Kriyaansh~Sometimes Life Makes You Stone Hearted~ Updated - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update...
emotional one...
hope kriya is safe...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update, 👏 loved reading it, was an emotional one but still enjoyed a lot 😃
Waiting for next update 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
~ Eight ~

Heyo guys 🤗... I back with a update... Hope you guys like it... This one is basically KriYaansh with something here and there but most of it is KriYaansh...

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All for leave goa

When they heading towards the beach where the incident occurred netween Don and Kriya and the plave where they thought that she took her last breath, on the way they came across and mental hospital. But when they are going past Rey felt her, her felt her felt her presence and he could sense her, his heart could catch her heart beats and he hear heart beat ( he felt like he could). This applied to Kajen, Vicky and Swaron to all the rest felt something but it wasn't as strong as the other sixes.
Karan: "stop the car!"
And Sam who was driving the car stops it with a jolt which made all unsteady in their seats.
Rathode: "kya hua?" he says with a confusion expression.
Rey: "Kriya wahan hai" he cribbed like a child pointing at the mental hospital.
Swaron, Vicky and Kajen: "tumhe bhi" they asked comfused that they weren't the only ones who could feel her presense.And they exchange a look to one another and then after a few seconds their faces shows confidence and certainity.
Jenny: "um we felt Kriya's presence"
Sharon: "it might sound insane but can feel her being around somewhere near here"
Arjun: "come on let's go"
And they go to the hospital
Seeing the mad people the girls kinda get scared apart from Jenny as she is a doctor.
Jenny: "warden wahan hogi" ( as she points her index finger towards the sign that read warden office )
They enter
Rey: "can we come in"
Warden: "yep sure come in"
Arjun: "ACP Arjun Route"
Sam: "ETF chief Sameer Rathode"
Warden: "how can I help you?" she asked with respect for the two.
Karan: "is someone called Kriya admitted here"
Warden: "Kriya haan lekin usne nahi bataya ki uski family hai I mean she said she had none"

Hearing this all of them broke even more... She was in a mental hospital?!... She's alive...?
Arjun: "um what's wrong with her?" he asks being the first one to come back to senses.
Warden: "amnesia"
Jenny: "uska matlab she is has memory loss"
Warden: "yep and it's very sever due to the head injury!"
Rey hearing this breaks down
Rey: "I want to see her and be with her"
Warden: "come with me my child" and takes to Kriya's ward.
And after sometime they go in...
Kriya is playing on the wii as if she was 12 or 13 years old
Rey goes to her and sits next to her... Andthe expressions on her face starts changing, and she looks straight into them eyes and she gets some visions and after a few second her head starts paining and she starts sweating badly... And he gets worried and grips her waist and blows on her forehead... Seeing the sweet drops stop and her lids relaxing he says...
Rey: "baatcutter" worried
Kriya: " hmm" she replies as remembers that's what he addresses her as...
Warden: "how can she remember that" wondering...
Kriya holds his hands feeling him... "hello"
Rey:" hi" and gently loosens his grip on her waist and places his hands on hers and gently strokes it... Feeling her too... Making sure its not his illusion...
Kriya: "you are very fitt and sexy" she says out the blue, looking him from top to bottom... Leaving everyone shocked... But Rey comes out of hearing these golden words from her love and replies...
Rey: "kya? Thanks" with a 32 inch smile oh his face.
Kriya: "mere saath wii kheloge?" she says tightly grabbing his arms.
Rey: "okay" he says... Biting back tears, he couldn't see his life like this; but she was with him and he's there for her somewhere in him satisfies him... And the others leaves the room...

Both play on the wii and after sometime Kriya falls asleep on his shoulders... And as shes to sleep her palms trace down his chest and the top buttons of his were open... And her touch on his bare skin sent shivers dwon his spine... He thought to himself that aww her skin is so soft and silky... And her hands stopped on his upper thigh... Without even knowing she keeps on adjusting herself and while doing that she's making Rey arose due their bare skin having contact. Every now then when she's snuggling into him, her lips brush on his chest, and her hot breath on his bare skin makes his breathing rate increase... Rey who has lost his control over the beauty who's snuggling in him pins the strand of her hair behind her ear and was about to take her lips in his for a smooch but reality struck him and he came to senses. He knew that he couldn't do that...

With that Rey picks her up and places her on the bed. And kisses her all over her face and giving a quick peck on the forehead... and lastly a peck on the lips...

Rey: " you know how badly I wish that we share a passionate smooch instead of this peck?... But I guess time... you I know never thought that our love will see this... But you know what? You being with me... You just being here on itself gives me the peace, the love, and gives me my life cuz YOU are my life ".

Saying this to the Kriya who is the sweet slumber dreaming of her linecutter he leaves closing the door quietly behind him... Making sure he is not going to disturb her sleep... All were waiting for him outside and peaking in through the tiny circled window of the ward...

Warden: "aap dono ka pyaar bohot hi strong hai and it is true love. In this period of time all of us have tried speaking to her but she wouldn't respond and as days went past she forgot nearly everything.
"Aur aaj she remembered you and she calmed down without us giving her an injection".
All were in tears seeing Kriya like this and to see Rey's love for her and how pure it was...
Arjun: "how did all this happen?"
Warden: "well after the mission she was severely injured, when she found out about her having partial amnesia and that as time passes she would become like a 1 year old baby and that as that happens she will need lots of care. She didn't want Rey to know about this, as she knew that he will give up his entire life's happiness to look after her. And she wanted Rey to have stayed in happy in his life. As a result she admitted herself here.
"In fact she in a matter of moths she will have completely become like a new born baby! She will need love and care then."
Rey: "I will give the love and care!" love, wanting and determination reflecting in his voice.
And that was it. They took Kriya back to Mumbai and she lived with Rey, Minni, Karan, Jenny, Sharon and Sid! After Sharon found out about everything she went with Jenny and Rey to started living with them as Jenny wanted Kriya to be with her too. ( KriYaansh are going to live in the same house)

Precap:

Rey: " chocolate icecream for a beautiful cutie"...
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Kriya: "mere saath aao na linecutter"... And grabs his hands...
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Jenny: " don't worry Rey..."
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Okay guys how was the update?

And haan I don't know how patients with amnesia actually gets treated so please play along with it guys... 🤗

This the most KriYaansh love scene I have wrote in this FF... Kya karoo romance mere saar se upaar hai... 😆

Hope you liked it... I know you lot have been asking for a really long time... But abh de rahi hoon... Sorry... I guess better late than never...

Chal Madhu abh lamba comment tererko dena padega... Sorry yaar... Meine try kiya abh to gussa chod de... 🤗


Sorry for any spelling mistakes or typos... Do leave your like and comments... 🤗

Thanks for reading...

Have a dancing day guys

Love ya all 🤗

😊

~Anu~
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee update👏
kria s an amnesia patient
finally rey s gonna take care of her😊
and d precap s interesting😃
waiting for d nxt part😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res :-D . . . .
Unres. . . . . . . .
Yeh kiya tune anu. . .
Kriya ko direct amnesia ka patient bana diya. . .
Mummy. . .tu kriya ke piche kyu padi hai be. .usne kya bigaada hai tera?
Phle teacher banake use st.louis mein entry kerwaayi,
then pata chala she is fbi agent,
then pata chal she had been raped,
then tune usse maar dala,
then,pata chala woh zinda hai,
then she is in mental hospital,
then pata chala ki woh anmesia ki patient hai. .
Le. . .yeh kya ho raha h. . . . .
Gosh. . . . .
Abb pata nai tu aur kya karegi. . .bechari kriya,hope she gets well soon. . . .
Update the nxt part soon. . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh its amazing...i just start reading this ff ...baki k parts baad main read karungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey anu
Sorry yaar late ho gaya sorry
And cum to update mere pass word nahi hai describe karne ke liye
Both the update was fab amazing this is the update
Awesome se jyada awesome tha
Sorry comment bura tha kya karu kuch soch nahi pa raha hu kya bolu tera update padh kar
Update next as as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
the truth came out of kriya that she loss her memory...
i loved the entire chapter no words to describe ... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the update
kria is now bady
kr love is cute sweet pure n true
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story..
continue soon..
and do pm me

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