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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Just read allawsome conceptn last updatewas supar cool




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH

Awesome update. 👏 👏 Loved reading it😳 Specially loved the last part of update.😃



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I am really happy that you liked the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

all the best for your exam... in case u update it...
just pm me... but i will comment in short...
as got very well bad sick so will comment late...
but i will sure comment continue ur works



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Yaar I really appreciate it...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nikkreyarshafan

ALL THE BEST for ur exams dear...
come back soon...
we will b waiting for ur update 🤗




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

BEST OF LUCK FOR UR EXAMS DEAR :)





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: grungta11

awesome

luved kriya's attitude...:)
cnt wait fr kriya's truth to b out
read it in a go
update nxt part soon
n do pm me..:)




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Glad you liked it...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys I am back with an update!!! Sorry yaar couldn't update earlier I had exams but here is the update... *kaan pakad ke sorry* 😔
I really don't know where this part came from in my head but it just did... Hope you guys like it...


Here is the update...


***Next day!***
It's really early in the morning and the rehearsal wasn't booked by anyone so Kriya was there...
But the louians and the teachers were also there. As the louians where going to participate in a dance completion and therefore they had to collect the information and plan everything so that it all goes smoothly and as a result they said they will meet in the morning at the dance studio. Unfortunately that extra burden Naani the behenji was also there as she thought she can, and no one said anything as she's Rey's girlfriend and Swayam's sister! On the other hand RDX Nichole, Karan and Sid were there as they had do some pending work and thought that will meet at Karan's office and Kriya was supposed to come but she didn't, so they thought they will check the dance studio!
So the loulians,naani and the four teachers were standing at the dance studio but both were standing at the different door ways so they can't see one another.

When they got there they saw Kriya dancing!!!!

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Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labo'n se yun pilaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na din dhale sataoge
Na raat ki nashili bye se neendh mein jagaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun



She walks up to the mirror and puts her right hand out, as if wanting to hold someone, but her hand doesn't touch the mirror; as if what she was seeing was too far away from her reach...Her eyes were moist, clearly reflecting pain in the thin rim of water which covered her eyes. She then turns her back toward she mirror and walks three to four steps and turns back around!

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na dooriyaan dhikhaoge
Na thaam ke woh josh mein yun hosh se udaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na jhoot se sunaoge
Na rooth ke sirhane mein, remote ko chhupaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun


She does really quickly tip toes ( like a ballerina) to towards the other end of the rehearsal hall so that the long width is on her right.
And then she does air spits twice and her toes pointed in a sharp position as such that they were pointing pointing dead straight. But the tears coming out of her eyes poured so much rage that showed how disturbed she was!
She is back in the middle of the rehearsal hall.
She shakes her head in a circular motion with her hands on either side of the head such that it showed that she could hear people but she didn't want to them sounds and it seemed like othat's why she was covering her ears. A person seeing this would think that she feels haunted. o

She does a back bend with her right hand free as it was trying to catch a something but it wasn't visible to none who was watching this extraordinary site!

Aankh bhi tham gayi, na thaki
Raat bhi na bati, na kati
Raat bhi chherti marrti
Neend bhi lutt gayi, chiin gayi
Raat bhi na sahi, na rahi
Raat bhi laazmi, zaalmi
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun


With that she gets up on her two feet and her back straight and she grips the air making it look like she was holding someone's hand and does a couple dance just that when it comes to lift she falls!

Gets back up and looks into the mirror and starts doing spinning ( Pirouette) with sharp pointed toes, shaped like a knife and her the endless tears coming out of her pearl eyes made it seem that they have never heard of the word "stop"! Eventually which seemed like ages she stopped and her movement suggested that she felt dizzy, just then she tripped.
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labo'n se yun chhudaoge


She gets back up with eyes which were now scarlet red the agony in her was now clearly evident and she walks towards the mirror as if seeing a person in it; she strokes it as if she was stroking someone's cheeck!

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The song finishes and she walks to her water bottle and taking a zip and sniffing she walks out as the louians hide!


Later all of them go in the rehearsal hall while the teachers go to Karan sir's office.

**Rehearsal hall**

Neha: "Neha never see Kriya like this" worried and tensed tone.
Vicky: "you're right kagu" tension clearly reflecting in his voice.
Sharon: "I think it's about yesterday" she is really worried and trying figure out the reason behind Kriya's agony filled dance.

Saying this Vicky, Swayam, Rey and Sharon herself go in the flashback of the events that occurred the day before, while the others are showing an what-are-they-talking-about expression.

Taani poV

Why do they care about that b**** and what are they thinking about hope my prince charming hasn't been talking to her! Please krishna ji aisa maat hone dena.

PoV end

Taani: "Bhai Rey Vicky and Sharon bhabhi I mean Sharon what are you thinking?" being nosy...
Sharon: (irritated by her nosey behaviour) "what?!"(shouting)
Taani: (why did she shout at me) (going all inocent again) "main baas yehi pooch rahi thi ki app log kya sooch rahe the?"
Vicky: "baas kal jo hua tha wohi"
Bharat: "kal kya hua tha?"
Vishaka: "ha dude baataoo"
Vicky: "wo kaal haina…"
(Cut by swayam)
Swayam: "kal aisa Kuch nahi hoova tha"
Neil: "kal Kuch to hua tha"
Sharon: "yes but why do you guys care and plus it's not like going to change anything now so really just leave it"(serious)
Taani: "par baata kyun nahi rahi ho?"
Sharon: "miss AGS hume bata na hai to hum bata ye ge aur hume nahi baata na hai to nahi" ( back to her attitude mode)
Taani: ( what would have happened yesterday? I need to find out) "Bhai kaal kya huva tha?"
Swayam: "Taani is nothing just leave it"
Sharon: "exactly my point and why do you want to know I mean is all the other ask I get the point because they know Kriya and were friends wih her but you have nothing to do with her apart from she's is and always will be Swayams best friend, my best enemy, Vicky is sister and Reys ex girlfriend."

Vishaka: "you said one thing wrong dude!"
Sharon: "what that?"
Neha: "we are her friends"
Simmi: "not we "were""
Sharon: "well guys than why you being so mean to her"
Swayam: "leave it guys we need to go to class and plus we couldn't even do the planing for the competition today so"
Vicky: "yeah let's go to the class"



**Canteen**
Neil: "abh to baata kal Kya hua tha?" to Vicky
Vicky asks the Sharon and Swayam and they node a "yes"
Vicky: "well yesterday Rey spoke to her... " and narrates the entire story.
Taani poV
What? No way! Thatswhy he's avoiding me sience yesterday. Kriya you b*****
Taani poV end
Neha: "Neha bad is"
Vicky: hug her "Kagu we need to find out why?"

Just then Kriya and Sid come in the canteen as thought they will get their food and check if everything is fine over there.

Taani: (she shot up from her chair and she was very angry that Rey talked to her and mover over kissed her and walked towards Kriya) shouts "How dare you? Why have you came back? Just stay away from Rey! He's mine!"
Sid poV
What does she think about herself she can't talk to princess like that I better do something the whole canteen is staringa be listening to all this. As she'll will regret this action of here in a few minutes.
Sid poV end

Sid give everyone a glare indicating them to leave and everyone does so apart from the loulians. Sid don't care of they stay or not.

*On the other hand*
Swayam: "How dare Taani do this in front of everyone!"
Sharon: "She is insane Kriya do something"
Vicky: "Swayam I don't care if she's your sis or not she can't do this"
Neha: "Right you are babu"

*Back to Kriya and Taani*

Kriya: (Kriya slaps her)
Everyone in shock to see this and Sid is like I knew this is going to happen thats why I sent everyone out and he gives a slight chuckle
Kriya:(shouting back) excuse me you bloody Behenji stay in your limts watch your toung you b****! Look Reys your boyfriend and I don't want him he is my ex you get that straight! And more over get some manners and shut your bull s**t crapy mouth and move about of my way you gawar( barges past her when)
Taani poV
I will get you for this wait till I tell Sid about you and Rey yesterday (evil smirk) ( hahahahanahah you try that)
PoV end

Taani to Sid: "sir do you even know that your girlfriend and Rey kissed yesterday"
Just then a beautiful and sexy girls comes in
Girl: "hello you wierdo he's my boyfriend"
Louians were in shock that Kriya isn't Sid sir's girlfriend
Sid: "Tammy what are you doing here? I missed you so much"
Tammy and Sid hug
Tammy to Kriya: "kuti mera boyfriend china chati hai!"
Taani: ( even better now she will know what it's like to mess with me) "yeah she is trying to steal your boyfriend"
On the other and Louians are disgusted on seeing this behaviour of Taani
Back Taani and Kriya
Tammy: "will you bloody shut up?"
Kriya: "tu yahan kya kar rahi hai kuch kaam bhi karle"
And she goes up to her
Tammy: "oh chup kar sab tere jaise workoholic nahi hote" and where's my hug
And they give a bone crushing hug to each other
Taani poV
What? Krishna ji why is all this happening to me? Huh
Taani poV end
Kriya: "so if your drama is over will you move"
Sid: "clam down na princess"
Tammy: "let's go guys"
And the trio leave leaving the drum struck Louians and Taani whereas Rey just simply walk out because he's guilty of making the wrong judgement about Kriya so he makes his way to the fire exit
The Louians shout Taani and she stands their crying
As Louians leaves

*Sid office*

Tammy: "so sid you cheating on me?" teasing
Sid: "I would never even think about it tammy you know that I really really love you"
Tammy: "I know sid and I love you too"
Kriya: "so I will guys you carry on"
Tammy:" I came here to meet you I missed you and why did you have to come back over here?"
Kriya: "I had to plus I got meet to you because of that"
And they catch up on their life's

When in the others two new guys come in the college.




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So guys how was the update? How was the thapad which Taani lovingly received hehehehe 😆

Aur phir se bada wala sorry kyun ki meine bhoto time ke baad update kar rahi hoon... It's just merko song nahi mill raha tha...



Please do leave your comments and likes below...
All shoes and tomatoes as happily welcomed!!!

Have a dancing day guys...

Love ya all 🤗

😊

~Anu~
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As usual superb update...😃

de dance sequence was faboulous...

nd dis is one of ma fav song...

maaza ayya jab kriya ne tanni ko thapad mara...😉

kash aur ek do thapad padte...😈

aur ab yeh 2 new guys kaun hai..???😕

overall amazingly written...👏

ab nxt update jaldi dena plzz...

lots of luv...
❤️


Edited by kanchi01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
thapad ws superb
ek aur padhna chaiye uss b**** ko😡
thoda romance bhi dikha yr kriyansh aur swaron ka bhi
update soon
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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