FF:Seducing Mr.Virat ch51 pg140 Imp.Note pg 142 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..! like the haldi ceremony..waiting for next..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update but she still scare about her past
what happen when her past come and stand in her present
update soon and haldi reasam was nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
update soon ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...
virat ws so desperate to meet hr...
so ws manvi...
virat is jus so completely in love wid her... wow...
loved it... n finally haldi rasam is ovr...
it ws really so sweet of virat dat he applied haldi on hr frst...
thanx 4 d pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update i just loved them please do continue soon and thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

give me 2 days dear 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry for the late cmnt i read ur update long back was nt able to cmnt frm my phne happy that haldi rasm was done virat was first one to apply haldi on manvi update soon make them married soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanxyz

Sry for the late cmnt i read ur update long back was nt able to cmnt frm my phne happy that haldi rasm was done virat was first one to apply haldi on manvi update soon make them married soon


ya ya sure dont worry 😆 its ok..lv to read ur comment..will update soon..glad u like it 😳
plz keep reading 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..!! this is amazingly amazing 😉
Naughty virat 😆
Coming to antakshari me in Virat's team 😳
You are doing great sweetheart..!! 😃
Update soon nd do pm me 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago



Chapter_34

Manvi was anxiously waiting for clock struck 8:00 pm..
She once again looked at dressing mirror to check..yes she was looking super gorgeous in red sari types lehnga nd chunar..
Her heart was drumming inside..how her prince charming will fulfil his promise nd will write his name on her hand himself.
Only the thought made her blush..Manvi's mehndi function will gonna start at 10:00 at night..as whole night celebration was decided for girls..nd boys night out of home..Let the girls enjoy..
5,4,3,2,1
She sighed as it was 8:00 atlast.Excitingly she went up to terris as Virat had sent her note to come up on terris at right 8:00.
Manvi's heart was hammering inside her bossom..looking here nd there making sure no one is looking at her She reached on terris..Yes he was there..it was dark on terris cause after seeing the lights on..Anyone could come upstairs..but moon light was enough as it was full moon...It was his back..She hugged him from behind..resting hr face on his back.."I Love you..Dekho mein aagae,Sirf tumhare lie.."
Manvi kissed his back..She closed her eyes..He turned kissed her hands,tht were resting on his chest..She hugged him again..He wrapped her in his arms..
Manvi was unable to find the same pleasure in his arms..The same warmth she could feel wd even closed eyes were missing..her eyes became narrowed.To change her doubt in reality atlast he spoke "I Love u too Manvi,Mein jaanta tha tum aaj bhi mujhse or sirf mujhse pyaaar krti ho..!"
How she could not recognise tht horrible voice tht keeps haunted her every day nd night..Manvi aparted wd a jerk just in a second..Yes he was Sid..It was not less thn a nightmare for her..She was Damn Shockef
Manvi frowned..She was breathing heavily..How cheap she was feeling..why why she touched him..How she being so careless nd allowed tht jerk to "touch" her again.
Manvi was about to go back.But he closed the door of terris..
Sid:"Manvi please ek baar meri baat sun lo..Just once.."
Manvi in anger"Ab kehne sunne ko kuch nhi bacha hai sid..mera rasta chhor do"
Sid:"Manvi mujhe maaf krdo..mein bohat bara bewakoof tha ke meine us tia jaisi larki ki khatir tumhein hurt kia..Meine tumhein kho kr jana ke tum mere lie kya thi..Mera yakeen kro..meine tumhein kho kar sab kuch kho dia ..He started crying like a kid. That made manvi listen to him till he completed.He continued"Manvi jisey mein mohabbat samajhta raha wo sirf ek dhoka tha,Sirf mera illusion..Mera khwaab..Uski Taabir to tum thi..Meri zindagi ki haqeeqat tum thi..sirf tum..
Sid held manvi's hand..
"Mein janta hun manvi,Yeh sab kuch meri waje se hua hai..Meine tumhein Virat Vadhera ke pass phasa dia na..mujhe maaf krdo..meri hi waje se tum aaj is mushkil mein ho..yahan aney ki tumhein itni bari keemat chhukani pari.Tumhein forcefully us se shadi krni par rhi hai..But u dont worry mein ab sab kuch theek kr dunga.Manvi looked at him confused..he was continusly crying while speaking.. Hum yahan se bohat door chale jayenge..Hum shadi kar lenge. Kabhi peeche mur ke nhi dekhengey..I promise kuch nhi hoga..Mera yaqeen kro mein tumhein bohat pyar dunga main.."
His sentence left in between as she moved away his hand from hers..
Manvi cleared"Mr.Siddhart Malhotra..Aap kis ghalat fehmi mein ji rahe hein..Mein..?or tumse pyar? Socha bhi kaise ke mein aaj bhi tumhein chahti hongi..ya aaj bhi tumhari baato mein aajaungi.."
Sid cut in between"Manvi mera yaqeen karo.."
Manvi smiled:"Kiska yaqeen karu uska jisne mujhe har qadam pe dhoka dia..Mein to yeh nhi jaanti ke hmare relationship ka konsa hissa is plan se khali tha..
Or kya kaha tumne..han ye sach hai sid ke mein tumhari waje se yahan hun..tumne ye sb mujhe apni life se nikalne ke lie kia tha na...Aur aaj mein khud kisi ki life hun..Jiska dil mere lie dharakta hai..Sid mujhe tumse koi shikayat nhi.kiunke agar tum aisa na krte to mein kbhi nhi jaan paati sachi mohabbat kia hoti..Mein nhi jaan pati ke virat hi meri asli mohabbat hai..us se mil ke meine jaana ke mohabbat hoti kya hai.."
She continued:"Sid jisey mein mohabbat samajhti rahi wo sirf ek dhoka tha,Sirf mera illusion..Mera khwaab..Uski Taabir koi or nhi virat hai...Meri zindagi ki haqeeqat sirf virat hai..sirf virat.. " She repeated his lines.."Sid mujhe tumse koi shikayat nhi..even i should thank u..tumne mujhe meri zindagi se milaya..Jeeney ka maqsad dia..Lekin phir bhi meri Zindagi mein tumhare lie koi jaga nhi hai..chale jao yahan se..or phir kbhi mat aana.."
Manvi turned to go but he spoke. "U are right..tumhari zindagi mein shayad mere lie jaga honi bhi nhi chahie..Lekin tum meri zindagi mein hamesha ek achhi yaad bn ke rahogi..He wiped his eyes..Mein tumhein kbhi nhi bhul paunga..Ho sakey to mujhe maaf krdena..Tum apni zindagi ke saarey darwaze mere lie band kr bhi do ..Meri zindagi ke sarey darwaze tumhare lie hamesha khule raheinge..Good bye..Saying this he left her on terris..
Sid left while crying..Virat was climbing up the stairs nd he was running down..Virat got hit by his shoulder but cause of dark..he was unable to saw him clearly..Sid left running out of the house..
Virat was in hurry so didnt take it serious nd went upstairs..Manvi was lost in her thoughts..Virat hugged him from behind.."M so sorry for being late my princes..I knw mein pure 13 mints late hun..m sorry..He held his ears.."
Manvi smiled nd hugged him back..Her eyes became wet thinking abt the fact..If virat dznt came into her life..So her life was aim less wdout him..She had not any aim to live life..She thought..nd determined again tht she would never let him go far from him..She confessed to show her emotions of her for him.
"I love u virat"
Virat embraced him more tight.."I love u too my life.."
She was resting hr head on his chest for a long time..
Dil Ibadat kar rha hai
Dharkane meri sun
Tujhko mein kar lun hasil lagi hai yhi dun
Virman looked at eachother ..the flame of passions were visible in their eyes..
Dil Ibadat kar rha hai
Dharkane meri sun
Tujhko mein kar lun hasil lagi hai yhi dun
and they closed their eyes..
Virat attached his head wd her head..their nose were touching eachother's.
Zindagi ki shakh se lun kuch hasin pal mein chun..
Tujhko mein krlun hasil lagi hai yhi dhun..
Virat tighten his grip on her waist..
Jo bhi jitne pal jiyun
Unhein tere sang jiyun
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera..
Usey tere sang jiyun..

Virat kissed her lower lip..
Manvi could hardly bare his act she touched his cheek lightly..
Jo bhi saansen mein bharun..
Unhein tere sang bharun..
Chahe jo ho rasta usey tere sang chalun..
Their kiss became deepen more..She creased his cheeks nd slowly her hand moved up into his hairs..while kissing..
Dil Ibadat kar rha hai
Dharkane meri sun
Tujhko mein kar lun hasil lagi hai yhi dun
They aparted for breath..
But he was not able to control his emotions..He ran down his kisses on her neck nd jaw bone..
Mujh ko dey tu mit janey
Ab khud se dil mil janey
She moaned on her crazy nd hard kisses on her sensitive parts..
Kiun hai yeh itna fasla..
Manvi turned from him..showing her back to him..To get some relief after such passionate acts by him..
But he was not in a mood of leaving her far from him for even a second..Virat hugged her from behind her fingers almost dugging in her delicate waist skin..
Lamhe ye phir na aney..
He removed her silky hairs from her back..Her sexy back was clearly visible from her back less choli..
Tu inko na dey janey..
He pressed her lips on her back..She closed her eyes
Tu khud ko mujh pe dey luta..
Manvi again unable to bare his shower of hot kisses on her back so she turned to face him..
This time their eyes met ad they lost into eachothers eyes..May be to check the intensity of emotions..
Tujhe tujhse jor lun..
Kahin khud se jor lun..
Couldnot resist for minute even..As being vampire..yes thirsty for her love not of blood,he suck her neck nd shoulder..
Mere jismon jaan mein aa
Teri khushbu orh lun..
Her nails were clunching his shirt while his hands were busy in untying the dori of her choli..Where the kisses nd sucks were at their peak..
Jo bhi saansein mein bharun
Unhein tere sang bharun..
Chahe jo ho rasta usey tere sang chalun..
Manvi felt herself weak on her knees..she held him so tightly..Virat understood her state but his emotions were still carving for her love..He lift her up into her arms nd took her too the small extra bedroom on terris...that uses for extra guest room..
Dil Ibadat kar rha hai
Dharkane meri sun
Tujhko mein kar lun hasil lagi hai yhi dun

Virat lyied her on bed..Manvi asks for him extending her arms for him..she sat up nd now hersrlf moved her lips forward his lips nd kissed softly..Virat cupped her face.. Nd didnt came to know when little kiss got stronger nd stronger..
He lyied on her..hugging her on bed nd placed unlimited kisses on her upper beautiful feminine body..Her f**ks were redden now after again nd again brushing of lips on them...
Baahon mein dey bas jaaney
Seeney mein dey chhup jaane..
Tujh bin mein jaaun to kahan..
She slowly unbuttoned his silk Green shirt too..to seek his body's warmth to burn the coldness of her froze senses..
He moved down now wd aparted shirt from his body..nd gave her place on his bare chest..
Manvi kissed his neck,his chest nd buried her face to listen to her name from his heartbeat..
Mujhko hein tujhse paaney
Yaadon ke wo nazraaney
Ik jin pe haq ho bas mera..
He grab her choli hanging on her shoulders already losen..nd moved her down again..
Teri yaadon mein rahun..
He kissed her forehead
Tere khwaabon mein jagun..
He kissed her eyes nd she looked into his eyes directly
Mujhe dhunde jb koi teri aankhon mein milun.
He could see herself clearly in her almondanic ocean of eyes...he nuzzled on her bossom..
Jo bhi saansen mein bharun
Unhein tere sang bharun
Chahe jo ho rasta
Usey tere sang chalun..
She hugged him so tight
Nd his embrace was assurance tht he is wd her always..
Dil Ibadat kar rha hai
Dharkane meri sun
Tujhko mein kar lun hasil lagi hai yhi dun
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Manvi was sitting resting her head on his shoulder.."Virat mujhe nhi jaana.."
Virat smilingly:"If tum nhi jaogi to jevika bhabi tumhein lene upar aajayengi..so i think tum pehle hi chali jao..or apna getup bhi zara fresh krlo..vrna unke lie kuch bhi samjhna mushkil nhi hoga.."
Manvi:"2 ghante kitni jaldi guzar gaye .pta hi nhi chala.."
Virat tighten his grip on her shoulder:"Meri jaan ..ye 24 ghnte bhi bohat jldi beet jayenge..kal to is pal tum meri dulhan bn kr hmesha k lie mere pass ajaogi or koi hamein juda nhi kar payega..."They looked at into eachothers eyes nd thn manvi stood up..M going.."
Virat held her hand..lekin mera wada to abhi pura bhi nhi hua..
She turned nd to her surprise virat saw her Mehndi Cone..
Manvi blushed nd smiled widely.."Yeh to mein bhul hi gae..even mein to ye bhi bhul gae k aaj meri Mehndi hai..
Virat made her sit again beside him..nd kissed her palm first nd then write boldly
"VIRAT" in mid.
Manvi smiled nd gt very much happy..her prince charming fulfil his promise nd her dream..Manvi kissed his cheek nd asked "Tumne itni achhi mehndi kaise lagai..?"
Virat sniffed"Apki is kiss ki khatir pichhle 2 weeks se practise kr rha tha madam..
Manvi saw the time it was about to 10..virat i hv to go..
Virat kiss her forehead nd she left against her will.
Virat sighed nd smiled thinking"Only 24 hours..nd we'll continue from where we had left today"




Hey friends..hope u'll like it m extremly sorry for late..bt promise its last time..😭Next update will be in couple of days pakkka😛😛plz leave ur comments nd dont forget top hit like..sorry if anyone of u didnt get pm..will pm soon as i can do it😳Love u alll alot😳
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