JANNAT YAHAN..!!

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After day before's episode all I could do was be angry on the CV's.. I was all disheartened..!!! I hope there are fans out there who felt the same.. So this OS goes for all of those..!! I wrote the story from there in my imagination.. Hope you people will love it..!!

I have not decided whether it is a OS or SS or FF.. it depends on the reaction I get..So like and comment me what I should do..!!!

JUST READ AND ENJOY!!!!

PART 1

Warning: Mature Content (16+) ☺️

The wedding photo shoot was going on and Zoya had come out with the best designer salwars except for the one Asad had given..!! This had driven him crazy!! He had thought that she would at least wear it for one pose..!!

Asad: Is ladki ki kya problem hai??!! Ek baar woh wali shalwar pehnti hai toh kya jata uska??!!

Zoya (thinking to herself): Allah miya.. Kaise batau Mr. Khan ko ki mein who salwaar nahi pahan sakthi?? Usko koi aur shalwar nahi mila?? Sleeveless hi dena tha???!!

Dilshad noticed that there was some tension between Asad and Zoya.. She thought as usual they must have been fighting and left off.. The photo session ended and Zoya left to her room..

She was standing in front of her mirror holding the dress he had given.. just then Asad enters and sees her..

Asad: Ms. Farokhi..Meine aap ko pehnne ke liye diya tha.. nahi ki aap usko pakad ke rakho!!!

Zoya: Allah miya what's wrong with you Mr. Khan?? Hamesha aap aise kyun baat karte ho?? Mere reason tho suniye ki mein isse kyu nahi pehna..!!

Asad: Abhi aur bahane bolenge aap!! Toufa nahin doon woh bhi problem aur doon tabhi problem.. agar aapko nahi pehna hai toh bol dijiye!!!

Zoya: Mr. Khan.. aapko kya abhi mujhe yeh pehenna dekhna chahenge?? Tho thk hai.. yehi rukiye.. mein abhi aati hoon!!

She left telling that.. He then wondered what is up with this girl..?? She wears jeans and mini skirt!! And she is feeling shy to wear a sleeveless???!! In fact he had always seen her in full sleeve..!!Unbelievable he thought!!

Just then Zoya came out from her bathroom..She had covered her hands with the shawl.. She was looking beautiful in the white color salwar kameez.. He was lost looking her in that dress..

He came slowly towards her and spoke..

Asad: Ms. Farokhi.. Aap itna khubsurat lagte hai ismein!! Phir nahi pehna aapne??

Zoya (smiling on what he told): Shukriya Mr. Khan… Par muje aise comfortable nahi hota isiliye..

Asad: Toh phir aap shawl ko theek tarah sepehnayee.. usko aise pura hath par kyun lagaya hai??

Zoya: Woh Mr. Khan.. (Unsurely she removed her shawl and now her burn mark was visible on her right hand!!)

Asad was shocked looking at this.. He realized what he just told her and felt bad..!! He wondered what had happened??

Zoya: Mr. Khan isliye mein hamesha long sleeve hi pehenti hun!! Jab mein choti thi tab mujhe hua tha.. mujhe theek se yaad nahi aa raha par itna yaad hai ki mein choti thi aur aag ke beech mein phasi thi.. mein ammi ko bachane ke liye chilla rahi thi!!

Mujhe hamesha aise hi bura khwaab ata hai.. aisa lagta hai ki uss incident aur meri ammi ke beech kuch toh thalluk hai..!!

She had tears running down on her cheeks.. She had not showed this mark except for her aapi and phupi.. But she felt that he should know this as he is marrying her..

Asad remembered her aapi telling him about how Zoya's ammi had died in fire accident and she had witnessed this when she was a child and she do not remember any of them clearly.. He understood that this mark must have formed then only!! He came still near her..There were only few centimeters gap between them..

Asad (looking into her eyes): Ms. Farokhi..Aap iss nishan se kam khubsoorat nahi lagti.. balki aap hamesha ki tarah bahut hi khubsurat lag rahi hain!! Ek nishani se mujhe kuch farak nahi..

Zoya couldn't control anymore..

She ran to his arms and HUGGED him tightly as possible!! She thought only he is left for her!! Asad was surprised by this , but soon he too joined her and hugged her..

Suddenly Zoya realized what she did.. She suddenly took hands off his back and turned around to run.. Just then Asad held her hands and pulled her as she came crushing into his chest…She was looking down in shy as she could not look into his eyes..

He slowly held her chin and lifted her face up only to look into her eyes..He found only love and truthful in those eyes.. Her cheeks had turned into a pale red color which he loved to see..

Here down stairs Dilshad was searching for both Asad and Zoya.. She wondered were both went.. She came towards Zoya's room.. The door was little open so she peeped in to see what she was upto.. But the scene she saw made her smile.Zoya was in Asad's arms and both were looking into each others eyes.. She thought that finally her son got the courage to tell his feelings to her!!

She did not want the couple to disturb as they should enjoy their moment.. So she latched the door slowly from outside and left downstairs.. Just then she saw Tanveer coming towards Zoya's room..

Dilshad: Are Tanveer.. Aap yahan kyun aaye??

Tanveer: Who khala, Hum jammy ko dundte aaye.. pata nahi kahan gaye..??!!

Dilshad: Tanveer, Hum asad ko phone baath kahte hue garden ke paas jate hue dekha tha..Asad ne mujhse kaha ki woh kuch important call hai aur koi usko disturb na Karen.. Baat hone ke baad khud hi ajayega..

Tanveer: thk hai khala..

Dilshad: Chalo, Hum neeche chalte hain.. dekhenge photos kaisa aaya hai..

In Zoya's room:

Zoya was very much shy now..She had never seen her Jahanpanah Six packs so close!!! She turned her face again, covered her hand and tried to go. But Asad was quick.. He pulled shawl from her hand, threw it away and held her hands. He twirled and she came hitting her back to his chest.. She could feel his warm breath on her shoulders..She closed her eyes..

Asad slowly slid his hands around her waist..She felt a tickle run over..She covered his hands with her.. He brought his lips near her ears and whispered

Asad: Pathan hai..Mein aaj tak aap jaise khoobsoorat ladki nahin dekha hai Zoya!!

Zoya felt as though she will lose the balance of her knees and fall off.. She heard him telling her name and she shyly smiled.. She held his hands even more tight for support..

Asad felt her reacting to his words and touch.. he lost himself still more and decided that this was the right time..

Asad: Ms. Faro..Zoya.. mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai..

Zoya: Kahiye Mr. Khan..

Asad: Who.. Actually.. Mein..!!

Zoya: Kya?? Mein.. Actually??

Asad: Mein aapse actual nikah karna chahta hun..!! Sirf dikhawa ke liye nahi.. mein sach mein aap ka shohar banna chahta hun!! Mein aapse bahut mohabbat karta hoon.. Bahut baar koshish kiya tha yeh bolne ke liye.. lekin kah nahi paya.. Aaj keh raha hun Zoya.. Mein aapko apna begum banana chahta hoon..Kya aap ko Qabool hai??

Should I make it OS or SS or FF, I have not decided yet.. It depends on the reaction I get.. So please drop your valuable comments and like it..

Hope you enjoyed reading..😊😊

very nice 😛

PART2

Zoya could not believe what she just heard from him.. She took moment to process the thoughts!!

Did he just propose me!!?? She was utterly surprised.. She used to call him emotionally challenged and now he just proposed her..

Asad was confused by her reaction as she did not respond for a brief time.. He solely turned her to face him and looked in her eyes.. He found tears forming..He got still confused..

Asad: Ms. Farokhi..matlab.. Zoya.. Aap kyun ro rahi hai??? Agar aap ko pasand nahi hai toh keh dijiye!!

This was the heights Zoya thought..

Zoya (irritated):Mr. Khan what's wrong with you??! Aap sach mein emotionally challenged hai!! Aise koi ladki apne hone wale shohar ke saamne ha thodi bol sakti hai?? Aap hi toh mujhe hamesha lihaaz, tameez ke baare mein bol the rehte hai aur ab aap hi??!!

Asad was like unbelievable..He chuckled..

Asad: Mr. Khan nahi.. Asad bolo Zoya!! Aur mein emotionally challenged nahi hun!!

Zoya: Asad..!! Par mujhe Asad bulane mein thoda time lagega aur mein sabke saamne aise nahi bhula sakthi aapko..

Asad was amused to see this side of Zoya..!! All blushing and full of shy..

He slowly lifted her face and looked into her eyes..What he could see was pure Love!! He was overwhelmed.. He bent and came closer and kissed her right arm on the burn marks..

Zoya had tears in her eyes.. She could believe that it was happening in real.. All these times she had only dreamed!!

He slowly traced the kiss upwards and kissed her right shoulder.. She felt his lips on her shoulder and she held his shoulders for support..

He then slowly moved towards her forehead and kissed there. She took it happily!! He then showered her face with kisses.. She shuddered in his arms.. She felt as though she would fall off.. She ran her hands all over his well maintained body.. She wanted to feel his bare body badly!! She was too shy to think of that too..

Asad slowly pecked a kiss in the corner of her lips and she just smiled.. She met his eyes and saw that he was gazing her lips.. She felt a shiver run down her spine and she held to him still tightly..

Asad slowly brushed his lips against her and shivered by the feel.. her lips were trembling and inviting him..She lost her control on her breath and started heaving and she pulled him more closer.. He couldn't control any more..

He brought his lips near and sealed her lips with his..!! She closed her eyes and welcomed him happily.. She slid her arms around his neck and pulled him more towards her..

First it was a closed mouth and then slowly she opened her mouth and allowed him to lead.. He kissed her as though his life is depend on it.. The slow lazy kiss turned to a furious passionate kiss.. After long time both broke as they realized they need oxygen to survive and that it's not only the kiss!!

Asad trailed down and kissed her neck, chest..He kissed her crock of her neck.. she bent more to give him the accesses.. He then removed the cloth from the shoulder and kissed her bare body..he came down and gave open mouth kiss on her cleavage..She moaned his name..He went still mad brought his lips again to hers and took it for second time..

Zoya was lost in the pleasure.. Her hands were exploring his body..She then suddenly realized the time and pulled from his kissed..

Asad got angry by the sudden withdrawal..He looked at Zoya angrily..

Asad: Zoya..Aapne aisa kyun kiya??!!

Zoya: Allah miya.. Besharmi ki bhi koi hadh hoti hai.. Yeh aap kya bol rahi hai mujhe?? Asad dekhiye hum kahan hai aur waqt ka andaza hai aapko??!!

She turned towards the mirror and started fixing her messed hair and lips..Her lips were red and swollen..it had a bite mark too.. All thanks to her jahanpanah she thought..

Zoya: Dekhiye Mr. Khan!! Aapne kya kiya!!?? Abhi mein isko kaise chupaon??!!

Asad (Looking): Asad Zoya!!!! Yeh mere pyaar ki nishani hai..!!!

Asad smiled looking her through the mirror.. Zoya blushed and looked down..

Asad came towards her and held her from back.. He hid his face in her hair and started kissing her shoulder..

Zoya freed herself and ran into the bathroom to change..

Asad smiled and waited her to come out..

Zoya was looking herself in the mirror and smiled..It looked as though her cheeks had a permanent shade of red..!! She blushed thinking what happened and changed..

She came out and saw Asad waiting for her.. They both decided to go out together and only to realize that they are locked from out!!

Part 3

Asad was shocked that who had done that.. He realized that someone must have seen them and locked it from out.. This thought made him embarrass..He prayed that she should have come before the kissing.. He looked at Zoya.. She was clearly tensed at this.

Zoya: Ab kya karein Mr. Kahn!! Hum kaise bahar jayenge??!!

Asad was in deep thoughts!! He wondered who might have done this and suddenly struck that only his Ammi would do this..He knew that she wanted him to confess to Zoya..He smiled at his mother's act and turned to Zoya..

Asad: Zoya aap fikar mat kijiye.. Mein ammi ko call kar kebulaunga..

Zoya (panics): Ji??!! Nehi nehi.. agar woh hum ko sath mein dekhegi tho??!! Mujse nahi hoga..

Asad: Araam se Zoya..Kuch nahi hoga.. Waise bhi humari tho nikah hone wala hai.. !! tho koi problem nahi..

He picks the phone and calls Dilshad..

Dilshad was wondering what these both are up to.. It had been quite a long time since they both went to that room..

Just then her cell rings.. She see's the name and smiles.. She answers..

Asad: Hello Ammi??!!

Dilshad: Asad?? Kahan ho tum beta?? Hum aapko dhoondh rahe hai!!

Asad (knew his Ammi was teasing so he thought he would also play) : Ammi aap ko achi tarah se pata hai ki hum kahan hai.. aap hi ne toh hum ko yah ape bandh kar gaye hai!!

Dilshad (smiling): Humko?? Asad.. tumhare saath kaun hai??!!

Ammi: Ammi.. Please.. yaha aake kamre ka darwaza kholiye!!

Dilshad: Ha..Aati hu..

Asad ended the call and turned to Zoya..

Asad: Ammi aa rahi hai..

Zoya: Mr. Khan..Mein nahi aaunga.. mein yahan balcony se khood ke bahar jaungi phir main door se aa jaungi..!!

Asad: Kya Pagal hai aap?? Kuch nahi hoga Zoya!!!

Just then they heard the click sound and the door opens. Dilshad to avoid embarrassing the love birds, she just walked without facing them.. Zoya was too much relieved and Asad smiled at his mother's thought.. He felt he is the luckiest. Sister like Najma, Ammi like Dilshad and love like Zoya..He thought his life is housefull!! He chuckled at his thought..

They both came down. They saw that Dilshad was seeing them and smiling..Just then Tanveer comes and speaks

Tanveer: Jammy?? Aapka call hogaya?? Khala ne bataya ki aap zaruri phone pe the??!

Asad (realizing his Ammi's cleverness):Ha Tanu, Hum busy the..

Tanveer realizing Zoya next to him and that too lost in her own world.

Tanveer: Tho aap Zoya ke saath kaise aa gaye??

Asad (irritated by too many questions): Humara bath hone ke baad hum Zoya ke room jake use le aye.. Humein Ammi bula rahi hai.. Abhi aate hai..

He did not want to continue to talk with her..

Asad (to Zoya): Chale hum?? AAp kahan kho gayi??

He smiled at her and she looked down shyly..

Tanveer realized that she is missing some thing as she did not understand Asad in Zoya's room and Zoya smiling Shyly at Asad.. She thought she had to find out!!

They both went to Dilshad. She spoke to Asad in through her eyes asking did he tell to which Asad gave a shy smile..

Dilshad (happily cupping his face): Hum bahut khush hai..

Asad (Looking everywhere in embarrassment): Ammi..

Dilshad: Are Zoya.. Aap itna khamosh kyun hai?!! Asad ne kuch kaha??!!

She winked at Asad telling that. Zoya who was in her dream world heard only half off words and blurred out..

Zoya (coming to reality): Nehi phupi..!! ASAD.. Mr. Khan ne kuch nahi kaha..

Asad snapped his head and looked at her at what she told and Dilshad looked at Zoya teasingly..

Zoya(blushing): Phupi hum aatein hai.. humein Najma bula rahihai..

And she ran.. Both Dilshad and Asad smiled looking each other and they hugged..There was one unhappy person who was fuming seeing this!!!

Now, I feel like continuing to write this, but it depends on you, readers. If you want then drop your valuable comments and like it..!!

I have not done the proof reading.. So any mistakes I'm really sorry for that..

Have fun.. J😊😊

Should I make it OS or SS or FF, I have not decided yet.. It depends on the reaction I get.. So please drop your valuable comments and like it..

Hope you enjoyed reading..

It was amazing
I thing u should continue it

BTW u have wrote 3 parts

awesome awesome 👏

do continue!!!!!