SwaRon Valentines Special One Shot series

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Awesome OS Tanya...Loved it to the core... ❤️

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Thank you for this beautiful OS on valentine's and i am sorry for commenting so late.

Such a sweet ending and i am glad Sharon took control and kinda made him confess varna yeh ullu toh sochta hi reh jaata and poor announcer had to beg them to part away and finish the damn race. Keep them coming girl and thnx for the PM.

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Hey Tanya!

Amazing update!!

Love the sharu-swayu part especially!!

This was really a Vday treat!!

The confession was awesome!!

The most different concept nd confession

Girl you r really a gr8 writer!!

Take care!!

Thanks for the PM.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Chapter 4 - read and enjoyed very much...u covered teh mystery of their relationship very nicely and gave both of them a strong individual character for being the way they are...nice lighthearted romance and confession...

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

@Tanya_Swaronluv: Nyc OS!!!!😊

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Tanya babes...it was awesome!!! As I told u b4...i'm a die hard fan of swaron..and out of all the swaron writers...i love urs...ur Os ss ff...all are awesooome, girl seriously...you should write more...and in future I wanna see a book on swaron!!! ur v-day Os was so amaaazing...apart from a few grammatical errors...it was awesome...like hot cool cute romantic all in one dhamaka package.you are and will always be my writing inspiration for swaron :)<3I'd res a comment for the chptrs...but can't find it so..new comment :Dthe Rihanna style: i looove the way you write <3<3<3<3<3

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

@Tanya_Swaron: Nyc OS!!!!😊

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

i just loved the OS... it was jst awesome 👏...

all of it was awesome bt 1 thing that caught my attention was:

Next day it was total different, they didn't abuse not like that they praise each other. Sharon was quiet different, he couldn't understand her behavior but one thing he knew that she does this whenever she is confuse or really confuse or really really confuse but the bottom line was that she is confuse and to his surprise he was confuse too not because she was confuse, ok he agrees he was confuse because of that too because he knew her and her feeling and seeing her confuse made her confuse too but he was rightly confused because, because god how can he tell that he was confuse because he is confuse ok.

🤣 i just loved this bit the most... great job 👍🏼

Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago