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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...superb start...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

I'm gonna wait a bit for the chapters to progress, till then, am stalking it.
Nice going!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice start..loved this crazy kushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting.
completely fun filled story, no acrimony, no animosity!
Good.
I was guffawing to see Khushi's checklist for Payal's BF.
PM me when you will update next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey really really luv the concept
read in one go
fab.
superb
cont. soon
really want to knw what conv. take place between arnav and khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the start of the story and continue soon dear:)
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Posted: 12 years ago



Chapter two

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It was past midnight.

Arnav could hear Akash talking with someone on phone.

Arnav's POV

Akash is in love.. .. ..My young little brother has finally grown up.

Now I have to check and know who the woman is. I don't want any gold digger to enter Akash's life. Today's girls only go for money, status and all. Hope he had chosen some sophisticated, educated, modern woman. Hope neither me nor Mami be disappointed. I have to get the call now.

Arnav comes and knocks Akash's door.

Akash in haste immediately cuts the call.

Arnav: Nani is calling you.

Akash: so late at night?

Arnav: how would I know?

Akash: ok..yeah.

Akash was leaving but without leaving his phone.

Arnav: Akash..I don't think Nani will be happy to see you busy with phone at late hours.

Akash gave a suspicious look and went away leaving the phone at bedside table.

Arnav's face was giving a jackpot smile!!

But Akash was always a safe player.

As usual he has deleted everything.

But Arnav still hoped to get his work done and diverted Akash's call.

Meanwhile Akash reached Nani's room.

Nani was sitting with Manorama with few pictures of girls.

Akash was obvious with the topic and he wanted to speak about Payal.

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Our KKG007 was active on her mission. She had feigned sleeping and had heard Payal talking to someone. The talks were such that it could easily be understand by a grade 3 student. Well our KKG007 was more intelligent than that. For the last 15 minutes Payal was waiting. Khushi was feeling extremely sleepy but she was on her mission and she could not falter!! It was a matter of life-and-death.

Our KKG007 slightly moved. But no there was no movement or reaction from Payal. Khushi was sure now that Payal has dozed off. She slowly sat straight and took Payal's phone.

With a victory smile she dialed the number. Khushi perhaps have never been so happy seeing paanipuri, chaat and jalebis together.

*****

Arnav in his room was pacing. He was waiting for the last 20 minutes. No call had come still now. He was irritated and angry cause he had never failed in any project or deal and today he is on the verge of failing and that too on a petty matter.

*****

Arnav finally received the call!!!

Khushi: helloo..

Arnav: who's this speaking??

Khushi: who are you??

Arnav: I am asking you

Khushi: no..

Arnav: what the??

Khushi: what is what the??

Arnav: listen Miss..

Khushi: no..you listen Mister..

Arnav: you are calling and disturbing..

Khushi: oh..really?? who's saying whom??

Arnav: you are calling and saying this

Khushi: you are disturbing ..so..

The call got disconnected.

Khushi"s POV

First of all he calls my sister..

and then says..

I am disturbing

..every night..this gootter goo goes on..

and no problem..

I had just queried once and uff..

what attitude!!

Laad Gaawarnar.

Is jiji in love with that barbarian??

How did she fall in love with that kind of man??

And how rude..he cut the call..

I will teach him a lesson..NOW..

You just wait Mister.


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Arnav's POV

What the!!! Dammit..Akash

How can he be in love with such a crap??

She had no sense.

She is calling me and asking who am I..

She is totally crazy.

Wait..wait..was it someone else??

I don't think that was Akash's lover..

Was that some curious cat..

Cause she thinks me as Akash

I need to find out who she is.

Khushi was back on her KKG007 mode.

Arnav was no less, but yes he was logical.

The call.. .. .. ..Khushi called again..

Khushi: Listen Mister. Before you can say something

let me inform you that I am not the one you are thinking.

Arnav: I know.

Khushi: You had been disturbing my sister and so

Arnav: wait..so you are not the one with whom my brother talks every night.

Khushi: OMG !!! So it's your brother who talks to my sister!!!

Arnav: Dammit!! so..you too were spying ??

Khushi: Hai Devi Maiyya !!! who are you?

Arnav: You first.



Khushi: no, you tell me who are you.

Arnav: you tell me first, and then I would.

Khushi: no. I asked first.

Arnav: ladies first.

Khushi: this is cheating. Aap ramanchi kar rahe ho!!

Arnav: ufff.. .. ..what is your sister's name?

Khushi: It's your brother who started. So you tell me.

Arnav: NO..you tell me.

Khushi: NO.

Arnav: what the?

Khushi: laad gaawarner.

And both of them disconnected the call.

Who disconnected first I don't know!!

Only the server and networks know who disconnected first..so ask them!!

Both were fuming in anger because none of them succeeded in their mission.

Neither Khushi came to know who Payal's prince charming was nor did Arnav come to know who Akash's lady love was.

So how was the chapter??? Did you like the call-fight??

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PRECAP:- Arnav and Khushi in Temple (Mandir).

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one more thing...please buddy me if you read and comment regularly...I really like making new friends..but not the SILENT ones!!!

and if you are eager to read the story..but not much regular...hey..keep stalking..at least once in a fortnight..😊😊


Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luved the update !!!!
Continue very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was Awesome...

Khushi and Arnav's conversation on phone was too funny...😆 😆

Between their fight they forgot their actual misson...😆😆

Continue Soon...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar u cheated,
such a short update
but loved the fight
continue soon

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