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MrsSSO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

The title is very nice and catchy !

Interesting prologue !

Nice writing and concept ...

Great start !

Coming to the update,

Nice entries of Uday and Manyata !

And even DS made an entry, didn't she ?

As for your questions,

I am sure it must be MANYATA and JAI, the two princess !

And i HOPE Manyata reaches the marriage !

I am not saying she will because i am not sure ... 😆

Continue soon ...

And add me to your PM list !

P.S. Sorry for the late comment, i know i said i would comment early but couldn't as i was a bit busy !

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: nityatandon
Hey... It was superb...
Loved it...
Waiting for the manveer meeting...
Update soon...
Thanx for the pm...
Do pm me nxt tym also...

Your answers

1. Its Manyata and J
2. Haan I think Manyata pahuch jayegi

HII😊😊THNX😆
HHEHHEHE ME ALSO WAITING RE

UR WELCOME
YEASH

HMM KK UR ANS IS RITE OR NOT
YEAH TU NEXT UPDATE MAI PATA CHALEGA😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sania_arora
awsome update.plz update the next part soon

THNXX BUT HOWW CHOTU COMMENT SWEETY??
THNXX😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: taarey1fan
awesome prologue...
plzzz update soon...😊😊

THNX
SURE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: -Zina-
That was really nice prologue!!
do update asap and thanks for the PM

THNXX YES😉...UR WELCOME😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Aweaome ,superb,amazing ,beautiful story
Loved it to the core
U recreated manveer magic
Interesting and super fantablous prologue
Superb writing and wonderful strt
Coming to the beautiful update loved all characters
Manver and jai and ds
The dialogues were amazing

As for ur questions
I think its jai and manyata for sure
And manyata will make it on time
Continue soon
Loved it
Superb
Update supr soon
Love u mwah

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Chand111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Great prologue. Would love to read more.

Pm me please.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

chapter one promo

guys all devgarah faily reached he akash n tara farmhouse

ds:sumita hume aj hi jana hoga yaha se aj raat ki party ke baad bacho se mill kar hum chale jayega

sumita:par q??

ds:wo kuch important kaam han

sumita:or humare bacha akash or tara ki best firend manyata kab ayegi

ds:wo bhi kaal tak pouch jayegi u dont worry kk

sumita:chale theek han

in other side

uday reyansh unnati both sitting in hall
n all start conversation

uday:guys hume aj hi jana hoga akash he is calling me n say ke aj ajao aj party han so hum aj hi chalte han uske farmhouse

reyansh:bhai wow so hum apne backs pack karte han

unnati:wow maza ayega i m waiting for vijay (blush)

reyansh:hehehhe always u waiting him bdw jo use karna chaya wo tum karti ho

unnati:bhai plzz dada dekho na he alway teasing me he is my fiance na

uday:i dont interfair in ur cat fightss u r my sis n he is my bro dono taraf se mai phaso not fair

in 2 hours later unnati uday reyansh all sit in car n reached the farmhouse soon

in other side

2 beautiful girls
going to akash n tara farm house??

chapter one promo that's it
now questions time
first i tell u ager in sab ka jisne sabse phale n acha jawab diya tu use millega koi ek gift kk

question 1:manveer first meeting kasi hogi pyar se ya larahi se??

question 2:wo 2 girls koun thi??

3:kiya dadi sahab or komal briraj waha se chale jayega??

question 4:kiya wo 2 girls pouch payegi ya nai??

question 5:kiya uday reyansh jin 2 girls ka wait kare han kiya ya wahi two girl han??

jane ke liya pariya chapter 1

guys plz hit like
n give ur feedsback
n this time give u all long feedsback

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awesome promo
And i am first in commenting yayayya
I loved the banner
It was all soo nice
Loved the bonding between the siblings l
Ds and others bonding is also nice
Hahha vijay bhai is till the same lol
As for the questions
I think manveer first meeting will be with formality then they would flirt and give attuide to each other and thrn be freinds amd the love story lol quitr a process
The 2 girls jay and manyata
I think yes lol
Yes they would reach and uday and manyat would meet at airport then go 2gether
I loved the promo
Update first chappy soon
Love u
Mwah wifey 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
Awesome promo
And i am first in commenting yayayya
I loved the banner
It was all soo nice
Loved the bonding between the siblings l
Ds and others bonding is also nice
Hahha vijay bhai is till the same lol
As for the questions
I think manveer first meeting will be with formality then they would flirt and give attuide to each other and thrn be freinds amd the love story lol quitr a process
The 2 girls jay and manyata
I think yes lol
Yes they would reach and uday and manyat would meet at airport then go 2gether
I loved the promo
Update first chappy soon
Love u
Mwah wifey 😛

hehehe love you janu
yayaya congo baby darling thnxx
omg this is a compliment han
thnxx hubby
hehheheh thank you
heheh vijay is always funny but abhi entry nai karwayi maine
wowo kiya andaza han han maybe u rite or not baad mai bataogi

hehhe hubby thnxx for the great n long comment
i loved ur comment so much
n i loved u also my janu
kisses on ur whole face n lips tooo
hmmm temprature ziyada hogaya yaha ka
baki ka jab hum or tum hoge akaile mai dogi kk
hmm love you hubby huggy

ya maine apne blood se likha han hehehhe😆😆

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