Hamari Pyar ki kahaani- TR Story

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So here is the first part. One thing I want to say is I'm not good in writing in Hindi so plsss bare with me. It continues from the precap but in advance, you will understand when u read :p
And sorry in advance if I have done any mistakes.

Part one
It's been a month, a month ago taani came to collage after board meeting with NDC judges and told everyone that they realized theirs mistake and wants them to re-enter NDC.
St. Louis won NDC at the same time toke part in jashn.
Taani was now know as the best GS, the gang started to take taani more seriously and now was one of them. Everyone has now learned about the post that has been made against her. Rey was angry in the beginning that taani didn't tell him but then he was proud of her that she has proven herself without anybody's help.


It was middle of the night and Rey couldn't sleep at all. All he was thinking how taani made the blog, fought for D3, made them re-enter NDC and helped them win. He saw how his plan was working and taani had change, change for the good.
Taking out taanis photo from his wallet he said:

Rey: finally, finally Taani tumhe apni GS ki post ko seriously liye. And kya kuch nahin kiya D3 ke liye, collage ke liye. Am so proud of you so proud. Kaas mein tumhe aake ek lambha sa hug dhesakta. Tumhe eshas dhela sakta ke kitna proud, kitna kush hu tumhe itna passionet dhek kar. I love you so much taani!

Rey decided that the time has come for him to reveal the truth to taani. He calls swayam and Sharon and asks them to come to his place immideatly. After a while they comes to his place
The door bells ring and rey opens the door, before he can greet them he gets bombard with question of Swaron.
Sharon: kya hua Rey? Itne chaldi mein kyun bulaya? Kuch hua hain kya? Tum thik hoon?
Rey: sha'
Swayam: haan yaar, kuch hua hain kya? Itne raat ko bolaya? Yaldi bata naa, tension horahi hain!! Kuch toh bool?!?
Rey: bolne doge to bolonga, said rey annoyed with their qoustions and sat on the couch.
Swaron: Sorry!! Both looks at each others and gets lost in each others eyes. After some time Seeing them like that rey shouts
Rey: romance karna hain to apne gar jake karo. Meine yaha tum dono ko kuch important kaam kelye bolaya hain aur tum dono ho ki full on romance kare hoon.
Swayam: acha sorry yaar, itna gusa kyun kartha hain mere laal.
Rey: shut up yaar, kabse romance karon hoon tum dono, mere ghar pe, collage mein, RH mein, middle of the class yaar mere samne kyun baksh do mujhe.. said rey while folding his hand.
Sharon: haha yeah right, jab hum ek nahin the to tum hame milane kiliye kya kya karte the aur aab?
Rey: okej, okej whatever, meine tum dono ko yaha issliye bolaya hai yeh khene kiliye ke mene decied kiya hai ki main Taani ko kaal sab kuch bata dunga. Hamare break-up ke bare mein. It's time!!
Swayam: woow! Am so happy, finally tum use sach bata doge. Mein tum dono ke liye bohot kuch hoon!
Sharon: yeah, same here!
Rey: but isskiliye mujhe tum dono ka help chaiye.
Swaron: Ofc, yaar! What's the plan?
Rey: the plan goes like this'

Stitting in a circle and discussion how to reveal the truth to taani. Proud and satisfied with their plan Swaron goes home. Rey goes to bed, before sleeping he looks at Taanis pic and saying

Rey: baas aaj ki raat Tani, uske baad mein aur tum phir se ek couple honge. Phirse meni aur tum se hum banenge. Phele ki tara hasenge, baat karenge, kana kaenge, date pe jaenge, full on romance karenge. Baas aaj ki raat Taani. with a big smile and hugging Taanis photo he photo he falls asleep.

End of first part.
so guys how was it? Do give review, should I countinue or just give up?



chapter index:

part 1- page 1
part 2- page 2
part 3- page 2
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I Liked it very much. continue and update soon
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Nice Idea ... Continue Soon !
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Nice one dear
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nice concept and first part!
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Great start!!!! I'm really looking forward to how u will continue this!!
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Part 2

The sun had just raised and the birds was making noise at same time as a girl was standing in mandir and doing her morning aarti.
Wearing a faded yellow suit and wet hair she was standing there and singing. Slowly turning around we see its none other then Taani.

Seeing her brother and taujji standing next each other and being happy made her heart warm. She can't believe, it's been a month since they have started to get along. taujji realized how wrong he was and has accepted dance full heartedly.

With a big smile she slowly makes her way to them. She gives her taujji prasad, and takes his ashirwaad.

Taujjii: hamesha kush raho beta!
Taani: (giving a big smile) thank you taujji!
Turning towards swayam and gives him Prasad.
Swayam: thank you mere pyaari si ek hazaroon mein behna!
Taani: welcome bhai!
Swayam: (in his mind) while putting his hand on her head, hamesha kush raho Taani, aaj ka din bohot spicele hain tumare. Krishnaji se hamse dua kartha hoon ke tum kush rahoo aur tumhare sari ki sari khusiyan wapas mil jaye.
Taani: kya hua bhai? Kahan koh gaye aap?
Swayam: nahin bas ashe hi, mein kya soch raha hoon aaj breakfast mein kuch special ho jaye?
Taani: kyun aaj kuch speciel hain?
Swayam: (confused what to say) erhm erhm… woh aaj speciel, ehm.. haaan aaj sab ka jhuti, sab ek saat nasta karenge aur aur, haan Sharon bhi ane wali hain so isliye meine socha..
Taani: oooh, haan mein toh bol gay eke aaj saab ghar pe hain.. okkejj mein jake sabh keliye breakfast banati hoon.

On Rey side he hade just taken a shower and was now standing in front of the mirror fully cloth and ready. Looking hot as ever.
Rey: okej Rey, this is it. Today is the day, aaj ya to aar ja par. Aaj Taani ko waapas apni zindigi me lana hi hoga. Hey Taani ke krishnaji plsss help karna plsss..

Rey and Sharon arrives at swayams house same time.
Sharon: hello, well someone's looking handsome today. She said with a mischief smile.
Rey: you don't look bad yourself. He answered. While hugging each other
Sharey: andar chale?? Both said together and started to laugh.

Standing infront the door Rey says
Rey: Sharon plan toh yaad hai? Plss kuch gaarbar nahin hona chaiye!
Sharon: don't worry Rey, main saab samhalongi.

Taani hade just made breakfast for them when she heard the bell.
Opening the door she sees Sharon, she was about to say hi when she saw Rey.
Taani: Aap yahan? Looking at Rey
Rey: haan mein, kyun nahin asakta?
Taani: (in full attitude) nahin, nahin asakte
Rey: (shocked at her answer) excuse me?
Taani: you are excused!
Rey: whatever, saying that we went into swayams room.

In swayams room rey and swayam was talking
Rey: dude seriously, teri behen mujhe taunt ya back answare karne mein koi chanse nahin chorti.
Swayam: aab uski bhi toh galthi nahin hain. Uske liye tu hero nahin zero ho. Woh insane jo use bohot hurt kiya hain…
Rey: oh good tum dono bhai, behen ek jashe hoon.
Swayam: woh toh hum hain, he said proudly.
Rey: waise meine gang ko phone karke saab bata dia hain so they will help us making all the arrangement.
Swayam: awesome, that's good. We could really need all help we can get
Rey: yeah!!

On the other hand Sharon and taani gossiping while arranging the breakfast table.
Sharon: (thinking) kya kahon taani see, kisi bhi tara use bahar leke jana hoga, use distract karna hi hoga. Kya kahoon, kya karoon..
Taani: kya hua? Aap kahan koh gaye?
Sharon: who actually taani mein na soch rehi thi ke why don't we have a day out? Just u and me? Shopping, spa, manikyr, padikyr everything whatsay?
Taani: pata nahin, muj..
Sharon: kuch nahin suna mujhe, hum ja rahe hain matlab ja rahin hain.
Taani: acha thik hain.
Sharon: yaaayyy!! Chalo nasta tayyar hain, hum saab ko bulate hain.
Taani: haan haan, chalo.

End of part two!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful part
waitin for nxt part dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update, thanks for the pm, I'm dying to know what reys plan is
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing chapters, aww Rey planning something for Taani hmm... I can't wait to know what it is
Taarey little fight was so cute lol
U doing a great job, plz continue soon

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