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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for Next Part Di...
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awesome part
hope geet starts lovibg maan also
n uses humara instead of mera or apka
update soon dii
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope Geet accepts Maan as well..
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Posted: 12 years ago


loved it muski ek hi update itne saare clear out hogaye. Now really feeling bad for maan because he was longing for geets love which he cant able to get inspite of all his caring and love still she is not coming out of her shell. Like everything cleared out between dev and maan and i wish one day geet should try to build trust towards maan.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 53
awesome part...
oh so Maan was thinking like that about Meera...
now the misunderstanding is cleared...
and Geet has delivered...
hope Maan and Geet will be happy without any gaale shikwe...
cont soon dear...
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me too waiting 😊
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Very cute update
Cleared alot of misunderstandings and life moved ahead a little.
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 54

Devansh indeed filled their life with happiness.
Life seemed so beautiful waking up seeing her beautiful face. 17 odd years still she looked so gorgeous. Like with age she looked more desirable. He was about to remove the locks that played with her cheeks teasing him more.
She got up instantly ' dev utt gaya hoga
uff aaj tho uska gym bhi hain
Maan smiled looking at the supper busy mom. Her day started with Devansh & ended on him. Her work was just to keep her busy when Devasnh was not at home. She had become a full fledged professor in her college now. Devasnh had completed his 12th grade & got into medical college. They definitely did a great job as a parent.
She hurriedly tied her hair into a bun running into the wash room. Within mins she came back freshened fun again rushing to the kitchen to make Devansh's juice.

Devasnh ' hi mom
Geet ' rehno do main kar dethi hoon
devansh ' chill mom hostel main sab mujhe karna padega
Geets face became really small, tears threatening burning back for her lashes ' jab taak yanha hain let me do she said looking away
he hugged her cutely ' mom itna senti kyun ho rahin ho
main sab jantha hoon u r just waiting for me to leave so that u can romance with my hot dad
geet looked at him irritated ' tumhe aisen lagtha hain?
Devansh taesed ' mujhe lagtha nahi pata hain
Geet didn't get into that much. She continued with her work of preparing breakfast for her darling son.
Devansh left for his gym.
Geet finished her work & went up to get ready. By the time she came down Maan was ready setting the table for breakfast & packing his & her lunch. He knew she will be so busy taking care of her son she will forget her self.
Geet came down looking stunning like usual.. taking his breath away. But the frown on her face, Maan knew something was off. She took the paratas on the plate .. Maan slipped his hand around her waist from the back & kissed her neck. She melted instantly forgetting all that was bothering her since morning.
Maan ' itni pyarin lag rahi ho
she shied. He never failed to compliment her in the morning.
He softly placed another kiss on her cheek ' kya huwa, wat is bothering my beautiful wife
she instantly came back to her senses & whacked his grip around her wait ' chodiyin mujhe
aapken inhi sab harkton ki wajah se Dev ko lagtha hain ki, we r waiting for him to leave the house.
She put him at a distance.
Definitely hurt him though he was used to not expecting anything. He just smiled & hugged her closer ' kya main aapni biwi ko hug bhi nahi karsakta aab

she snapped irritated ' chodiyin na Maan, dev aata hi hoga
he is growing up. U should behave ur self in front of him. Don't u understand this much.
It was not wat she said that hurt.. it was the way she spoke.. the irritation.. the never understanding her
He just placed a soft peck with his heart being crushed like nth time with
her indifference again. Its not that she is insensitive. But he could never understand a person who is so sensitive & caring towards every one else could never understand him, never care for him or atleast pretend to care about him. Well he deserves it all I guess.
After some time u stop feeling it that much. It becomes a habit. He would be hurt if she probably didn't do even this much now. He smiled at himself pouring his cereal in the bowl.
Devasnh came changed into his casuals pouncing on the hot hot paratas.
Dev ' dad how do u eat that cereal every day
geet ' nahi yeh different flavor hain. Last week it was strawberry
dev ' lekin dad cereal tho cereal hota hain na
geet ' he likes cereals
Maan just munched the cereal mumbling.. yah right I like cereals.
He didn't want to hurt her or let her down infront of dev.. saying he would love to eat the parats if u cared to cook it for me. Its been like that for every thing. He never refused to her assumptions. He was happy atleast she took that much interest in him.

Thanks for the likes & comments
lots of love
muskan
- PART 53 PREV NEXT PART 55 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


OMG!!!! itna.. lamba... time... gap...😲


Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a painful update
just logged in and saw you updated
was expecting some cute and happy moments
😕

But a leap and still not much change in Maaneet relation
My heart really went out for Maan😒
So many years and still he is taking in all the pain, repenting for his mistake, Geet still doesn't realize that her words and behavior break him😔
But he smiles through his tears

Loved Geet- Devansh moments😊and Maan is so adorable😳

Muski now I am getting scared are you gonna give this SS a sad ending
I don't know but I am really getting scared
Please happywala ending dena😛


I feel like crying now and that itself shows how much impact your writing holds😳
You force us to feel tha same feelings which your characters feel
Fantastic job done
Loved it
🤗

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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