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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

part 30 - lovely part...geet getting angry on lassya and scolding her was like she had more right on her than maan...loved her bossing over lassya and calling maan as brat...but this one moment of realisation was enough for lassya that 'he cared for her' and it was him who was scloding the hospital staff for not being anybody in lassya's room...

thought ke both will be friends but raat gayi baat gayi...again both are ready to fight with each other
cont soon dear

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Helllo MAM...ela unaru...hmm menu bane una...Meeru?...wowww...part 30 is awesome

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

awesome os i want to know who was being looked at ...please write another part

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Okie so since I am so lazy to reply to all of the comments and okay let us face the facts, I go blank not knowing what should I reply to such beautiful comments...anyway bottom line, I would like to answer few repeatedly asked questions.

Does Vicky know about Laasya's heart attack?

No. He doesn't yet. The mobile networks were down due to the downpour and they can't reach him. But he will be back soon :)

Geet and Maan's relation is too early to be named. I won't call them enemies but they aren't great friends too. Every gesture of them has a reason and will have a reason, so yes hold your hearts and don't be surprised if they behave out of characters in coming chapters, Oh, trust me they would.😆

Yes, Geet is changing. So will be Maan, and other characters. We all change, and the transition comes slow, so that's what is happening with these I think.

These guys aren't perfect and I don't know if they ever would be. Each of them have faults. Maan, Geet, Laasya and of course everyone's favorite Vicky. Thank you for sticking with me till now. Love you all.

Also special thanks to mishtiritu(Rituja) and hermoso(anu) for the amazing poems. I am reserving the spot with those beautiful poems. Update would come little later...

Once again love you all.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

A Poem by Ritu(mishtiritu):

Dard hai ya kuch ehsaas

Kyu wo pal lagte hai khaas...

Aankhon se tere dard jhalke

Honto pe fir bhi halki muskaan rahe...

Dil ko mere chubhta hai wo dard

Hum dono ko kahi jodta hai ye dard...

Anjaane main sahi tum manzil dikhati ho

Khud bhi us manzil ki taraf badhne lagti ho...

Kaisa hai ye anokha rishta tera mera

Dard se juda hai jo laayega naya savera...

Also special thanks to Anu (hermoso) for quoting the song of Jagjit Singh, making me listen to it on repeat🤗

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

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I loved the start a lot... it was as if a hope started flickering reading ti that all will be ultimately good for these two souls. That scene where Geet remains in the shadows letting Maan support his mother and Lasya having that warmth & concern from her son was beautiful. It caused a warm feeling to spread in my heart reading it.

Letting go did give her contentment & happiness that made her perception to be all bright that seemed to be dull so long. 👏

Lasya -Geet bonding was so sweet... and it was reciprocal to all their pent up emotions. A mother showering her love, concern & warmth to a daughter while a daughter able to care, love and sweetly dominate over a mother that she wasn't able to for so many years as destiny had snatched a mother's presence from her life, but now both have each other for it all. 😊

Geet's introspection & pondering in her changed behaviour in Maan's presence was quite a good way of even us knowing that the change is quite gradual and that the resistance has caused her to fall more for him even if it means masking with indifference and bitter words. I know it is n't love but then emotions are quite turbulent between them causing the needed catalyst.

Maan wanted to gift her dresses for all the damage he did to her 3 dresses directly or indirectly but ended up causing her more grief by making her vulnerable by snatching that. Very reverse to what he didn't want her to be ---- vulnerable but each time he becomes the witness to her vulnerable moments.

Interesting war waged within self, between each other & hope for the better... 😊

Love you ❤️ Hoping for more whenever it is possible for you... 🤗

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

When I think I have read your best, I am again and again blown away by what else you can come up with... It was lovely Shika.

The contrast between her two relationships was outstanding.

One where she can become a child and snuggle up to someone.. She can enter a room saying Tadaan, the openness of that gesture in stark contrast to her raising her chin in defiance when she senses him around.

The soup and the love that Lasya gives her is welcomed so openly while his every gesture is slapped back because he does not know how to reach her yet.

I loved her observations and stepping back at the hospital steps. There was a healing moment between mother and son and for Lasya's sake she put herself out of the picture.

Even the scene when she gets up and notices the beauty of the day and the room as if for the first time. The last few days have been rough on her and it feels as if a storm has passed.

I am ever in need of more and more of this story.

🤗You may have many loves but I have only you...😭

Thanks for updating...

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago