Key to my heart-DDEJ os

Hi guys!I'm Samara or Irishlily-7795 and have decided to right a os about my newest obsession-DDEJ
This oneshot will show Raghu bhai's pov about the events occured till now in show.
I've tried reaching in his mind and attempted to write just what goes in his brains when he sees the beautiful kashmiri kali-Antara😳
So what u guys think?
Should I post it or not???


Ok,sry guys I took so late.So, here's the update.Again sry for the wait 😕
Before reading this, plz remember that i'm a newbie and this my first attempt at writing a ff.So plz don't be too harsh 🥱


Key to my heart

Maa ki maut ke baad zindagi me ek ajeeb sa khalipan aa gaya tha.Laga jaise zindagi tham si gayi ho.Akhir jiske liye jeeta tha wo hi chod kar chali gayi thi.Baap ne kabhi maa ki sudh nahi li.Kamine ko daru peene se fursat mile to kuch kare.
Har roj school se aane ke baad maa ka hasta hua chehra dekh ke ek sukoon sa milta tha.Lagta tha ki koi to hai, jo mujhe hamesha pyar karega, hamesha saath dega mera.Par bhagwan ne wo haath bhi mere sir se utha liya.
Paise bhi kuch din baad khatam ho gaye.Logo ke paas kaam lene gaya, par sab ne dhakke mar kar bhaga diya.Kisi ne bhi daya nahi dikhai.Uske baad, chori karna meri majboori ban gayi.Maa ne sikhaya tha ki chori karna paap hai, bhagwan sabh kuch dekhte hai, unse kuch nahi chup sakta.Par uss bhagwan se to mera bahut pehle hi vishwas uth chuka tha.Aisa kaun sa pathar dil bhagwan hai, jo bachhon se unki maa cheen lete hai.
Kabhi chori karta, to kabhi bheekh mangta.Par raat ko to uss ghar me wapis aana hi padta tha, jiss se mai dur bhagta tha.Wohi sunapan wohi khamoshi.Na belan ki awaaz, na maa ki daat marne ki awaaz, na cehel pehel, sab kuch jaise maa apne saath le gaye.
Jab har taraf andhera dikhai de raha tha, tab ek farishta aya.Uss farishte ne mujhe nayi zindagi di, uska maksad diya, aur saath me nayi pehchaan.
Wo farishta tha-Daya Mai.
Daya Mai, jiske liye meri jaan bhi haazir hai.Woh Daya Mai hi thi, jisne mujhe phir se jeena sikhaya, jisne mujhe nayi himmat di.Unke ehsaan mai zindagi bhar nahi bhula sakta.
Akhir Raghu chor ko Raghu Bhai banane wali wo hi thi.Mujhe ek nayi pehchaan mili, log mera naam izzat se lene lage.Har mushkil ka samadhan tha mere paas.Akhir ye basti meri thi aur mai iss basti ka.Kisi ki kya majal jo iss basti ke logo ko tang kare.Wo haq sirf aur sirf mera tha, aur kisi ka nahi kyuki apni cheez batne ki aadat nahi hai mujhe.
In sab ke beech me , maine apne dil ko band kar diya tha.Itne zulm kiye logo ne mere upar, ki kuch bhi mehsoos karne ki sakti hi kho di maine.Mai sirf do hi cheeze mehsoos kar sakta tha-izzat, Daya Mai ke liye, aur dosti mach mach aur Battery ke liye.Maa ke jaane ke baad kisi ko uss dil me jagah nahi mili, Daya Mai ko bhi nahi, jo mere maa saman thi.
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Par ek din sab kuch badal gaya.
Maine zindagi me bahut si item dekhi hai, par wo sab banawati, nakli thi.Upar se kuch aur andar se kuch.Par jo khoobsurti maine usme dekhi, wo aaj tak kisi me bhi nahi dekhi thi.
Bhoori, kajrari aankhen, gulab jaise hoth aur sunhera rang-jaise suraj ne khudv usse apni roshni de di ho.Usse dekh ke mera dil das salo me pehli baar dhadka.
Kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos hua, aisa jo pehle kabhi na hua tha.Dil zor zor se dhadkne laga, pete(stomach) me aisa laga jaise manohar chacha ke paan par chadne wali cheetiya mere pete me ghus gayi ho.Bahut ajeeb sa ehsaas tha, par aisa jo accha laga.
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"Are yeh bhai ko kya ho gaya?Itna chup kyu baithe hai?"-battery bola.
"Zaroor us bijli ki chamak ko kam karne ki soch rahe honge.Saali jab dekho tak bhai ke raaste ki rukawat ban ke baith jaati hai"-mach mach bola.
"Bijli, kaun si bijli?Aaj to asmaan me badal bhi nahi hai"-Battery bola.
"Abe battery, apna dimaag uss pakode wale ke paas chod aaya kya?Bijli maane to wo nayi ladki- are kya naam tha uska?"
Battery bola-"ananas",
"Nahi",
"Anarkali",
"Nahi",
"Angreji",
"Abe ladki ka naam hai, kisi bhasa ka nahi"
"Antara"-naan mere muh se khud-b-khud nikal gaya.
"Haan!Antara naam hai uska.Mujhe to lagta hai ki jab dimag batt rahe the toh tu zaroor apne chashme chamka raha tha battery"-mach mach bola.
"Acchha, Raghu bhai, hame uss Shetty ka bhi kuch karna padega.Saale ne utpat macha rakha hai.Usne khule aam Daya Mai ko chunauti di hai ki wo use rokh ke dikhae".
"Abhi nahi.Abhi uss mehndak ko uchalne do.Dekhte hai kaha tak uchalta hai.Daya Mai se pehle use mujh se nipatna padega, aur aise logo ki kamar seedhi karna Raghu ko acche se aata hai".
"Theek hai bhai, jaisa aap theek samjhe.Chal battery, chai peene chalte hai".
"Acha bhai, baad me milte hai".

Ya ofcouse yr.. i m waiting :)

Plz doo that we all will be waiting. .

Please do if you want to.

sure...post it and pm me..

why are u waiting for???post it now and pm me..

Hi.. it was nyc.. raghu pov seems ti be interesting. . Keep writing. .