*Zindagi ab tum hi ho*- |an OS| Part-2, page 3

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Hi all..this is my first OS on MegHan, hope u will enjoy😉

Part- One

Vyas House

She was in the kitchen cooking food for her kids. She has once again started enjoying her life. Her life!! how can it be her life without Mohan?-she thought. But now he was there for her and for her kids.

"Dance mam, mujhe aapke hath ke bane chole khane hai!" she remembered little rimjhim's words., n this was the reason for her being in the kitchen.

"Are wah!! to meri annapurna yaha hai!!" said someone from behind. She knew that voice, that soothing voice had touched her soul years ago.

She immediately turned behind only to find him very close to her. She was feeling his breathe n so was he..their eyes met. Mohan let out a deep sigh.

' Agaye tum!..rimjhim kabse intezar kar rhi thi"

"sirf rimjhim?" he was back Mohan bhatnagar was back-thought megha.

"tumhe kaise pata chala ki main yaha hu?"

"in masalo ki smell ne hi bata diya ki yaha tumhare alawa aur koi nhi ho sakta!" he said steering her with his passionate eyes.

"Kya dekh rahe ho?" she asked him though she knew that he was looking at his world. He did'nt reply but silently adored her with his love-filled gazes and a blissful smile.

"Mohan!" she affectionately said his name ; put the gas off; and stepped even more closer to him.

"kya hua?" she confusedly asked.

"Pyaar!!! "he cupped her face "tumse, ek baar phirse" he said looking in her eyes with a teary smile. She also had tears rolling down. She gratefully smiled and then gently touched his cheeks.

"Jyada khush hone ki jarurat nahi hai, tumse pyaar hua hai matlab exactly tumse nahi!!" Mohan mischievously said.

Megha frowned "matlab??"

Mohan was quiet..he was enjoying his mirchi madam.

" Batao na! " she asked again and this time her voice was little stern.

Still he kept silence as he wanted to see that "Mrs. vyas" avatar

"Fine!" Megha furiously started walking back to the room.

Mohan took a sigh, quickly went behind her and grabbed her wrist.

Even she was playing with her lafanga patrakar as she knew that he was playing tricks with her "Jane do mujhe!!" She rolled her eyes.

"Achha?" Mohan raised his brows. He smiled, turned her towards him delicately and made her look in his eyes,

"Mirchi madam, main to bas yeh keh raha tha ki tumse to 14 saal pehle hi pyaar hua tha, ab jisse pyaar hua hai woh to meri beti ki dance mam hai!" He explained.

She was amazed as she had never expected this. Their smiles grew longer.

" Kamaal hai mirchi madam aap bhi aur main bhi!!"

" Kyu? aisa kya kar diya humne?"

" Are hum dono ne ek dusre ke saath 14 phere le liye par tumne kabhi thik se kaha hi nahi ki tumhe mujhse shaadi karni hai!!" He asked.

" Tumne kabhi thik se pucha hi nahi!" She whispered.

"Kya?" he did'nt exactly get what she said.

"kuch nahi!" she ignored her thought and slightly pushed him away from her

"Jao ab!! hamari dono angels kabse wait kar rhi hai tumhara! She said lovingly and resumed her cooking.

Though he has not listened what exactly she said, he understood what was in her mind.

" Mirchi madam..aaj raat 8 baje taiyaar rehna..main tumhe lene aa jaunga"

" But..."

" Na!!" he didnt let her speak " No sawaal jawab..bas 8 baje taiyaaar rehna..aur ha kisiko batana mat..ok? Bye Mrs. Bhatnagar..see u" he pecked on her forehead n went towards his angel's room.

She smiled n said to herself " Hmm..Mr.Bhatnagar ki koi jabardst planning lagti hai!!"


Huh..so how was it? u all must have understood what m i about to😉..2nd part is on its way!!!

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sabsfathima thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow Saau it was Lovely Pls hamaare NBT CV's ko mail kardo ...you have written what we all want to see ...pls continue soon .😊
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its ufff...yaar tum sab log kitney tlented ho yaar look at the uff scene..I can feel it "Kya dekh rahe ho?" she asked him though she knew that he was looking at his world. He did'nt reply but silently adored her with his love-filled gazes and a blissful smile. My whole rest of the day is going to be lovely 🤗 Part 2 waaah ! jaldiii
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabsfathima

wow Saau it was Lovely Pls hamaare NBT CV's ko mail kardo ...you have written what we all want to see ...pls continue soon .😊

eggzactly main yehi sab dekhna chahti hoon.Mere dimag mein yeh scene chal raha tha video .. little details she has taken care of..suni ansuni sab .👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW !!! What a MMlicious moment☺️! Complete Spice n' Sugar scenes that made me smile through out!!! Written very beautifully Saau!!! 👏
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You are doing awesome job saau.eagerly waiting for part2
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Awesome MM moment...very nicely written. 👏👏👏👏
Keep writing loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jald se 2nd part la Sauu - very nice :)


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Originally posted by: Jaynragz

eggzactly main yehi sab dekhna chahti hoon.Mere dimag mein yeh scene chal raha tha video .. little details she has taken care of..suni ansuni sab .👏



Jay tumhe toh shirtless Monu bhi chahiye 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnku all of you!!! means a lot to me😳

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