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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika
love the way you close the loops dear.kaash something like this happened in the show too.*sigh*its too late .still hmmm

Haha, I wish too! Thanks :)

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: monasha
Amazing Update 😊

Sorry for late comment

NP! Thanks :)

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: MyluvASR
awesome update

Thanks!

And I love your siggy!

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: shai95
Awesome Blossom !!!!! Ridzzz!!!!! You nailed it! It had everything which we never saw in the serial - khushi ignoring Arnav, Arnav agreeing to free her of their null marriage but still begging her to give him a chance, instead of making her stay forcefully!
Maza aa gaya!
Waiting for more!

Haha! Thanks! :D

More coming berry berry soon! ;)

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Raila1014
I did not get a chance to comment a it has been crazy busy with work and my 2 lil ones. I loved how you closed the loop on this one. She confirmed her feelings and I am glad she did not lie because it would have been unlike her. However, I love the outburst with the affirmation. She is right, why did he want her to say it? So he can throw it Back in her face? Once bitten, twice cautious. She must have been shocked at his willingness to bring everything in the open. She acted accordingly, with dignity and made him realize what his stupidity could cost him. But I am very proud of this Arnav, asking for what needed to be done, realizing that he could not live without her, giving her the choice to let him try to be better because "main tumare bina ji nahin paungi Kushi". He apologized, he repented and he wants to woo her back. Everything that the goddamn writers swept under the rugs in the show. Wow, take a bow my dear!

Thank you! :D

You don't know how much that means to me! Thanks again for the wonderful comment!

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
It was grt
Thanks for d pm

Yw, Thanks :)

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
very well written..simply beautiful...😊

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Res!

This may not be what I had expected, but this is even better!

And once again, I feel like you have closed multiple loops, not just two.

I liked how you made Khushi hold her own about the manhandling and Payal's wedding, her words totally made sense!

And thank you thank you lakhon baar for giving Akash a spine, a brain and a heart, not necessarily in that order. 😆

Not only did he believe Payal when she told him the truth on their wedding night, but he also had the presence of mind to collect evidence because he knew that Arnav probably wouldn't believe him!

I also like that he stood up to Arnav about his marriage and decided to move out.

That is exactly what a man in love would do, and what we would have expected from someone who pursued his bride relentlessly.

And finally, the truth is out between Arnav and Khushi.

You made Khushi go back to Buaji's house, once again a natural reaction.

And redemption track begins!

So does my curiosity about the next loop!

P.S: Thanks for taking up this loop, I loved your take on it!

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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Anon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

I wake up to pray and I find you've given this link so I can't NOT res.. But don't worry, this is a Res I have EVERY intention of Un-res-sing, pakka waala promise!! :')

I love you and goodnight :L

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I'm here :')

OK SO.

I LOVED THIS! And for a couple of reasons; one, because you've written all of this brilliantly and impeccably, as always. Second, because you're giving ex-IPK addicts, like myself, a chance to see how things could - and most probably should - have gone and third because you've given everyone a voice - from Khushi to Akash to Payal and even Anjali to some extent!

Khushi noticed that Anjali was getting a little more perceptive - automatically that made me think of the pre-brainless phase of Anjali, where she'd pick up on little nuances and was able to actually think.

Payal - disclosing everything to Akash on her wedding night was brilliant; at least she didn't keep quiet and let Khushi suffer at her expense >.<

And Akash .. oh Akash :') how I wish that this is the same guy we could have seen in the show instead of the stupid mamma's boy who got influenced by anyone and everyone 🤢

I'm so proud that Khushi finally took a stand and decided that enough was enough; how much longer could she carry on keeping up with A's mood swings and the threats she was facing from Mr Snake? Urgh, I'm glad she decided to stay away from him - it's what he bloody deserves!

But still ... wondering if this is something to be continued ...? 😉

I do apologise for taking my sweet time with comments, but I'll have them all done soon-ish and then you'll love me again yaaayy 😃😉😆

Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago