TAAREY FF jeele zara chap 4 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
interesting concept dear!😊
please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
sorry guys mai sabko rply nhi kar payi bt dis message is to all hu commented on my new ff
thanx evry 1 i m glad u all liked my ff
n 1 more thing guys wid dis nw i m a senior member yehh i completed my 200 posts yess
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
nice concept...as always, lookin forward to this...
continue soon...and congos for being s senior member =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
mein comment nahi kero ge bt will say i am scared after reading the concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Sab kyum chirppy taanise angry????

I want swayam to b wth taani...

He can help to come out frm depression n insecurity
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Hey shanaya congrats 4 bcuming a senior mem :D

N yay dis was ur 2nd concept na...4 which i was eagerly...plz post d 1st part soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
hi guys sorry late hu na kya kru late lativ huu
so here is chap 1
scene is after when taani asked rey is she making things difficult for rey. and rey says yes she is. she ran from there crying and then rey also realises that use taani se aise baat nhi krni chahiye thi so he thought to talk 2 taani n started searching 4 her in whole college n was not able to find her anywhere
in evening at taayam's place
extra info swayam n tauji r not home n dey both r k with each other
taani was sitting in her room on her bed she was thinking about rey.
taani: kya mai rey ko sach mai force kr rhi hu m i being a burden for him
suddenly a voice came from other side of room
v:tum mere liye kabhi burden nhi thi or nahi hogi
after hearing d voice taani turned 2 d place where d voice came from she saw him REY she whispered but dat was heared by rey he came in from window n sat near her tears were dere in both of deres eyes rey came close to taani n cupped her face n said
taani mai bohot bura hu na i m sorry maine vo sab jaan poochkar nhi kaha tha i m sorry taani vo mai tauji se jhooth bolkar thak chuka huu
taani: rey plz ap sorry mat kahiye its not ur fault or ab hame jhooth nhi bolna padega or i told tauji d whole truth
rey was stunned now he dint knew what 2 say
d only thing he did was hugged taani as tight as possible
rey: taani plz mujhe chodke mat jana i vl not b able 2 live without u plz taani plz mai...mai tumhe nhi jane dunga plz yr plz
taani:rey mai apko nhi chodungi plz app bhi mujhe chodke mat jana plz
dey both were crying dey both cant stay away from each other dey were hugging as if dey will never leave each other dey both were saying d words as if dere words vl never let dem go away from each other
soon dey broke d hug n den rey took taani's hand in his hand n said
taani u r my luv my jaan mai apni jaan ke bina nhi reh paunga so hw can u think i vl leave u huh
taani: reyy... n she hugged him again
rey:taani bas chup...shh...shh no ab mat roo i ll never let u go away from me shh...chup ek dum chup
n den wid dat he broke d hug n n cupped her face
jab maine keh diya dat i wont leave u so y r u crying my jaan bas ab chupp nw u sleep plz
n here arrives our naughty taani
she nodded her head in no
rey said qq meri jaan ab kya hua
taani:u pick me up
rey:smiled n said meri jaan u r becoming more naughtier den me huh not bad
n taani blushed here our hero picked her up n laid her on her bed n was about to live when taani catched his hand and said
my prince charming can u plz sleep wid me today
with dat rey got a wide smile on his face n den he said k he started 2 go near d sofa of d room wen taani said kaha ja rahe ho rey n den rey said jaan sone to jaunga nah n den taani said to waha kaha n den he said to or kaha
here taani smiled n said BED MY FUTURE HUBBY
n here rey was full astonished he was not able 2 utter a word n den taani stud up n took his hand n bought him near d bed n said
chalo ab dekh kya rhe ho soo
n rey said tumhe koi prob nhi hai i mean v r not married taani n den taani cut him n said
rey i trust u n dats it nw cum n dey both slept
taani's head was on rey's chest n his arms around her waist
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waise to guys maine socha nhi tha dat i will update but becoz of my sweet di my viji di i updated sorry viji di agar apko accha na lage toh so dis 1 was a surprise 4 u only i hope it was good. guys i hope sabko accha laga hoga plz hit d like button n plz plz plz comment
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😊😊😊till den bye 😊😊😊
guys i know u all r confused ki maine jo likha tha usse its not matching nah but nw it is like dis i made some changes

i m sorry i hope u all enjoy
Edited by shanya8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
amazing chapter dear...thank god finally u updated.
ur stry without romance...😲.daal mein kuch to kaala h...😆😆

just kidding...that cutu romance was so nyc...
plz update next soon and PM me..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Awesome chapter
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
thanx for d surprise,...
i loved it...
n awesome update...
taarey were so cute n adorable...
bt u n no romance...
sm thng s fishy...
so plz update soon

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