After separation Maaneet Epilogue pg54

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

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fabulous...loving it...
loving the way story is shaping up...
brilliant stuff...
thnxx for this wonderful updatec

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ye maaan kaise geet k paas aagaya

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i just want to say one thning k plz maan aur sameeera aur geet aur prem ki shaadi mat karwana chahe koi bhi MU ho par maan aur geet ki hi shaadi ho ...i dont want k kisi pressure ya mu me aak maan sameera se uar geet prem se shaadi kar le

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how come geet did not recognise prem ? agar get hullucinate kar rahi he prem ko maan samajh k to geet maan ki body ki smell aur us k touch ko to nahi bhool sakti? koi bhi girl kisi dusre boy ko hug karte hi samajh jaati he wo aun he...plz dont feel bad i just want to clear my confusion hope u dontmind

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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Hate Prem!

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After separation Part 3
Some of u can't understand why Geet is not able to understand that Prem is not Maan.Prem is a very good actor,so he imitated Maan very well.So from his behaviour Geet could'nt make out the difference.Maan and Geet are lovers,but they were never physically close,so from his smell she was'nt able to identify him.And the most important thing is that if she recognises Prem easily how will the story move?Remember in all stories where twins are there, such identity confusions occur.

Maan seemed to be upset.
Sameera:Maan..why are you sad?
MAAN:Geet has'nt called me till now.No news about her.Is she fine there?I'm tensed Sameera.
SAMEERA:Don't worry.She will call you.
Sameera's words fell on Maan's deaf ears.
SAMEERA:Your brain is hot.It has to be cool.Only then you will be relieved.Let us have ice stick.
MAAN:I have no mood Sameera.
SAMEERA:Come Maan.
She pulled him to the shop.They had ice stick together.
Maan remembered him and Geet having ice stick together.

Flash back...
Geet was enjoying her ice stick.He enjoyed watching it.

G:Maan,you also have it.Very tasty.
M:No need.You eat.
G:No.Only if you eat it I will be able to enjoy it.
She fed him ice stick.

Present...
Maan thought:Those days were so beautiful.

Months passed...
Maan rang up Prem.
P:Hi Maan...how are you?
MAAN:I'm ok.There is no news about Geet.You are also in UK no.Any idea about her?
Prem stammered:Me?How can i know where Geet is?I did'nt see her here.She may be in some other place in UK.
Maan put the phone down.He was gloomy as he lost his last hope also.

P:Maan is so upset about Geet.Here i'm enjoying with Geet.I'm wrong.I have to tell the truth to Geet.
Geet came .Prem could'nt take his eyes off her.
Geet was shy.
GEET:Why are you looking at me like this?
P:Even in the night suit you are so attractive.

She blushed.

Her beauty made him get attracted to her more and more.He lost his control and caressed her face passionately.She closed her eyes.

He cupped her face in his hands.Slowly she opened her eyes.
They look into each other's eyes.
They melted in each other and become very close to each other.

They become one forgetting themselves.
After that incident Prem was guilty.He went to the terrace and shed tears.
P:What did i do?I cheated my own brother and my beloved who is my brother's girl.I made her mine in every way.
Geet came.
GEET:Maan..why are you standing here alone?
P:Simply.
She saw tears in his eyes.
GEET:Why are you crying?
Tell me.What makes you upset?Tell me Maan.

He:I crossed my limits before we got married.You are angry with me.Right?

Geet smiled:Maan,Why do you think that I am angry with you?You have not done any mistake.You gave me a beautiful moment to be cherished forever.I am confident that I have not done anything bad to be ashamed of.Because spending any moment with you is pure.Because I love you.I love you Maan.

Geet rested her head on his shoulder.Prem's heart shivered.

After a month...
Geet vomited.
Prem went near her.
P:Geet..are you ok?Let us go to the hospital.
GEET blushed:No need Maan. I'm pregnant with our baby.
Prem was shocked.
Geet was blushing.

G:Maan'you gave me a beautiful gift.I am lucky to be blessed with your baby.I love you more now.

P:No'let us abort this baby.

Geet could'nt believe her ears:What are you saying?

P:We are not married yet.So you can't get pregnant now.So abort it.

G:Maan'This is the symbol of our love Maan.Did you forget that?

Maan wore an overcoat and changed his tie.
G:Maan,answer my question.

P:No Geet'I have decided.This baby should not see the world.Now itself let us go to the hospital.

Geet screamed:Maan'how could you change like this?You are not the Maan I loved.My Maan was not like this.

Prem lost his control and burst out:Maan'Maan'Maan'please stop calling me Maan.Don't love me thinking that I am your lover Maan.I can't tolerate it anymore.
I'm not your Maan. You got it?
GEET:What?
MAAN:Yes.You heard it right Geet.I'm Prem.Not Maan.

Geet was shocked.
GEET:What did you say?
Prem told her the complete truth.
Geet slapped him.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago