EVERYTHING IS FAIR, WHEN LOVE IS WAR -ch19 - pg 84 - Page 22

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Chapter 6
The car pulled up in front of the most beautiful cottage which over-looked the beach. It had a villa-esque appeal , even though it was quite quaint. It was the Singh's holiday home , situated on the outskirts of town. The saltiness in the sea-breeze fuelled their burning desires. Neither could tell how they got off the car , into the house , up the stairs and into the bedroom , because before they knew it , both had ripped the other's clothes off and had taken their positions on the bed. Maya was wildly kissing him , and Uday loved it ... he didn't think she was like this the first time he saw her , but it was obvious that the passion was ablaze from both sides. He bit hard into the crook of her neck and she moaned loudly , turning him on even more. Her heaving breasts ached for attention and were duelly rewarded with a forceful squeeze and a rough bite. Next he bit on her navel , she tossed her head up in pleasurable pain. Uday just placed the head of his erect manhood at the mouth of her feminine area ... when a confession from Maya jolted him. "Uday - I'm a virgin!" The statement was shocking , but more than that , it was thrilling. He wanted her even more ! With a mighty jerk , he pushed into her , but it was only his third thrust that broke her hymen , letting him through. With a thunderous groan , he climaxed into her ...
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The stalker stood outside Tani's dance class. This case was turning a bit tough, he thought. He wanted atleast a 2 minutes when tani would be alone to get his plan to work. For 2 days now, it was her driver who came to pick her up. It was a delicate task that needed precise timing. Tomorrow would be the day he had to do it, to keep up the order he had set up. Tomorrow tanisha Singh will die, and her death should shock the very foundations of Mr. Udayveer's life. It has to be brutal, not like the accidents he had planned earlier, he wanted Udayveer to now fear his life, and he wanted him to know, what was in store for him.

In theory it sounded sane, but when you have to make it practical, it's a bit difficult, tanisha was a small girl, only 8 years old, she was a kid who loved eating chocholate, hold her father's hand and cuddle next to her mother. Did she deserve the death he had planned for her???

"oh, please this is not the time for sentiments" thought the stalker

But was he ready for tomorrow?

Yes, he thought but somewhere deep down did a voice scream"no"?

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Jagat was sitting in his office, sameer's death was a blow to him, he had known sameer well, he was a good man, though he was a playboy. But his sudden death made him think. It made him suspicious. Some of the reasons were

1) That road that he took was not accident prone.

2)sameer took that road for the last 10 years and did not even have one scratch

3)even if he had been careless it wasn't enough to cause that sort of collision, wasn't he charred to death?

But you could get that force if you are moving with great speed, about 80- 100 km/hr. no one would go at that speed around a u turn, unless you want to commit suicide or if your brakes fail, sameer wont commit suicide. So now it is the brakes.

Did the brakes fail on their own or did someone fail it? thought the detective mind of jagat.

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" what a hot girl she is" thought akash as he sipped his drink. The girl in front would be around 18 years and he loved it- young and fresh. He looked at her with lustful eyes. He had lost count of the drinks he had. After all he was drinking since morning. He just couldn't control himself. He looked hungrily at her pink lips and imagined how it would fell when he bit it off. Her dress was till her knees and she looked at her legs, they were inviting him to do bad things

She walked out and akash couldn't stop himself from following her. He walked stealthily behind her. The night was dark and moonless. He licked his lips as he saw her back sway as she walked. Oh god!!! He thought.

She was walking towards the old section of the city, here there were mostly shops and godowns and every thing was closed. He sped up and reached next to her. With a swift motion he caught her had and pulled her body towards him, her back facing his chest, he held her tighty and pulled her towards the darkened alley. She struggled in his hands and was screaming her lungs out, but there was no human soul in the neighbourhood to hear her cry. He pushed her to the ground and walked towards her, she tried to get up, but like a tiger he pounced at her, with one hand he tried to lift her dress and with the other he slapped her, that bit*h wont stop struggling he thought.

He tried to capture that lips, and his hands were exploring the upper parts of her body when he found himself slammed on the wall

He focused his eyes on that person who disturbed him from having his fun. The figure in front of him looked well built but he couldn't see the face of his attacker, the girl took this opportunity to run away from there.

"you sob how dare you try to spoil my "

"BAMM" came a hit on his face , he stumbled down. He used his leg to make his attacker fall and he succeeded. The man fell down, and Akash soon found a stick and started attacking that person

The man however was fast enough, he caught hold of the stick and then threw it away. The rage in him grew at an alarming rate when he found the knife he was hiding in his pant pockets, he flipped it open and plunged it into Akash's stomach.

Akash stumbled back, his hands on his stomach as if to shield the blood from oozing out.

The attacker however didn't stop his work, he again plunged the knife into akash's body again and again. Blood splashed on his face yet he did not mind. He was like a butcher cutting his meat, again and again. It was really stomach upsetting to watch that scene. Finally akash stopped struggling. His body was in a mess, yet the attacked did not stop, he cut away akash's head from his body.

And without turning back he left that place

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His heart pounded so hard , threatening to jump out of his rib-cage. He ran , he ran for miles ... his head ached thinking about what just happened. Too many questions were swimming around in his mind ... but 1 thing was for sure - IT WAS NOT SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN LIKE THIS! "Damn it , I f**ked it up" Hot tears flowed down his cheeks ... It was RIGHT , but then it was WRONG. He needed her arms around around him . She'd know exactly how to soothe his confusion. He knocked furiously on the door , and as soon as she opened it ... he "flew" into her arms, and dropped to the floor , bringing her down with him. "What's wrong? "
"Won't u tell Mamma what's wrong? ", she pleaded.
He finally answered in a voice thick with emotion ... "Mamma , I messed up ... MY ORDER WENT WRONG!"
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome
left me with many question
the first part i mean why did maya
ok i remember they both had so much
of lust for each other
yes the serial killer is right
he should not kill the little girl
and here uff this akash
he got drunk got arroused
and went to rape a girl
thanks to the attacker who saved the girl
he deserve such death
thank you for the pm
as usual this was another treat to the coming week
hugz
anni
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg guys..
u too are superb mystery writers...
itna gol gol ghum raha hai Sab!!!
mystery mystery..
but I love mysterious stories ...
awesome update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg guys..
u too are superb mystery writers...
itna gol gol ghum raha hai Sab!!!
mystery mystery..
but I love mysterious stories ...
awesome update..
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
MYSTRY CONTINUES.

MAYAVEER BCOME ONE.

STALKER HEAR UR HEART.
DONT KILL DAT SMALL GIRL.

AKASH GOT WAT HE DESERVED.

DEN LAST PART.I WILL KEEP MY
GUESS TO MYSELF.

ENJOYED IT.CONTINUE SOON.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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