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Swaron os: The wedding.

Swayams POV:

I was excited, I didn't know why , I have attended many weddings before, but this one brought out a different feeling, I was getting vibes that something good is definitely going to happen today.

We reached the venue, I didn't know whose wedding was it , and I am so sure the bride and the groom too didn't know half of the people present there and wishing them..

My father whom I was accompanied by told me that it was one of his clients' daughter's wedding.

There was a long line , just to meet the bride and groom, WTH I thought!!!

And to add to that we were last , my father left me in the line and went to speak to one of his colleagues present there.

Great, I said," do hell with vibes!!!!"

I turned to check where my father was and I saw her, a beautiful, nah that was an understatement, a 'khoobsurat' girl was walking towards me.

I looked at her beautiful eyes, brown in colour, deep in their impact, her beautifully worn dress, it seemed as if the anarkali was made for her, her long earrings dangling when she walked and ...

" Kreechesy !!!!"

She was about to fall but she balanced herself and while balancing she bluterred something weird .

She stood upright behind me, I realized that I was staring at her and her eyes were asking me "Why???"

" ummm" I said trying hard to divert her attention, " What did you say when you were about to fall????"

" Ohh so you heard that ,I thought it was inaudible"

" Nahhh it was loud"

"Well it was nothing , just something I must have muttered in a fit of fear"

" Ok"

We felt weird, I wanted to speak but couldn't find any topic,

" Do you know any of them or their relatives???" I asked.

" Nah, just accompanied my dad here." She answered.

" Hey same here !" I said , feeling happy that there was something we had in common.

She giggled and forwarded her hand for a handshake, " Sharon, Sharon Raiprakash" , she said with an air of defiance.

" Swayam Shekawat" I extended my hand and felt happy that I learnt her name now.

" So is that your father??" she asked pointing in the dirction where he was standing, he was talking to a man of lamost his age, just shorter than him.

" Yes."I replied , " and is the other man your father??"

She replied in positive.

Bingo!

Hurrah! For positive vibes.

The line moved on , and our fathers returned to us, gosh they got wrong timing!!

But since Mr.Raiprakash and my father were friends, the four of us took a picture with the couple together.

I will get the photo from them , first time my princess and I are in the same frame.

Our fathers seemed to be in their own world of sports, politics and current affairs.

I didn't mind that at all, I was left with Sharon.

Sharon and I went together for dinner.

Sharon's POV

He was cute, for the first time I felt happy that my father left me and was with one of his colleagues .

Swayam and I progressed , I looked at the panipuri stall, I cant control myself when it comes to food, and such good food, I have to indulge.

I went to the stall, had a panipuri or two, then I remembered that I was accompanied by a cutie.

I called Swayam, but he seemed too lost in someone, wait, was it me he was looking at?

I looked at him, waving my hands, unable to speak anything because of the delicacy in my mouth, he understood my signal and waved a No.

A No, A NO, for panipuri, this guy might be crazy, I went towards him, held his hand and pulled him to the chaat counter, and stuffed one forcefully into his mouth, I shouldn't have done that because the next moment he was coughing and asking for water, maybe it was too spicy for him.Oopsie!!!

I took him to a nearby chair, made him settled him, and once he was fine, I blurted an apology.

" It's fine ." , he said

" No it isn't I shouldn't have forced you, I am so sorry, are you ok??" , I asked while rubbing his back.

" yes , uhhuh .. I'm fine, that thing wasn't that bad, it was good I want to have more , less spicy this time though." He said.

" are you sure Swayam??" , I asked not able to understand.

" Yes I am ." He said.

We went to the stall, I had the more spicy ones while he had the less spicy ones.

" Well, did you really like it ?" I asked.

" Yes I did." Was the reply.

We went to the other food stalls, he was a typical gentleman, taking only what he needed, I on the other hand, took little of almost everything, he was shocked when he saw my plate.I was a little embarrassed .

He looked at me and said, " It's ok, I will also be having almost each and everything here the difference is just that you took all together and I will take after some time", and he smiled.

We had a wonderful time chatting with each other.

"You are very beautiful" I heard him say.

"Thanks." I muttered.

The next moment both of us were lost in each others eyes.

He had deep, brown eyes, they reflected pure love. I felt complete with this guy whom I just met an hour ago, I wanted to be with him, never leave his side.

It was magical, the feeling when I was with him .

" Sharon" I heard my father calling me, we were broken out of our trance.

"Let's leave" , he said.

I obeyed, but Swayam stopped me and we promised each other that we would meet soon.

That day was one of the best day of my life, that was the day I met my soulmate.

We met many times later and our love grew stronger.

Now today is the best day of my life, we are here in the same place we first met, the same situation, a wedding, the difference is that it is our wedding today, and I hope that amidst the crowd there is another Sharon who will find her Swayam here.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Holla guys!!!
Nikita here * again 😃*
This time with a swaron os 😊
Plz do let me know how it is, I myself am a little dissapointed with the way it has turned out, plz do not hesitate to critcize it, I want to improve , so suggestions are welcome.
Plz feel free to express your views and tell me what you feel can be improved...
Thank you for reading it. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it did turned out great
i loved it
amazing
👏👏👏
great wrok...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res..

wow gal..
u seriously nailed it..

simple yet beautiful!!
i so loved it..
simple gal simple guy simple start simple end..

and the paani puri thing was cute..

the best was u'r last line..

Now today is the best day of my life, we are here in the same place we first met, the same situation, a wedding, the difference is that it is our wedding today, and I hope that amidst the crowd there is another Sharon who will find her Swayam here.


gal that was a wow line..👏


i really liked the way u penned down..

sorry dnt read ur TR os as i m reading TR very less nowadays..
but this one was fantastic..


gould doing gal!!!🤗

do write more..
basically on SS!!

love..
u'r mad neighbour..😛😆
maggie..❤️

Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os...
totally loved it <3
do write more on swaron :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very cute
very sweet
it was a very good os
do write more on swaron
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was such a sweet os...it brought a smile on my face! 😃 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-

it did turned out great

i loved it
amazing
👏👏👏
great wrok...


Thank you so much !!!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehek_luvD3nTBP

Res..


wow gal..
u seriously nailed it..

simple yet beautiful!!
i so loved it..
simple gal simple guy simple start simple end..

and the paani puri thing was cute..

the best was u'r last line..

Now today is the best day of my life, we are here in the same place we first met, the same situation, a wedding, the difference is that it is our wedding today, and I hope that amidst the crowd there is another Sharon who will find her Swayam here.


gal that was a wow line..👏


i really liked the way u penned down..

sorry dnt read ur TR os as i m reading TR very less nowadays..
but this one was fantastic..


gould doing gal!!!🤗

do write more..
basically on SS!!

love..
u'r mad neighbour..😛😆
maggie..❤️


Thank you so much maggie!!!
Such a lambu comment I am very happy...😊😊
That is ok, you can read it anytime, even I am not reading much of TR wanna read swaron , god Knows why all of a sudden I have got lost in the swaron world.😳
Yup planning to write more on SS 😆
Love you <3 <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushka1129

lovely os...
totally loved it <3
do write more on swaron :)


Thank you so much, surely write some more on swaron ....😊

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