VIRMAN ss : ACCIDENTALLY IN LOVE...new update 01.02.14@pg 122 - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

OMG this mean virat doesn't like manvi in real ???😲 Hailaa !!~~😛ahaan interesting :D virat is smart enought haan maya se churkare pane keliyee !!~~ but we can't blame him too !! look at mayaa eww !!~😉😆 virat pov was portrayed so well disha👏👏 Fabulous update 👍🏼 ahem ahem so virat is not feeling bad after even manvi shouting at him !!~~❤️😉😃 this is awesome !!~~ 👍🏼loved it ❤️now looking forward for the update !!~~ will be eagerly waiting :)) plz continue soon naa !!~~ i wanna read more !!~~ thanx for the upcoming pm Disha :D




read ahead.you'll have all your answers.😃don't say eww.she's just a little over the top dramatic.not bad at heart.😛thanks so much for the comment yamin.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanhus

the update was AWESOME!!!

finally u revealed why virat all of a sudden proposed manvi & what manvii did..
its freaking!!!!
continue soon plss

(having exams,, so for a month um stopping my long comments)




screw ur exams!!!i want long comments.😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daydreamer9




screw ur exams!!!i want long comments.😭



yup screw my exams plsss!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanhus



yup screw my exams plsss!!!!



thought of getting regular with updates.should i hold back till ur exams r over?
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Posted: 12 years ago

hello be...autiful people!!!i'm done with chapter 5.which is completely from 'HIS' POV☺️

so u can't kill me even if u want to.😛i know this is not good.but still plz give it a try.







CHAPTER 5(complete)




VIRAT'S POV☺️




2 days back (at the caf)



The people here disgust me. All are here for their own selfish motives. Some want my notes, some want to get recognized, some want to be friends with me because of my rich background. And girls…let not say anything. I want to respect them but they're simply not worth it.


But then why not to enjoy the royal treatment while I can have it?

Bhai…..i'm missing u. You're my only true friend. Please come back soon.


"Virat..." maya came to me crying n that broke the chain of my thoughts. Why is she crying? I hate when anyone cries. I was in a fix.


"You don't love me? Why virat? Where did I lack? I'm beautiful. I'm sexy. I have every quality to be your girl." so full of self-appraisal. I swear if she did not cry that much I would never had succumbed to her proposal of being in a relationship.


"Who said that?" whoever you are…thank you so much!!!


"Manvi.she said….she said you don't love me anymore. You…you're gonna leave me n propose her in next two days." she sniffed. Why so melodramatic?

Manvi?huh?that's impossible.i mean how can she?naaa……

Virat..!!!This is your golden chance to get rid of maya!!!



"Maya….listen real careful.i hate to say this... but ...she was telling the truth. I'm sorry. I don't know how this all happened. Please forgive me." Spare me….please!!!


"I hate you virat" maya said dramatically and ran away.one hell of a dramaqueen.


Now ms. Manvi chowdhury it's time to give you the taste of your own medicine.

You want to get proposed? That you will. I have to make this break up believable to Maya. Or else who knows if she tries to get back together? I shuddered at the thought itself.

What to do?what to do?


Yes!!!!Propose Manvi in front of the whole college but... in the worst possible way!!!!


If this is the only way to get rid of maya…..then be it. But I'll have to make sure she doesn't fall for me. She's the only one who's unaffected of my charms and it must stay that way.


I hate girls when they drool over me. What am I? Chicken wings?

I know what to do but the question is how?


Chill virat .You still have two days. You'll definitely think of a way.



Present day


"Virat ….again you've disappeared!!!"mom chided as soon as I picked up the phone.


"Mom it's raining."


"I know love. But you'll catch cold. And how will u get home? Tell me where u are. We'll pick u up on the way."


"No mom I'll walk home. Don't need a ride."


"You'll fall ill."


"I'll be fine mom."


"But…."


"Mom I'll be fine." I cut the phone with a smile on my lips. Mothers….they can be over caring sometimes…no… most of the times.


Her mom is also like that. The affection in her eyes said it all.

I haven't seen such expressive eyes ever before. They say it all for her.


What the hell am I thinking? Why am I thinking of her?


She's rude!!!Super rude!!!But only to me. I've never seen her talk to anyone like that.so why do I get this special treatment from her?


Well what can be said she's a weirdo. Hell…who in the world doesn't like rain? I mean how can anyone not like rain? Weird girl.

But the thing that's itching so much is why amn't I feeling bad even after getting all those screaming sessions from her. This is weird.What has gotten into me?


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On reaching home I found mom standing at the door with a towel in her hand.

I say nothing and lean forward.


"You never listen to me.you'll fall ill now."she scolded while drying my hair.


"Mom…I'll be……..achchhooo"mom is always right.


"Virat!!!! Off to your room. Get changed. I'm coming with medicines." Mom headed towards her room.


I darted towards my room upstairs. Can't afford to fall ill right now.

New project to be introduced tomorrow.

Is she as excited for the project as I am?

No!!! not again.virat stop thinking about her.

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I had an overdose of her today. That's why she's on my mind like this. I concluded as I got myself changed in trousers n a tee.

I had never expected her to be at the restaurant. And have no idea why I got happy when I saw her. Was so confused at my own reaction.

Her brother is one hell of a smart kid. And a funny one too.

That makes me miss bhai even more. I'll call him now.


"Bhai!!"


"Relax kiddo. What happened?"


"So many things that I don't even know where to start from."I really was confused as hell.


"And this includes a girl,right?"I could sense his grin.

How does he know?


"Virat..I'm your brother. I know you better than you know yourself." He stated as it was the most obvious thing.


"Bhai I'm not being able to understand one thing. This girl…"


"ah..ha…so this is about a girl."bhai cut me off in the middle.


"Stop bhai. This girl……I don't really like her nor do I dislike her. She's always too rude to me. but the fact is I don't feel bad at any of her behavior. " Can I get anymore confused?


"My stupid little brother….can I quote Shakespeare?"


"Not again with your Shakespeare" I groaned.


"hahaha….listen to this.'So true a fool is love that in your will...Though you do any thing, he thinks no ill."


"What rubbish!!!i don't love her." Do i??Hell no!!

"Bye bhai. You're of no help."


"You'll thank me someday" and he smirked. I just know.


I cut the call. Bhai got me confused.

Can it be? Can I be? In love? With her? Accidentally?

NOOO!!!!

Shut up virat!!!just because she's different doesn't mean you have to get attracted to her.

Stay away from her. Stay away!!!

"Virat…you have two options. This 'kara' which will make you alright overnight or the tablets which will take days. "Mom said while trying to stifle her smile.i didn't realize when mom had entered the room.

I know her game. I went for the 'kara'.it's disgusting but effective.

"Goodnight love. Sweet dreams. "She ruffled my hairs n went away.

I plopped onto the bed. Yeah right!!!I can have sweet dreams with so much confusion.




Next morning

Nah…next morning will be in the next chapter.the precap will be in nxt chapter.n another sneak peak into the next chapter cz i'm almost done with that chapter .😉


SHE HAD A CRUSH ON ME!!!!my lips curved into a smile.n then I frowned.she had a crush on me n now she's over me.should I be happy or should I be sad?this is a good thing or a bad thing?wait why does it matter to me anyway.i'm going crazy.I should find a suitable surface to bang my head on.



song for this update

counting crows- accidentally in love

this is not a recommendation...it's a must.if u don't listen to the lyrics...it'll be entirely your loss.😉




leave without liking...i'll be more than happy.coz i'll stop writing.writing doesn't excite me anymore anyway.it's only for ur love that i'm writing.so keep on liking n commenting n i'll give u updates.stop with that n i'll stop updating too.😛n to hell with updating my pm list.it's painful.so will pm everyone. new readers who want pm...just send me a buddy request.


love u guys.muahh!!!!


Edited by daydreamer9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Short bt awsum update...
Wantd to knw Virat's POV...n voila...u came up wid one...thankuuu...🤗
But y did Manvi lie to Maya dat Virat will propose her...Newayz...thnx to her lie dat Virat got this golden opportunity to get rid of his so calld gf...
Virat's thoughts on Maya were really hilarious...😆😆
Thanx for revealing the mystery behind such a unique proposal...but Virat seems to b totally lost in Manvi's thoughts...m absolutely luving the story ...Luv ur style of writing dear...
Hope u wont keep us waiting fr loong...
Plzz update asap n plz do pm me for ur future updates!!! 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
Woow...Wot a timing...just commented for ur previous update n to my surprise u hav updated the nxt part by thn...😃

*Unres*

Welll m luving this "completely lost in Manvi's thoughts"Virat ...n nw ...all thanks to his Bhai...he has becum a total confused soul 😆
Plz cont asap n thnx a loot for the pm!!!😊

Edited by alicemath - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for PM. Superb update. Virat is in love? Loving your story. Looking forward to next update,
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Posted: 12 years ago
leave without liking i'll be more than happy. No way dear... Awesome update .. Virat n Maya's Convo was hilarious ... Virat going to propose Manvi to get rid of Maya 😆 Now totally lost in Manvi's thought.. Looking fwd to ur next update.. pls Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

Short bt awsum update...

Wantd to knw Virat's POV...n voila...u came up wid one...thankuuu...🤗
But y did Manvi lie to Maya dat Virat will propose her...Newayz...thnx to her lie dat Virat got this golden opportunity to get rid of his so calld gf...
Virat's thoughts on Maya were really hilarious...😆😆
Thanx for revealing the mystery behind such a unique proposal...but Virat seems to b totally lost in Manvi's thoughts...m absolutely luving the story ...Luv ur style of writing dear...
Hope u wont keep us waiting fr loong...
Plzz update asap n plz do pm me for ur future updates!!! 😊






it was because of a dare.check chap 4.
thank u so much for the compliments😳
i'll be fast in updating if u'r fast in commenting😉.it's mutual.
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Hope u wont keep ME waiting fr loong..."🤗

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