Swaron os: I walk in the rain

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...Diya...

@...Diya...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice OS...Sharon was kissing her imagination. 😆
Love mein kuch bhi kar rahi hai ye ladki 😆
Swayam was surprised but he recovered himself quick enough ..The cycle ride , the getting drenched in the rain were all amazingly written.. Good work lali 🤗

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Vishaka

@-Vishaka-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awwwee such a lovely os

lov it...
Swaron cute rain moment was awesom

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Megha

@megsy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awww lalll...this was sooo cute!!

Mazaa aaya whn swayam caught her hallucinating. ...and the poem was superb as always...

Got to see the kid side of sharon...the end was sweet n beautiful

And u had to had to had to include ice cream in it!!!! ;) ; p

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Ta you didnt tell me you wrote an OS😭 Anyway it was wow, simply beautiful😳I love the way you wrote itSo simple yet so romantic. Thanks for the PM😃

P.S - Dude start a writing gallery😆

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wonderful and adorable lovely os... sharon and swayan romantic imagination
just awesome

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Lalita 🤗
Sharon dancing and dreaming about swayam was so cutely penned down. I love rains and now reading this i am falling hard mahn, i want tannu!
Lol seriously it was amazing! Sharon is mad in lovvee here n swayam caught her doing that crazy stuff 😆

I loved the lines by you, walk in the rain, truly fantastic. I could feel the emotions you tried to depict through them.

It was lovely and mesmerizing my friend!