MG. NEW SS.NANDRI, PART-3/PG 17,JUNE 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Nangu pangu maan..bt i luv him..and geet u r cho cute..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Nice part.
Geet n maans masti full of fun
SAnaya loves maan n rohan geet...
How much maneet talk

Im In love with the pictures you posted
WOw..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely concept

loved all characters

maaneet are just awesome and their friendship is out of the world
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for the late reply dear
went out of station
loved the both parts

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum...Luv Maneet Crazines n Geet ne to phle hi sanaya ko dhamki d di maan se dur rhne ki...bechari Sanaya .:-) superb rocking update:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanku friends for ur lovely comment and likes
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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PART-3



Km,

Maaneet came inside but shock to see some one in te kitchen rather than Nakul




Geet : who is she

Maan : ah I remember maa said tat some one is cuming from hp, as maid

Geet : hmm maid and smirk and look at Maan

Maan look at her and both hi five each other, Maan signal all te servants to move , at once te whole mansion look very silent





Here Jhaku bhai, new character who going to bring te hiden love from Maaneet with her non stop love talks.she is from hp, deepy in love with her man lucky singh




Jaku is cooking in te kitchen, singing song ,suddenly te phone rings she went to take te phone


Jhaku : why it is so silent now only I saw all are working here but now it is looking like hauted house oh god, were will I search others in tis so big palace, babaji pls save me


She went to hall to take te phone,

Jaku : hello

Priya Maan ki mother was on te line

Jaku : ji mam, ahan, after chote saab cums, I will give him coffee, ok mam, bye,

she cut te call and look at te whole once again, a fear came to her, she went to kitchen, a pan is kept on te gas and on tat a omlette was paced

Jaku : babaji wen I wnet to take phone I switch off te gas, now cum it on

She run out , suddenly tv on automatically, she got fear and saw te tv,



Jaku : babaji, krishnaji, durga maa,

Again te tv off, again it on, on , off on off


She got scared and rush out and saw two people sitting on te dinning table , a plate kept with omelette, and two of them praying to god


Maaneet sitting on opposite side of te dinning table and praying to god, jaku bhai was so scared, she wet slowly ear them with shivering and ask




Jaku : wow mei, who are u

Maan got angry : how dare she , im our palace , a woman without our permission

Geet showed te fork towards her : how dare u enter to our palace, who are u



Jaku got scared : wo mei mei new servant to tis house

Geet : oh new maid, ok we will forgive u, ghost have a habit of forgiving humans, which u human does't have

Jaku nearly fainted : wat ghost

Maan started to laugh like devil,

Jaku started to sweat : wo mei

Geet : wat mei mei bakri tara

Maan : do u know romeo Juliet,

Jaku : tat is movie naa

Geet : u know laila manju

Jaku blushes : tat is also a movie

Maan in stern voice : u know raj heer

Jaku : tat is also a movie

Geet : do u know who they all

Jaku blushes , bitting her nail: lovers

Maan : they are not ordinary lovers, they sacrifies their soul for they love

Jaku : ahan



Geet : dewanna , dewanni

Jaku : who are they

Maan got angry : u don't know who are they shame on u

Jaku got frightened with Maan ki voice

Maan point his finger to Geet : she is Dewanni



Geet to Maan : he is dewanna

Maan : like all other lovers our love too failed , so we died

Jaku : wat u both died

Maan : ahan we died 30 years before

Jaku : 30 years

Geet : aha, 30 years back, same day we fixed poison in omelletet and fed each other and died

Jaku holds her heart : wat suisite, (she don't know english so she saying sucide as suisite)


Maan chucked : ahan ahana, same site




Geet : so every year on tis same Friday we will cum here to fed omelette to each other


Both fed te omelette to each other singing song : la la ha ha la la


At tat time , phone rings

Jaku : ghost sir ghost sir phone is ringing can I take

Maan : it is for u, ghost wont get phone calls

Jaku rush to take te phone : hello, priya called to enquiry Maan came


Jaku : maa no chote saab didt cum still but here some ghost, me no here, she was babbering two ghost sitting and eating omellte, maa only in movies I have seen ghost, but here two ghost sitting and eating

Maan suddenly pulls te phone



Maan :hai maa no , it just for fun, ok bye


Jaku now smiles : ahan now u came to line , I didt fear wiping her sweats, I just acted with u both , how is my action , raising her invisible collar

Maaneet look each other : superb



Jaku : mam, said she is having only one son, who is tis baby

Maan stand close to Geet holding her : whom u think




Jaku scan Geet top to bottom : why cant , seeing her with u ,any one can say she is ur girl, seeing u both together I remember, darmendra hemalini, sharuk kajol, , ur Jodi is superb Jodi

Maan : ohh and both started to laugh

Jaku : ok wen is ur marriage

Maan : hey hey stop , we not lovers , she is my best friend staying to next house

Jaku : hai hai whom u r fooling, a hot girl staying next to ur house u didt fall for her

Maan whisper : Geet really ur hot

Geet glared at him and smack him with her hand

Maan : ouch

Jaku : ok ok, freshen and up choote saab, I will prepare coffee for u both

Geet : for me tea

Jaku : hmn, she went to kitchen

Maan : hey Geetu she sing well yar, she is nice too, I like her

Geet : chi hit him on his stomach

Maan : hare Geet why u always hitting me, im not ur punching bag, rubbing his stomach

Maan : ok cum we will go to kitchen and continue tis

Jaku saw them both : wat u both doing my area u both wait out saab I will bring u snacks

Maan : wat jaku we want to know abt so we came here

Jaku became excited : hmm ok saab

Geet : ok then we take a small interview

Jaku : why not im ready, she straightened herself

Geet took a big spoon as mike , and Maan holds te box as camera


Geet : ready

Jaku : im ready

Maan : start action

Geet : wat is ur name

Jaku : jaku bhai , all will call me jaku bhai , my man will call me jaku jaku she blushes

Maan : wow so sweet



Geet : Maan control , ur from

Jaku : hp

Maan : saying te place itself very kick, do u drink



Jaku : wat u asked me like tis, im so hurt

Geet : hmmm

Jaku : in my place only gents will drink

Maan : we don't know tat

Jaku : but sometimes, to beat our hubbies some ladies will drink

Geet ; hmm great place, who all they in ur family

Jaku : everyone

Maan : big family

Geet : ok leave everyone, say abt ur man



Jaku blushes , bitting her nails : my man ki name name lucky singh and close her face

Maan : baab re, he falls on Geet,

Geet : say abt ur love story


Jaku : my man lucky singh , very smart handsome, his walk , his talk everything so smart, wen we are young they engae us, but due to his mother we are separated , she is te only vili separating us, me to praying to all god wen she will go to babaji, buts he in tis 80 years also sitting like rock and eating chicken,


Maan : bechari



Geet :wat movie u saw now

Jaku : ddlj-35 times , kkhh - 45 times and

Geet : wait wait why u always talk abt Love


Jaku : coz jaku is meaning of love, I talk only love, im walk only love, I think only love, LOVE LOVE LOVE


Geet whisper to Maan : really yar if we talk with her some more time,we will became te world's best love Jodi so better have ur coffee and leave soon



Maan : hmm


Next day


Maaneet bunk they class and went to movie, they reached te threater rushing , but seeing te no ticket board they got upset



Maaneet : oh god


Geet : coz of u only we didt get tickets

Maan : hey wat I did

Geet : then wat sitting and flirting ith tat reena



Maan : she is very hot u know

Geet : shut up



Maan : ok cum lets go to some theme park

Geet sat on te chair : now ay I want to see tis movie at any cost

Maan : off ok wait, I will see if I get tickets

Geet : hmm


Maan went to get tickets in black, at tat time rohan came with his friend, Geet was roaming seeing te posters





Rohan : Geet u r here

Geet : ahan I and Maan came to se movie, we didt get ticket, u

Rohan : yaa I got it

Geet : ok im leaving Maan , she left te place


Rohan ki friend : Rohan tis is nice chance , take my ticket , watch te movie with Geet

Rohan : but Maan

Friend : i will see him

Rohan : hmm


Rohan went near Geet wiping his sweat : Geet if u don't mind u can have My Friend ki ticket he already seen tis movie he just came for me


Geet look at him and smirk : oh really thanku and took te ticket, wait I will say to Maan and cum, coz of him only I missed




Rohan smiles : hmm

Geet left to search Maan

Rohan ki friend : se I said naa, she have some feelings for u

Rohan : thanku yar

Friend : is ok, I will wait till she cums

Rohan : hmm


Geet meet Maan

Maan : cum yar lets go to some other place

Geet : why

Maan : I didt get ticket

Geet : u go

Maan : u

Geet : I got ticket for me

Maan pout his lips : then wat I will do


Geet : u go out, have popcorn , wait for me, till then I will see te movie and cum and then we both will go home together


Maan : hey watt is yar tis is not fair and cribbing to her, sitting , Geet keeping her hand on his shoulder




Geet smiles at him : ok cum , Rohan is flirting making te floor sea, we can try to catch some fish

Maan : oh then we catch a shark there

Geet smirks : hmm

Maaneet came near Rohan

Geet took te ticket from Rohan : wat is tis number

Maan : 6

Geet : urs

Maan : 7

Geet : ok cum lets go

Maaneet run with te tickets

Geet : sory Rohan

Maan : ahan sory Rohan, but we will give u te money for tickets 2mor

They run inside te threater

Rohan ki friend : see her guts

Rohan smiles : I love her for tat guts only how smart she is


Km,


Maaneet came after watching te movie and saw Major Ravi sitting in te hall watching cricket in te tv,


Ravi is neighbor to them and friend of khuraan and handa .he is tamilian, retired major, always cum to km, to watch cricket, today also he came to watch cricket. But some time he will irritate Maaneet , so they too some time play prank on him




Maan : helo uncle

Ravi : hello kids how r u

Geet :we are fine, so watching cricket

Ravi : hmm

Maan : uncle yesterday u wen t to see cricket to Krishna uncle house naa, wat happen



Ravi : don't ask tat, I was watching cricket but tat 80 year lady kick me out of her house coz she want to se ftv

Maan : wow sexy granny

Maaneet went to kitchen , jaku was preparing pakodas

Jaku : u both came, u have eaten outside food, but it wont stand in front of my pokodaa

Geet : for tat only we came fly to have ur pakodaas

Maaneet took te pokodaas and exchange it

Suddenly Ravi coughs : Jaku Jaku with soft voice

Jaku : ahan sir

Ravi : bring me water

Jaku : oh god wat is tis man, irriatating me from morning, asking water for 100 th time,


Maan : jaku he is major

Jaku : so wat saab, he is asking water tat also I can tolerate , but te way he calling me jaku jaku, my man also didt call me like tat


She took te water and went to give him

Maan : I think he became nonveg

Geet : hello he is nice not like u

Maan : wat I did

Geet smirks at him : I say wat u did today staring at shela ki legs

Maan : the why girls showing they legs



Geet : shameless

Maan : ok leave it, Geet don't u think we didt play prank on Ravi for long


(Without knowing tat prank is going to change they relation)



Geet thinks : hmm yes

Maan : we will stop him watching cricket in others house how is it

Geet : superb

Jaku came with Glass thinking some thing

Geet :wat happen jaku


Jaku : Geet baby he is calling me jaku I can tolerate tat also , but after tat he is saying some thing which I dont know


Maan winks at Geet : wat he said



Jaku : some thing in tamil ahan, NANDRI (THANK U )

Maaneet got shocked : wat he said tat word




Jaku got confuse seing they reaction

Maaneet roaming from right to left,

Maan : oh god he said tat word

Geet : how can he say tat to our jaku

Maan : wat her heart will feel wen she came to know

Geet : tis is ot

Maan : ahan tis is not

Jaku : pls u both say wat is tat

Geet : u don't wory Jaku we will talk to Ravi uncle

Maan : hmm we will talk

Jaku : pls say wat is tat




Maaneet look at each other :NANDRI MEANS I LOVE U


JAKU FAINT , MAANEET WINKS AT EACH OTHER






















PRECAP : SANAYA GET HURTS

Next part -


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
ye maaneet ki shararti hay 😆😆
bechari jaku bai ko bhi anhi chora😆😆
hmm waise jaku bai maaneet se bhi agaya 👏👏👏
love story abb khaya jayogay maaneet 😉😉

poor rohan.geet usko bhayo dite hi nahi .
par still rohan love geet 😛😛.

abb maaneet kya karne wale hay pata nahi 🤔🤔🤔
Edited by sumaiyariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Osm part😊
jhakku bhai new entry looking interesting
seem she relise maaneet abt their love
n poor rohann...
hahaha manaeet r so naughtyyy jakku ko
behosh kar diya nandri means- I love u lolll😆

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