'Love- their only quality' a taarey ff

<font size="4">hi guys actually i was actually reading one novel n i got dis idea from dat novel... plz tell me shuld i cont or not???</font>

<font size="3">so what if two extremly evil persons whose motives r nothing but to win either by hook or crook come in front of each other as enimies.. wat if der only qality is love but dey r unknown from it???</font>

<font size="3"> wat will happen when nothin can keep dem apart neither her hatred nor his evil or either death in d last??? </font>

this story revolves around two young indiviuals whose lives where not so complicated till dey meet each other..

<font size="5">CHARECTER SKETCH..</font>

reyansh singhania : d spoilt son of one of indias richest man n one of d collegs two heart throbs . caiptan of dazzlers bff of sharon . very attitudal rude n mean wid every1 excluding his dance team... n ya a marvelous dancer... n a big player..

sharon raiprakash : same as in d3 except more mean attitudal n stubborn. bff of rey

swayam shekhawat : same as rey. rich n spoilt. reys biggest enemy. caiptan of team rockers. taanis brother very protective of her. Awesome dancer..

taani shekhawat: just moved to india from usa coz her dad was movin der. no mother. very rich spoilt n mean loves to win a fab dancer. very sttubborn. loves her bro n hates every1 else..
<font size="3">every1 is same as d3 n every1 is rich.. dazzlers= dazzlers n weaklings= rockers</font>

<font size="5">so guys plz comment n tell should i cont or not for pm add me to your buddy list...</font>
Chap 1: 2page..
chap 2:page4

Sounds interesting, looking forward to reading the first part

Hey..
unique cncpt..
do cont..
nd pm me as wl..

Ful on hatred-evil wch wl be suprsd by lv,cncpt is intrstng.Update sn dr.

story seems intense update soon :-)

Very interesting and different concept yaar...can't wait.

the concept is impressive n interesting , i think u should continue bcoz i would love to read a story where taani is rich n spoilt... lol.. now update fast n PM me :)

its really awesome concept plz cont. this dear

Chapter:1..
HI guys i am back wid d update of my first ff do like n comment by heart n constructive critism is welcome now enough of my stupid bak-bak...!!! N let me start wid d story
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[COLOUR=BLUE]IT'S a normal day for students of st.louis (well normal for dem coz der normal days r very unusal for us..) but everyone is aware of d addition of a new student dat is d sister of popular swayam shekhawat n specialy d dazzlers r excited dat how dey will rag her... coz d life of d students revolve on how 2 insult der enimies[/COLOUR]
(rey has called every1 of his team to decide how to rag taani in rh)
Rey: so guys batao ki kya socha hai kaise rag karege uss akdu swayam ki behen ko???
Vic:rey waise humne sabse suna hai ki wo bohot behenji types hai..
Sharon: no guys i dont think so wo swayam ki sis hai n he is so stylish...
Nil: sharon tum uss swayam ko stylish bol rahi ho
Sim: nil sharon sirf facts keh rahi hai.
Rini: exactly. Kya pata agar kuch gadbad hui toh
Rey: no guys look swayam ke fb wall pe uske pics hai n she looks so dm
Sharon: ya i thnk u r rite look at those big specs.. ewww
Rini n simmi: ya ewww
Rey: uska bhai dance ke naam se uchalta hai na toh hum usse dance karaege
Vicky: wo bhi sabke samne
Simmi: ya it will be fun.. lets show dem dat whos d boss
Sharon: rite so guys lets meet tomoorow
(But while talking dey were unaware of d fact dat two guys r listening to their conversetion n dey were none other dan bharat n amar)

Bharat:dude agar inka plan sucess hogaya toh humare rep ki band baj jayegi
Amar: ya man lets go n tell swayam btw wo hai kaha??
Bh: vo neha n aashi ke saath canteen me hai lets go
(dey went to canteen n saw sw neha n aashi der)
bh: yaar swayam bohot badi prob hogayi hai..
Aashi: kyu kya hua
Am: aree vo dazzlers sw ki behen ko rag karne ka plan bana rahe hai
Ne: omg hame usee bachana hoga v cant let dat happen
Aas: ha photo me bhi vo kitni seedhi types lag rahi thi..
(ALL DIS WHILE SWAYAM WAS LISTENING TO THEIR CONVO N WAS SMILIN OL NOTICE DIS N WERE SHOCKED)
Am: aree yaar hum yaha tere behen ke bareme itni imp baat kar rahe hai n tu has raha hai
Sw: guys mera plan sahi jaa raha hai toh mai hasuga hi naa
All: matlab
Sw : matlab yeh ki
----:FLASH-BACK:-----
Swayam was leaning on d car waitin for his sis to come den a very hot gal in shorts n tank top arives from d airport she was taani ol d boys were stairing at her wid eyes poped out)
A guy comes to her n says: hi m manav
Taani tuns to face him looks at him wid attitude: stop stairing u cant afford me
Swayam who was listening to it was shocked at first but den bursted into laughter he goes to taani n gives her tight hug
Sw: i really missed u a lot
Ta: me too bro..
Sw : lets go in car
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Sw: m sure taani u r goona like our colg
Ta: ya m sure.. but i want u to tell me everythng abt colg
Sw: k . (SW TELLS HER EVERYTGNG ABT ROCKERS N DAZZLERS ) so beaware of dem dey r likely to rag u not dat i wil let dat happen...Ta: bro do they know who i am where m comin from or dat m a dancer??
Sw:no but why r u asking so?
Ta: i have a plan to insult dem in front of evry1 just if u r intrested(smiles wickedly)
Sw:(thnks for a moment) wats d plan dear sis(sw smirks)
-----:FLASHBACK END:-----
Ne: oh wow really sw wat a plan yaar..!!
Am: ha ab kall un sab dazzlers ki band bajegi
Sw: yes guys my sis is a awesum dancer aur wo apne colleg ki diva bhi thi
Aas: finally humare group me koi hai jo us sharon ko takkar de sake
Sw: agree sharon bohot superb hai..
Bh: ee tu us sharon ki tareef kar raha hai
Sw: nai yaar m just statin facts chalo abb kal milte hai.
(they all leave for there house swayam reaches his home dats a big mansion he parks his car n goes directly in taanis room he sees dat her back is facin him he silently goes n stand behind her)
sw: bhooo(ta dosent get scared n just looks at him but sw keeps starin at her in disbelif)
Ta: why r u starin me??
Sw:aree u were supoosed to be scared
Ta:bro muje pata hai ki aapke aalava mere saath ye stupid harkat koi nai karsakta
Sw: oh toh tumhe lagta hai mai stupid
Ta: nai bro muje lagta hai k aap bohot cute ho
Sw: oh i know dat n tumhara plan ekdum coorect jaa raha hai...
Ta:of course aaj tak taani shekhawat plan kabhi fail hua hi nai..
Sw: chalo abhi chalke dinner karke so jaate hai... kal colg bhi toh jaana hai..

SO GUYS DATS IT FOR NOW I KNOW IT WAS BORING BUT NEXT CHAPTER IS FULL OF TAAREY NOK-JHOK N TAANIS DANCE...
plz do comment n tell me my flaws it will help me improve..Chapter:1