AsYa SS:Has your heart ever loved?Updtd Prt3 Pg15 - ON HIATUS - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww... this one's sweet!😊 and i'm so glad and relieved to see the rabies rani out of asya's life!! 🥳
wish that happened in reality too!!! but sigh . . .😒😵
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please update sooon! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow that was so nice thanks for pm😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A big thank you to everyone who pressed the like button 😳 and thank you all for the wonderful comments 😊 really appreciated 😃

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Will definitely be updating in an hour 😊
Love,
~Annie~
Edited by x_Mishti_x - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey people 😛
I know I've taken almost a month to update the second part to this.. I was busy shopping for my summer holidays 😆 I've decided to turn it into an SS 😆 but I'm not promising any regular updates because I'm going on vacation for 3 months on Monday. I'll definitely be roaming about the forum whenever I get the time and I will try and update as well 😊

IMPORTANT NOTE: I'VE CHANGED THIS INTO AN SS AND I HAVE ALSO BROUGHT BACK BILLO RANI BACK FOR SOME PARTS.. DIDN'T WANT TO DISAPPOINT ANYONE BUT A MAN'S GOTTA DO WHAT A MAN'S GOTTA DO 🤣 PLEASE BARE WITH ME UNTIL I KILL THIS B***H 🤣

For now here's part 2 😃

Part 2

"Does he think he owns me?!" Zoya muttered to herself after Asad left her room. "Shout at me when he feels like it without listening to a single word I have to say. And after I've been proved innocent, he comes to ask for forgiveness. But this time I won't forgive him" She said coldly to herself.

"But I also can't let him stand there on his own waiting for me" Zoya was now rethinking over her decision. "Arrggh!! I hate you Mr. Khan for making me love you so much" She mumbled to herself. "To go or not to go?" She was no pacing around her room frantically trying to make up her mind. A knock on the door startled her as she ran quickly to find Najma standing there with a parcel in her hands. "Zoya, yeh parcel kisi ne bejha tumhare liye" Najma said with a smile on her face, then handed the box over to Zoya. "Thank you Tamatar" Zoya took the parcel from Najma and closed the door behind her. Confused, she opened the box to find a black saree with a thick silver glittery & red roses border. "Wow! It's gorgeous" She lifted the saree and a note fell from inside.

"Miss Farooqui, mujhe pata hai ki aap abhi bhi yeh soch rahi hai ki aap aajana chahiye ya nahi. Lekin maine pehle bhi kaha hai ki fesla tumhare haat me hai. But if you do decide to come then please wear this saree." - Asad. She was much more confused after reading the note that Asad sent her. Zoya sat on her bed and put her feet up, then stared at the clock on her wall. It was already 7:15 pm and she still hadn't made up her mind. She slapped herself mentally not knowing what to do.

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Asad had everything prepared. By the sea, a gazebo with white drapes adorned on it. In the middle of the gazebo there was a table with a table with two chairs, covered in a white cloth. On the table, a small vase with red roses rested perfectly. A few lights were put around the gazebo to brighten up the night, but what made him much happier was the sight of the beautiful full moon that was setting the mood right. The sound of the waves calmed the place and some slow music played in the background. "Well done Asad Ahmed Khan. Zoya will definitely be happy after seeing all these arrangements. Just for her." He smiled, proud with what he had done, unaware of what the same beautiful night had in store for him.

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Zoya got up and made her way to the washroom to get changed after she decided to go to him and forgive him. "I swear its like I'm a puppet in his hands." She said annoyed at herself for not being able to resist going after he had called her to meet him. A few minutes later, Zoya came out of the washroom, draped in the black saree that Asad had gifted her. She sat in front of her mirror and set her hair in loose curls, then she put her earrings on. She looked at the clock that now read 8:32 pm. "Allah miyaan! Zoya what's wrong with you?! He said 8 and you're still here at this time!" She put her heels on and rushed out of the house like her life depended on it.

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Asad stood by the sea, in the middle of the gazebo with his hands in his pockets. He occasionally looked at the time on the Armani watch that rested on his wrist. It was one of the most important nights of his life. Even though she was already half an hour late, his heart assured him that she would definitely turn up.

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It was 9:00 pm and when Zoya looked at the time in the car. She was stuck in traffic and it would take her another 15 minutes to get to where she was going. "I hope he's still there" Zoya said, trying to keep calm and thought positively trying to keep all the negative thoughts out of her mind.

At the Diamond Jubilee, a woman in a red saree walked towards Asad and hugged him from behind. "I knew you would come Zoya" Asad said while turning around, only to be shocked at the horrendous sight standing in front of him. "Tanveer, how dare you!" He roared with a thundering voice. "Jammy, I told you that I love you and I'll never leave you. That's why I followed your car as soon as I saw you leaving the house." Tanveer said with a smirk on her face. "Aur yeh dekho, meri kismaat toh bohot accha hai. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki yahaan aakar mujhe yeh sab dekhne wali hai" She continued while she smiled victoriously at Asad. She took a few steps towards him while he stepped back. "Tanveer mujhse door raho aur yahaan se chale jao. Zoya will be here in a while and I don't want her to see you." He told her with a disgusted look on his face.

"I'm here to see Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan" Zoya said to one of the waiters at the reception desk. "Oh! Sir is waiting for you by the sea" The waiter replied with a smile on his face. "He's still here" She thought excitedly with a smile on her face. Zoya made her way towards the sea and as soon as she put her foot on the sand, red roses were poured on her. She was overwhelmed by this gesture so she started pacing towards that gazebo.

"That's what I want Asad. I want Zoya to see me here with you so she can hate you." Tanveer thougt evilly as she rushed towards Asad and hugged him. Coincidentally, Zoya reached by the gazebo at the same time Tanveer was in Asad's arms. Zoya couldn't believe her eyes. "Mr. Khan?" Tears rolled down her cheeks. "Zoya it's not what it looks like. Please meri baat suno" Asad pleaded as he pushed Tanveer away from him. "Nahi Mr. Khan! I came here thinking that you regretted what you've done but clearly I was wrong." Zoya retorted back. Tanveer was smiling through it all because she finally succeeded in her evil plans again. "No Zoya yeh sach nahi he. Please, listen to me. Just once." He moved closer to her but she moved back.

"You know what Mr. Khan? The only reason I came here is because I love you. I love you with all my heart, more than anyone and anything in this world." Zoya's tears were flowing from her eyes non stop. "But you know, as they say, just because you love someone, it doesn't mean that the person is obligated to feel the same." Zoya continued trying fight back her tears. "Zoya please listen to me. Trust me I understand how you feel and I.." "Mr. Khan you understand how I feel? Oh really?" Zoya cut him through his sentence with a sarcastic laugh. "Ek baat bataao Mr. Khan. Has your heart ever loved? You claim to understand how I feel, but reality is that you have no idea what I'm going through right now." This time her words were so harsh that Asad had tears filled up his eyes. Zoya couldn't handle it anymore. She took a few hasty steps away from him then finally turned around and ran away.

When Zoya left, Asad turned around looking for Tanveer, but she was no where to be found. He dropped down to his knees and covered his face with his palms then let out a loud scream filled with the echoes of his excruciating pain that was slowly eating him up from within. "Zoyaaa..!!" His eyes were red and filled with tears. Tears of pain. Tears of anger. Tears of remorse.

Zoya was about to sit in the car when Tanveer called out to her from behind. She turned around lifelessly to face her rival. "Aapko kya laga? Asad aapko mohabbat karta hai?" She laughed. "Uff.. Bechari Zoya Farooqi." She patted Zoya's shoulder. "A piece of advice for you Zoya. Aap Asad se bohot door chale jaao, kyunki Asad sirf aur sirf mujhse mohabbat karta hai." She tried getting a reaction from Zoya who was just staring into space with no form of emotion visible on her face. Tanveer was getting irritated because Zoya didn't utter a single words. "Zoya main aapse baat kar raha hoon. Jawab dijiye khuda ke liye" She blurted out. However, none of her words had an effect on Zoya as she just got into the car and told her driver to take her home. Tanveer was left on her own, flabbergasted at what just happened. She was expecting a response from Zoya but she got none; so she decided to go back to Asad but she was again disappointed as Asad he was also nowhere to be found.

So this is part 2 people. Hope you liked it.
I didn't proof read it so do ignore my spelling mistakes 😳
By the way, my Hindi/Urdu is absolutely outrageous but I've tried my best to make as much sense as possible 😆
Likes, comments and criticism are all welcome as usual 😳
Happy reading 😃


Love,
~Annie~
Edited by x_Mishti_x - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Annie really nice update!! Keep it up👍🏼
Looking forward to reading more😳
Edited by Asyaforever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!!! OMG DID SHE BELIEVE TANVEER!? OR DID SHE FIGURE OUT IT WAS TRAP!?

Sorry fangirl in me kinda took over. But seriously! You can't just stop there!

I love how she was trying not to be mad at him but couldn't help but let her curiosity get the best of her. And Asad's plans were sooo sweet and beautiful. I was sooo shocked when you said a woman in a RED saree came. I had a sinking feeling it was Tanveer. I don't know why.

But seriously, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!!!

Purdy please
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Oh God whaaatt? I loved this update. It was brilliant! You're so MIA these days. 😆

Anyways the update. Asad is a sweetheart, me likes and I hate tanveer. Like AsyaManic said, KILL THAT BITCH!

Update sooonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part dear
amazing work dis billo rani arhh i hate her so much
poor asya pls yar dnt seperate them do cont soon
and enjoy ur holidays

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