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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc concept. Geet ka name ashi h.
. Aur wo dev ki wife h.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Episode One

"Daddi Maa" Nakul the Head Stewart came running breathless "Daddi Maa Daddi Maa Gaadi aa gayi "

" okey okey everything should be like that as I instructed " Mistress of this royal mension Savitri Devi Khuraana ordered and rushed toward main entrance door

"Yes Daddi Maa everything is ready exactly according to ur instructions " Nakul reassured from behind

But why she rushed toward entrance? For whom she was waiting so anxiously?

" goo..goood aaafterrrnoon Daa-daddi Maa ? " person standing at entrance wished her stuttering Was Savitri Devi waiting for this guy ? An average built boy next door wearing heavy glasses and oiled hair.

"Addi hum kabse apka intzaar kar rahe hai…per aab akele (alone) u promised me to take them with you " Daddi Maa looked at Addi surprisingly like she was expecting someone else with him

This boy next door was non other than Aaditya Sharma or Addi as everyone call him. Head of highly qualified professional staff work for KC .The most trusted person on whomKhuraana Constructions and Khuraana family trust.Khuraana family a family of just two persons the Lady herself Savitri Devi and her grand son the Managing Director of KCMaan Singh Khuraana .One among Country's topmost aristocrat businessman

" Daddi Maa hows this possible ?…If Addi gives a promise aur usko fulfill na kare...wait for a moment " Addi grinned ear to ear and ran toward car just behind him outside entrance .He opened back door.

"Daddi Maa yeh rahi apki Amaanat " Addi looked at Daddi Maa pointing his hand toward someone sitting inside car.

Savitri Devi rooted to the spot was not able to believe her eyes.Was that true ?

" Plz come out ghar aa gaya " Addi requested the person still inside car.

Stuck dumb Daddi Maa at last moved steadily toward car .

A young girl having fair complexion with lightbrown eyes came out of car hesitatingly holding a about a year old child in her lap.Child was sleeping resting head on her shoulder. Girl placed not a single step forward .Her eyes were still down like she had not courage to face Daddi Maa

Daddi came near her. Examined head to toe for a while "Ashi why are you feeling uneasy ? Be comfortable beta.This is your home.I know this is not easy for you Even I never thought I ll have to welcome you like this …By the way u might hav estimated who I am…"

" aap …aapko….wo maine…I recognized you Daddi Maa…" hesitatingly she said "I hav seen you pic "

" Apne hamari photo dekhi hai…Kya humko koi yaad bhi karta tha…" she started to cry bitterly.

So girl took a step...her name was Ashi.She came forward held one shoulder of Daddi with one hand to console her.She was in some deep grief which both shared. Thats why it was also hard for Ashi to control her emotions coming out in from of tears.

"Daddi Maa I am the one who is responsible for every pain you are bearing. But believe me I never did anything intentionally…plz forgive me …plzzz " she pleaded for forgiveness.

"No no you are not responsible …" Daddi wiped her tears and took Ashi's face in her hands

"I think first of all we should go inside " Addi interfered smelling the seriousness of situation

" Ji ji chaliye hum andar chalte hai…apne he dukh main hum yeh bhul gaye I hav to welcome my daughter in law ..aur hamare ghar k chirag ka bhi sawagat karna hai ." she rolled hand over lil baby's head.

" That's way I am living ..Can't return your son per apki amaanat Apke Dev ki nishani ko aap tak la saku…Yeh Aarav hai Daddi Ma " she gav lil baby to Daddi Maa

Nakul came with Aarti Tali to welcome Ashi and Aarav who were coming to KM first time.Daddi gav baby back to Ashi to perform Aarti

Daddi Maa performed Aarti and brought Ashi and Aarav inside .Addi left for his home after fulfilling his duty given by Daddi Maa

" I think you are too much tired .Your room is ready beta go and take some rest.I ll send tea to you room.Sham ko dil khol kar baat karegay." She rolled her hand on Ashi's hair.

Deepak other servant in the house had already placed luggage in the room upstairs .Daddi accompanied her to room

"Next to this is Dev's room.But I myself decided not to give you that room.If I had asked to prepare that room for you …sirf apko dard he milta waha…us room main har taraf sirf aap Dev ko he dudhti(search)." Sighed " let it go take some rest"

" I have no problem Daddi Maa what ever you will..wo theek hoga " Ashi replied

Giving a fad smile Daddi Maa leaves room.Ashi put little boy on bed who was sleeping on her shoulder till now.

" What a destiny you have !!! " Ashi mumbled rolling her hand calmly on boy's cheek. He felt bit uneasiness and started to cry.

" No baby don't cry.Main hu apke pass" she petted him and he stopped crying again went in deep sleep.

Knock at the door.Her attention go diverted .

" Madam may I come in ?…I brought tea for you " Nakul was there outside waiting for permission

"Plz come in the door is open"

"Good afternoon Madam…tea for you " placing tray on table he said

" thanx bhayia…plz let it be there I will have after some time " she said smilingly " by the way whatys ur name bhayia ji ?"

" Madam ji mera naam Nakul hai aur main yahan bachpan se he kaam karta hu "

" I m asking u bhayia so plz don call me madam ji…mera naam Ashi hai u can take my name…bahut strange lagta hai if some one call me madam ji " she cleared

"But you are Bahu of Khuraana family how can I take your name …all right I will call you Didiji " he suggested " Dev bhai ji ko bhi bhai ji he kahta tha main….but our chotte saab no one can call him by any other name" sighed

" Chote saab !! " she repeats

" Maan Sir …" he cleared

"Oh Mr Maan Singh Khraana …where is he .Office main " hesitatingly she said

"U don know Didiji he went back to US …The incident happened after that he came here for few days.He is supervising a big project there... ll return after few weeks"

"Dadi Maa is alone in this big mansion.." amazed she said

" Ji Didiji mazboori hai unki kya kar sakti hai…Maan Sir he never listen to her and Dev bahi ji also." a sudden pause " Per aab aap aa gayi hai …hop u ll take care of her"

" Ji bhayia I ll try my best "

" Didi ji main bhi kya baton main laga liya aapko .Plz hav your tea…and if u need some thing yeh intercom hai just make a call .Okey main chalta hu" saying this he leaves room

" Kya kahani hai yeh ...such an aristocratic family but in the name of relationship every thing every heart is empty" she mumbled

" But this is my life now ….I hav no other option….for Aarav ..for …" she hided her face in her hands and started to cry bitterly

Hop u ll like this plz give ur feed backs..Waiting for comments and likes...



Love

Sonia




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Edited by Sonia.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏👏 emotional start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh so ashi has entered KM with grandson lovely dear continue soon!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
interesting concept.banner was innovative n beautiful.Is Dev no more?I'm confused. is Aarav r dev & Ashi's son?Is Ashi Geet or her look alike?
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely emotional update.. te way ashi entering k with her baby and te way dadi welcoming was so emotional.. now she will make my maan to bend and she will knock some sense in his mind abt relation..i love te starting very much..
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start
ashi with a child arav and where is dev
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really emotional one ...awesome start ...
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for newff
and starting is too good
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Posted: 12 years ago
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like concept of story totaly unique. update soon. waiting

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