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Next day(22 June, 2013)
1:30pm
RK Shopping Centre
Roshni and Mayank are in a shop. Roshni is looking at some vermillion-boxes. She likes one and takes it in her hand. Mayank comes to her.
Mayank: Kya dekh rahi ho?
Roshni: Mayank dekho ye kitna sundar hai.
Mayank: Ye?? Roshni tum ye kya dekh rahi ho! Chalo yaha se. Lunch time ho raha hai.
Roshni: Mayank mujhe ye lena hai...
Mayank: Roshni chalo to yaha se.
Mayank takes Roshni out of the shop, rushes out of the shopping centre, keeps the shopping bags on the back seat, makes Roshni sit in the front seat, himself sits on the driving seat and starts driving. Roshni is angry with Mayank for not letting her buy that thing.
While driving...
Mayank: (noticing her anger)Tumhe kya hua?
Roshni: Tumhe dikhta nehi mai gussa hu.
Mayank: Oh. Achcha baba i'm sorry.
Roshni: Mai tumse baat nehi karne wali.
Mayank: Roshni. Roshni i am sorry. I am really very sorry. Please maaf kardo. Aur waise bhi tum use kharid ke kya karti? Tumhari to shaadi bhi nehi hui.
Roshni: Nehi hui. Par kabhi na kabhi to hogi na!
Mayank: Jab hogi tak kharid lena. Ab usse karti kya?
Roshni: Meri jo marzi mai karti. Tumhe kya?!!
Mayank: Achcha thik hai. I am sorry maine vo kharid ne nehi dia...i am really sorry. Ab gussa thuk do. Agar tum aise naraz rahogi to mai kaam pe dhyan nehi de paunga.
Roshni: I don't care!
Mayank stops the car on a road-side.
Mayank: Please forgive me. Please. Smile kardo. Smile, smile, smile.(starts tickling)
Roshni starts laughing because of tickling.
Mayank: (tickling)Smile, smile.
Roshni: (laughing)Mayank choro mujhe. Mujhe choro.
Mayank: (tickling)Jabtak tum maaf mehi karogi mai aise hi gudgudi karta rahunga.
Roshni: (laughing)Achcha thik hai. Thik hai. Maaf kardia.
Mayank: (stops tickling)That's like a good girl.
Mayank continues driving.
Roshni: Aaj tumhe duty pe nehi jana?
Mayank: Nope. Aaj maine chutti lia hai. Saradin tumhare saath rahunga aur tumhe Mumbai ghumaunga.
Roshni: Nice... Ab hum kaha ja rahe hai?
Mayank: Paradise Foods. I'm sure tumhe waha ka khana zarur pasand ayega. That's my favorite place!
Roshni: Jab tumhe vo jagah pasand hai to mujhe bhi pasand ayeg...
Mayank: Right.
Mayank's cellphone rings, Manjusha is calling. Mayank turns on the bluetooth.
Mayank: Haan bua boliye.
Manjusha: Mayank bete tum kaha ho?
Mayank: Kaha hu? Matlab?
Manjusha: Aaj tumhari chutti hai na. To ghar kyun nehi aye?
Mayank: Ne...nehi to. Aaj meri chutti nehi hai.
Manjusha: To ab tum kaha ho?
Mayank: Ek crime scene pe ja raha hu. Aap ko kuch kaam tha?
Manjusha: Nehi bas aise hi. Mujeh laga tumhari chutti hai. Ab mai rakhti hu.
Mayank turns off the bluetooth.
Roshni: Tumne jhut kyun kaha?
Mayank: Ye jo meri bua hai na, vo bohot...choro inn baaton ko. Iss waqt mai iss bare mei baat bhi nehi karna chahta.
Roshni: Jaisi tumhari marzi.

Mayank's house
After talking with Mayank...
Manjusha: Mayank ne mujhse jhut bola. Agar vo kaam pe hota to aapni car kyun leke jata? Agar kaam pe hota to police jeep leke jata na. Kuch to garbar hai. Aur garbar kya hai janne ke liye mujhe...
Saying this she enters Mayank's room and starts looking here and there for some clue. Finally she sees an album.
Manjusha: Ye album? Pehle to nehi thi. Naya lag raha hai.
Saying this she takes out the album and started looking at the pictures. The album has all the photos of Roshni's birthday. She is stunned to see Roshni with Mayank.
Manjusha: Ye larki to...Roshni hai jisse hum Sonagara gaon mei mile the. Mayank ise jante hai?!!
She again looks at the photos and stops at a picture of Mayank and Roshni, where both were dancing. Seeing this photo Manjusha understands the whole matter.
Manjusha: Achcha to ye baat hai! Mayank aur Roshni pehle se ek dusre ko jante hai...aur shayad pyaar bhi karte hai. Chalo achchi baat hai. Par kya unnka pyaar aapne anjamtak pohoch payega? (smiles wickedly)Mere hote hua ye shayad possible nehi... Dekhte haikya hota hai! (smiles wickedly)
Manjusha keeps the album back into its place and leaves the room.

Precap:
At night, Roshni goes back to her village.

Edited by Tarza - 12 years ago

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Tahiya Hasan Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I am Tahia. I will be doing some of the updates of this FF because Zariyat(Tarza), the original writer of this FF, is busy with her other FFs in other forums. Hope you all like my updates.

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Next day(23 June, 2013)
1:23pm
Mumbai
Police Headquarters'
Today, Kavi, Kashish, Vikas, Aditya, Mayank and Meghna are on duty. All are busy working. Kavi, Meghna and Kashish are working. Vikas, Mayank and Aditya are gossiping and working. No case for today.
Vikas: Yaar Mayank, tujhe larki to bohot achchi mili hai. Milvayga kab? Meri to abhitak usse mulaqat nehi hua.
Mayank: Police Station aur iss Super Villains ke case se chutkara to mile, phor mil lena.
Aditya: Kash mujhe bhi Roshni jaisi koi milti.
Vikas: Chinta mat kar tujhe bhi mil jayegi aur mujhe bhi.
Three laughs.
Aditya: Achcha mera kaam hogaya. Mai ye papers rakhke ata hu.
Vikas: Thik hai.
Aditua takes up some papers and starts moving towards a book-shelf. ACP Diler's daughter, Akangsha is coming (in a hurry) from other side. Aditya and Akangsha collides, all the papers from Aditya's hands flies on them along with the file in Akangsha's hand, and Akangsha falls in Aditya's arms. Both share an eye-lock. All other cops are surprised about what happened sudenly. ACP Diler comes as he kew Akangsha is coming. He is stunned to see this.
Mayank: Ye kya hua?
Vikas: Pata nehi.
ACP Diler: Aditya! Akangsha!
With the sound of ACP Diler, Akangsha and Aditya's eye-lock breaks. Both starts collecting the papers and file. After collecring, both stands up.
Aditya: Sorry sir.
ACP Diler: Hmmm.
Aditya goes to the book-shelf and keeps the papers there. ACP Diler walks to Akangsha. Others gets to work.
Akangsha: Dad ye vo file.
ACP Diler: (taking the file) Ah. Thanks.

Kashish comes to Akangsha, ACP Diler leaves saying 'bye' to Akangsha.
Kashish: Tum to Bulbul, Roshni, Aastha aur Anjali ma'am ke saath shopping ke liye gayi thi na?
Akangsha: Haan. Dad ko ek file chahiye thi, vo leke ayi. Aastha ko mall mei kuch friends mil gaye to vo unke saath chali gayi. Bulbul ko office se urgent call aya to vo office ke liye nikal gayi. Aur Roshni ghar dhali gayi.
Kashish: Oh. Tumne luch kia?
Akangsha: Nehi.
Kashish: Good. Hum abhi lunch karne hi jaa rahe the. Why don't you join us?
Akangsha: Me?
Kashish: Ya. Chalo na?
Akangsha: Okay.
Kashish: (calling others)Kavi. Meghna. Aditya. Vikas. Chalo lunch karne chalte hai. Akangsha bhi humare saath chalegi.
Hearing this Aditya gets happy, don't know why.
Kavi: Kashish, Mayank humare saath nehi ayega?
Kashish: Nehi! Mayank humare saath nehi ayega.
Meghna: Par kyun ma'am?
Mayank: Thik hai ma'am. Aap jaisa kahe.
Kashish: Mera matlab hai...Mayank Roshni ke saath jayega.
Mayank: Roshni to shopping karne gayi hai?
Kashish: Akangsha ne bataya ki volog wapas achuke hai. Tumhe Roshni ke pas jana chahiye. Aaj hi wapas chale jayegi. You should spent some time with her.
Mayank: But...
Vikas: Mayank tu yaha ki chinta matt kar. Hum hai na yaha.
Meghna: Haan. Tum jaldi se jao.
Mayank: Okay.
Mayank leaves quickly.
Aditya: Hume bhi nikal na chahiye.
Kavi: Haan. Chalte hai. Bari jor ki bhuk lagi hai.
Everyone leaves.

3:45pm
Outside Kashish's house
Mayank stops his police jeep. Roshni is with him.
Mayank: Kashish ma'am ka ghar agaya...
Roshni: Bye.
Roshni is stopped by Mayank, Mayank holds her hand.
Mayank: Tumhe 'bye' kehne ka mann nehi karta. Kitni jaldi ye tin din guzar gaye. Aaj tum wapas chali jaogi... Phirse hum nehi mil payenge...
Roshni: Jane ka to mera bhi mann nehi hai. Par kya karu... Kash kuch aisa hota ki mai yaha wapas rukh sakti... Kher...mujhe jana hoga.
Mayank: Jaldi wapas ana.
Roshni: Mere jane se pehle tum aoge na?
Mayank: Shayad...nehi. Koshish karunga ane ki. Aaj Commissioner ke saath meeting hai. Kab khatam hoga pata nehi...
Roshni: Thik hai...
Slowly Roshni gets down the jeep. Roshni and Mayank's hands fall apart. Mayank leaves from there.

10:47pm
Kashish's house
Bulbul, Meghna and Aastha had come to meet Roshni before going back. Aabha had to go for the meeting with Commussioner so she couldn't come.
Roshni's room
Roahni is packing her baga. After finishing her packing, she phones Mayank. But Mayank isn't able to pick up as he is busy in the meeting with Commissioner. Kashish and Meghna enters Roshni's room.
Meghna: Roshni, packing hogayi?
Roshni: Haan almost.(closes the zip of her luggage)
Kashish: Tumhare jane ka waqt horaha hai.
Roshni: Hmmm.
Meghna: I know tum kya soch rahi ho. But you should also understand na. Varun, Mayank, Kav i sir, Aditya, Aabha, Anurag sab meeting mei buay hai. Mayank nehi apayega. Don't be sad.
Roshni: Hmmm. Mujhe chalna chahiye.
Bulbul comes in a hurry.
Bulbul: Oi Roshni, taxi agayi hai.
Roshni: Haan haan. Mai arahi hu.
Roshni, Bulbul, Kashish and Meghna comes outside.

Outside
Roshni hugs each person.
Roshni: Mai aap sabko bohot miss karungi.
Bulbul: Hum bhi tujhe bohot miss karenge. Ate rehna.
Kashish: Aur hume jab break milega hum ajayenge tumhare ghar. Tumhe koi problem to nehi hogi na?
Roshni: Of course not. Jab marzi tab ajana.
Meghna: Ye tin din bohot mazedar guzre. Jaldi wapas ana.
Aastha: Jaldi to wapas ana hi hoga. Kuch din baad Kavi sir aur Bulbul ki shaadi jo hai.
Bulbul feels shy and Kashish teases her.
Roshni: Mujhe to wapas ana hi hai. Abke liye mujhe jana hoga.
Roshni says 'bye' to everyone and leaves.

Precap:

Roshni gets a new "bahana" to visit Mumbai.

New girl in Mayank's life...

Edited by tahia_hasan - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

res plz DOne

LOve it

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Evil Dramebaaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Loved the update Zari!!! Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

nice update zara...continue writing...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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Tahiya Hasan Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

New character:

Shraddha Arya as Sakshi Asthana: Manjusha and Divakar's friend's daughter. Mayank's best friend.

After 2 days(25 June, 2013)
10:30am
Songara(Roshni's village)
Roshni had went somewhere. Now, she is coming back home.
Postman: Roshni Nagar?
A postman says from behind. Roshni turns.
Roshni: Yes. Mai hi hu Roshni Nagar.
Postman: Aapke liye letter aya hai.
Roshni: Mere liye.
Postman: Yaha sign karna hai.
Roshni signs on the paper. Postman leaves giving the letter to Roshni. Roahni takes the letter and enters inside the house.

Inside the house
Roshni keeps her handbag on the coffee table, sits on the sofa and opens the envelope.
The envelope reads: From the Principal of St. Peter's College.
St. Peter's College is the college where Roshni applied to join as an Intern Lecturer.
Roshni opens the letter, reads the letter and turns happy! The reason of her happiness is: she got selected and they have offered her Paid-Internship.
Roshni: Wow! Ek aur bahana mil gaya Mumbai jane ka. Mayank ko batati hu.
Roshni takes out her cellphone from her handbag and dials Mayank's number. Mayank's phone is switched off. She calls Kashish.
Kashish: Hey Roshni! Kaisi ho?
Roshni: Hi. Mai bilkul thik hu. Tum kaisi ho?
Kashish: Mai bilkul thik hu.
Roshni: Maine Mayank ko call kia tha...
Kashish Aur usska phone bandh tha. Hai na?
Roshni: Haan...
Kashish: Actually Abhigyan aur Mayank ek important kaam se gaye hai. Iss liye donoke cellphones bandh hai.
Roshni: Oo. Waise maien ek khush-khabri dene ke liye call kia.
Kashish: Kaisi khush-khabri?
Roshni: Maine ek college mei apply kia tha as an Intern. Unhone mujhe paid-Internship ka offer dia hai! Mera CV dekh kar volog bohot khush hai.
Kashish: Wow! That's a great news!
Roshni: Aur isse bhi bari baat hai ki...jiss college mei maine apply kia tha vo college Mumbai mei hai!
Kashish: Ye to bohot achchi baat hai! Isse tin kaam honge. You'll earn, learn and will meet Mayank...
Roshni blushes out of shyness.
Kashish: Ab tum jaldi se Mumbai ajao! We'll have a great fun!
Kavi-Bulbul ki shaadi hai aur Mayank ka bhi birthday araha hai na...Socho kitna mazaa ayega!
Roshni: Hmmm. Achcha ab mai rakhti hu. Tumse baad mei baat karungi. Bye Kashish.
Kashish: Thik hai. Mai, yaha sabke tumhare ane ki khabar de dungi.
Roshni: Okay...
Kashish: Bye. Come soon.
Both hangs up.

2:30pm
Mumbai
Mayank's house
Mayank enters. Manjusha is sitting with one of her friends and her daughter, they are chatting.
Manjusha: Are Mayank beta, aaj jaldi agaye. Achcha hua jaldi agaye. Dekho kaun aya hai!
Mayank: Kaun hai?
Daughter of Manjusha's friend turns. The daughter is Mayank's closest friend, Sakshi Asthana.
Sakshi: Hi Mayank.
Mayank: Sakshi tum! Kitne dini baad! Kaisi ho?
Sakshi: Bilkul thik. Tum ab bhi busy ho. Mujhe aaj nehi ana chahiye tha.
Mayank: Nehi nehi. Aisi koi baat nehi hai. Tum ruko mai change karke ata hu.
Manjusha: Mayank tum lunch karke jaoge na? Ya phir abhi nikal jaoge?
Mayank: Sakshi itne dino baad ayi hai to usske saath lunch karke hi jaunga.
Manjusha: Thik hai.
Sakshi: Pehle change karke to ao.
Mayank: Oh haan. Mai abhi aya.
Mayank goes to his room to change his Police Uniform.

4:30pm
Pool-Side
Mayank and Sakshi are sitting beside the swimming pool, dipping their feet in the water. Mayank looks at his wrist-watch.
Mayank: (stands up)O my God! Sare char baj gaye!
Sakshi: Kya hua Mayank?
Mayank: Sakshi, mai bohot late ho raha hu. Mujhe chalna hoga. Tum aaj yaha ho na?
Sakshi: Haan.
Mayank: Mai tumhe raat ko ake milta hu.
Sakshi: Thik hai.
Mayank goes inside the house. Unknowingly he left his cellphone there.
Mayank's cellphone rings.
Sakshi: Mayank to aapna phone yehi par bhul gaya.
Sakshi takes Mayank's cellphone and comes inside the house.
Inside the house
Manjusha is chatting with Sakshi's mother.
Sakshi: Manju aunty, Mayank kaha hai?
Manjusha: Mayank to chala gaya.
Sakshi: Chala gaya! Par vo to change karne gaya tha na?
Manjusha: Haan. Phir pata nehi kya sochke vo aise hi chala gaya.
Sakshi: Thik hai aunty. Mai bahar ja rahi hu.
Sakshi takes her handbag, Mayank's cellphone and comes to the parking lot. Mayank's cellphone rings again. Sakshi checks the call, Roshni is calling. Sakshi picks up the call.
Sakshi: Hello.
Roshni: He...(a lit bit confused)Hello. Ye to Mayank ka number hai na?
Sakshi: Haan. Mayank aapna phone ghar par bhul gaya tha. Mai use dene ja rahi thi.
Roshni: Oh okay.
Sakshi: Thik hai. Mai Mayank se keh dungi tumhe call karne ke liye. Roshni, right?
Roshni: Yup.
Sakshi: Okay. Bye.
Roshni: Bye.
Sakshi hangs up. Sakshi enters her car and orders the driver to drives to Police Headquarters'.

5:10pm
Mumbai
Police Headquarters'
Today, Meghna, Kavi, Mayank, Kashish and Abhigyan are on duty. Sakshi enters. Abhigyan is standing near the door reading a file. So Sakshi comes to him.
Sakshi: Excuse me.
Abhigyan: (closing the file and looking at Sakshi)Ji kahiye?
Sakshi: Mayank...kaha hai?
Abhigyan: Mayank...(Kavi cuts off him in between)
Kavi: Mayank ACP sir ke cabin mei hai. Aap kaun?
Sakshi: Sakshi. Sakshi Asthana. Mayank ki dost.
Abhigyan leaves as he is trying to concentrate on his work.
Kavi: Mayank ki dost!! Aap agar chahe to mujhe bata sakti hai. Mai Mayank ko aapka message de dunga.
Sakshi: Mayank ghar pe aapna phone bhul aya tha. Wahi dene ayi thi. Aap use de denge?
Kavi: (taking Mayank's cellphone from her hand)Haan haan zarur.
Sakshi: Aur haan! Maaynk ko ye bhi kehdijiyega ki Roshni bar bar call kar rahi thi.
Kavi: Roshni call kar rahi thi!?!!
Sakshi: Haan. Maine use bata dia Mayank use baad mei call karega.
Kavi: Aapne usse baat bhi ki?!!
Sakshi: Haan. To ab mai chalu? Mujhe thora kaam hai.
Kavi: Haan zarur. Mai use kehdunga.
Sakshi leaves.
Sakshi: (to herself, while leaving)Kaisa inspector hai! Baat baat pe hairan ho jata hai... OMG!
Kashish, Mayank and Meghna comes out of ACP Diler's cabin, and comes to Kavi. Mayank notices his cellphone in Kavi's hand.
Mayank: Kavi sir, mera mobile aapke pas? Kaise?
Kavi: O haan! Ek chokri(girl) ayeli thi. Naam kya tha usska...haan! Sakshi. Sakshi Asthana! Vo deke gayi. Aur ussne bola ki Roshni bar bar call kar rahi thi.
Kashish: Roshni call kar rahi thi?!
Kavi: Haan. Aur Sakshi ne uthaya bhi tha. Sakshi ki Roshni se baat hua hai! Tu to gaya mera bhai!
Mayank: Baat karli to kya hua?
Kavi: Are bhai, tu na inn larkiyon ko nehi janta. Dhire dhire samajh jayega. Dekh, Sakshi ne tera phone uthaya, Roshni se baat bhi kia. Tere mobile pe Sakshi ki awaaz sunke Roshni ko shaq hua hoga.
Mayank: Roshni aisi nehi hai.Kavi: Are bhai, chahe vo larki jo bhi ho, Roshni, Bulbul, Kashish, Meghna, Aabha jo bhi...sari larkiyan ek jaisi hi hoti hai.
Kashish: Ya right! Just like you boys...good for nothing!!
Meghna: (laughing)Right ma'am!
Kashish: (showing anger to Kavi)Chal Meghna!
Kashish and Meghna leaves.
Kavi: Dekha! Dekha tune! Kaise akaar dikha ke chali gayi... Ye larkiyan kabhi nehi badlegi.
Mayank laughs. Kavi leaves. Mayank calls Roshni.
Roshni: Ab phone kar rahe ho!
Mayank: Busy tha. Bohot bar call kia kya?
Roshni: Hmmm. Waise vo larki kaun thi?
Mayank: (in his mind)Kavi sir ne sach hi kaha tha. Bulbul, Kashish ma'am ya Roshni sare larkiyan ek jaisi hi hoti hai!
Roshni; Hello! Mayank! Kaha khoo gaye?
Mayank: Kahi nehi. Vo larki...meri best friend Sakshi hai. Bohot din baad ayi hai.
Roshni: Oo...Achcha Kashish ma'am ne tumhe kuch bataya?
Mayank; Kashish ma'am ne? Nehi to.
Roshni: To mai batati hu...(Roshni informs about her internship)
Mayank; To finally tumhe ek aur bahana mil gaya.
Before Mayank could continue his conversation with Roshni, Meghna comes.
Meghna: Mayanak chalo.
Mayank: Kaha?
Meghna: Naya case aya hai. Mirror-Man!
Mayank; (getting annoyed)Ufff! Not again!
Meghna: You don't have a choice! Let's go.
Roshni heard all this.
Mayank: Roshni vo...
Roshni: Tum jao. Hum baad mei baat karenge.
Mayank: Bye.
Roshni: Bye.
Call ended.
Meghna: Chalo!
Mayank: Haan haan chalo.
Mayank and Meghna joins other cops.

Precap:
Kavi decides to get married soon. ACP Diler and hs wife Anjali turns Bulbul's guardians. Everyone decides to go on a picnic before Kavi-Bulbul wedding.

Edited by tahia_hasan - 12 years ago