Maahiya , Sathiya Kr os

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xamination hall , exam going on . Few students are busy in their exam . where few students are trying to look over others answer sheet . There is pin drop silence in examination hall . Examiner is keeping sharp eye on every single student in examination hall . But still few students is trying their best to look over others answer sheet . Finally first bell rang .
"Only 10 min left students " examiner announced .
Everyone became tense in examination hall . The speed of writing is increased . Everyone is trying their level best to complete their exam . finally last bell rang .
"Stop writing" Examiner announced again with his heavy voice . Few students become sad , but few students are really happy and few of them mutual . But as examiner left after collecting answer sheets . Students start hooting , shouting . They all throw the question paper in the air .
Few girls break the point of pen and started throwing ink at each other .
"Finally we are no more school girls" girls shouted together .
Yes it is a girls school . In a few min examination hall become party hall . Everyone shouting , singing , pulling each other , screaming in joy .

"Why are you looking at your watch again and again" she was annoyed with her friends behaviour .
"You know , my mom . I need to go . Otherwise will kill me " she said sadly . Her friend looked at her for a second *sigh* "Come on Kriya , its our last day in school " she pulled her and start dancing .
"Where is , Kriya . It's almost 3pm " her mom said worriedly . "Priya , it is her last exam and last day in school . So she is having fun with her friends" her father said without paying any attention to her wife's word . "she is a girl " *cut* "So what" and he left from their . As he knows , her wife not gonna understand . Because she is really possessive about her daughter .
"Mom , papa i am home" she entered in with cheerful mood . Her mom looked toward her daughter with wide open eye . Her white shirt now looking like blue shirt . Her hairs are open . "What is this all , Kriya" Kriya looked at floor for a while . Then she looked toward her mom with innocent face "Mm.. mom after exam everyone was having fun so i am also" she fumble for words "So , how many times i told you stop behaving immature" Kriya feared as her mom shouted at her . "Stop it , Priya" a voice is echoed in living area . With teary eye Kriya looked toward her father and directly run toward him . Her father take her in tight hug . Kriya looked toward her mom with feared eyes still holding tight her father . "Stop taking her side , Raj . she is now big girl" Raj hide Kriya behind him "so what she is only 19 . Your are behaving like she is a criminal . She is your daughter " Priya looked toward Raj with fiery eye .
"I know she is my daughter that's why i am worried " Raj gave her you are impossible look "Kriya go and freshen up , your papa and me need to talk" Kriya looked toward her father . Raj gave him assure look and smiled . kriya left from there without single word . "Priya , are you mad ?" this is only thing Kriya heard . Kriya felt that something is bad .

After one week it's Kriya's bday . Raj organized a big party for her daughter . Guest gathered in party hall . after cake cutting "Ladies and gentlemen" her mom announced . Everyone gathered around stage . "Thank you so much for join us in our happiness . Now i would love to announce that soon my daughter gotta get engaged to my best friend's son " everyone clapped . But Raj and Kriya become silent because of shock . Kriya felt like someone stabbed her . She just passed out 12th and her mom already fixed her marriage . She ran toward her room and locked herself .
"Are you mad Priya she is only 19 and you fixed her marriage" Priya silently sat on sofa "I am talking to you Priya answer me ." Priya without looking toward Raj "come on Raj its not big deal . Trust me he is a good guy" Before Raj could speak any thing Priya left talking with her best friend . Kriya didn't say anything about this all . Because she knows her mother will not gonna change her decision . But Raj tried her level best , but at the and of the day Priya didn't agree with them .
Before a week from marriage . Raj came to Kriya's room and silently sat next to her . Kriya she was busy in looking her old pictures with her family . "Kriya , run away " Kriya didn't pay any heed to her father . "Kriya bacha i am talking to you"

Kriya finally hugged her father tight . But she was not crying . She was silent and calm . "No papa i am not going anywhere . If muma wants me to get married then i am okay with it" Raj he was proud at her daughter not because she agreed for this marriage . He was proud because she never let her parents down in front of any one .

"Did you saw his picture" Raj waited for her answer . Kriya pulled back from hug and hold her teddy in her arm "No , I don't even know his name ." Raj kissed her daughter on her hair "His name is Reyaansh . I will pray to God" Kriya held her father's hand , rested on his left leg "Why" . "Reyaansh will fulfill your all dreams . I know him little bit . He is nice guy" Kriya smiled at her father "Hope so "

Finally all marriage rituals are done . Kriya , she is sitting in his room , correction in their room . She was wearing heavy lehenga and jewellery . she was hating it . Suddenly she heared foot step . Her body become tense . Rey entered in room and locked the door . Kriya because of nervousness start sweating . She tightly clutched bed sheet in her small palms . Rey silently sat next to her "Hi"
Kriya didn't replied . "Umm i think you are tired . Go and change in night clothes . I know this heavy jewellery and leahnga troubling you a lot . " Kriya silently walked toward bathroom . Because of dim light in the room Kriya is un able to see his face .
After long cold relaxing shower . Kriya changed into comfortable night clothes .
"go and get some sleep . I know you are really very tired " Rey said slowly as soon as Kriya stepped out from bathroom . Kriya looked toward Rey and found he is already settled on couch . Kriya slowly walked toward bed .

"While setting on bed Kriya recollect her father's word . I think papa is right . He is different and understanding . He is really very calm and caring . " She don't know when she driffet into sleep . Around 3am Rey wake up . He slowly tip toe toward Kriya . Who is sleeping silently . Rey covered her with blanket . "I know you married to me because of your mom . But i married to you because i want to fullfill your dreams . "When i saw you first time i saw so many dreams in your eyes . or agar main us waqt no bol deta to tumhari mom koi or rishta find kar leti . Or agar wo tumharey sapno ka na samzta to . I don't know when i fell for you . But you know i really love your smile and your dreams and i promise i will help you ." he kissed her on forehead and walked back to couch . "

Whole night Rey unable to sleep . He was looking at Kriya without blinking his eyes . Finally sun ray entered in their room . Rey hurriedly take shower and come out . After getting ready he walked toward Kriya . Kriya she was sleeping like a child holding tight her teddy . "Beautiful" Rey slowly touched her face . She hold rey's hand tight in her palm in spoke in her sleepy voice "Please let me sleep" Rey smile on her innocence . After few mins Kriya woke . When she realised that she holding Rey's hand she left it immediately . "I am sorry ' she was uncomfortable . "Its okay , good morning" Kriya again remain silent "Tum bol nahi sakti kya ." rey teased her "huh" Kriya gave him angry look . "Okay iska matlab tum bole nahi sakti" Kriya hit rey with pillow "main bhool sakta hoon smze app ' Kriya start hitting Rey and Rey also satrt doing same . In a few min Whole room is mess . When they both tired they fell back on bed . Kriya she was laughing hard , Rey looked toward her .

"You look beautiful when you smile" Kriya become silent "I am sorry' She slowly said and she was about to leave when Rey pulled her back . Rey made her sit on bed in front of him "Look at me Kriya" But she kept looking at floor . Rey touched her chin and made her look at him "Listen Kriya , i know you are not happy with this all . But lets give this relationship a chance . I promise i am not gonna force you for any thing . Lets start from friend ship . You know i love your smile . I promise i will fulfill your dreams . Tomorrow we both are leaving for Canada. As you know , we gonna live there . so believe me . Friends"

Rey held his hand out for handshake . but Kriya silently looked toward his face . "What happened' Kriya silently replied "But maney kabhi kisi larkey k saath dosti nahi ki . " Rey laughed on her innocence "to ab kar lo' Finally she held his hand "Friends" Rey give him friendly hug "Okay now go and fresh up . neechey sab hamara wait kar rhey hey . so m waiting for you' Kriya smiled and walked .

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okay guys i would like to tell you that
this os contain more then two parts
and this OS has happy ending
so relax
here is part one
please check 4th post of this page for [-Author note-] . this note is really very important .
I hope you all understand so please have a look of 4th post of this page
please like and comment
pm on the way
luv u all
Aroma/-

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Posted: 12 years ago
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[B]Me first yuppie 🥳 *dhink chicka dhink chicka*

So coming back to the update...

Yeh kya tha... I loved it...

Story ko kase flip ki... Shock dilla diya...

I mean first the calm exam hall then the party exam hall...

Phir kriya ki mom dad ki argument and stuff...

The announcement of her marriage was like a jhatka sachi... Expect nahi kiya tha...

And ek hi part me shadi bhi kara di... Aahaan I like it... 🤗

Reys feelings for her are so pure and beautiful who don't wanna guy like that? 😉

And their friendship was fantastic... Shadi hogayi lekin pillow fights nahi Bhoole... 😆

(Note pe comment note ke under hai...)

Sorry I am for late unresing... My Internet ran out yesterday... 😔

Lots of love

😊

~Anu~[B]
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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[-Author Note-]
1. I have a news for you all🤔 . The news is , i am gonna discontinuous my all works 🥱. I really felt bad after getting bad response . After sending 353 pm i got only 38 - 40 likes . This is really very depressing😭 . Now i realised , that i am failed in describing the emotions in my story . That's why you people not liking my work . I am failed in connecting you people with the character of my stories . So finally i decided that i am gonna discontinuous my all works . This decision is good for everyone . 😊

2. Now next thing , as i love to write . So i would be unable to stop writing completely .😊
Therefore i am gonna write few one shots (OS) . My combine works are still on . I really felt bad but then i realised that whole mistake is mine because i am a bad writer . So no bad feeling against you guys . I am a literature student so i will try to polish my writing style .👍🏼

3. Soon i am gonna filter my buddy list also 🥱. so it's depend on you guys , that you want to stay in my buddy list or not😳 . If you want your name in my buddy list so better start like and comment on my work . Otherwise i will remove you guys from my list . I know i am rude , sorry for that . But this time i'm damn serious about my decision . Basically you guys liked my work but no comment . but i want to know which thing you like in my work and which you want to change . So i want likes but comment also . only like my work is not done better comment on it also .😊

4. Last thing , silent readers please start commenting on my work 😕. From now , i will gonna PM those who likes my work and comment on it . Now everything thing depend on you . In short , now ball in your court . So better decide what you want . Because i am not interested in wasting others time .😭

5. Now , for my good readers like Madhu , Yogini di , Roxy , Himu , Anu , cookie and so many please don't force me for continue my work . 😛

So if you want my PM and wanna see your name in my buddy list so better like this post . Because it will decide who gonna get future PM of my work . so better like and comment .

So this is i want to say . I hope you all understand . Sorry again for wasting your time .


Thank u /-
Aroma


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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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As you know I wasnt happy when I read the first two points you made cuz you are discontinuing all your work which is just sh*t cuz I love your works... and you said about you not being a good writer... I ain't happy about that... Cuz you are an amazing writer... So don't say that...


Point 3 and 4: yup... That's only fare comment Karo and pm gain karo it needs to work both ways... And you're right silent readers just give a comment and let the writer know what they are doing good and what they aren't... Cuz it helps improve and also boosts the writers spirit...

Point 5: hmm di you know I love you're works... One question and that is... If the likes go up... You will continue your works again right? And fine... But still don't stop writting... 🤗

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Love you...

And the I won't be able to unres the other comment cuz my internet is about to rum out... So I will do it tomorrow... 🤗

😊

~Anu~


Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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res
unres di
kya os likha hain
sorry di unres kuch zyada hi late akring
cuming to the os
amazing work di
👏
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kudos to u for the os
it was very nyc
and
di u describd it very nycly
it connected to me
thnks for the pm di
and
di u discountinuing ur works
oh god this is bad
i m sorry di i m also responsible for it cuz i did not lyk and comment but i m sorry i was busy with the accident and all so cud not
sorry di
meri taraf se plzz dont feel bad
and
its gud u wud rite os
waiting for ur next os eagerly

Edited by jas112 - 12 years ago
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unres

Amazing concept aro...

update was awesome...

n we love all ur works...
pleeesh continueee sooon...


Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 12 years ago
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okay i am NOT gonna talk to you for this thing! huff! i hate you! 🥺
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Originally posted by: -ChocoPie-

okay i am NOT gonna talk to you for this thing! huff! i hate you! 🥺



huh what i did 😭
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Love this kria ki mom ko kya problem he kria se. kitna rudely behave karti he kria ke satha rey is so understanding wo to paheli nazar mehi kria pe latoo ho gaya hayyy so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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