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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Perfect... big applause to u for writing so many things I wish I had seen in the show.. the guilty remorseful arnav who knows and accepts his mistakes and khushi who fights back him without doing all those silly stuff...and yes a payal who would have told the truth to akash and an akash who is not spineless!!! Ipk never really got a proper closure n instead they dragged irrelevant plots inside..no one really got what they really deserved...

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RandomGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

i would like to read a story where Arnav regrets calling her characterless..

Edited by RandomGirl - 12 years ago

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Omg wow
Left me speechless again bbe!
Loving the strong and determined khushii

Yaaay for akaaash standing up
If only that happened in the show :(

Looking forward to mre

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Beautiful...
I loved it...
Amazing loop closure...Really I wanted Akash to show this attitude...how can Arnav babua think dat he can make Akash (who is head over heels in love with Payal) to divorce his wife...Nice one...
N yyesss u gave us update on friday..After these heavy ones I mean Heartbeat part 1 n 2 n confrontation,,can we get a light one...i mean little bit funny type like Khushi returning him his 300 Rupees or Arnav reading her diary...But Depite of all my suggestions,,I m all glad with ur closure loops...they are awesome...keep writing..

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Simply perfect Ridz !!!! You gave Aakash a backbone which I sorely felt was lacking in the show due to its characterization !!! But Ridz , I really wish this was what should have happened in the show . I mean Payal telling Aakash about the snake instead of hiding it , at least to Aakash . Coz of all the people Aakash was the most rational one in the show and he would have at least given some thought to the entire fiasco instead od jumping to conclusions like Arnav .

This Khushi is more strong and brave rather than the doormat she was portrayed . To be honest ASR being ASR and claiming to the " Shatir Dimaag " he should have done the investigation about the snake not Aakash . Glad she left him and he did not have the courage to stop her .

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

thankfully Akash has a spine and standing up for his wife and Bhabi... Towards the end the Akash in the serial had started to get on my nerves.. Also Khushi here seems to have more spunk and giving back to Arnav

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

awesome..loved it
keep writing..
loving the way the story is shaping up..

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

very well written..simply beautiful...thank you for the PM...😊

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

Akash scene was much needed. He showed that he too is a Raizada. Loved it.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#380

i was on my bed reading it when i read tht aakash scene on his very first dialogue i felt like jumping up and clap for aakash as well as you. if they had actually potrayed something where aakash had a spine trust me i would have felt like hugging him.

he had potential and he shld have had potential, he was a true raizada after all, yet he was nothing more thn a prop in the show. cvs ruined him, even lavanya and sheetals role had more potential and worth thn aakash.

so thankyou for justifying the presence of aakash in the show, thankyou for showing that a guy who had the heart to love had the guts to value his relationship and fight for it.

as for arnav manhandling khushi i always felt agar bachpan mein he ike rakh k dia hota na is k amma ya di ne esay to ajj thora insan ka bacha hota yeah.

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