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Posted: 12 years ago
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Came here before the pm
what to say about the I'm speechless
U have a unique style of writing and no matter how different the plot is i can very easily imagine swaron ur writing is some thing else loved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i liked kriyaansh here too they were really funny especially they ask "sick do you have cancer"😆😆😆😆
loved how u used dance as it is a part of swaron loved the ending..
awesome os do right more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: cenation123

here before the pm yayyy
is it complete???


Now this story is complete
Edited by strykeryder - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

*Edited*

Hello bud 😊
Must say your are an amazing writer.Your style of writing is much different from others.I loved the way you have divided your work into small pieces n assembled it together perfectly.
Another strong writer in action.
Great job 👍🏼

regards
tanzz
Edited by tanzz15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres.

amazing concept...
it was lovely...
there were a lot of things in this which i really loved...
the description that u gave about the things hidden behind the concrete wall of the buildings was one thing i really loved...
then sharon singing for swayam in the mall, rey and kriya's bet,and kriya asking if sharon has a cancer😆,rey and kriya behaving like hopeless romantic teenagers😆 and also rey statement
"dont forget to tell him that u like him in a mushy bushy hushy let's go make babies kind of way"🤣 was amazing and also sharon shouting in the pillow when swayam said "you look prettier today" was lovely...

great job👏

Edited by ChaitraJoshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love the os...i dont know how you find such different concepts for your stories! Im so amazed...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all pls tell me ur name...

Now coming to the os... it was wonderful ...full of emotions, confusion , swayam insecurity, Sharon bubbly nature , kriya and rey bet...all and all perfect writen ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well
i twas purely beautiful
loved it
as i always say
your an amazing writer...
and mujhe OS padne se pehle uski length ko dekh ke hi khushi ho jati hain 😉
kabhi kabhi irritate ho jati hun
but when i start reading it.. i simply don't want it to end..

the OS was amazing
specially kriyaansh
"SICK ARE YOU HAVING CANCER" 🤣
amazing dance
loved it
do write more 😉😉
i'll surely get a treat 😛😛
and thanks for the pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cenation123

Came here before the pm
what to say about the I'm speechless
U have a unique style of writing and no matter how different the plot is i can very easily imagine swaron ur writing is some thing else loved it👏
i liked kriyaansh here too they were really funny especially they ask "sick do you have cancer"😆
loved how u used dance as it is a part of swaron loved the ending..
awesome os do right more.


Thanks for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanzz15

Res

*Edited*

Hello bud 😊
Must say your are an amazing writer.Your style of writing is much different from others.I loved the way you have divided your work into small pieces n assembled it together perfectly.
Another strong writer in action.
Great job 👍🏼

regards
tanzz


Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

First of all pls tell me ur name...

Now coming to the os... it was wonderful ...full of emotions, confusion , swayam insecurity, Sharon bubbly nature , kriya and rey bet...all and all perfect writen ...


Thanks for the comment

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