Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103) - Page 32

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I don't know how many times I've read this update.. It left me speechless (again), really!
The feeling of being in love risen up on me. Sigh, how could you do this to me, haha! 😆

So this is it, love confessions, realization and their promise with each others, happen!
All in one shot! This is good, really really good!

Yash was guilty to what he did? He thought he assault her!
But Aarti sense it and she won't let the time end without him letting go of it.

Look what love have done to Aarti, she will do anything just to make him feel happy and comfortable with her, even if it's the first time. She did it without hesitation.
I like the way she let go the feeling of guilt to Yash. She didn't say it, instead she let him feel it without words being uttered. It was so nice that he understand it so easily.

And I love how you wrote it Indu dear! Your words, sigh, I don't know how to describe it!
I just love it! (is there anything new?)

Oh, she has this little fear! Though she trusted Yash, but she still fears that having too much love for her might affect their children. Well, I can't blame her for that, knowing about her experience. Maybe, she was just assuring herself that what happened to her will never happen to their children.
And I like that condition she gave him, patience!
Am glad Yash accepted that, am not surprised. He knows her so well, and her bitter past.
So there's no reason for him not to understand her.

And the last part, I love how you ended it.
Two souls at peace, sleeping together! Lovely!

Btw, I love that " I'm very hungry" part. Is this the first time she said it? Hmm, I guess not.. She once said it, right? 😛

Are we going to hear the wedding bells on the next? Or just the preparation.
For sure Payal and the rest will be very happy to hear the good news..

Wonder if Arpita's closure will be on the past or at present..

Looking forward for the next installment, but this time with mixed feeling.
Happy and sad that this story will end anytime soon.. 😕


(P.S Sorry for the rambling, am not in my sense!😃)

Waow!!!! What can I say to such beautiful writing... loved the way Aarti comforted Yash so as to take away his guilty feeling... Aarti knows they have a long way to go and that's why she extracted the promise from him...

Its lovely to know that these two souls have reached their destination as per fate and destiny!!!!!

wow!!!!,👏 di i want to edit my post bt i don't know what to write, am speechless, words re unexplainable at d moment, bt i will write anything that comes😉

Awesome indu di❤️, the chapter was mindblowing😃

beautiful and awesome part with their confession, promises and their lovable moments spent together. the flow of the events was so well described that i didnt realise when i had reached the end of the update...and so wanting more..waiting for next update already.

love it so much..no words to xpress

What a beautiful update! This update was full of so much emotions and love! I loved it!!

Indu amazing update one of the best so far love from beginning to end each kiss each word was beautiful 👏⭐️
now can't wait to see how things go from here

Hi Indu

Once again such an awesome update which left me totally paralyzed and speechless⭐️⭐️⭐️. Hats off to you for the excellent writing and beautiful imagination as regards to realization of love, confession, promises, romantic moments AARYA shared together which was far from my expectation and I do not know to express my appreciation as I run short of words. 🤗
Though I am restlessly waiting for the next updat and would like to know the end, the thought of this FF going to end soon is making me so sad as I will be missing your writing, which means missing you Indu. I do not know you personally but I know Indu wrtier of Samarpan.
I sincerely hope that you will come up with a new one if time permits you but however, will always cherish the beautiful memories of "SAMARPAN" forever.
Love you always and wishing you very best in life.