I am all yours (Swaron OS)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys 🤗I am back with an OS. It's my take on the Confession. I don't know how it turned out to be but do read and write your views about it.

Sry for any mistakes 😊

Standing in front of the mirror was our very own Sharon Rai Prakash with a frown on her face. She was getting irritated as her entire wardrobe was in front of her……all clothes lying here and there but she rejected all. The purple one was too jazzy while the green one was too short and that black one didn't suited the situation. Ugghhh this was all not up to the mark. Today was a very special day in her life but nothing was in place. Just then her phone rang it was Rey.
Rey: Hey Shraon. Kahan ho yaar?

Sharon: I am busy Rey. Abhi baat nahi kar sakti.

R: What? Busy? Kis mein?

S: Kaha na I am busy bas.

R: Madam humein rehearsals karni hain so jaldi aao.

S: Nahi a sakti.

R: Huh? Are u serious Sharon?

S: Ofcourse!

R: Aesa kya kaam hai jo rehearsals se zayada important hai? Come on out with it now.

S: Listen Rey yeh kaam mujhe bohat pehle kar lena chahiye tha.

R: Aesa kya hua babes?

S: Baad mein bataungi first tell me Swayam kahan hai? Wo college to nahi aya na?

R: Ghar par rest kar raha hai remember his injury.

S: Yeah I do. Thanks and Bye.

R: Arey par…..

She hung up thinking that it is the best day to let her feelings out as Swayam was also at home. On the other hand Rey understood what was up with Sharon and so he let her be and wanted it to be best day for both of his close friends. She dialed his number. While the bell was going Sharon waited patiently for him to speak while she gathered the courage to ask him to come to that place. Finally her wait ended and he answered her call.

Swa: Hey Sharon.

Sha: H…Hi Swayam.

Swa: Tumne call ki anything important?

Sha: Wo actually I want to meet you.

Swa: Abhi?

Sha: No.. no sham ko. To please tum mujhe milo ge?

Swa: Ok par kahan?

Sha: At my house.

Swa: Ok I'll be there.

Sha: At 6:00.

Swa: Ok. Aur kuch?

Sha: Nahi bas. Bye. See you in evening.

Swa: Yeah Bye.

As soon as the call ended Sharon heaved a sigh of relief and just then her eyes fell on the cutest face. She stared at his pic and got lost in her own world for a few seconds after which she hit on her forehead forcing herself to concentrate. Off she went to complete all her tasks before the clock would struck six.

At six o'clock

Swayam rang the bell and asked about Sharon and he was informed that she saw her moving towards the terrace. So Swayam thanked him and went upstairs. There was no light there and as he entered the terrace he was astonished to see the beauty there. For a few seconds he was just adoring the place that was beautifully setup. The gripping fragrance of roses were making him smile continuously and he felt as if he was in another world, standing in a garden of roses with the candles enhancing its beauty and to him it was like a combo of stars and roses. He was pleased to see the sight around him.

As he was busy examining the place he suddenly realized for what he was here and turned back to move. He had just taken a few steps forward when something made him stick to his place.

Chaahe Tum kuch na kaho,
maine sun liya...
ke saathi pyaar ka...
mujhe chun liya...chun liyaaa..maine sun liyaa

These lines were indeed special to him as Sharon was his princess and from the last 5 years he has just dreamt about her being with him always but till date they were not together as destiny choose this day for them to become Swaron-that is Swayam and Sharon.

He turned back to see a beautiful girl….girls of his dreams in a red outfit with minimal makeup and long earings and her silky hair falling over her shoulders which made Swayam actually stare at her which didn't intended to do—not at least now but he couldn't hold back himself and looked at her like an innocent child who stares at his favourite thing but couldn't have it and so has to control his desire.

From the past few months Swayam was acting like the same young boy who despite his strong desire could not have his favourite and in this case it was Sharon. If there would have been some other guy then he might have crossed his limit but he was Swayam Shekhawat-a man of his words and that's why Sharon knew that she can always count on such a person as Swayam was.

If Swayam couldn't take his eyes off from Sharon then she was also no less than him. Her heart skipped a beat after she saw him in red Ah the same colour as she was wearing. They both were certainly defining love and the environment was all up was all up for it. Sharon could not resist herselg from loving away from him. 'No boy could have been as handsome as he is' she thought and shyly looked down.

Sharon Rai Prakash has never admired someone so much in her entire life. But he was surely different from others no not different but special and he always made her feel special so today it was her turn and she was hell nervous as how would he react but she had to do it. She gathered much courage and walked towards him which broke Swayam's trance and he came back to earth from his Sharon corner.

Swa: Hey. Yeh sab..

Sha: Hi. A…ye sab tum….I mean hamare liye.

Swa: Matlab?

Sha: Aj tak main matlab hi to nahi samaj payi pyaar ka

Swa: Sharon tum ky…

Sha: Ssshhh Aj mujhe bolne do Swayam bohat himaat ki hai aj to tell u something very special.

Haan to main keh rahi thi k pyaar kya hai yeh tumne mujhe bataya infact you made me believe in love. Trust karna sikhaya kisi dosre par jo apka companion ho. In all phases of life I found you beside me for my support no matter what our equation was. You made me dependant on you and I was completely unaware when I actually became dependant on you. But what did u do haan? Mujhe apne aap par dependant karke chale gaye mujhse dur? Why Swayam why? You know tumse dur jane ka soch kar hi I tremble and when I found you away I could not tolerate it anymore and thought a lot about us and found out that our relationship and our bond is unique. We complete each other Swayam.

Our existence would have been impossible if we were not meant to be. We exist coz our heart beats for each other,we exist coz our Jodi is made up there and we exist coz we were always meant to be. We cannot live without each other this is a fact that just proves how much we want each other. Our heart desires to fulfill its wishes but our mind does not let it reminding ourselves of all the promises that we did to one another and to our own selves.

In this battle Swayam our heart won and today we are here because of it. We are able to feel each other's presence… we are connected with the strong bond of love. Love… wow I am finally experiencing that feeling I have never thought that someday I will say that but I am loving this phase of my life and that's because you are with me. You were the one who said 'I will make you fall in love with me Sharon' and I must say as always you proved to be a man of your words.

Saying so she sat down on her knees which completely shocked an already bewildered Swayam. Sharon took his hands into hers and spoke with much intensity and love with once he used to speak.

I love you…love you a lot…and I can't live without you. As hamara dur rehna impossible hai so I wanna ask you about giving a name to our love I want to be recognized as your girlfriend. I have been knowinga s the diva.the CS and a dancer but now I want to be recognized with you.

So Mr.Swayam Shekhawat will you give me the opportunity to have you as my boyfriend?

Sharon looked up to him and found him expressionless which made her scared to death and she quickly stood up slowing leaving his hand. She whispered 'Swayam'

Swa: Love an..and..you? Muj..Mujhe samaj nahi a rahi k main kaise react karun. Main.. Main..

Sha: Tumhe poora right hai no bolne ka after all maine bhi to har baar tumhein reject (She looked down with a guilty face as she could not tell him how sorry she was for hurting him again and again)

Swa: Hey rejection ki baat kahan se a gayi?

Sha: Tumne abhi to…

Swa: Actually I am so so happy k samaj nahi a raha k is happiness ko kis atrah explain karun.

Sha: Swayam tum….

Swa: Sharon tumne yeh jo kuch bhi kaha wo itna pure tha k mere pass words nahi hain to describe it. And you seriously think k tumhein rejection ka dar hai no.. no ways. Par yeh hua kaise?

Sha: Pata nahi kab hua par ho gaya bas ho hi gaya. Tumhare pyaar aur soft nature ne mujhe kab apna ban alia pata hi nahi chala and finally is feeling ko deny karte karte maine accept kar lia because ab yumse dur rehna is impossible for me. I want k tum mere pass jab bhi aao haq se aao na k us din ki tarah. I am all yours Swayam.

Swayam hugged her tightly and she reciprocated it with all love. They hugged each other as there was no tomorrow and felt peace in each other's embrace. After sometime they broke the hug and Swayam cupped her face.

Swa: Do you really wanna hear me speak?

Sha: Yeah ofcourse.

Swa: You know what Sharon I was also not liking this distance between us but for me your happiness comes before mine and I could have lived my entire life happily seeing you happy with someone else. I started thinking that maybe you could be happy with someone else and not me. Remember once I told you that I am happy with your 'like' let me tell you I really was but somewhere deep wanted it to change into love and finally it did. You are my first and last love Sharon how can I say no to you?

So Miss. Sharon Rai Prakash I would gladly accept your proposal and be your boyfriend.

Both had tears of happiness in their eyes and once again hugged each other with all the love. After breaking the hug Swayam came close to her and whispered in her ears " I told you that our first kiss would be special so shall we?" Sharon blushed and just nodded. Swayam touched her lips with his sweetly to which Sharon responded and within no time it became passionate and they enjoyed it to the full as it was full of love. After a few mintes they broke the kiss as they became breathless.

Swayam asked her for a dance and she readily gave in. Both of them swayed to and fro looking into each other's eyes with Pehla Nasha playing in the background. They were lost in each other to capture all the moments that they spend with each other.

Today Shraon knew that they are soul mates and no one in the world could love her more than her lover boy and she could match to the intensity that he has for her. She was contented to be with her and felt relived after confessing. On the other hand Swayam was adoring his diva. She has changed a lot but this time for good and willingly. He had to say that she did all the arrangements so well just like he would have done she so knows him. Both of them were thinking about each other while moving with the flow of their heartbeats.

Here were Swaron ready to write another fairytale but this time with each other not as Swayam or Shron being two sepearte entities but as two bodies,one soul~ Swaron!

If you find it lame and boring than sorry for making u all bored.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Swthrt..🤗

Such an amazing way to make this wait of 3 days memorable and enjoyable...its great to see a happy OS from u ...such a cute and adorable OS...

Started with sharon's confused state...choosing a dress for the love her life...poor girl...so confused yet cute ...we have waited so long to see her like this...

I enjoyed SHAREY convo on phn...cute 😳

Swayam entering into her house and admiring the set up by her was beautifully done...PEHLA NASHA was cherry on the cake😊...Swaron admiring each other ...was just PERFECT

I loved the way she conveyed her feelings..simple ..sweet and above all pure😳

Thats our Swaron...the bewildered swayam...scared sharon ...awww...loved the 1st kiss...

Beautiful OS dear...keep writing 😃
Luv
Deep

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!
unres..
Omg fati 🤗 🤗 That's so cute! I loved the OS from the very confused Sharon to the proposal part ! The proposal was so unique and so special! I loved the flow in this OS!! Especially because this was in sync with the current track!
Aww.. The dialogues were penned with sheer brilliance and in a swaronish way!
I'm loving these wild imaginations about the to be epic confession!!
Thanks for the swaronilicious OS!
Keep writing.
Mihi. 😳 😳
Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful

beautful

fab

great job 👏👏

wow!!!!

loved it

it was amazing

The proposal was so so special

it was really well penned down 👍🏼

i loved it

swaronlicious 😳😳

keep writing more

and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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boring r u kidding me!!!! This is tremendously wonderful n mesmerizing os wow I loved loved loved it so swaronlicious!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dear..loved it... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awwwiee awesome update fatima :)
beautifully written OS
loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fati *hugs*
Finally I'm here commenting on your os lol :p
this was a brilliant piece of work
the way you penned down everything was amazing
The dialogues were fantastic
totally romantic
Amazing one
love ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Fatima.. it was really amazing.. the way everything came out.. Sharon getting ready...setting up everything and all was wonderfuly done.

this is a great way to pass time for the most awaited moment.. SwaRon confession.. which i really hope happens pretty soon.. at most till wednesday.. my selfish reason busy till tuesday..😆

But thats not the point out here.. its the way the entire plot was been set by you.. amazingly expressed.. you did a splendid job.. Fatima.. And the kiss.. it had to be special and it was special...

thanks for sharing it with us.. and PMing me.. i am such a lazy bug u see. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Candyyy❤️

What an epic confession!!!
The feisty diva proposing to our lover boy...Hayyeee
Pehla Nasha...reminded me of all the beautiful memories...😳
And they're both wearing RED...My favourite colour..!!! 😳
I can just imagine this scene..I hope ki CV's mein bhi thodi si akal ho...and they take some hints from you😉

Love You🤗
Teri Brownie😳
Edited by arjuhiswaron007 - 12 years ago

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