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this is gonna be funny ride.. loved both the chapters.. arnav and khushi both are spying on their siblings.. 😃

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Chapter three


The fight ended without serving the actual purpose.

But at least both were confirmed that something was surely cooking with their siblings.

Khushi's POV

Who can be my sister's Mr. Right??

Whoever he is..he must have a brother.

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Arnav's POV

So Akash's lady love has a crazy sister. I don't think it will be too hard to find her.

There are so less crazy woman now!!

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Few weeks have gone..

Khushi had followed Payal for numerous times, but had failed to find out her jiji's lover.

Meanwhile Arnav had tried to detect Akash's girl among all the women in AR group and other companies and their branches as well.

Khushi tried to find out the places Payal went and how many men she can visit and so on.

Arnav was making a statistical report about Akash's whereabouts and the probability of interesting women to fall in love with.

Khushi was losing hope and so was Arnav.

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In RM,

Anjali: Mami I have to go to mandir.

Akash: Di I will drop you.

Manorama: hello hi bye bye. From when have you started doing puja and stuff Akash bitwa??

Akash was stammering.

Arnav was passing from there and his brain clicked!!

MANDIR !!!!!!

Arnav's POV

Yes, Akash has been going to temples very frequently.

Wow..what a choice!!

No one can ever suspect.

Either Nani or mami or Di have to go to mandir.

And Akash knew that I never go..okk!!

Akash..you may be smart..but I am smarter!!

Arnav: Akash, today you have a meeting with the Kundra group. Let me drop Di in mandir.

Akash: no bhai it's ok. It is on my way to office. I also have some work there.

Arnav: where??

Akash: nearby.

Arnav: hmm.

Arnav knew Akash would change the plan if he pressurized him.

Arnav simply nodded and left to attend his conference call.

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Payal: Khushi don't look at the jalebis like this. You can eat as much as you want.

Khushi: when jjiji?? I am already feeling so sick!!

Payal: Khushi..this fast is for your husband.

Khushi: jiji..I am not married..and I don't have intention of getting married before you.

Payal: yeah..I know..you will marry after me, right? Then don't worry you will be getting married soon.

Khushi: jiji you are getting married?? When?? With whom??

Payal literally felt to bang her head now!!

Payal tried to change the topic.

But Khushi was adamant.

Payal was saved by the arrival of Buaji.

Buaji: payalia..titaliya.. it's time for the puja. Go to mandir now. You can talk later also. Go..

Payal tried to avoid Khushi's questions.

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Akash had left already..

Arnav called someone.

Arnav: no..you have to do it.

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Arnav: okk..then..forget about your entry in RM ever. You know I can do this.

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Arnav: it's beneficial for you as well. You need to know the customs to become a Raizada bahu!! Isn't it?? You will keep an eye on Akash. Yes. DEAL.

Arnav disconnected the call and gave a 2-inch wide grin!!!

Finally he will know her!!

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Meanwhile Anjali remembered she had forgotten her special silver puja thali at RM.

Anjali immediately called Arnav.

Anjali: chotte..please help me.

Arnav: what has happened?? Is everything all right??

Anjali: yeah almost. I had forgotten to bring my thali. Wil you please bring it??

Arnav: but how would I know??

Anjali: ask Nani. Ok?? I am at chadni chowk mandir. Bye.

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Payal went to mandir along with Khushi.

To keep off Khushi..Payal pretended.

Payal: Khushi..oh no..I forgot to bring the flowers and red chunri.

Khushi: jiji..don't be hyper. We can buy from the shop.

Payal: I am not feeling that well..will you please buy it for me??

Khushi: ok.

Khushi being naive didn't understand Payal's intention of sending her away.

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Payal looked here and there and called him.

Payal: where are you?

Akash: at the stairs..i am coming.

Payal soon saw the approaching figure of Akash and she smiled.

She started her rituals. Akash silently watched her.

But someone was spying on them..

Lavanya!!

Akash had no idea that Lavanya has now taken Arnav's side.

Lavanya was feeling bad..but Arnav had told her it was for Akash as well as her benefit. But she couldn't rely much on him. Moreover she had kept her affair with NK a top secret. How come Arnav knew about it?

Flashback

At road..Akash had received a call from Lavanya.

Akash: yeah Lav..

Lavanya: which mandir are you going?

Akash: all of a sudden??

Lavanya: uff..for NK. You know..

Akash: oh..ho..not bad..good..good..NK will be highly impressed.

Lavanya: Akash.. tell now.

Akash: where are you right now?? Then I can pick you up.

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rest of chapter three is continued in the next post..

link to the next post https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87441431�


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special thanks to dumas for providing the pictures of the temple scene
Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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link to previous post https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87441393�

...continuation...

Chapter three

Arnav had reached the temple.

Lavanya had messaged him..

Sent by Lavanya

Sweet good-looking girl. Green sari. Age around 22-24. came for rituals like us.

Arnav's eyes were now searching for that green sari clad woman. She is the one. She is Akash's lady love.

But something else he noticed while climbing up the stairs..

A girl was stepping down.. and she was falling.

Arnav dashed towards her and could just hold her hand.

She was unconscious by then.

He held her hand and pulled her towards himself.

He was mesmerized by the innocent beauty.

He didn't know who she was..where she was from.. what was her marital status..

But he could comprehend one thing..She is a "thing of beauty"..for her MAN she will bring "joy forever".

He took her in his arms.. he felt as if her little petite frame was custom-made for his physique.

He was highly attracted to this nameless and senseless damsel.

He made her sit near the stairs and arranged some water and sprinkled on her face..

She was regaining consciousness.

He made her drink the water, unknowingly breaking her fast.

As soon as she gained sense..her eyes were wide open..and without thinking she stood and screamed.

HAI DEVI MAIYYA!! What did you do?? Why did you do??? Do you know what it means?? Haii..hai..!! What will I do now??? OHH..NO!!!

Arnav was bamboozled. He helped the girl and she is throwing questions one after another??

Arnav: SHUT UP.. you were dying..and I helped you. So, you want to say I should have left you at the stairs. You fainted and I carried you and make you drink water.

Khushi was shocked!!!

Khushi: I had fainted??

Arnav: no..I was fainting!! Utter rubbish.

Khushi murmured "Laad Gaavarnar"

Arnav: WHAT THE!!!

And both looked at each other with terrified eyes.

Yes, they recognised each other..

Khushi tried to sprint away..

But Arnav was quite fast.

Arnav came in front of her..blocked her way.

Arnav: last night..you were the one who called??

Khushi didn't answer him and was trying to move out..

Arnav: I could recognise your voice..tell the truth..

Khushi: I don't know you..you are disturbing me..leave my way.

Arnav: really?? The police will not think so..

Khushi was terrified!!!

Arnav pulled her tightly..

Khushi tried to avoid but it was useless..

Khushi: yes..yes..I called. Don't call the police..please..please..

Arnav: why did you call??

Khushi: for my jiji. I thought she is having an affair. To find out that I stole her cell.

Arnav left her loose.

Khushi immediately ran away from that " Laad Gaavarner".

Arnav's heart was already struck by the cupid's arrow.

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Precap: Arnav and Khushi will caught their respective siblings..

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Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago

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