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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania

update soon kiran 😊

will update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

wow heer trust prem that's we want.

ya 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
No Kiran No..

u can't take My title of Choti ekta by bringing this Deadly twist.. !!!

If u did smth wrong Then i will do even bigger Wrong by bringing bigger and Larger Twist
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

No Kiran No..


u can't take My title of Choti ekta by bringing this Deadly twist.. !!!

If u did smth wrong Then i will do even bigger Wrong by bringing bigger and Larger Twist

mummy bachao muje 😭...dont worry i am updating now 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter-34

Rampal Mansion

Rishab was sitting on the dining table. He was angrily thinking about the scene which he just saw in few minutes ago near the stairs. He remember the way Prem and Heer was looking at each other with full of love in their eyes. He remembered the way Prem was holding Heer's waist.

He was too busy in his thoughts that he didn't notice that Prem and heer came there. His thoughts was interrupted by his dad's voice

Ranjeet:- Arre Prem- Heer aao na baaitho'.

Rishab looked towards Prem and heer. Sanjana came there with a bowl in her hand, she kept it on the table. She noticed Prem was pulling chair for Heer and then he took his seat near heer after passing a sweet smile with her. Sanjana looked at them sadly.

Heer looked at Rishab, who was angrily looking at her. Just Sanjana's mom Ponam came there with servants. Ponam took her seat opposite to Ranjeet. Rishab and Sanjana were sitting opposite to Prem and Heer.

Ponam:- Prem-Heer please help yourself beta...khana shuru karo

Prem and heer smiled at ponam and started serving to each other...other also started serving themselves. Rishab looked at Heer who was serving daal to Prem

Prem (whispered to Heer):- Heer aram se last time tumne garam garam dal apne hath pe gira li thi'

Heer smiled at Prem and said, "Don't worry Prem main aram se karoungi'"

Heer (giving a curtly look to rishab):- Or waise bhi Prem'ab to mujhe in sab ki adat dalni pardegi na kyunki ab life long mujhe hi to tumahre liye yeh sab karna hai

Rishab clutched his fist while looking at heer with full of jealously and anger

Seeing Rishab's reaction Heer turned towards Prem and smiled

Heer:- haina Prem sahi kaha na maine

Prem smilingly nooded

Ponam and Ranjeet were admiringly looking at Heer-Prem and Sanjana was really feeling very sad to see the cute bonding between them'..

Ranjeet:- chalo khana shuru karo'.

Everyone started eating their food. Rishab was not in mood to have his dinner because of the scene in front of him. He saw Prem -Heer were feeding each other...smiling at each other'

Rishab's anger got increased when he saw Prem wiped the piece of rice with his thumb near Heer's lips.

Only he knows that how he's controlling his anger seeing them together.

Ranjeet:- To Prem-Heer kab bhajwa rahe ho shadi ki shenaiyan

Prem and Heer blushed

Prem:- Uncle shadi ki date abhi fix nahi hui hai...bauji ne kal hi humare family pandit ko bulaya hai...shadi ki date fix karne ke liye'.

Ponam:- Arre wah yeh to bohot achi baat hai kyun sanju

Sanjana give a weak smile to her mom

Sanjana:- Han mumma bohot hi achi baat hai

Prem and Heer smiled

Rishab (thinks):- Prem ki shadi meri Heer se...no way main aisa hargiz nahi hone dunga...muje kuch karna hoga'.

After having their dinner and having their desert, all of them were sitting in living room. After sometime Heer looked at Prem and gave him the signal "let's go from here". Prem nodded his head. Rishab was seeing all this.

Prem looked at ranjeet and said, " acha uncle ab hum chalte hain"

Ranjeet:- arre lekin itni jaldi...thordi der to roko

Prem looked at heer who nodded her head slightly saying no

Prem:- Nahi uncle bohot der ho jayegi...kal subha office bhi to jana hai

Ponam:- Lekin Prem abhi to 9 bhi nahi baje hai...thordi der to roko tum dono...rishi tu bolo na Prem ko

Rishab:- Han Prem, mom bilkul thik keh rahi hai...abhi to 9 bhi nahi baje hai...thordi der or ruk jao

Heer:- nahi!!!

All looked at Heer with shocked

Heer:- umm mera matlab hai ki...actually hume abhi Kunal ke ghar bhi jana hai...to wahan se ate ate bhi bohot der ho jayegi...haina Prem???

Prem smirked

Prem:- Han...hume kunal ke ghar bhi to jana hai

Sanjana got the hint seeing their expression that they want leave early because they want to spend some time with each other.

Sanjana:- Its ok Heer..koi baat nahi...we understand..tum logo ko kunal ke ghar bhi jana hai to der ho jayegi'.

Ranjeet:- Han sanju bilkul thik keh rahi hai...agar aisa hai hum nahi roken ge tumhe

Ponam:- Han lekin baad mein tumhe phir ana hoga yahan...or der tak rukna pardega...or us time koi bahana nahi chalega ok

Prem:- Ji anuty zarur...ab hum chal te hai

Both Prem and Heer took Ranjeet and Ponam's blessings, Heer hugged sanjana and Prem said bye to her. Heer looked glared at Rishab and Prem shook hand with him

Rishab:- Ok Prem phir ana...HEER KO LEKAR

Rishab looked at Heer who angrily glared him back

Prem:- han kyun nahi'

Then both Prem and Heer left from there

Rishab (thinks):-Heer ko to tum laoge Prem lekin yahan dinner karne nahi balki heer ko muje saupne...yeh mera wada hai tumse Prem Juneja!!!

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On the way

Prem was continuously talking to Heer but Heer was lost in her thoughts...She was really very confused at Rishab's reaction

Heer:- Yeh Rishab muje kuch thik nahi lag raha hai...aj kitni ajeeb tarike se behave kiya aj usne mere sath...kuch to gardbard hai...kuch to chal raha hai uske dimang main...lekin kya???

Prem saw Heer was lost in her own thoughts and she wasn't paying attention to him at all. After few minutes he stopped his car. And when Heer realize that Prem stopped his car she looked outside, she thought maybe they reached at Maan villa. But she was shocked to see the unknown place'.

Heer (while looking outside):- Prem yeh hum kahan pohoch gayen hain???

And when she didn't get the answer from Prem she turned to look at Prem but again she got shocked to see Prem wasn't there at his seat

Heer got scared

Heer:- Prem!! Prem!!!

But she turned when she heard the sound of the opening the car's door...she saw Prem was ther at her side...seeing Prem Heer took the breath in relief.

Prem:- Ghabarao mat Heer...bahar aao

Heer came out of the car looking here and there'

Heer:- Yeh tum kahan lekar aaye ho muje'kitna andhera hai yahan'or yahan to koi bhi nahi hai'

Prem:- Han main janta hun yahan koi bhi nahi hai...isiliye to main tumhe yahan laya hun...jahan humare ilawa or koi bhi na ho

Heer:- Matlab???

Prem:- Matlab main tumhe samjhata hun...aao mere sath

Prem held her hand while walking towards their destination

Heer:- Lekin Prem kuch batao to sahi...kahan leke ja rahe ho muje?

Prem stopped in his track and turned and look towards Heer

Prem:- Heer tumhe bharosa haina mujhpe???

Heer:- Prem!!! Yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hai'

Prem:- to bus phir kuch mat pocho..or chalo mere sath...just trust me

Heer is now really confused that what's going...she wasn't scared because she trust her Prem more than herself'.

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Prem and Heer reached near a lake...it was really beautiful and serene place...and the moon light was putting extra glow on the beauty of the place...Heer was awed to see such a beautiful...this was the first time she was coming here.

Heer:- Premmm!!! It's so beautiful..Wow

Prem smiled seeing Heer's expression

Prem:- I am glad ki tumhe yeh jagha pasand aai

Heer smilingly looked at prem and start heading towards the lake'and sit near the lake

Prem smiled and came and sit beside Heer

Prem:- tumhe pata hai Heer jab muje is baat ka ehsaas hua tha ki tum mere liye kitni special ho, ki tumhare bina meri life kuch bhi nahi hai

Heer smiled

Prem:- tab maine soch tha ki main yahan..is jagha tumse confess karounga...lekin us time pe tum mujhse naraz thi ki muje changing room main apne pyar ka confession karna parda'

Both Prem and Heer started giggling

Heer putted her head on prem's shoulder

Heer:- lekin muje tumhara confession changing room mein bh acha laga'

Prem:- lekin Heer main aj yahan tumhe kisi or waje se laya hun

Heer looked at prem

Heer:- kis waje se???

Prem:- Heer dekho...humari sagai ho gai hai...or kuch hi dino mein humari shadi bhi ho jayegi...lekin main tumse yeh kehna chahta hun...ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye lekin hum hamesha best friends rahenge'

Heer:- Prem yeh bhi koi kehne wali baat hai'obviously

Prem:- Han main janta hun heer lekin phir bhi main tumse yeh baat clear karna chahta hun'ki humari shadi ke baad humare beech ki dosti kabhi khatam nahi hongi'agar tmahre dil main koi aisi baat hai jo tum apne pati se share nahi kar sakti, to tum apne best friend'tumhare prem se share kar sakti ho'.

Prem cupped her face

Prem:- kabhi mujhse kuch mat chupana heer'chahe kuch bhi ho jaye'kyunki agar hum apne apno se kuch bhi chupate hai to rishton mein dooriya aajati hai'...or main nahi chahta ki humare beech kisi bhi tarha ki koi bhi doori aaye'.I just don't want to lose you heer'.kyunki tum meri jaan se bhi zyada kimti ho mere liye'.

Heer:- I promise prem main kabhi tumse kuch nahi chupaoungi'.

Prem smiled and kissed her on her forehead and hugged her..Heer hugged him back tightly

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[next chapter will be on next thread 😃]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Tufan Ke aane se Pahele Ki shanti Lag rahi hai Mujh ko.. 😕

Dare U show Prem Wrong
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Posted: 12 years ago

finally premeer, premeer, premeer!!!! awesome update. i was imagining the place and the two love birds. i hope they will be best friends always.

i'm scared of rishab.
plz update soon. congratulation in advance for new thread
thank you for this nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the Fabulouse update
loved premeer sceans alott...
Thanks for the pm
eargerly waiting for the next part please update soon... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for the Fabulouse update kiran

update soon... :)

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