JA analysis..flaws and plus points.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys!
This is not a bashing post or anything.
I am not much of a basher. Hehe!
And i am not a critic or anything too! hehe.

As we know its already been a week since Jodha akbar was aired.
The story of jodha and akbar itself is magical and with the cast of such talented actors, jodha akbar has a long way to go.
But what really comes in between this finnese is the editing part. The crew actually.
I don't think the cameraman in JA is giving its best.
Actually its the director's fault.
What I have noticed is that the scene shift is extremely fast.
For example, in today's precap too, the camera fell upon jo's sister and immediately upon jodha. It was like swoop swoop!
Haha! This might sound stupid but sometimes its really hard to keep up with the pace.
The 2nd thing is...again the camera work.
Once I found it too irritating.
Like when the preceding king of amer was gonna be selected, raja bharmal entered the sabha and for like 2 or 3 mins the camera was just revolving all above his head. Haha!

And the 3rd thing-I don't find jodha being respected like a princess at many times. Like in many parts they call her as tum.
And mainawati, she doesn't act like a queen.
Like in today's epi, she could have told her servants to go and call jodha.
But instead she was running all around the palace!
These were just some minor things!
And o yes the language.
The mughals are good in what the speak but jodha's family, sometimes they say tanne and sometimes tum.
Mitra is dost and prem is pyar! :D
And yeah the music!
The a a ah ah one! Haha! Its ridiculous!
But still there are many plus points of JA. As I said the cast is amazing. So is the set and costumes!
I can't really stretch out on the plus points though. Sorry.
I just want JA to surpass all our expections.
If Ekta ma'am would just focus on these points, we could get a top show within weeks.

And if someone's sentiments are hurt, I am extremely sorry.
Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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The camera work is sloppy.I had told you on the very first day,rememba? 😕 They shud usebetter cameras i think .🤔something which makes the colours come out.vibrant u know.

I dunno,i have always found zee's shows with dull quality :/

The 'tum' is so annoying.Im like "aap" bolo,"aap"

And they shud be uniform,either the marvadi terms aur shudh hindi.they are mixing both.

For example,i address my father as "papa",i dont change it and call him "dad" the next day.it will always be papa!

Simple as that

These are very small things they need to be attention to.

BUt sammy,i have grown a liking for that a a a a h h h tune 😆 i dunno,all the bgm's they've used in the last few epis,i have liked.the one they use for jodha-sujamal is also somethin i like!

i guess anythign would sound good now,after that horrid jai kali track! 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha15

The camera work is sloppy.I had told you on the very first day,rememba?😕They shud usebetter cameras i think .🤔something which makes the colours come out.vibrant u know.


I dunno,i have always found zee's shows with dull quality :/



yup! I remember! Hehe.
But jhansi ki rani was good na. JA ke saath itni nainsafi kyun!! Why??
I don't like star plus' diya aur bati hum's camerawork too!
They are too bright! Like the actors look literally white.
Lagta hai jaise they wash their faces with tide.
And ja needs some serious improvement in camerawork yaar!


The 'tum' is so annoying.Im like "aap" bolo,"aap"


haan yaar! Me too!

And they shud be uniform,either the marvadi terms aur shudh hindi.they are mixing both.



big prob in the show!

For example,i address my father as "papa",i dont change it and call him "dad" the next day.it will always be papa!

Simple as that



wahi toh! They change every other day!

These are very small things they need to be attention to.

BUt sammy,i have grown a liking for that a a a a h h h tune😆 i dunno,all the bgm's they've used in the last few epis,i have liked.the one they use for jodha-sujamal is also somethin i like!

i guess anythign would sound good now,after that horrid jai kali track!😕


haha! I hope it grows on me too!
Lekin they are using it as a title track na. So something with words would sound more app.
Bich bich me aa aa ghusa dete hai yeh log!
Lol!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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They should totally use better cameras... And make the whoopy work go away!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The camera work is 😵! I'm really surprised whether Kekta and team is using HD cameras even? that's how bad I find it! 😳 Especially after watching rival show on sony everyday !

Agree the editin is zoom zapak fast like u said! Ufff in that kaali scene and the 2nd episode when J was taking vows to destroy akbar... so much shuffle between two scenes...

Like u said, the show has great potential in the actors, but the presentation needs to drastically change! 😆

There's so much of stunning camera work director-cinemato can do using those stunning sets and those artistic windows ! so many modern day directors use those patterned windows to play with light! why not this show? 🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sam i agreed to ur post sum scenes r really
bg n camera wrk need to be improved when the actors r dng a gud job

the scene u pointed regarding jodha's mother searching her mujhe bhi khatka tha but i said ok chalta h
n the next moment y the princess r going walking to melas
or its in thr palace only m confused over it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beech beech mein gusaa dete hain.thats true! 🤪

these ppl need to sit down and PLAN. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Khush-

The camera work is 😵! I'm really surprised whether Kekta and team is using HD cameras even? that's how bad I find it! 😳 Especially after watching rival show on sony everyday !


Agree the editin is zoom zapak fast like u said! Ufff in that kaali scene and the 2nd episode when J was taking vows to destroy akbar... so much shuffle between two scenes...

Like u said, the show has great potential in the actors, but the presentation needs to drastically change! 😆

There's so much of stunning camera work director-cinemato can do using those stunning sets and those artistic windows ! so many modern day directors use those patterned windows to play with light! why not this show? 🤔



I doubt its HD!definitely not ! i mean for a historic show they shud go for VHD (very high definition 😛) par yahaan pe toh definition hi dikhaayi nahi de rahi 😕


@red : naye shabd aavishkar ho rahe hain thanks to JA 🤪

The kaali scene!MAN,DONT EVE REMIND ME.it was hilarious!

And yes,the set if beautiful,these gusy just dunno how to play around with light.that's why outdoor scenes seem so scarce of colour.

Indoor scenes have improved.atleast in today's epi.The jodha-motibai scene looked colourful 😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amor.


n the next moment y the princess r going walking to melas
or its in thr palace only m confused over it


main bhi yahi soch rahi thi 😕 aise khulle aam!

and one more thing,the ghoonghat!The other day when menavati entered the sabha,she wudnt even show her face,n today 😕 same with jodha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha15


main bhi yahi soch rahi thi 😕 aise khulle aam!

and one more thing,the ghoonghat!The other day when menavati entered the sabha,she wudnt even show her face,n today 😕 same with jodha



thy need to wrk out seriously on royalty nhi to mujhe bula lo ekta ji maine bade sare hist shows dekhe h
royalty sikha du tumhare cvs n director ko 😆😳😉😛

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