Jodhaa-Jalal OS: Princess of my dreams

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Mahadevi

@MannMeinRadha

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: disha15
this was just brilliant 🤣 🤣🤣

before he escapes,what does he do? he hugs her from behind 🤣

totally epic!You should write more please 😃

That RED PART really made me go RED. ☺️ Dikhao na dikhao na ye sab avi ke avi dikhao na hume. ☺️ 😃 😉

I think Jodha froze by that hug n that gave Jalal all the time needed to escape. 😉

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Asandhimitra

@LadyMacbeth

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Seriously sister 🤣

It's the most amazing end of an ss I've ever read .

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616377

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Very well written!👍🏼

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Neyha Walia

@QtnNotti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow! Amazing!! Please continue :)

I liked the conversation between Jalal and Khan baba. Good dialogues!!
The hugging from behind scene was awesome! lol!