Falak||An Unusual Romance & The Mumbai Rain *updtd pg30* 13 AUG :P - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
tis is really great...it awesome...
one of my favourite ff...just luv the way u potray asad n zoya...n wow zoya is engage wonder hw will asad react to tis...
thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part n please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...please update as soon as possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey wen will u update? I know its been a day only but den u get stuck to few stories, n dis one is one of my current favs. plz cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
mid way through the reading I lost it..
finally reread till the last full stop...
and want many more full stop..
totally refreshing..with rain be the ttheme.love to have a pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

hey i was just kidding yaar!! u r scolding me😭..ruk comment change karti hu if u want!!


Are nai nai koi jarurat nai hai. M joking yr... Aur tune ise seriously le liya. Sun mujhe kavi v teri koi baat se prblm nahi ho sakti samjhi... Kamini 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! pls
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!! She Is
ENGAGED!!!! WHAT??????!!!!!!!
NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
jst read all the chps nw...awsum yaar...luved it...m waiting for the nxt one...continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManic


Are nai nai koi jarurat nai hai. M joking yr... Aur tune ise seriously le liya. Sun mujhe kavi v teri koi baat se prblm nahi ho sakti samjhi... Kamini 🤣

AWW...ATHE AA..JHAPPI PAA🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooo...
wht an update amezing, freaking, mysterious and Romantic!
luvd it and breaking news zoya engaded? nice thoughts hope u wll continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hot but is zoya really engaged? Nahiii!!!!! AsYa all the way
Plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I AM A BIG LAZY ASS!!

After reading Jaren's FF 'Har kisiko Mukamal jahan nai milta' & her note; my sis thearten me that if 'FALAK' come out as mine, Woh Mujhe Deewaron Main Chunwa Degi!!


I DONT WANA TO DIE SO SOON... So this FF Is Solely Dedicate To my 'APPI, NAJMA & BHAIJAAN'


LOVE YOU GUYS


Enjoy...


Chapter - 4


Confession of a Dangerous Mind
PART - 1


Seems like Zoya's luck isnt in her fever. She z tryng to find a taxi from past an hour bt nthng shown up yet & the rains only got heavier. In fact, it was the kind of heavy rainfall that showed up only once or twice in season. Even the cell phone signals had gone off. Luckly a taxi shown up & after payed him xtra ammount of money, he agreed to drove her.


However barely had they reached the Juhu circle, when they found the roads flooded with knee deep water. Traffic was completely jammed. In fact, shockingly enough, a few cars were left stranded without anyone in it - an ominous indicater of how violent the rains must have been. Further up towards Andheri & Lokhandwala, the watar levels must have been higher because there was absolutely no movement of traffic from there on.


Zoya tried calling friends and acquaintances but to no avail. The mobile services were totally jammed. And this quagmire, Zoya saw the worst some distance away, a human corpse floated in the water.


Thats it. Zoya cant take it more. She payed the taxi driver and jump out ignoring the frequent call from cab.


Its hard very hard but she have to do it. By sending a prayer to almighty Zoya began to steped towards her appartment. The water level reached till her waist and the flew continously pushed her backwards.


But its nt unknown to her that if she stoped her own ecasty will kill her.


Her prayer granted as she stepped into her appertment. Totaly wet and shaken... Shaken due to cold... Shaken due to the event gone through... Shaken due to the name... ASAD!!


He stood on same spot still. Without moving a bit even blinking eye as the last words of Zoya rang in his ears,


"Taruf rog ho jaye to usko bhulana behtar,
Taluk bojh ban jaye to usko todna achchha...
Woh afasana jise anjam tak lana na ho mumkin,
Use ek khubsoorat mod dekar chhodana accha"


Humara rista ek afsana tha Asad... Sirf ek afsana. Aur afsanon ki jagah kitabon main kahanion main filmo main hoti hai asal Zindegi main nahi.
Bhula do un har lamhon ko har palon ko jo humne saath gujari hai
Nikal do un har yadoon ko jisme mera aksh hai...
Bhul jao mujhe bhul jao...


He felt a sharp pain in his chest like someone cut his heart through a sharp knief. He can feel a string of warm liquid flowing down from his chest. He knew its not the rain water. Its red... Its his blood... Flowing by piercing his heart.


He clutched his chest hard as he can't breath. Falling down on the knee he let out a scream.


The world around him is spining. Zoya's voice is echoing every where BHUL JAO MUJHE BHUL JAO MUJHE ASAD... BHUL JAOOO...


NAHIII...


His mind screamed, Bhul ja use Asad bhul ja use. Suna nahi tune usne kya kaha, SHE IS ENGAGED. Woh kisi aur ki hai... Uski Dil ki gehraion main kisi aur ka naam likha hai... Uske dil par uske ruh par uske jism ke har ek jareh par kisi aur ka haqu-e-inayat hai. Uske dil-e-riyasat ka sultan koi aur hai. Tu nahi... Na woh teri thi na woh teri hai aur na hi kabhi hogi.. Bhul ja use Asad bhul ja


He closed his eyes. As a scene appear infront of his eye where a guy kissing HIS ZOYA!! Making her moaning and screaming... Her milky skin under a rough lips which causing her squirming arching back in pleasure..


His fist tightened teeth greeted... Only he wanted to pierce the limb limb of that man for even touching his Zoya.


YESS! She Was HIS
She Is HIS &
She Will Be HIS.
No one can separate HIS Zoya from him. No one...


'Tu Mera Nahi,
Toh Kisika Nahi
Main Tera Nahi...
Toh Zinda Nahi'


Precap: "Zoya..."
A husky voice greeted her from behind...
"You are mine Zoya and i'll make u belive it tonight..."
"Aaahhh..."


buhahahaha i know i am evil. I supposed to write an hot 17+ work but i thought to skip it 4 a while. Coz this will be my 1st 17+ work & m a bit nervous and also m getting a very little time due to my admisson selection & all. And this is the PART ONE. Next will be PART TWO of CONFFESSION OF A DANGEROUS MIND


TILL THEN BEAR THE CRAP



Soumya :)

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