~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~ MG FF #7 IMP NOTE ON PG-202

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~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~ #7

I knew it was special from the very start,
It envelopes my body, my core, my heart.
A shining, uplifting, persistent feeling,
It embraces and warms my entire being.
This special feeling lights my soul on fire,
It burns with amazing delight, warm desire.
How lucky I am to have this in my life,
A most cherished feeling, wonderfully nice.
Let me name this feeling, it is all about you,
It is my undying, everlasting love for you.
I love you, my dearest sweetheart,
Nothing in the world can keep us apart.
~CREDIT TO UNKNOW ARTIST FOR THIS POEM


I will never forget his first look, that first smile, his way of talking, his care n protectiveness towards me, his first note, his shy mesmerizing eyes, his unspoken words, that silent gestures, his possessiveness, the whole picnic we shared together, our dreadful separation, that longing i felt in his eyes, his painful face, his last letter, and his final good bye...
~GEET HANDA


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I can't explain why I feel this way,

Everytime you would come my way

I always tremble, feelin nervous,

It's like I wanna fall down unconcious.

I don't know what so special about you

That made me fall in love with you.

Maybe that cute face of yours,

Your smiles and ways, yes of course

Everytime you're by my side

I'd like to stretch my hands open wide

And embrace you tight endlessly

But I can't, you might turn away from me.

So what can I do,

If this is what I feel for you

Can you blame me, if I have fallen

Madly in LOVE with you.

~CREDIT TO UNKNOW ARTIST FOR THIS POEM

You came into my life...quietly, simply, tenderly...and the world stood still...I could not say a word...Nor a single gestured showed...I kept that feelings in my heart...and so loved you in silence...Worshipped you from a distance...and dreamed of you so often...I want to say...I Love You...But I'm afraid...Afraid to loose you...so in silence then... I will just love you...
~ MAAN SINGH KHURANA


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Hello sweeties, proudly presenting you new thread for FOL...Really excited for its future track as it will be a bumpy ride ahead...And i hope u all will trust me n support me wid it...
So please bless this FF with the same love and support, you showered on my first FF, FLAMES OF DESIRE...

A special thanks to all my readers for always being there...though the likes and comments are decreasing, but still i am happy wid my regular readers constant support🤗

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Congrats and so happy to see new thread dear...

Will be waiting for the update😳
Edited by Cherishh - 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread😊
will b waiting for update
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Congrats on new thread!!!!

Waiting for the update
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Congooo on new thread... waiting for update...
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chaddoo

congrats ...😊



abhi jaldi se jao n sleep tight ..😊
have a great day ...😃😃
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~TEASER~




It all felt so new, so thrilling, as maan stared at her with over flowing emotions...His gaze glittered with new promising dreams, a future full of their togetherness...Geet looked at him and blushed, as the confession in his eyes...shied her with goose bumps...They kept sweetly smiling, silently enjoying the moment...Maan gently squeezed her hand, and pulled her closer...and she willingly gave in, sitting next to him...They so naturally kept their hands intervened, as if it were meant to be...and admired the wide spread field around them, which kind of camouflaged their presence to anyone...

"I have a dream geet" he suddenly whispered staring at the vast spread horizon, then looked besides at geet...with every ounce of his impeccable love for her..."I want to settle here...bas woh aur main...aur koi nahi"...his gaze glittered with longing for her approval, while she squeezed his hand...silently assuring him, that she will fulfill his every desire...



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Enjoy this till i update tommorow...


Lots of love😊

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i wont' be reading the teaser ...😛



Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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This is not fair papa...
mera first place gaya😔
Bhai bhi 1st ni aaya

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