aa rahi ho? Tum kaisi ho? He asked her all together. "Bhai saans to le lo! Mai aaj abhi rey ke saath airport se aayi hoon! Mai theek hoon n main isliye nahi bataya kyunki mai aapko surprise dena chahti thi! Aur baaki sawal baad me poochna kyunki ab to mai India me rehne wali hoon as mai team d3 ki permanent singer hoon!" She answered him.

"Omi ji aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki mai team D3 ke liye gaane wali hoon? Wo to mujhe rey ne bataya tab pata chala!" Taani asked the manager of the studio. "Agar omi ji bata dete to tum aane se mana kar deti na!" Swayam answered her.

"Accha wo sab chodiye abhi recording karna hai! Male singer kaun hai omi ji?" Taani asked omi ji to change the topic raised by swayam. "Mai hoon male singer!" Rey answered her from the back.

"Uff ye kya kar rahe ho aap mere saath Krishna ji? Kyun mere liye ye sab aur mushkil bana rahe ho? Ab mujhe rey ke saath gaana padega!" Taani said in her mind.

After sometime team d3 went except swaron n taarey were in the recording room. They were standing side by side with one recording mic. It was really awkward for them especially for taani. Anyways they started to sing.

Bhulaaun kaise... Woh pal jo mere bin hai tu beeta chuka...

Lautaun kaise... Jo aansun meri yaad me baha chuka...

Rey looks at her while singing the line. Two years how can he forget? How will he give her back the tears she had shed after the pain he gave her?

Mar me jaaun fanah ho jaaun kahin main jaake doob jaaun

Nazar milaun to ye chahun ke teri aankhon se...

Taani looks at him n they get pulled in an eye lock. Looking at that pain in her eyes given by him he just want kill himself. He want to pull those pain in her eyes.

Pi jaaun... Ye gham…

Pi jaaun… ye gham…

Pi jaaun… ye gham…

Pi jaaun… ye gham…

Pi jaaun… ye gham…

Her eyes get wet but she was controlling them from falling n rey wanted to drink out those tears.

Bujhaun kaise... Ye aag tere dil me jo laga chuka...

Sunaun kaise... Wo siskiyaan jo dil me hun daba chuka...

How will he say sorry to her? How will he say that everything was fake after hurting her so much? How will he show to her how much he cried these two years?

Mar me jaaun fanah ho jaaun kahin main jaake doob jaaun

Nazar milaun to ye chahun ke teri aankon se...

He just want to go far away from this guilt of giving her pain.

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

He want to drink that pain of her n give her smile if he had the right to do.

Mitaun kaise... Haathon ki lakeeron par hai jo likha...

Bataun kaise... Mujhko hai to bas tera hi aasra...

Now taani sings still in the eye lock. How would she change her fate? She goes the break up day! That day she wanted to say him that he was her everything but her self-respect didn't let her.

Raat kaali baat baaki ashq bheege dil sawaali...

Man me mere tu hi tu hai... To aaja saathiya...

That dark night, talks still not over, eyes are wet and questioning heart! She can never forget that day! After so many days still in her heart there only his pic!

Teri baatein bandagi hai

Tu hi meri zindagi hai

Lamhe tune jo diye hain... Wohi meri dastaan

She remembers all his words and why didn't he understand that he was her life! She never looked at any other men! The moments given by him were her life and destiny!

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

He just wants to go hug her tightly just if he could do so! He don't have the courage to do that!

Paas aa mere sanam...

Bhul jaa saare gham...

She even today wishes he will come and hug her claiming that he loves her. She wishes!

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

Pi jaaun... Ye gham...

He ends the song looking in her eyes n swaron were outside the recording room noticing all this from the glass window. Swarom had tears in their eyes. After the song ends everyone claps which causes the end of taarey eye lock. Taani ran from there before she breaks down in front of everyone.

Rey goes behind her n they end up in an empty room. "Rey yahaan se chale jaaiye please!" Taani say crying. "Taani mujhe bas ye kehna hai ki i love you!" Rey says her.

"Rey ye sab aapko ek game lagta hai? Jab chaha apna liya aur jab chaha chod diya?" Taani turns and shouts on rey. "Ye sach nahi hai taani!" Rey tries to explain.

"To kya sach hai haan?" Taani bursts on rey. "Ye break up fake tha! Tumhare andar individuality lane ke liye maine tumse fake break up kiya n isse pehle ki mai tumhe batata tum mumbai chod kar chali gayi!" Rey explains her n after that says all the things happened.

"Aapke liye wo sab fake tha but mere liye sach tha!" Taani said in anger. "Taani please, maine wo sab tumhare liye kiya tha! I love you i love you!" Rey fell on his knees crying.

Taani's heart melts looking at him at this condition. "Rey uthiye!" Taani tells him. "Maine aapko maaf nahi kiya hai but i love you too! Hum ek trial relationship me jaa sakte hain lekin uske liye aapko mera trust phir se jeetna padega n agar the trial works then hum saath me ho sakte hain!" Taani says as rey gets up. "Thank you so much taani! I promise mai tumhe shikayat ka koi mauka nahi doonga!" N he pulls her in a hug.

"Rey mai saans nahi le paa rahi hoon!" Taani said him n he left her. Taani goes outside the room n smiles to herself. Here rey stood smiling to himself "I will win you back taani!" N we all know what happens next.


"The best stories aren't about people with a nice past. They are about people who SURVIVED a bad past, lived their dream and had a happy ending."

here i end! so how was it? do comment and like please! love you all!

Love Aditi❤️

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