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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

hey zannat just read the 2nd part😳

and i must say you had written it very professionally👏👏
each and everything was describe beautifully
i knew it that virman will be totally different from each other and see exactly it is happened😳
i chuckled a little when virat made a list of qualities which he need in his wife
so finally maggie told him that she found a wify for him which is manvi
eagerly waiting for the next part now
plz cont soon and do try to pm me😳





thanx dear
glad u like it
i'm not kind of person who take others credit
actually i read this book so many time in short i loved the concept so give a try on beloved virman
so don't give any credit to me
i can't imagine in my sweet dreams that i wrote professionally...
i'm so bad in conveying or words
but just a try... this book is imprinted in my mind... each and every word is o my month
so hatts of the gal whose idea is this
i'm just write things on virman... my imagination
love you for your appraisal
i'm top of the world...i'm such a bad writer even i must say u r the best in conveying or writing not me...
😃 😊 ❤️

Edited by jannat89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yesterday I'm such a bad mood... u all understand na everyday is not our
yesterday was not my day...or a worst day
forget it
thanx to all who motivate me so that I continue further
seriously gals or sweet dolls...
love you all
but as i say before
i can't send pm coz of blocking and other stuff
you all have to bear me without pm
if you guys okie with that than let me kow that
I'll try one more time to sends pm but if didn't send than don't blame me
i don't know what I do

gals i'll tried it again but i think from from top alphabetical list there is some problem i can't send pm to hose... can't help



i'l give you teaser but i don't make draft yet for next chapter, i'll draft next chapter when i got replies from ur side that
u all are okie with that
sorry if I hurts you
but i don't have any option
love you all sweet dolls


love Jannat

Edited by jannat89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


TEASER

He turned''

Deep brown eyes cut straight to his with little hesitation and a clearness that told him this woman would lose poker game'

She was brutally honest and unwilling to bluff.

He recognized her gaze well enough, but age had changed the colors to a disturbing mix of aquamarine and sapphire.

Certain images came to mind'plumbing the depths of the Caribbean Sea in search of its mysteries.

A canvas of Sinatra's umbrel a skies stretched so far and wide a man couldn't find the beginning or end.

Her eyes were startling against the long black of her hair, which consisted of natural curls that tumbled past her shoulders and framed her face with a natural attractive as well as wildness she seemed unable to tame.

High cheekbones set off a lush mouth. He used to ask her if she'd been stung by a bee, then crack up laughing.

The joke was on him.'

Hot male fantasies were built around a mouth like hers'and it had nothing to do with bees.

Just honey.

Preferably warm, sticky honey poured over those plump lips and slowly licked off.

Ah, hell.





hope you gals like it

hit the like button and do comment

i don't promise for next update its totally up to you gals

don't misunderstood me...

just let me know what you all feels

and plz be prank and honestly

if you throw chapple, juties and other stuff I won't mind but be seriuo gals

love you all

till than take care

and be blessed


ur Jannat ❤️

Edited by jannat89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreeya121

der's no need 4 any changes gal...😃

d story is jus perfect...👏👏
luved d update...😊
so manvi n virat r related to ech othr... dey hav a past...😲
really excited to read frthr updates...😳




sheerya maybe ur inbox is full
i can't send you pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks sending pm about teaser its looking interesting looking forward for update
if some time u will get problem sending pm not worry its ok I will read u r story and comment
didn't take tension for small small thing and waiting u r update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

thanks sending pm about teaser its looking interesting looking forward for update
if some time u will get problem sending pm not worry its ok I will read u r story and comment
didn't take tension for small small thing and waiting u r update




hey dear
thanx alot
i think problem is from top listed gals...now i cant help
but love you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow- I loved the way u wrote the teaser- its lyk a professional writer I hav a strong feeling virat n manvi kno each other form before cnt wait for the update- do update soon plz jannat 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hww...jannat wat was dat...after reading dis teaser I can only tell u dat update fast dear...can't wait...



nd ya don't worry if u r unable to send pm...I so lyk ur story dat I will read it wether u pm me or ntt...so chill ya...

thnx for d pm dis tym...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Huma0301


<font color="#0099ff">wow- I loved the way u wrote the teaser- its lyk a professional writer

</div>I hav a strong feeling virat n manvi kno each other form before <div>
cnt wait for the update- do update soon plz jannat 😉</font>




dear as i say before i read this story credit is goes to original writer, each n words
it just my imagintion to virman..so i write this
thanx alot...
luv u dear... take care
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweettasi

hww...jannat wat was dat...after reading dis teaser I can only tell u dat update fast dear...can't wait...



nd ya don't worry if u r unable to send pm...I so lyk ur story dat I will read it wether u pm me or ntt...so chill ya...

thnx for d pm dis tym...




Pleasure is all mine
I'm trying 4 solving d problem
Hope it'll solve soon
Thanx dear

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