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My Darlings,

I am sure Ajay would have appreciated the insight we have about the one-and-only original ASR, had we been able to get the words of advice to him in time. Since the deed is done and he is now in the laser sharp vision of our ASR, let us see what transpires between the two next.😉 This is a long update.

English version posted right after this one. Enjoy and please comment.😊

Disclaimer: I do not own the pictures. They were procured for illustrative purposes from internet sources for public consumption.

Pyaar in the Pink City


Part 12 Ice, Fire and an Olive branch

"The doors we open and close each day decide the lives we live." ~ Flora Whittemore

"Hello Shyamji. Mein bol rahin hoon. Haan, mein iss waqt Shantivan mein hoon. Gabrayi ye mat, aas paas koi nahin hain"

"Haan Kamlaji! Tho jaldi kahiye-----" Shyam could barely contain himself. Finally, he would get some real time data. "Kya? Raani Sahiba nahin hain? Kahaan hai?"

"Woh tho hame pata nahin. Lagta hai apne naani ke saat, shehar se baahar gayi hui hai. Ghar ki auraton ke baton se lagta hain ki donon abhi kuch hafton tak wapas nahin aane wale hain." replied the woman who had accompanied the dai into Shantivan and had slipped away into a quiet corner to make her call while the women were absorbed in giving Aanya her bath.

Shyam's lips twitched in amusement and he raised his eyes to the skies half-mocking the Gods who seemed to present him with every possible opportunity to rise and shine. "Yeh accha mauka hain, iska hume poora poora faida uthana hoga. Aaj sham ko hume caf pe miliye, hum batate hain aage ka plan" He switched off his mobile and slipping on his glasses sauntered off to drive over to the office of Delhi Times to fulfill his cover job as a journalist.

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"These Sitars are lovely. Yeh tho badi acchi baat hai ki aapne sambaal ke rakha hai Rathodji" said Akash impressed with the various Sitars that were showcased behind glass in the Music hall. They had belonged to Ajay's ancestors through the generations and were priceless antiques. "Please drop the formality Akash. Aur yeh bilkul top condition mein hain, chaho to aap aasma sakte ho" replied Ajay. "Shukriya, par iss baar nahin. Agle baar mein khud aapse poochunga Ajayji." Smiled Akash giving Ajay a searching look as he continued, his eyes intensifying under a cover of geniality "Waise aap bahut hi zimmedaar insaan hai aur rishton ki bahut khadarkarne wale lagte hai. Who kya hai na, humari Anjali di hamare dil ka thukda hai, aur unko ab aage kissi bhi tarah ka tes pahunche, yeh muje hargiz manzoor nahin hai." He paused, smiled and finished"But now that she is under your roof, I have nothing to worry, you will never let your guest be hurt in any way. Ab mein chalta hoon. Bhai aur Di Vrindavan jaaneke liye mera intezaar kar rahen honge" and Akash left at an unhurried pace, satisfied that he had hit his mark.

Ajay stuck his hands in his pockets and pursed his lips as he continued to watch Akash's retreating back. He had to hand it to him. Akash was one cool customer. He had delivered his message, 'stay away from my di' with perfect clarity and yet with a smoothness that belied the steel in his voice. Interesting! If this was the Ice then he looked forward to the fire.

************

Arnav surveyed every inch of the twenty-five acre spread that was Vrindavan. Every minute and every step got him pumped up with the project at hand. Nitin and Anjali outlined several ideas based on their discussion the previous day. Akash and Arnav made their suggestions and with some omissions and commissions by the end of the day they had a firm set of requirements and an end-state vision of what they wanted the resort to look like and offer as services to guests.

"Aaaj ki raat rukh kyon nahin jaate bte?" enquired Virenji. "Nahin chachaji hume wapas jaana hai. Khushi se kahke aaya hoon ki aaj sham tak ghar lautunga, aur agar nahin gaya tho who gabrayegi." Said Arnav. "Waise aap ke nyota tho jab daadiji ne sweekar kar hi liya hai to hum sab ko tho, do hafton mein Teej ke liye aana padega na?" smoothed out Akash smiling at Virenji. They were all settled in the gardens by the tennis court at Malhar, exchanging small talk while watching Nitin and Ajay play. Ramu kaka rolled in the tea-cart and Anjali poured out tea for everyone. She handed chotte his cup of black coffee, picked up the other one attempting to stand as she noticed the game end and Nitin jogging over to where they were.

"Doosra coffee kiske liye hai Di?" asked Arnav. "Woh Ajay baba coffee lete hain hukum" answered Ramu kaka, before she could. Arnav smiled cocking an eyebrow, and gently taking the coffee mug from Anjali's hand he stood up "Allow me di." he said and strolled over to join Ajay who was putting away his racket at the far end of the court.

Ajay turned at the sound of approaching footsteps and automatically extended his hand to accept the coffee. Here comes the fire he thought as he took in the purposeful set of Arnav's jaw and the steely look in his eyes. "Thanks, Arnav. I was on my way to join you". "How about we take a stroll?" suggested Arnav and walked around the court taking the farthest route back, expecting Ajay to fall in step. "Ajay, you are a wonderful man. Famous, accomplished, rich with an illustrious bloodline, and my di is a huge fan of your paintings. I have a great deal of respect for you and your family." He paused, stopped and looking straight into Ajay's eyes continued in a low and deliberate tone that emphasized the finality of the message "Par jab baat mere di ki ho, tho yeh sab kuch mayine nahin rakte. I will not care for anything or anyone when it comes to shielding her from any further pain. Di, mere zindagi ki sab se important persons me se hain. I have seen the way you look at her, and if I were to give you one word of advice, it would be ' back off."

So, the stories I had heard about the formidable ASR and his intimidation-tactics-101, were indeed true. But if he thinks Ajay Singh Rathod would keel over just because he said so, then he has another thing coming. Returning his unblinking gaze, Ajay replied, his face carefully impassive, "Anjali is lucky to have a brother like you. But, don't you think you should give her credit for making the right choices? After all, woh aapki Di hai and she is a big girl. She may not appreciate this little chat of ours. Besides, the homework you have done on me should have revealed that once I set my mind on something, there is no backing out. In return for your forthrightness, I'll give it to you straight where Anjali is concerned. As of now I have not yet decided where I stand, one way or the other. The day I do, the only 'no' I would take will be your sister's. Knowing you, I am sure you would expect no less from a man who proposes to be your Di's suitor."

Arnav opened his mouth, but his rejoinder was prematurely cut-off when he heard his Di calling out, "Chotte----kya kar rahen hain aap dono? Jaldi aayiye". The men turned around in the direction of the porch and Arnav lifted his coffee cup in acknowledgement. "Now, Shall we join the rest?" said Ajay, courteously gesturing with his hand for Arnav to precede him on the path back to the porch where the family had gathered.

Both men were lost in thought on their walk back. Arnav deciding to keep a close watch on Rathod even as he admired the man's confidence and conviction, while Ajay wondered with a secret smile, whether the brothers realized just how much of an advantage they had given him by warning him off their Di. Clearly they had sensed something about Anjali's reaction around him that tripped the alarm in their head. And who would know her better than the two of them. The thought cheered him up immensely and he sipped his coffee looking on, while the family bade a fond farewell to the Raizada brothers who were flying back to Delhi in Arnav's jet. What the hell had happened with Anjali in the past? Why were they so protective of a woman who was in her mid-thirties and had seen the world? Why was she so sad and lost at times? Answers, he needed answers; but from her and none other.

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"Papa" said Tashi turning to look at her dad, who put away the book, he had been reading to her and tucked her in bed. Tashi was a voracious reader who consumed books by the dozen, and yet this bedtime reading was the one ritual they had kept up since her childhood. He cherished this time with her, for he knew in his heart that this would soon come to an end. But while they lasted, these were the special daddy-Tashi moments, when Tashi shared her heart's secrets with her dad.

"mmhmmm Tashi. Kya baat hai?" he asked crouching by her bedside. "Brothers are so cool na papa? Anjie aunty is so lucky, she has so many. And ------ Arnav uncle, ------- he is sooo handsome." She gushed, her eyes sparkling. "Yes she is and yes he is. Now, goodnight Tashi." He kissed her forehead switching off the bedlight. Ajay smiled at the irony of the situation as he recalled Arnav warning him off his sister earlier that evening, while here was his daughter hero-worshipping him. This was the first time that Tashi had called another man besides himself as handsome. God! How quickly she had grown up. Soon she will be a teenager and he would be the one beating up the boys. But if Tashi was going to set her bar at Arnav to measure them by, then he could be damn sure that only the best of the best would get her attention.He made his way to his studio to put finishing touches on his painting, chuckling at the thought.

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"Good night naani" called out Anjali as she shut the door and stepped out of naani's room. "Arrey Ramu kaka aap abhi tak apne kamre mein gaye nahin?" "Nahin maalkin. Woh abhi Ajay baba ka bhojan khatam nahin hua hai aaj" replied Ramu kaka. "Kaka, maalkin nahin hume aap bitiya hi bulayiye. Aur Rathodji abhi tak dinner nahin ki? Kyon?" she asked, puzzled. "Jab kabhi bhi Ajay baba apne chitra banana me vyast ho jate hain, tho sab kuch bhool jaate hain." "Accha", Anjali pondered and then decided she would never get a better opportunity to thank him in private for his help with her rakhis. "Ramu Kaka, aap jake sojayiye. Mein abhi thode der jagne vali hoon. Jab woh aajayenge mein unse kahdoongi ki aap unke liye dinner hot plate pe rakhdi hain. Theek hain?" suggested Anjali sweetly, sending an unsuspecting Ramsingh to his room.

Anjali stepped into Ajay's studio carrying a covered tray laden with food, careful not to disturb him while he worked. He stood off center in the room, his face in profile slashing away at the canvas with his brush. Setting the tray down on the low stool, she settled herself on the divan to watch him. Ajay's face was a picture of concentration as he focused his entire being on his work. He had a brush held between his teeth and one stuck behind his right ear, while he continued to deftly work in what seemed like details, pausing ever so often to smudge the colors with his thumb and fingers. An unruly lock of his hair fell on his forehead barely skimming his left browbone, while his lips pursed or pouted in response to what he saw emerge on canvas. She could not see the painting itself, but was content to study him, now that she was sure his attention was trained elsewhere.

He had known the exact second she had entered his studio, her lilac perfume announcing her arrival long before he spotted her in his peripheral vision. He decided to feign ignorance as much to finish his work as for the fact that he needed the time to compose his thoughts. This was indeed an unexpected visit. What brings her here at this hour? If I have to hear another Raizada tell me what I should or should not do, I swear, I'll blow my top. He thought; his movements deliberate and measured. He paused and studied his handi-work with a critical eye for a few minutes, before putting away his brush and easel and turning to her.

"Why hello Sugar Queen, Aap yahan? Iss waqt? Kya baat hain? Jagadne ka irada hain kya?" he asked his tone light and his eyes teasing. Anjali erased a quick pout, deciding to ignore the darned term he used to address her and the sudden spike in her heart rate at the mischievous twinkle in his eyes. She decided not to rise to his bait; instead smiling at him she said simply, "Nahin aapke liye dinner layi hoon. Aap wash-up kar leejiye, tab tak mein parosthi hoon." Ajay was taken aback for the second time in the space of thirty minutes. He nodded and walked away to wash his hands. He realized how famished he was as with his eyes closed, he savored his first bite of the missi roti that Sharada bai excelled in making. Anjali watched in silence while he ate and suddenly reached out causing him to look up at her warily and move his head back. She pointed to the side of his head and extending her hand plucked the brush behind his ear, "A-a-aapka brush" she blurted, waving it in front of him. They both burst into laughter, easing the tension and ending the awkwardness between them.

"Darasal hum apko thanks kahne ke liye yahan ayethe." She handed him the glass of water and continued, "Agar kal aap hamari madad nahin karte tho hum paheli baar chotte ko apne haat se banayi hui rakhi nahin baandpate. Shukriya Ajayji" she said glancing at him from under the cover of her lashes. They strolled out to the terrace and stood by the carved railing looking out at the gardens bathed in moon-light. "You are welcome Anjali" he said leaning his back against the railing and crossing his arms. "And Muje bhi maaf kardijiye, kyon ki I judged you too soon. How about we start afresh?" he asked looking into her eyes earnestly. Anjali nodded, too dazed at the unexpected apology to speak. "Par ek baat tho hain. Mein aapko Sugar Queen bulana band nahin karoonga. Mere liya iss shabd ka matlab badal gaya hain aur ab yeh naya meaning aapko suit karta hain because, you are indeed a sweet person." He finished sincerely with a smile before she could protest.

Anjali laughed at this, her heart did a crazy jig at the sight of the dimple dancing on his cheek and she ruthlessly shut down her inner voice that was about to issue its dire warnings. Just for today, she wanted everything to be perfect. It was the first time since she had met him, that she sensed a comfortable rapport between them. This was the dream tete-e-tete that she had waited a lifetime to have with her celebrity idol, and nothing, not even her inner-self was going to ruin this moment.

The surroundings took on a gilded appearance to Anjali's eyes, as they chatted and laughed well into the night; their swing gently swaying while the cool night-breeze carried with it the scent of the nearby raat-ki-raani (cestrum nocturnum ' night jasmine) perfuming them and the night that enveloped them.

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Edited by ForLoveofBarun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
My Darlings,

I am sure Ajay would have appreciated the insight we have about the one-and-only original ASR, had we been able to get the words of advice to him in time. Since the deed is done and he is now in the laser sharp vision of our ASR, let us see what transpires between the two next.😉 This is a long update.

Enjoy and please comment.😊

Disclaimer: I do not own the pictures. They were procured for illustrative purposes from internet sources for public consumption.

Pyaar in the Pink City(English)







Part 12 Ice, Fire and an Olive branch

"The doors we open and close each day decide the lives we live." ~ Flora Whittemore

"Hello Shyamji. It's me. Yes. I am in Shantivan right at this moment. Don't worry, there is no-one around here that can catch me talking to you."

"Good work Kamlaji! Hurry, give me the scoop-----" Shyam could barely contain himself. Finally, he would get some real time data. "What? Raani Sahiba is not at Shantivan? Where is she then?"

"I do not know yet, where she has gone. All I could gather from the conversations of the women of the household is that she has gone out of town with her grand-mother. They are both not expected back for a few weeks now." replied the woman who had accompanied the dai into Shantivan and had slipped away into a quiet corner to make her call while the women were absorbed in giving Aanya her bath.

Shyam's lips twitched in amusement and he raised his eyes to the skies half-mocking the Gods who seemed to present him with every possible opportunity to rise and shine. "This is great news, and ofcourse we have to make good use of this unexpected favorable turn of events. Meet me this evening at the caf and I'll lay out the plan for you" He switched off his mobile and slipping on his glasses sauntered off to drive over to the office of Delhi Times to fulfill his cover job as a journalist.

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"These Sitars are lovely. You have done a phenomenal job of taking care of them and preserving them Rathodji" said Akash impressed with the various Sitars that were showcased behind glass in the Music hall. They had belonged to Ajay's ancestors through the generations and were priceless antiques. "Please drop the formality Akash. These are in great-working condition. You can try them out for yourself if you wish to" replied Ajay. "Thank you. But I regretfully decline for now. Next time, I'll seek your permission and will try playing them Ajayji." Smiled Akash giving Ajay a searching look as he continued, his eyes intensifying under a cover of geniality "Ajayji, you strike me as a responsible man who places a high value on integrity and values relationships. Anjali Di is the apple of our eyes. She has been through a lot, and I would be loath to see her getting hurt ever again in future." He paused, smiled and finished, "But now that she is under your roof and your care, I have nothing to worry about. I am sure you will never let your guest be hurt in any way. I have to go now. Di and Arnav bhai are waiting for me to join them on our planned tour of Vrindavan" and Akash left at an unhurried pace, satisfied that he had hit his mark.

Ajay stuck his hands in his pockets and pursed his lips as he continued to watch Akash's retreating back. He had to hand it to him. Akash was one cool customer. He had delivered his message, 'stay away from my di' with perfect clarity and yet with a smoothness that belied the steel in his voice. Interesting! If this was the Ice then he looked forward to the fire.

************

Arnav surveyed every inch of the twenty-five acre spread that was Vrindavan. Every minute and every step got him pumped up with the project at hand. Nitin and Anjali outlined several ideas based on their discussion the previous day. Akash and Arnav made their suggestions and with some omissions and commissions by the end of the day they had a firm set of requirements and an end-state vision of what they wanted the resort to look like and offer as services to guests.

"Why don't you both stay over at the haveli for the night?" enquired Virenji. "Thank you chachaji. Unfortunately I would have to decline. I promised Khushi I'll be back in Delhi by night, and if I don't she will needlessly worry about me." Said Arnav. "Chachaji, now that daadiji has accepted your invite for the family to observe Teej in your Haveli, we will all have to travel back in another ten days in any case. Right?" smoothed out Akash smiling at Virenji. They were all settled in the gardens by the tennis court at Malhar, exchanging small talk while watching Nitin and Ajay play. Ramu kaka rolled in the tea-cart and Anjali poured out tea for everyone. She handed chotte his cup of black coffee, picked up the other one attempting to stand as she noticed the game end and Nitin jogging over to where they were.

"Whose is this second cup of Coffee, Di?" asked Arnav. "Oh! Ajay baba drinks Coffee and not Tea. This is for Ajay baba hukum (my Lord)" answered Ramu kaka, before she could. Arnav smiled cocking an eyebrow, and gently taking the coffee mug from Anjali's hand he stood up "Allow me di." he said and strolled over to join Ajay who was putting away his racket at the far end of the court.

Ajay turned at the sound of approaching footsteps and automatically extended his hand to accept the coffee. Here comes the fire he thought as he took in the purposeful set of Arnav's jaw and the steely look in his eyes. "Thanks, Arnav. I was on my way to join you". "How about we take a stroll?" suggested Arnav and walked around the court taking the farthest route back, expecting Ajay to fall in step. "Ajay, you are a wonderful man. Famous, accomplished, rich with an illustrious bloodline, and my di is a huge fan of your paintings. I have a great deal of respect for you and your family." He paused, stopped and looking straight into Ajay's eyes continued in a low and deliberate tone that emphasized the finality of the message "But all these things would mean nothing to me, when it comes down to taking care of my Di. I will not care for anything or anyone when it comes to shielding her from any further pain. Di is one of the most important persons in my life. I have seen the way you look at her, and if I were to give you one word of advice, it would be ' back off."

So, the stories I had heard about the formidable ASR and his intimidation-tactics-101, were indeed true. But if he thinks Ajay Singh Rathod would keel over just because he said so, then he has another thing coming. Returning his unblinking gaze, Ajay replied, his face carefully impassive, "Anjali is lucky to have a brother like you. But, don't you think you should give her credit for making the right choices? After all, she is your Di and is a big girl. She may not appreciate this little chat of ours. Besides, the homework you have done on me should have revealed that once I set my mind on something, I do not back out. In return for your forthrightness, I'll give it to you straight where Anjali is concerned. As of now I have not yet decided where I stand, one way or the other. The day I do, the only 'no' I would take will be your sister's. Knowing you, I am sure you would expect no less from a man who proposes to be your Di's suitor."

Arnav opened his mouth, but his rejoinder was prematurely cut-off when he heard his Di calling out, "Chotte----What's keeping the two of you? Come on over and join us". The men turned around in the direction of the porch and Arnav lifted his coffee cup in acknowledgement. "Now, Shall we join the rest?" said Ajay, courteously gesturing with his hand for Arnav to precede him on the path back to the porch where the family had gathered.

Both men were lost in thought on their walk back. Arnav deciding to keep a close watch on Rathod even as he admired the man's confidence and guts; while Ajay wondered with a secret smile, whether the brothers realized just how much of an advantage they had given him by warning him off their Di. Clearly they had sensed something about Anjali's reaction around him that tripped the alarm in their head. And who would know her better than the two of them. The thought cheered him up immensely and he sipped his coffee looking on, while the family bade a fond farewell to the Raizada brothers who were flying back to Delhi in Arnav's jet. What the hell had happened with Anjali in the past? Why were they so protective of a woman who was in her mid-thirties and had seen the world? Why was she so sad and lost at times? Answers, he needed answers; but from her and none other.

************

"Papa" said Tashi turning to look at her dad, who put away the book, he had been reading to her and tucked her in bed. Tashi was a voracious reader who consumed books by the dozen, and yet this bedtime reading was the one ritual they had kept up since her childhood. He cherished this time with her, for he knew in his heart that this would soon come to an end. But while they lasted, these were the special daddy-Tashi moments, when Tashi shared her heart's secrets with her dad.

"mmhmmm Tashi. Kya baat hai?" he asked crouching by her bedside. "Brothers are so cool, aren't they papa? Anjie aunty is so lucky, she has so many. And ------ Arnav uncle, ------- he is sooo handsome." She gushed, her eyes sparkling. "Yes she is and yes he is. Now, goodnight Tashi." He kissed her forehead switching off the bed light. Ajay smiled at the irony of the situation as he recalled Arnav warning him off his sister earlier that evening, while here was his daughter hero-worshipping him. This was the first time that Tashi had called another man besides himself as handsome. God! How quickly she had grown up. Soon she will be a teenager and he would be the one beating up the boys. But if Tashi was going to set her bar at Arnav to measure them by, then he could be damn sure that only the best of the best would get her attention. He made his way to his studio to put finishing touches on his painting, chuckling at the thought.

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"Good night naani" called out Anjali as she shut the door and stepped out of naani's room. "Ramu Kaka, you are still up. Hw come you have not retired to your room yet?" "Madam, I am waiting for Ajay baba. He has not yet had his dinner tonight" replied Ramu kaka. "Kaka, please don't address me as madam. Do call me bitiya. And Rathodji has not yet finished his dinner? But why?" she asked, puzzled. "Once Ajay baba starts painting, he loses all sense of time. He feels neither hunger nor fatigue till he is done." "I see", Anjali pondered and then decided she would never get a better opportunity to thank him in private for his help with her rakhis. "Ramu Kaka, you know what? I have a suggestion. I was planning on staying up a little while longer anyway. How about I inform Rathodji that you have left his dinner on the hot-plate when he comes downstairs, while you go and sleep?" suggested Anjali sweetly, sending an unsuspecting Ramsingh to his room.

Anjali stepped into Ajay's studio carrying a covered tray laden with food, careful not to disturb him while he worked. He stood off center in the room, his face in profile slashing away at the canvas with his brush. Setting the tray down on the low stool, she settled herself on the divan to watch him. Ajay's face was a picture of concentration as he focused his entire being on his work. He had a brush held between his teeth and one stuck behind his right ear, while he continued to deftly work in what seemed like details, pausing ever so often to smudge the colors with his thumb and fingers. An unruly lock of his hair fell on his forehead barely skimming his left brow bone, while his lips pursed or pouted in response to what he saw emerge on canvas. She could not see the painting itself, but was content to study him, now that she was sure his attention was trained elsewhere.

He had known the exact second she had entered his studio, her lilac perfume announcing her arrival long before he spotted her in his peripheral vision. He decided to feign ignorance as much to finish his work as for the fact that he needed the time to compose his thoughts. This was indeed an unexpected visit. What brings her here at this hour? If I have to hear another Raizada tell me what I should or should not do, I swear, I'll blow my top. He thought; his movements deliberate and measured. He paused and studied his handiwork with a critical eye for a few minutes, before putting away his brush and easel and turning to her.

"Why hello Sugar Queen, You? Here? At this hour? What's the matter? Couldn't sleep without picking a fight with me?" he asked his tone light and his eyes teasing. Anjali erased a quick pout, deciding to ignore the darned term he used to address her and the sudden spike in her heart rate at the mischievous twinkle in his eyes. She decided not to rise to his bait; instead smiling at him she said simply, "No. I brought you dinner. Why don't you wash up while I serve?" Ajay was taken aback for the second time in the space of thirty minutes. He nodded and walked away to wash his hands. He realized how famished he was as with his eyes closed, he savored his first bite of the missi roti that Sharada bai excelled in making. Anjali watched in silence while he ate and suddenly reached out causing him to look up at her warily and move his head back. She pointed to the side of his head and extending her hand plucked the brush behind his ear, "Y-yo-you-your brush" she blurted, waving it in front of him. They both burst into laughter, easing the tension and ending the awkwardness between them.

"Actually I came up here to thank you." She handed him the glass of water and continued, "But for your help, I would not have been able to make my rakhis and for the first time in all these years would have broken my tradition. Thank you Ajayji. It meant a lot to me" she said glancing at him from under the cover of her lashes. They strolled out to the terrace and stood by the carved railing looking out at the gardens bathed in moon-light. "You are welcome Anjali" he said leaning his back against the railing and crossing his arms. "And forgive me, for judging you unkindly and without any reason. How about we start afresh?" he asked looking into her eyes earnestly. Anjali nodded, too dazed at the unexpected apology to speak. "I want to make one thing clear though. I am not about to stop calling you 'Sugar Queen'. The meaning of this word as I intended it has changed in my mind and now it suits you literally, because, you are indeed a sweet person." He finished sincerely with a smile before she could protest.

Anjali laughed at this, her heart did a crazy jig at the sight of the dimple dancing on his cheek and she ruthlessly shut down her inner voice that was about to issue its dire warnings. Just for today, she wanted everything to be perfect. It was the first time since she had met him, that she sensed a comfortable rapport between them. This was the dream tete-e-tete that she had waited a lifetime to have with her celebrity idol, and nothing, not even her inner-self was going to ruin this moment.

The surroundings took on a gilded appearance to Anjali's eyes, as they chatted and laughed well into the night; their swing gently swaying while the cool night-breeze carried with it the scent of the nearby raat-ki-raani (cestrum nocturnum ' night jasmine) perfuming them and the night that enveloped them.

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Edited by ForLoveofBarun - 12 years ago
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What a happy update! Loved it and thank you so much for the English translation!
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Gotta run to the campus dear: plz bear with me until tonight (its morning here now)

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Here I am... re-reading the update now...
You know, whenever you start the update with Shyam, I feel more excited, alive. Been missing Shyamu so much, I guess. Just goes to show why happily ever afters do not exist in real life. Life without problems simply do not exist...
I kind guessed it was Kamla ji who is Shyam's accomplice. She had met anjali before, and tried to blackmail him too right? How did she actually come in? Probably you might reveal in coming chapters. What i didn't get is why does Shyam had to become a journalist? can't he simply be a Villain-in-hiding??

And this hug is for giving TWO dhamakedhar ASR vs ASR's, when we asked for one, you gave us two? Waah!!👏 Loved both of them. Akash and Arnav in their true elements, but the threat is the same. And Mr.Rathodji's reaction is just what i expected it to be. We wouldn't want nothing less from him.

Love Papa-Tashi moment. Sooo Tashi is already under ASR charm huh? Ladki, your taste is not bad 😳 And you are just the latest addition to the LOOONG list of fangirls who are *ahem* in love with this guy, so we'll just say, welcome aboard. 😃 😃

And hope things get better from now on between A-A.

Waiting for the next,
Love Ya!

PS. Doesn't shyamu feel J for Anjali having moved on??? I guess he still doesn't know, but when he does?? Hope this time Khuhsi and Payal catch him trying to sneak in to the house and beat him up good and proper. 😆


Edited by aruni50218 - 12 years ago
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PART-11

You know Indu Di, this update brought tears in my eyes. I'll tell you a personal anecdote. I have an elder sibling, my di. I was quite young and rakhi came, and in my exuberance I asked my sister what is rakhi and what we do on rakhi. My sister replied that we tie rakhi on our brother's wrist on the day. Now I was confused about what should we do since we did not have brother. My sister came up with the idea that we should tie rakhi on our favorite rose bush. Our neighbor was listening to our convo and she brought his son to our home . Fifteen years have passed by we still tie rakhi to our bhaiyya and few more neighbors who became brothers to us sisters. Its strange when your blood even does not stand for you sometimes, we found allies in someone who are only related to us by emotions.


Anyways enough of my bak-bak.


So Ajay has finally decided to help anjali. He is taking sure steps to mend his relationship with anjali. Radhika...Ajay's shatir brain remembered that she love embroidery. good for anjali.


Aarti...Anjali taking her rightful place in 'Malhar' unknowingly and then the entry of Chotte ...It was an amazing surprise.


Love the Tashi part. How new this feeling of family is for her. Her innocent mind yearns for a family.


The brother in arnav woke up, Ajay are you ready for a face off with the great arnav singh Raizada, because no one messes with the ASR's girls-his nani, his maami, his sister, his sister-in-law and his wife...


great update
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PART-12

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

This was the poem that came in my mind as soon as i read the title.


This Shyam is such a loony. But shyam babua you are unaware of the fact that this time you won't be facing just two ASRs but 3 ASRs. But what the!!! Shyam is working as a journalist. Does having a police record does not count these days when you apply for a job.


I absolutely loved the convo between Aakash and Ajay. And this where our CVs lacked, the character of Akash had so much potential but they never chiselled his role in the show. Aakash warned of Ajay in the sweetest and most polite way. Aakash is a brother who would protect his sister without creating any hullabaloo but nonetheless his methods would be effective. Akash prefers the backstage and not the limelight. Love this Akash.


ye kya is ASR ko bhi coffee hi pasand he. Jija-saale ki khoob pategi. kehte hain na 'saari duniya ek taraf, dulhan ka bhai ek taraf'.


This is our ASR no prelude, no pretense, no introduction. Straightaway 'BACK-OFF'.


But the cake is taken by the confidence of Ajay. Unknowingly the two brothers have aggravated the fire of love which was in Ajay's heart which was just in initial stages till now. Forbidden fruit is the sweetest.


So Ajay does not know about Anjali's past. It would be interesting to read how the past unfolds infront of Ajay.


Tashi and Ajay scene was sooo cute. Brothers are so cool na, i share the same sentiments, Tashi darling. We are sailing in the same boat. Arnav is handsome and Ajay is happy that tashi will set the bar at Arnav to measure guys. But I see a little bit of green too, Tashi has called another man handsome.
My dad has posting in a different city and i am missing him.


'Sugar-Queen'. The paradox shyaam used to call him Rani -Sahiba and he Sugar-Queen. I don't know why but I did not like this title sugar-queen. I am sorry.


and this was there first night together 😉.


Great update


Edited by dhakkanmaster - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an update ...Indu ...Super long and Super good...
How similar yet opposite are these brothers...
Both love their Di to bits , both warn Rathod to backoff .that too in style. If Akash was all suave issuing a veiled threat...Arnav was all heart getting right to the point...

Ice pigal gayi...ab dil pigalne ki der hai 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu,
MAGIC!!!! This is one word that describes your style of writing ⭐️
Can I have such adoring hunks as bros ?? ...OK scratch that ! ASR, the original can NEVER be my bro😳...I drool on him😆, but cool as ice Aakash ...as good as ever in getting his point understood with minimum of fuss but equally deadly 😃
Are we having Teej in the next update ? Please bring Khushi to the picture now...I can imagine Khushi getting the vibes between Anjali and Ajay and creating instances to make those two spend time with each other and also managing her hotheaded Arnavji😊

Looking very much forward to the next update.😛
Edited by Hriju321 - 12 years ago
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Love the way you wrote Arnav's and Akash's warning to Ajay. Message was same but the deliverance was so different. Scared about Shyam's intention, wondering whats he is planning to do? Overall a superb update, finally Ajay and Anjali are taking baby steps towards a relationship... Beautiful. Thank you so much for the pM, it was a fantastic update, exceptionally well written 😊
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Yes! Finally some happy moments!! :) Great update!! and thanks for the english translations!!

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