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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Enough Rishu" Radha shouted and Rk was moved back hearing the tone of his mother.
Radha moved forward and slapped Rishab right across his face.
Rk-"Ma...you are slapping me because of this woman..."pointing to madhu who was like a stone
radhaji-"She is your wife.. dont forget it.."
Rk "no ma , not anymore I am divorcing her,She broke my trust..." in anger.
Radhaji-"What wrong did she do haan.?tell me?"
Rk-"She hid everything about papa from me...How is this right? It was her who got angry at me for hiding very small matters and now she hid this? Why should she do it otherwise she wanted to see me broken?"
Radhaji-"No she did it to save you from heartbreak and because i told her to"
rk staggerd back with the news,He looked at Madhu .
Radhaji walked to Madhu and folded her hands and said-"Madhu mujhe maaf kardo beta i did not think about you while i asked you to hide all this."
However Madhu did not care to wipe Radha's tears or to hold her...The only thing which vibrated in her ears were rk calling her a Wh**e...,She had taken all of his tauntings,accquses,every despicable word he threw on her ...for the past month.
Rk sensed something was definatly off with her as she stood unmoving...unfeeling and cold.He moved towards her not knowing how he was going to apologise to her.His hands shivered as he put it on her shoulders...
Rk-"Madh...Madhu I...I I am sorry..."
Even before he could complete Madhu walked to the table and picked up the divoerce papers in a mechanical manner.
Rk was not the only one but everyone in the hall stood shocked , She went to Sultan who was looking eually lost and took the pen from his pocket...
Rk moved towards her with the intention of ripping the notice into pieces but before he could do so ,Madhu had signed it and checked it carefully.
Madhu in a very calm and cold voice -"I dont need any compensation Mr.Kundra...I can manage on my own... But I would appreciate it if you would stay away from me"

Saying she walked away to the door, she turned to look back at him,her eyes were totally dead and emotionless

Few weeks later...
Rk got down of his car and watched madhu playing with kids,from behind the tree ...No matter how much they tried madhu totally avoided him and carried on as if none of the Kundras and Bhatia s existed...She refused to acknowledge even Aryaan and Rk watched her totally LOST

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tabby999 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2


NICE OS 👏👏👏
THANKS FOR SHARING ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yu shuld cont this os plss 2 3 chapies more plsss i want our chirpy jungli billi back with her rk plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What are doing?????????//
pehly hi MB main tention chal rahi hai
aur tum ne bhiSAD ONE SHORT likh de
i want some different kind
please if you do it
so it my pleasure
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry
OS is very nice and full of emotionaly
but yes i also want some more detail
like
tarap tarap k is dil se ah nikalti rahi
mujh ko saza di pyaar ne esa kia guna kiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one. Loved it.👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz don't stop here... Do continue n give it a happy ending... 😊 Thanx for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very different ...nice OS 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os but sad tha yaar😭 thanx for sharing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u write very well. but i didnt like them being divorced. i weant happy ending. cud u continue this one wid happy ending.😃

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