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Posted: 12 years ago
Y R U NT UPDTINNN???????. U promised to update 2day😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz dear update soon...can't wait for next update
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Hey m back sorry for delay since I m not happy with what I wrote so I was delaying the update and as usual I didn't re-check the update so plz forgive me for the mistakes

First Date

Maanvi went to jeevika's house along with shanaya jeevika and jeevika's mum and jeevika told to viraat that he has to pick maanvi at 7 pm sharp then only they will bring her back whole day went but maanvi was just lost in her world thinking about viraat he will live her she will be alone again she was thinking will he really leave her alone it was 6 in the evening maanvi was still lost when jeevika came and said ''maanvi'' maanvi was still lost in her thoughts so jeevika went near her and shouted ''maanvi'' finally she came out of her world and looked at jeevika with horrified face ''kaha khoyi hui thi tum''acha jaanedo chalo tayaar hojao abb viraat atahehoga'' said jeevika while giving her packet maanvi looked at her confusion and asked ''iss mai kya hai'' so she said ''tumhe yeh ab pehena hai'' she opened the box and took out a white chiffon saree maanvi looked at her more confused and said ''but bhabhi yeh mai ab kyu pehnu ab toh ghar jaana hai na'' ''kissne kaha ghar jaana hai'' said jeevika with evil smile she further continued ''tum ab isse pehenkar tayaar hojao'' and she pushed her in room

On the other hand in vadhera mansion

Viren-bhai tu kahi bahaja raha hai said viren while checking viraat

Viraat-ha bhai woh mai soch raha tha ki mai ki mai''woh mai

viren smirk and said ''ki tu aur maanvi date par ja rahe hai..haina '' viraat blushed viraat-bhai aapko kaise pata

viren-jeevika ne bataya ''okay cha lab tu tayar hoja teri first ke liye and he left viraat-''sorry maanvi maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai na now I will fix everything''thought viraat

he wore white blazer and black t-shirt inside and black jeans

7 pm at jeevika's house

Maanvi was ready she was wearing white chiffon saari a backless blouse with doris with very little make up her hairs were left open on her left shoulder with big diamond earings magalsutra tied around her neck and sindoor on her partition was shinning like crown her red bangles with dark mehendi was giving a new bride effect to her she was looking so stunning and gorgeous anyone will fall for her (eehhehe bahut taarif hogayi na lmaoo) door bell rang jeevika open the door and found viren and viraat she welcomed them and called maanvi,maanvi came down and viraat was lost in her he was not aware of the surrounding he was so lost in his wife's beauty he didn't blink for a sec (as usual like a typical hero *yawn* hope u all r awake) he was just staring at her shameless viren saw this smirked and said ''bhai teri hi biwi aise q dekh raha hai'' listening this viraat and maanvi blushed jeevika-chalo bye viraat maanvi tum dono jao hum ghar jaate hai maanvi become confuse and said ''aap log ghar jarahe hai matlab'' viren said-matlab kit um aur viraat first date par ja rahe ho jo viraat ne plan ki hai maanvi blushed at the thought of first date and more blushed because viraat plan it her happiness reache to next level and seeing the spark back in her eyes he was happy to while virman were buzy starring at eachother jeevika asked ''sab ache se hogaya na'' he just showed his thumb and he hug gave jeevika side hug and thn he kissed on her cheek and jeevika blushed and viren pulled her more close (virika scene dedicated to shivu a.k.a shivani 😃 ) (bg tune saare ga re sa-specially for shivu)

(sorry for cutting this scene actually m blank while writing today

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Virman reached resort he gave his hand to maanvi first she was surprise then she took his hand she came out of car and look around and found a beautiful view the resort was at isolated place far away from the shore of the city it was beautiful resort with hilly area around,they entered in resort which was beautiful from inside too it was very huge resort divided in 3 parts restaurant rooms and swimming area they followed manager who came to welcome them hand in hand maanvi was blushing since he kept his arm around her waist protectively showing to the world the gorgeous lady next to him was his,his gestures was raising a ray of hope in her he won't leave her but still he didn't told anything about it brushing all the thought she thought she will enjoy the evening with him.

Both reached at the table it was near pool side with two chairs around the table both chairs were next to eachother and no one just he and her she looked at him while he blushed she was enjoying this loving caring side of him they went near the table and like perfect gentleman he made her seat and he also seat next to eachother but where silence for few minutes then finally viraat broke the silence he took her hand in his and said ''maanvi m sorry for hurting u''but I have to go mujhe jana hoga'' he finally said those words which never wanted to hear so he is leaving her a tear escape from her eyes on that thought he immediately wipe tht tear cupped her face and said ''hey''don't cry'' she thought now or never she has to speak ''but aap ja rahe ho mujhe akela chord kar'' she manage to say before viraat could say waiter came and with the dinner (viraat already arrange everything eeheheheh mujhe dinner mai time waist nahi karna tha actually) both parted away waiter serve them dinner and went from their ''maanvi pehle khana khalo phir baat karte hai'' maanvi just nodded in agreement both had dinner it was romantic atmosphere with music in the background dinner undermoonlight under tent which was decorated with orchids (my fav only orchids) and candle on table i.e candle light dinner [:/] dinner was silent affair virman had dinner holding eachothers hand 🤣 (don't know y but this whole scenario is very funny for me) after dinner again everything went silent so to make atmosphere more romantic viraat asked maanvi for dance by asking her hand and maanvi hold his hand both came out of the tent and song was (sorry if the song is not correct with the situation actually I have no idea date par kaunse song play karte hai)

Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
he kept her hands on his shoulder and hold he kept his both hands on her bare waist (which made her blush) both where moving according to the song looking in eachothers eyes

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

He turn her around her back facing his hands on her waist and her on his both kept their eyes close feeling the moment viraat pulled her more closer and nuzzle her hair making her hold on him more tight

Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye


he buried his face in her neck which made her turn around and hug him tightly he smiled and pulled her more closer

Meharbaani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tere nazara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko, kinara mila

he broke the hug and stare at her innocent face she open her eyes slowly

Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sauhbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maanu mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye

He kissed on her forehead making her eyes close again tht was like promise that he won't live her ever



Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

And he hug her again and she hug him back both were lost in eachother

suddenly viraat's phone rang and both came out of the hug he pick up the call after few minutes he said chale and both came out of the resort and came near the car and viraat saw all the tyers were punctured

Maanvi gaadi se saare tyers puncture hai viraat said with confusion and suddenly it started raining

Resort was at isolated place so there were no cars and now it was raining so they can't go back home ''aaj raat hum resort mai hi ruk jaate hai'' said viraat looking at maanvi as she was wearing a while chiffon saari and was whole wet and her deep neck blouse was creating havoc in viraat's sense he brushed all his thought and they both went inside the resort

As both came back and went to lobby all were looking at maanvi as her white wet chiffon saari was making her look more sexy and hot viraat's blood boiled at it he pulled maanvi at himself with jerk and his hand on her waist

Maanvi felt it weird and blushed viraat removed his jacket and made her wear it,which again touched maanvi's heart and then again he pulled her towards him and went to the manager

Viraat-actually hamari car ke tyers puncture hai can we have room

Manager-sorry sir all rooms r booked

Viraat-koyi bhi room empty nahi hai

Manager-no sir m sorry'..but ha we have honeymoon suit sirf woh hi empty hai

listing to manager maanvi's eyes pop out honeymoon suit mai with viraat she blushed more viraat thought for a sec and thn said 'okay aap woh room ki keys dedijiye

that's it so how was it I know it wasn't up to mark

Edited by copypaste - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jaldi update karrr
finally am gonna *UNRES* this one yaar i also bcame lazy like you šŸ˜›
virman first date wooo it was ahem ahem specially the dance virat to ek dam fida hogaya gai specially manvi wearing this exy saree of hers and the beautiful atmosphere created around them by one and only besharmi.com šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
par itne romance mein bhi manvi was upset coz he is going to leave her and go thats not fair na 😭
update next part soon 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all the parts in one go yaar...😳

I just loved the story a lot...šŸ‘

Continue fast dear...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaaar whr's d updt??????
plzzz
Updaaate fst 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
after marriage first date wow šŸ‘ ]

runs to read
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Posted: 12 years ago
uzma teri mind wah wah šŸ‘
loved it...
oh so first date inan isolated placešŸ˜†
aww virman moments loved it😳
car mein four tyres kaise puncture ho saktha???šŸ˜‰
now wrong place to stop.HONEyMOON SUIT🤣
now i want update jaldi plz plz plz😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...romantic date...hope virat take manvi along with him...u portrayed the date so beautiful...continue sooon...take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i read all parts in one go wow ...that was super...virman first date soo cute...waiting for next part update soon...šŸ¤—

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